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This is a revival of an old thread I made on here years ago that itself was a copy of something I'd seen on an older forum I'd been on. Basic idea is that we're going to create a world using creative writing by adding onto one another's posts. Anything posted is canon to the world, so you can't outright contradict another user's post but you don't have to exactly continue where thye left off either. Stories, journals, poetry, etc. are all valid. I'll link to each individual piece in the OP if we make thing big enough (unlikely on this dead forum, I know). With that said, I'd like to start us off.

Edit: Old threads https://www.twcenter.net/forums/sho...g-a-World-(Group-Writing-Project-All-Welcome)

http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?656761

Just so we have an idea of what I'm talking about
 
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An ancient king sits upon a hollow throne,
covered in twisted vines and bleeding mold
Of shattered steel and crumbling stone,
lost in a fog, unaware how old

Trapped in his chair high above,
his withered body gasps a command
He never feels neither hate nor love,
His endless forces make a stand

He is to reign even as a curse,
His promise, his burden to the last
Both the last king and the first,
as the fog grows he remembers the past

He recalls with a tear in his eye,
once a creator of beauty so ornate
He begs to be released and die
but it seems servitude is his fate

Crafting and building he spent his youth,
a shining jewel was his city
Tirelessly he labored seeking his truth,
never was a land so pretty

But now the silver spirals fall,
replaced with towers twisted and black
His eyes cry at the towers tall
he begs for a chance to turn back

But the king's commands fall on deaf ears,
for his skeletal mouth no longer speaks
His golden palace collapsed over many years,
replaced with the jagged black peaks

Trapped, imprisoned on that hollow throne,
He yearns to return to the old
But his allies withered, he is alone,
to none will his commands be told

The screams in his mind grow loud,
as the city's evil desires cannot be sated
Once a powerful servant proud,
he suffers, a slave to the machine he created
 
We were investigating Sector 7 when it happened. It was supposed to just be a routine patrol, same as any other day on this Godforsaken rock. Surveying is supposed to be a boring job, on a boring world, for a boring salary. That's all its ever been. It was with that in mind that we thought we were safe. We were wrong.

First it got Etts. We lost contact with him early in the night, so Myles got sent out after clearing 7-B. We weren't scared yet, Etts' comms just died, he needed a spec-jump, or he was just playing a joke on us. Something that made sense; anything else was beyond our imagination. Then Myles went dark too, and that's when we started getting scared.

Commander Erdo blinked, she sent in the whole squad to their last location. I found what was left of Etts, and it was something that will never leave my mind as long as I live. It was a black, tarry liquid covering his armor. It was still smoking, and the air tasted of the most foul taste. It reeked of death.

Erdo said to not touch a thing and wait for the rest to meet up with me. That's when the screaming started. The jungle began to grow darker as I heard the monsters..... do whatever it was they'd already done to Etts and Myles... again and again and again. I ran, I ran so damn far just to get back to the machine. Two kilos, maybe more, and I knew I wouldn't make it. I saw black tendrils slithering across the ground....they wouldn't stop making that terrible noise. It wouldn't stop.

How'd you get out? How'd you make it back here?

That's the thing. I didn't.
 
This looks like a great project! I like the different styles of writing you're using and twist at the end of the poem - having conjured up images of an ancient king which makes this sound like a fantasy or medieval setting, there's a reference to a machine (of course, some of the phrasing in between, such as the 'silver spirals' and twisted towers, could be referring to an advanced civilisation which fell into ruin.)
 
Silently, the ancient king observes
His golden palace turn dark
Trapped in time, punishment he deserves
The difference in era so stark

He nurtured, he loved, he protected
As his chosen people evolved
Statues, marvels in his name erected
But with time, his creations devolved

He's tried to fight the coming tide
To attain immortality was key
But unfortunately he couldn't hide,
He was to suffer for eternity

The glorious creations were interrupted
Warfare had taken its place
Good intentions had become corrupted
As evil reared its ugly face

The beautiful crown he had created
The machine melted to sword and shield
Against the commands the architect stated
The machine refused to yield

His race of man created individually
Each imperfection better than the last
Now were parasites made artificially
Forget, the machine said, the past

High upon his crumbling throne
His poor creatures still think he controls,
But for the husks he is alone
And of his failure, only the machine knows

Edit: If anyone is interested in contributing I'd love to have some people to bounce off of like the old threats listed in post #1.
 
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An intriguing poem, apparently a continuation (or a re-telling?) of the previous one. It's interesting that the king deserves punishment despite the nurture, love and protection which he demonstrated. The mysterious melting, unyielding machine got me wondering about its role in the story and its relationship to the king.
 
