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    Histories of a Boy Soldier


    "Sometimes I wonder... Will God ever forgive us for what we've done to each other? Then I look around and realize... God left this place a long time ago." - Blood Diamond, 2006


    Set in Sierra Leone, in the early 1990's, Histories of a Boy Soldier is the story of one boy's journey to survive, during the brutal Sierra Leonean Civil War. Through the ensuing chaos and uncertainty, Abel van de Kaans must find his way, or perish in the flames that follow.






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    Chapter XV - The Second Battle of Moyamba Junction
    With preparations for battle completed, and the pre-battle inspections concluded, Abel and the others
    wait in anticipation for the fight. When the battle commences, nobody is safe.

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    Chapter XVI - Picking up the Pieces
    The aftermath of the battle is revealed.
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    From the author:
    Abel van de Kaans was born in Cape Town, South Africa, in 1980. His father was a Boer South African doctor, and his mother was a French Canadian nurse. Both of them were employed by the International Red Cross Organization.

    In 1989, his parents moved their family from South Africa, to Freetown, Sierra Leone, when they were transferred there by work. It was quite the transition for Abel, and his three elder siblings. With difficulty, they adjusted and began to cope with their new home. They were much like any kids, they enjoyed playing soccer from dawn until dusk, and going to school. Thankfully, they were not ostracized negatively due to the color of their skin either. It was very different than in their native South Africa.

    They were treated very well in Freetown, and in 1991 their parents were transferred from the head office in Freetown, to a clinic in the town of Moyamba, in the Moyamba District, Southern Province. It was a fairly large rural town, with 15,000 civilians. All of the children went to a small school just outside the town.

    Abel's brothers Jon, and Pieter, his sister Nora, as well as himself, were enrolled there. They were the only white skinned students in the school, and the locals playfully referred to them as pinkies. Everyday they'd walk five kilometers from their home to the school, and at lunchtime they would play soccer. When school was out they again played soccer until dusk, and then they walked home along Lumba road.

    Life was good in Moyamba, until one day in 1992, when everything changed. This is his story...



    Characters (may contain spoilers)
    Legend:
    - In square brackets: The pronunciation of the character's name.
    - In round brackets: The character's nickname.
    - In individual spoilers: The character's current status, as per the current chapter.

    Youth R.U.F. Soldiers:


    Captain Abel van de Kaans [Ay-Bull Van Duh Con] (Able)
    (b. 1980) (12-13)
    A white African youth, captured by the Revolutionary United Front (R.U.F.), and forced to become a child soldier. The story follows his experience as a child soldier. After his capture, near Lumba school, Abel was selected as a protege and model youth soldier and commander.

    Abel has always had a strong passion for history, and the study, and envy of such historical leaders as Scipio Africanus, and Alexander the Great.

    He views his opportunity in the war a way for him to live vicariously through the eyes of his ancient idols, and make a name for himself that will stand the test of time. As premature as this idea may seem, it inspires him to move forward, during such trying times.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Abel sustained serious, but non-life threatening injuries during the Second Battle of Moyamba Junction, when tank fire sent him falling into a tank block, with shrapnel tearing sparingly through his rear side. He also sustained a gunshot, just prior to this.

    He is currently undergoing medical assistance, post-battle.


    Jon van de Kaans [Jawn Van Duh Con]
    (Age unknown)
    Abel's older brother. He was at Lumba school, when the rebels attacked, and was captured with Abe and a mutual friend.

    Jon and Abel have differing opinions of the R.U.F. Abel seeks glory, and sees his opportunity to achieve it through the R.U.F., whereas Jon seeks to return life back to normal. He has a growing disdain for his brother, and his brother's new found 'friendship' with Commander Caesar and other rebels.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Jon was left behind in Lungi, when Abel and a selection of youth troops were ordered to attack Moyamba Junction, under Major Red's command. In the five months since their departure, his current status and whereabouts are unknown to Abel.


    Captain Musa [Moo-Sah]
    (Age unknown)
    A friend of the van de Kaans', and classmate of Abel, and Jon. He was captured outside of Moyamba, with Abel and Jon. He is a timid youth, and holds a lack of authority, which causes him problems with being able to assert himself as a major contributor to the rebel group. He began as a close confidante of Abel, but slowly descended to just another youth captain, replaced by newer aspiring youth captains, to serve as Abel's command staff.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Musa was revealed to have been killed by machine gun fire, during the Second Battle of Moyamba Junction (Chapter 16), in mid-spring, 1993.


    Captain Solomon
    (Age unknown)
    A friend of Abel's and the other boys. He was a classmate, whom was at Lumba when the rebels attacked. He fled with a different group of boys, from the school, and was captured and brought to Camp Lungi, where he reunited with Abel and the others.

    Solomon is an aspiring youth officer, who still serves with distinction in Abel's close group of officers. Unlike Musa, Solomon has the ability to assert his authority when needed, and as such he still holds a prominent position at Abel's right side.

    Solomon is a brilliant youth. He is a realist and is not afraid to correct, or enlighten the other officers when the situation calls for it.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Solomon was injured during the Second Battle of Moyamba Junction. His left arm is healing, in a sling, from wounds sustained. He still holds a prominent position under Abel's command.


    Captain Silas [Sy-Less] (Big Sy)
    (Age unknown)
    One of Abel's squad members. Silas is the biggest teen in camp, he is 6'5, with a muscular body, hidden by his additional stockiness. He is the strongest boy in camp, and most fear even crossing his path, due to his general size. Over the course of his incorporation into Abel's squad, Silas has moved to the front of the squad, and had become Abel's official lieutenant.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Silas serves as a lieutenant, and Abel's executive officer. He led his squad with distinction and valor during the Second Battle of Moyamba Junction. He is currently operating as acting-commander of the rebel force at the junction, in Abel's name, during Abel's recovery.


    Captain Remy (Ace)
    (Age unknown)
    One of Abel's squad members. Remy is a tall, slender teen, whose is known as a typical joker, among the rest of the boys. He enjoys the luxuries of life (when he can), and is a card game enthusiast, and has an intense passion for gambling. Remy has a thick Crio accent, when he speaks.

    Remy is nearly always wearing a pair of Ray-Bans, or other shades, as a coolness factor.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Remy survived the Second Battle of Moyamba junction, and runs a squad bolstered by survivors of other (now-defunct) squads, as his suffered some losses during the battle.


    Captain Jo-Jo
    (Age unknown)
    A youth troop captain under Abel's command.

    Jo-Jo is subservient to Abel and Silas' command. He acts without question to their every decision and is unquestionably loyal to the rebel cause.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Jo-Jo died during the Battle of Moyamba Junction, when he was stabbed to death by government soldiers' bayonets.


    Captain Innocent
    (Age unknown)
    A youth troop captain. A supporter of Abel.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Innocent survived The Second Battle of Moyamba Junction. He currently has orders to secured the junction, and search the immediate area inside and out for government stragglers.


    Captain Temu [Tee-Mu] (Barracuda)
    (Age unknown)
    A youth troop captain. A supporter of Abel.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Barracuda survived The Second Battle of Moyamba Junction. He currently has orders to secure the junction (in collaboration with Innocent's squad) and search the immediate area inside and out for government stragglers.


    Captain Grady
    (Age unknown)
    An outspoken, ambitious youth soldier. His trustfulness is doubted, by some.

    Remy has a seeming hatred towards him, since a card game had previously put the two at odds.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Grady is revealed (post battle) to have deserted his squad in the middle of the fighting, and his current whereabouts and status are unknown.


    Captain Omry (Original)
    (Age unknown)
    Omry is Abel's adversary, in the youth battalion. His dismay for Abel's ascension to First Captain is well known.

    He is a fervent disbeliever in Abel's capabilities to lead, and the two are often at odds with one another.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Abel nearly killed Omry, for treason, before The Second Battle of Moyamba Junction. What remnant of life he still had in him, had slowly left the boy, when he was left to die, in captivity. He died of his wounds, shortly thereafter.