So is no one else interested in this? The idea is that we as a group write in the same universe based on what has come beforehand, like the linked threads in the OP

Gigi, I am joining this! I love your writing, as it is right in the style I so much enjoy, and I want to take the ride with you. The poetry I will leave to you (I sometimes have a flash of inspiration, but rarely can I do consistently good poetic work), but I will douse this with what prose I can muster!
 
Galactic Sector: 34.089 // C-14
Celestial Body: VX 2, Choros Maior
Local Designator: UNKNOWN
Standard Date: 15.4.3708 GSC



In the past month, 147 civilian surveying patrols have been lost throughout Imperial holdings. Of those 147, 15 went missing on one single rock: VX 2, of the Choros Maior system. In itself, the loss of multiple non-combatant units within a single system is not unheard of, and at times becomes (unfortunately) commonplace. Insurgent forces, restive natives, or even wild fauna may make particular planetary bodies dangerous, even to those whose job is as mundane as that of surveyors. However, VX 2 presents an alarming puzzle, for by all accounts and records, it is supposed to be an uninhabited speck in space, and one which is likely uninhabitable. Given these facts, my lancers descended to the planet's surface with a healthy degree of caution.

We landed in Sector 7 of the planet, near the craft of the latest surveying mission, that led by one Commander Erdo. Upon debarking, we found nothing of interest. The surveyors' ship was intact. It had not been plundered or damaged in any obvious fashion. In short, there was no indicator of any animal life, intelligent or otherwise, which might have explained the missing civilians. This however, did not ease our minds; the civilians were still missing, without any indication of what had befallen them.

With the ship's immediate surroundings scouted, I then split my lancers into two units. Twenty-two men were set to guard our ship, making use of the heavy turrets and mobile artillery if necessary, and the remaining eighty-six began running a widening spiral out from our position. My hope was that they would discover some indicator of what had happened there, and that their strength in numbers would prevent any harm from coming to them.

After forty-eight standard galactic hours had passed, they had found no track, nor any debris which might hint at the missing surveyors whereabouts. With such a lack of evidence on the ground, I deemed it prudent to regroup my forces and begin scanning the planet's surface from orbit. This we did for a full two weeks, creating a catalog of images that spanned 1/3 of the planet's surface, yet still we found no trace of any people, either living or dead. There were the scattered surveying ships, each as empty and lifeless as the others, and we did note an odd network of twisting spires that spread over some large tracts of land, but nothing to indicate that those were anything of significance. Rather, they seemed inert, being likely nothing more than some geological anomaly of that place. At any rate, not a single of my soldiers encountered any creature on the surface of VX 2, nor did our scans register organic life.

That being said, the latest lost surveying party indicates that there must be something there, and something which is both unlike anything before seen, and which has enough sentience to attack unarmed civilians and yet hide from Imperial troops. This is a worrisome fact, and one which cannot be ignored any longer. For this reason, I, Gunnery Sergeant Melissa Kendricks, am requesting permission to lead an expeditionary force to VX 2, in order to discover the source of the disappearances there, and if necessary, destroy whatever threat is hiding on that planet.



Gunnery Sergeant Melissa Kendricks
1st Light Lancers
Kyreti High Command
 
“We’re all clear up to the crevice, Sir,” Specialist Hugo reported over voice comm. “We’re getting readings of radiation, and the temperature seems to be rapidly increasing. No ambient light.” The Corporal turned on his vid-recorder, and stood up. “Roger,” he replied, motioning for his cover team to move up. “Torches on, air filters closed. I want the carbines on point.” Twelve rifle-mounted flashlights illuminated the surrounding spires.

He peered over the edge, staring into the pitch black hole. It reminded him of the Hostile Environment training grounds at Canis III. “Private Hueburn, put a flare in,” he said before tuning into the HQ net. “Vulture Three, sitrep,” he announced himself. “Send it, Corporal,” Kendricks’ reply quickly came. “Geographical anomaly Delta reached without incident. Large crevice, rad hazard stage one.” The crevice lit up as the Private launched a strobe, and revealed a plateau leading into a cave some 20 metres below. “I have eyes on what appears to be a natural hallway allowing entrance to the crust interior. No sign of sentient life or bioluminescent species. Sending my team in, will mark our route with nav beacons.” The corporal took his hand off the comm button, motioning for Lance Corporal Yung. “Rappel down with team two.”