    Captain Henry (Hellion)
    (Age unknown)
    Henry leads another of the youth squads, like Omry, and Abel. Henry is a firm supporter of Omry, and also disbelieves in Abel's capability to lead. Neither him, nor Omry respect Abel, despite the fact Major Red, and Commander Caesar, among other top R.U.F. leaders have instilled leadership in Abel.

    Henry is laid back, and thinks very highly of himself, and believes he should run the youth brigade, a feeling that also puts him in direct conflict with Abel.

    Henry was allowed to live by Abel, after Abel chastised and left Omry to die.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Abel killed Henry in a knife fight, prior to the Second Battle of Moyamba Junction, after learning he had malicious intent to kill him, still clinging to the loyalty of his former commander, Omry.


    Toddric [Taw-Drick]
    (Unknown age)
    Toddric is an R.U.F. soldier, and supporter of Abel.

    Little else is known about Toddric, aside from serving as a torturer, of captives.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    He is fully committed to his position and is completely subservient to Abel and Silas' command. He is currently support staff, and the communications operator, for Abel's company.

    He wasn't a combatant, during the recent Battle of Moyamba Junction, instead operating behind the scenes during the battle.


    Adult R.U.F. Soldiers:

    Cmdr. (Dr.) Cesare Libre [Cee-Zair Lee-Bur] (Caesar)
    (Age unknown)
    A British-educated physician, and leader of the R.U.F. rebel forces. He is the camp commander of Camp Lungi, and the regional overlord. He took Abel in as a protege, and firmly believes in Abel's ability to become a prominent figure in the R.U.F.

    Caesar served in the Sierra Leonean Army, in the medical corps. He achieved the rank of Colonel, before denouncing his allegiance, and siding with the R.U.F., for the revolution. He is a highly reputable, and staunch supporter of R.U.F. Leader, Foday Sankoh.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Caesar stayed behind, to command as regional overlord, from the rebel camp at Lungi. He last interacted with Abel, before Abel left with Major Red for Moyamba, many months ago.


    Major Leonidas Ngobo [Leon-Ih-Das Go-Bo] (Red)
    (Age unknown)
    Formerly of Siaka Stevens' regime (1971-85), Red joined the army at the beginning of Stevens' term, and then moved his way through the ranks as an officer in the regime's secret police division. He was lead officer of the torture squads. Following the collapse of the Siaka Stevens regime, Major Red, with other loyalists fled to the thick northern jungles, where they engaged in partisan warfare with the new regime, under Joseph Momoh. Momoh declared him an enemy of the state, and all other former regime officials. Red fled to Angola, with his troops, and turned from a partisan group to a mercenary faction.

    Charles Taylor recruited Red to join his rebellion in neighboring Liberia. Red served in Liberia, before returning to Sierra Leone, at the outset of the Sierra Leone Civil War, in 1991. He was listed, by this point, as a war criminal, by the International Criminal Courts. An international warrant was issued for his arrest.

    Red runs the 'Reavers', a strike force of the Revolutionary United Front rebel forces. He serves as a direct subordinate to Commander Caesar.

    Red lead the reavers and the youth troops to victory over the government forces, in the 'Battle of Moyamba Junction (1992)'.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    led the First Battle of Moyamba Junction, and shortly thereafter departed, with his 'Reavers', leaving Abel and his youth company in control of the junction. Red was last seen alive, leaving the junction.


    Administrator Usengi Gtugbo [You-Sen-Gee Tug-bow]
    (Age unknown)
    A former lawyer from Freetown, Usengi aligned himself with the R.U.F., at the outbreak of the civil war, in 1991. He believes in Foday Sankoh's ideals, and believes if the R.U.F. Usengi was imprisoned by the previous regime, for advocating anti-government propaganda. Now, he continues his anti-government ideals through the safety of the R.U.F. He is a prominent intellect in the force, and in the eyes of the outside world, he serves as a chief administrator in the legal, and administrative side of the R.U.F. He currently works directly for Caesar, as his personal adjutant, and his mediator with the rest of the R.U.F.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Usengi was last seen in Lungi, but had been dispatched by Caesar to another posting. His status is unknown.


    Captain Rambo
    (Age unknown)
    The rebel captain in charge of training new 'youth officers'. Little else is known about him.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Rambo was last seen in Lungi, in December, 1992. His current status is unknown.


    Captain Chaos
    (Age unknown)
    The rebel captain whom captured Abel, Jon, and Musa, and brought them to Camp Lungi. Little else is known about him, except he served an older regime, with Major Red, prior to the revolution.
    Spoiler for Current Status (WARNING: SPOILER)
    Chaos was last seen in Lungi, in December, 1992. His current status is unknown.

    Story Statistics
    Story Length: 45,725 words in 15 chapters.
    Shortest Chapter: 1,724 words (Chapter 2)
    Longest Chapter: 8,634 words (Chapter 15)



    Chapter I


    I - The Day It All Changed

    August, 1992
    Moyamba, Moyamba District, Southern Province


    Abel hit the ground, after stumbling over his own feet. He looked and saw Leo hustling down field, only Musa and the goaltender, Henry, were in front of him. Two government soldiers assigned to guard the school were watching from the sidelines, laughing hysterically at Abel's poor football skills. Using a quick juke, Leo passed by Musa, and shot wide on Henry. The ball deflected off the crossbar and back outwards. Henry hustled to retrieved it, picking it up. Leo shook off the fall and hustled back to his position.

    Henry kept the ball for what seemed forever, as the other children on the field mocked him into passing it out. Eventually, Abel was back far enough to receive the kick, while Leo kept a close eye on him. Henry gave the ball a light kick and Abel's left foot received it. Musa had broken away from Solomon, and Abel kicked it too him, following it up. Musa received the ball, and kicked back to him. Just as Abel received it, an explosion occurred in the near distance, just outside of the soccer field, past the tree and bush wall, where there was a large field clearing. The two soldiers stationed by the school ran into the field, as all of the kids hit the ground. They were all in a sudden state of shock. Within moments, Abel heard the feint blast of a gunshot, and then another. Several more went off as he pushed himself up to his feet. He saw one of the soldiers on the radio, unable to make out the transmission from that distance, the soldier grabbed his partner and they ran back from where they came, out of the field as fast as they could opposite the directions of the gunshots. Abel ran to his brother Jon, and helped him up. At the same time, he grabbed Musa, as Musa was slow picking himself up. They all then ran for the gate.

    The shots continued in the distance, drawing closer. They all hustled to get out of the field, away from the shots. Abel had turned around and glanced over, seeing on the opposite side of the field a man barely able to balance his own staggering walk, as he ran to the opposite field fence, and climbed over with difficulty, the fence only standing four feet. He threw himself over the top, and fell on the inside, and got up staggering side to side. His white shirt covered in red. He managed to blurt out the words, "Run! Rebels!"

    Abel was taken aback by it. The other boys had left, but Jon and Musa remained with him, all watching the man as they slowly backed up, into the dirt parking lot of the school, watching the man stagger across the field, trying to balance himself so not to fall over. Just then, the boys saw other men emerge from the bushy treeline. The men were laughing hysterically, and chanting Here comes the R.U.F., laughing hysterically, Run! Run! Run! Here comes the R.U.F! They pointed their guns at the man in the field, and they fired. Several bullets hit the man in the back of his torso, and the sudden splash of blood from where the bullets exited - exploding out of the man's chest and stomach. He collapsed to the ground, and the gunmen began to climb the fence.

    Jon grabbed Abel, and the three of them ran with all they could across the parking lot, and up Lamba road, towards the village.

    "The rebels were in Bo, how is this possible?" Musa said in a panic.

    "These aren't the same ones," Jon said sternly, almost tripping over himself.

    "It doesn't matter, we need to get back to town. The soldiers are retreating. The Kamajors won't flee the rebels if they pursue us that far," Abel said in jumble of words. "The war had never reached this far west. The soldiers are just as petrified as us."

    It seemed like they had been running for an hour, yet they had just passed the Jobo road crossing. The school was now out of sight, the boys were all out of breath, stopping for a moment at the road crossing. The gunshots seemed to taper off in the distance a bit. They thought they were out of harms way, and not being followed.