They moved slowly through the darkness, their torches revealing the narrow, twisting path forward. “Radiation up to stage two,” the marine up front reported. “Long range comms now affected.” The corporal nodded, before again raising the Gunnery Sergeant. “Going dark due to natural interference, ma’am. Effective time 60 minutes before suit seals affected, will retreat accordingly. Request decontamination unit at landmark Delta.” “Rog.., comms diff… re..ments sent…low down…port. Good …ting,” the garbled reply came.

He ran his hand across the markings on the wall. “Kind of look like native paintings, don’t they,” he said to nobody in particular. Suddenly, the team came to a halt as the point-men halted. “What is that?” Private Lyse muttered, as she started shuffling back. “It’s seen us, open fire!” Yung added seconds later. The tight hallway exploded in a burst of light and noise as four standard issue kinetic rifles were unleashed on the formless black mass oozing forward. “Back, back!” The Corporal ordered his squad. “Keep up the pressure! Hayes, flamer up now!” A high-pitched noise drowned out all sound as the napalm mixture ignited, and the ooze recoiled. “Team one, take over rear! Team two, lead us back out!” He commanded. Private Hueburn suddenly found himself on the rocky floor and yelled out as he was pulled deeper in. “Leave that man behind!”

“Last mag, Sir!” He heard someone yell out, but it barely registered. All semblance of orderly retreat had vanished as the squad hustled back as quickly as they could. He heard his own ragged breathing, he heard the radiation warning that his suit was broadcasting, and he heard the screams of his soldiers, some panicked, some berserk. And then, the crackle of his comm system. What was being said, he couldn’t hear, but clearly they were nearing the surface again. At the same time, the gunfire ceased. “It’s retreating, Sir,” Specialist Gammon uttered. The Corporal took a deep breath, and looked around. “Break, break, break. Vulture Three, sitrep,” he said, pressing his comm button. “Five MIA. Low on ammo and oxygen. ETA landmark Delta, ten minutes.”
 
Somehow I totally missed this latest installment, and only now found it while perusing back pages of the Creative Writing area. This is sharp Addy, and a really cool continuation of the story. Maybe not exactly what I myself would have done, but super good, and that is the point of this anyway, for each of us to take it our own little direction.

With this fresh in my mind, I am gonna start rattling ideas around my little dome, and hopefully come back tonight or tomorrow with a next installment here. I already have the rough shape of what comes next in my mind, and now I just need to clean it up into an actual narrative.
 
I'm incredibly rusty on my sci-fi gears, but perhaps a continuation of things before could be made in time.
 
I suck at creative writing and while I got attracted by the title for obvious reasons I still enjoyed the installments.
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Hahaha the quality isn’t as important as the effort and worldbuilding. Tbh the first one of these than managed even just a few pages was just as fun for the writing as it was for the recap posts establishing the world our short blurbs of story exist in. Thats why I have the couple reserved posts set up for linking such info if we reached such a point.
 
So the question is: What have we established as canon in this group worldbuilding effort so far?

First, we had my poem that establishes some sort of immortal king whose creations became corrupted and overtook him, forcing him to watch as they march in warfare against his will. Secondly, we've established some sort of surveying patrol was overtaken by an unknown force. Kilo put together a fantastic work establishing the loss of that original survey crew on VX 2, while Addy told us the challenges and terror that group faced. Something dark, and terrifying is happening on VX 2, and it has just encountered an interstellar humanity for the first time. However, not all works have to be a direct continuation of the prior work, so mine is going to focus on another aspect of this world:


The Elek'ar were the first race of advanced life humanity encountered during its burst onto the intergalactic scene. Diminutive in size and distrustful by nature, these beaked, mole-like aliens were initially mistaken for local fauna on Planet AF 3, the colony now known as Discovery. It wasn't until further surveillance was made and they had already translated human languages that it was discovered these aliens had an advanced system of AI as well as interstellar vehicles buried deep within the planet's caverns.

A fragmented, tribal people who had broken into several dozen smaller regimes scattered throughout the cluster, the "outer lands" Elek'ar as these first encounters call themselves were living a relatively modest life far from their species' original homeworld, spending much of their time on AF 3 and surrounding worlds in underground bunker communities. From what humanity has learned of "Elek", via the computerized voice that regurgitates their squeaks into English, the homeworld's descent into political instability and civil war several decades prior is what brought about this new status quo and created a decline in their civilization.