    Jon had been bent down, with his hands on his knees gasping for air. "What a day for Pieter to stay home," he said, taking another deep gasp. "I can't believe this is happening."

    Abel looked at him, "Believe it, Jon. The war has finally touched home."

    Musa had two trails of tears down his cheeks, but Abel didn't say a word. He just looked at him for a few moments, he was clearly lost in thought, perhaps fearing for his family, just as Abel and Jon were. One thing is for sure; everything will change now, they knew.

    Another gunshot sounded in the distance, the feint voices of war could be heard. In what they only assumed were rebels cheering at more ground gained for their movement. Abel reached out and pulled at Musa's arm slightly indicating it was time for them to keep running. Jon followed behind them, quick at their heels. They had just kept going, they passed another forked road; Lumba at Tumbo. They could see the last fork ahead of them, they were now only two kilometers outside of Moyamba.

    They continued making a steady pace, turning around a bend in the road, perhaps a hundred meters from the next forked road, they heard gunshots coming from Moyamba. From the sound, it seemed as if the shots had doubled.

    "Maybe the Kamajors are fighting the rebels further up ahead along the road," Musa said.

    They were now only a hundred meters from the fork, coming around the bend, they saw Leo and Thomas up ahead - two of the boys they had played soccer with before the attack. Then they saw an old pick-up truck pull up and stop Leo, and Thomas at the intersection. It wasn't a government military vehicle, that was for sure. The three boys stopped, and descended the side of the road a bit, into the ditch, staying out of view, and watched the confrontation.

    "Whose that? The Kamajors?" Jon asked hesitantly.

    "No. And it's not the government," Abel said quickly, realizing his fears had come true, that the rebels had finally descended upon Moyamba.

    Two armed men jumped out of the back, and one from the front passenger side. They approached Leo and Thomas, who they had cut off from the boys' path. It was difficult for them to make out what was happening, but then one of the soldiers (the one with the sloped beret) slapped Leo across the face, and he hit the ground. The other two grabbed Thomas, and put him to his knees. Abel glanced quickly at Jon and Musa, they couldn't believe what they were seeing. They all watched. It was so silent you could hear a pin drop. The man with the beret was in a military overcoat, but it was undone, and he wore a wife beater underneath. He also wore a pair of black sun shades. He reached and drew his firearm from his holster. He pointed it at Thomas' head, and a lone shot was fired, echoing in the silent distance. The bullet tore through Thomas' head, and exploded out the back, with a blast of blood. His body dropped lifeless to the ground. Leo screamed, and the man with the beret swiped backhandedly with his gun, hitting him in the face with the butt of the gun, and he then kicked Leo in his unprotected stomach. The man in the beret then turned to walk to back to his seat on the other side of the truck. The other two men, with rifles went up to Leo, whom was struggling to push his body up. One of them took his rifle by the barrel and bashed the stock into Leo's back, eliminating his efforts to push himself up, as he was laying flat on his stomach, now. The other man bashed his rifle butt into Leo's head. They could do nothing but watch in horror as the men repeatedly bashed their rifle stocks into Leo's head. Like Thomas, Leo did not move again.

    The gunmen loaded themselves back up into the truck, smiling, and laughing. One of them leaned over the side and spit on Leo's lifeless corpse. The truck then continued down the adjacent road. The boys did not know what to do. Musa had cried through the entire ordeal, and Jon hugged him, trying to comfort him.

    "Those bastards!" Jon cursed, saliva ejecting out of his mouth, as he sobbed angrily.

    Tears were in all of their eyes. This day was the day they all hoped would never come.

    "We can't stay here, and we can't go back to Lumba. We have to take to the bush," Abel said, trying to collect myself emotionally to lead the three of us out of the situation, "We need to get off the road. We should travel through the bush. It's thick in this part, we can find our way out somehow," he looked around for some sort of respite, some way to take them off the road.

    "This way," Abel said, grabbing Jon by the arm. Musa rose to his feet and followed, wiping his eyes.

    They entered into the bush, keeping low, and trying to hasten their speed, as they searched for a way out of the situation. They heard footsteps nearby, the leaves crackled beneath their steps. Abel put his arm up to stop Jon, and Musa from following.