Despite some early instances of hostilities and attacks on the surrounding worlds many decades ago, Elek'ar have been mostly integrated into modern human society as an example of a "good" xeno life form, often taking up together in tight-knit communities in human border cities and using their robotics experience to find jobs in technology fields and mostly keeping to themselves outside of business. They will almost always utilize their universal translators when forced to interact outside of their clans, as their squeaking language is indecipherable to most non-Elek ears.

Adult Elek'ar tend to be roughly 1.10 to 1.30 meters tall, with some reaching as tall as 1.7 meters. They have a wide build, covered in dark furs ranging from light grey to pitch black. Additionally, they are known for their small, black eyes and elongated, flat nose. When first interacting with humans on a wide scale, there was a tendency to characterize Elek'ar as "cute" much in the same way humans would describe a pet, something they greatly resented but were willing to put up with due to the benefits of integration into human society.
 
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I was just thinking that the Elek'ar sound cute, when I reached the comment that humans have a tendency to see them that way! I like your description of them, it makes me wonder about their culture and how they interact with human society.

Also, I'm curious about whether Gunnery Sergeant Melissa Kendricks got permission to lead an expeditionary force to VX 2 - Adamat might have been describing such an expedition in post 17, or that could have been a different expedition.
 
A good installment, Gigi! I like the branching out to other worlds and peoples (though I will focus my energies on VX2, I think ;) ).

@Alwyn: I understood Addy's addition as following mine, and recounting the first foray of Kendricks' mission to VX2 (which must have been sanctioned, otherwise she wouldn't be there with a squad of troopers). At any rate, that was my interpretation, and when I finally get around to writing a next installment for that part of the story, I will be moving forward with that in mind.
 
Yeah my idea for this is that you can really add anything to it and make it canon to the world building as long as it doesn’t contradict prior entries without necessarily having to following the prior narrative being worked on. Glad you guys enjoyed the latest entry and are interested in continuing it.
 
Ooh'squi was simply a simple Elek'ar who desperately wanted to live a simple life. Unfortunately, that was not to be found on Earth.


This morning, like any other, he was beginning his usual routine of gently sliding out of his twin-sized bed without waking his mate of nearly 50 cycles, Eee'stee, before giving her a soft nuzzle on her forehead. He hated having to get dressed in the human's clothes every day, not being able to afford custom Elek'ar tailors and instead being embarrassingly fitted in clothing made for their youth. He simply didn't understand why on human worlds, Elek'ar could not wear simply their furs. It had been their way long before the humans discovered them.


He also hated having to slip on that black, tight and chafing suit that left his furs wet with sweat nearly as much as coming into work on days like today, when he had been ordered to come in early and work the morning shift. The yellow sun of Earth's system was far too bright for an old Elek's small eyes. It gave him a headache.


Nevertheless, he had to take care of his clan, and for his last act before leaving, he attached the small silver and blue-lit necklace that translated his thoughts into their meandering, loud human languages to his neck. Prepared for the day, Ooh'squi waddled out the door of his small, even by Elek'ar standards, apartment and took the hoverlift up to the surface of Meridian. Even though he left home at 4am local time, hoping to beat the crowd and knowing his small legs made it difficult to be on-time, the elevator was packed with humans far too much to his liking. Oftentimes, the tall hairless ones were too busy reading messages or entranced by some other form of handheld device to even notice him, yet the occasional elbows to his snout were far more preferable to the times a human that was at most half his age would talk down to him and call him "cute". Even Oskans and Vitarii showed far more respect and restraint than those sorts of humans.


Thankfully, today was one of the former as he finally hit the still-dark surface of the station that wrapped around Earth's equator. There was an irony in the fact that a people who had dwelled in the subterraneous region of their prior home had never even touched the surface of the one they had migrated to. Instead of Earth itself, Ooh'squi's grandfather had settled the clan on "The Belt", the largest and most metropolitan of the ringed stations orbiting Earth, situated thousands of kilometers in orbit directly around its equator and housing billions.

The humans, their silhouettes barely illuminated by the early morning light, who had disembarked with him were already far ahead of Ooh'squi as he made a sudden swerve to the right. The humans who were awake at this hour, even on the streets of restless Meridian, were all taking the trains towards the industrial districts; they were craftsmen and factory workers. Those were the only humans who lived in the lower decks of Meridian amongst the aliens.

Ooh'squi was again alone as he ploddingly treked towards the empty trains that would send him to the Defense District a few sectors of Meridian to the east. His brown furs, now matted in specks of grey, were already soaked from the labor of his travel. Like every day lately, and maybe not so lately, he thought, he was tired of life in the human metropolis. Sometimes he even questioned how his ancestors, just a few generations prior, could have let themselves be revealed to the humans. He wondered how they could have even left Elek at all, the never-ending civil war be damned.


Yet these feelings quickly faded as he looked out the window of his train at the tall towers and flying ships speeding across Meridian, and down at the beautiful blue sphere it orbited around. Even with his eyes straining more and more with each centimeter the sun rose above the horizon, he felt the one small bit of peace he would ever get living amongst the humans and their ilk. He knew this was the better way. For all his stress, his clan was safe and well-fed, and he had risen far higher than most Elek'ar would. He closed his small, beaded eyes and rubbed his wet snout until his empty train, speeding at over 1,000 kilometers per hour, had reached the Citadel.


When he arrived, the train had picked up many more passengers, primarily humans, from the disctricts closer to the Citadel. Again, squeezing through barely noticed at just waist height, Ooh'squi managed to make it out the doors faster than usual. Immediately ahead, the Citadel was as immense a building as he had ever seen, yet Ooh'squi mustered the might every time he arrived to scale its pale, marble steps up to his entrance, a non-descript small door far to the right of the military entrance. Again, as always stood the officers at the security checkpoint. This time they were led by a tall, young, dark haired human Ooh'squi did not recognize; "Kristos" was the name listed on his tag, and the scowl on his face as the Elek'ar approached confused Ooh'squi.


"Where to, mole? Analytics?" the man asked with the bite of hatred. This had fortunately not been too common in the Citadel compared to other districts, especially with the usual guards who knew him, but Ooh'squi was all too familiar with it in the districts closer to home.


Nevertheless, he did not take the bait. "Yes." the human voice emanating from the speakers on his neck translated his affirmative squeaks. Ooh'squi quickly held up his tags for scanning and marched through the blackened alley leading to his office. Yet, as he approached the doors to Analytics, he noticed something he had never noticed before. Screaming, banging, marching noises all coming from behind the door.


Baffled, the little Elek'ar scanned his card and saw the scene behind the pale doors as they slid open. Humans were storming back and forth across the expansive office, loud chatter was coming from the back offices, and right at the front desk were several military-garbed humans shouting at one another.


"What is happening?!" shouted one of the men, an older, balding and pale human, his white uniform emblazoned with several medals indicating some sort of high rank at the Citadel.


A much younger woman, her brunette crown shaved in the fashion of human military regulations, in matching garbs with yet even more medals than the man, put her hand on his shoulder. Her bright green eyes, so much larger than those of an Elek'ar, conveyed one emotion Ooh'squi had learned to read in the aliens: fear. "Something big. Something very, very big."
 
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Doctor Kylie Faiza Engstrom had just returned to port with her ship, pirates had tried to get her cargo, the buyer of the cargo had tried to avoid paying, and for the last two days approach, the cooling unit had broken down, making the last leg of the journey some sweltering days..

.......Kye droned on:

"... And predictably, The dud asked for an extension."

Bills started to regret having asked and began to steel his mind against this turn in the flavour of the conversation, trying to mask it and his frozen expression with a larger than normal gulp from his beer. Replying with a curt nod, and a barely audible

"Mhmm?"

Kye continued, noticing nothing as her eyes were fixed on her poor attempt at sewing shut the newest holes in her patch tapestry of a shirt. Such was hard with her missing arm, but Bills knew better than to offer a hand. Bills being a black belt in spartan conversational manners was nothing new, it was actually one of her favourite things about Bills. Well right after his almost magical ability to fix the cooling unit in her decrepit ships' cockpit, that no mechanic near or far, within reason, seemed able to do jack to fix.'

'"Yeah, If I could afford to give extensions, I'd have a better ship than this rustbucket.. Or a new arm.. Or a damn pillow."

Bills raised one brow.

"Pillow?"

Kye continued in a monotone voice

"I got mad. It ripped."

Bills:

"Mhmm, so you told him no?"

He looked down at the work he had done on the cooling unit not many minutes before, and back at her. She shook her head with the sewing thread between her lips and mumbled.

"MmNah, Mmno - I smiled at him."

She bit off the string.

"You have to smile at idiots... And children. And those Elek'ar fluffballs. He paid right quick."

She imitated a replay of the smile, making a poor attempt at devils horns, the missing arm making the devil miss a horn.
He shrugged, speaking through the hint of a sigh.

"You're always a smartass.."

She looked up at him, her piercing gaze looking over her glasses. Rare but sweet dimples heralded a cheeky grin..

"No, sometimes I sleep"
 
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