    "Wait," he said in a low whisper. They remained there temporarily for several minutes. The footsteps stopped. The bush was too thick to see very far in any direction.

    Out of nowhere two men jumped out of the bush behind them, one pushing Abel to his stomach, the man landing on his back, the other pushing Jon down to his back, landing on his stomach. Musa had fallen backwards, and down a small slope, into a small stream. Two more men jumped out, rifles in hand. One of them pointed the gun at Musa, and the other at Jon. The one whom had grabbed Abel was much stronger than him. He tried to fight him off, but he was quickly overwhelmed. Jon was overwhelmed as well. Musa did not flinch a muscle, with the barrel of an AK47 rifle pointed at him.
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    An unusual storyline and quite a difficult topic to take on, so far its been a very good read.

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    Good start - very unusual premise but I think you're handling it well. Look forward to more.
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    Well if the other two guys have joined in I feel obliged to.

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    Another excellent chapter, the realism of the work is great, you can almost imagine the scenario, what with all the news coverage of events across many war-torn states in Africa at the time and sadly since then too.

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    Thanks Rex. I'm very meticulous about historical accuracy. I'm going to try and keep as close to actual events that occurred in real life, and ensuring they are in proper chronological order as the story progresses. The same goes for historical figures heavily involved in the conflict. Showing the trials and tribulations Abel must go through will be a tough job. Any who know of this war know it was very messy. A lot of heinous, disturbing, and unforgivable atrocities were committed, and I'll try to describe them as best I can as the story progresses. I definitely enjoy the challenge of this story.

    Thanks to everyone else whose read it as well!

    Chapter II
    II - Captives

    August 31, 1992
    Camp Lungi, Moyamba District, Southern Province


    None of them said a word, when three more men emerged from the bushes, two with rifles, and one just in a military camouflage t-shirt, with a black do-rag, and a military dog tag on his chest. The man had been quite muscular. He was in camouflage pants, and had black boots on. He had a sling across his chest, as he put his hand behind his back, and drew out a large bush knife, from it's sheathe. He put the knife to my neck.

    "What do we 'ave here? Trespassas'?" The man said with a thick accent.

    "We are students at Lumba," Abel was able to allow the words escape, even though he was too petrified to move an inch.

    "Lumba School? Dat be R.U.F. terri'ry now. Dis make you a trespassa', boy," the man had said.

    The other rebels smiled, it was clear to the boys now that this was the leader of this group.

    "We meant no trespass, Sir. Please. We are just kids," Abel said, in a submissive tone, trying to appease the leader.

    "Call me Cap'n. Cap'n Chaos," The man said with a grin.

    "I'm sorry Captain Chaos, we're in the wrong place. We're just trying to get home."

    "Home?" The captain had cut Abel off. "Moyamba?" he laughed. "Moyamba is now R.U.F. terri'ry as well, boy," The captain said, pulling his knife from Abel's throat, and grabbing him by the chin. He swiveled his head side to side inspecting him. Then he grabbed Abel's arm, and pulled on it slightly, dropping it, looking over to the other two boys, he turns to what appeared to be a subordinate, "Dey be fit. Fit enough to labor da work camps," the captain had said, turning to one of his men, he hissed through his teeth. The man grabbed Abel and pulled him to his feet. The other rebels pulled up Jon, and Musa, and pushed them together.

    "Tak'em ta Lungi. Put dem wi da res' of da cap'ives, der," Captain Chaos said.

    The boys were pushed single file into the bush from which the men emerged. We were going to be headed back towards Lumba, again.

    It was a long trek through the thick bush, the rebel commander keen to keep off the road, as the fighting still commenced in the vacinity. Gun shots could be heard as frequent as raindrops in a thunder storm. Similarly, explosions were as frequent as lightning. Abel, familiar with the region around Moyamba knew where they were, once he heard voices yelling, and occasional gunshots even closer than those feigning out on the outskirts of the town itself. They were passing by Lumba, and he could tell as it seemed the rebels had gathered more captives there, and the commotion was loud. Soon, those voices faded out, and the small rebel band continued with their three captives towards Camp Lungi, past the Kwelu river.

    It was night now, as they approached Lungi. The sky alit with the fires from the camp. Commotion was immense, upon approaching the camp. Rebel soldiers dotted the perimeter of the camp. The three from Moyamba, had passed four makeshift checkpoints, and drew the disdainful stares of dozens of rebel fighters, as the band approach the camp.

    Inside Lungi, there were makeshift holding cells set up using barbed wiring, from fences. It seemed as though there were over a hundred captives in the camp as a whole. Captain Chaos smiled, as he embraced other rebels at the camp. Abel did nothing more than look on, pinning the just as responsible for killing Leo, and Thomas, as any of their captives. They are all cut from the same cloth, he assumed. The three were placed in one of the makeshift holding areas, with a dozen other captives, whom they did not really recognize.

    Inside, the three stayed together, huddled in one of the corners of the holding area, attempting to reassure eachother that they would survive the ordeal.

    Abel paid little attention then to the other captives, despite the fact that lighting in the holding areas had been minimal at best, though one whom had been hidden himself in the opposite corner had approached Abel, "Abel? Is it you?" the voice said.

    Abel turned, squinting to focus his vision on the boy approaching him, "Solomon?" his eyes widened, shocked to see one of his friend's alive.

    "It is you," Solomon said. He reached his arms and met a mutually responding Abel. The two hugged momentarily, as Musa, and Jon both made their
    acknowledgements of Solomon.

    "How did you get here?" Abel asked.

    Solomon took a deep breath, and exhaled. He was very hesitant to respond, "We headed north. To Ebonsa. We thought if there was fighting in the area, that the rebels would attack Moyamba. They attacked Ebonsa, as well." He said, with a clear gloom expression.

    Abel paused for a moment, "You said we... Solomon. What happened?"

    "We keeping to the bush, to try and get as far away as possible. We were ambushed by rebels, while crossing Muba road. Jeron... Jeron, and Patrice were with me... But, they... Took Jeron. Separated him from Patrice, and me. We didn't know where they took him, just away." Solomon ceased speaking. He just seated himself on his bottom, and gripped his legs inside his arms, gnawing lightly on his knee. He was staring blankly to the ground.

    Abel realised what he was doing, and feared for the worst. However, he still had to ask, "Where is Patrice?"

    Solomon looked up, tears rolling down both cheeks, "They killed him. Shot him right in the head. Then they dumped his body in the ditch on the side of the road. Like he was nothing," he sobbed.

    Abel hesitated to speak, though he considered that bad news could hardly get worse than what Soloman had already seen happen.

    "They killed Leo, and Thomas, as well. We saw it happen. That's when we took to the bush, and we were ambushed by an RUF squad," Abel said.

    Abel pointed to a Rebel soldier, "That one there, calls himself Captain Chaos. He said the rebels have taken Moyamba. But the soldiers retreated to the town, and in the town the Kamajors have twice the numbers as the government troops in this region. I cannot believe that Moyamba would be taken. It's just impossible. Did you pass near it on your way here, Solomon?"

    Solomon shook his head, "No, they gathered me with a half dozen others they captured, and we were brought the long way around. We did pass by Lumba. The rebels have taken control of it. We saw several of their vehicles there, and perhaps two dozen of them. There were bodies everywhere. Not even covered over properly. Just left to bake in the sun. I overheard one of the captains saying that they would use Lumba as a staging point against the Kamajors. They said the government is weak, and their soldiers frail little girls. He bragged that they killed five soldiers already, before assaulting Moyamba."

    A rebel guard walked by, with his rifle slung over his shoulder, holding it by the stock. He could not have been older than twenty. He eyed Solomon, and Abel, as they conversed. Staring them down, but continuing on his way as he made a patrol by their detainment area. Solomon stopped talking, and turned away, eyeing the rebel with his peripheral vision. Abel never broke eye contact with the rebel. The guard watched them. He realized Abel was staring right into his eyes, and stopped. "What do you want, Pinky? Want me to skin you and we'll see what lies underneath that pink skin? Eh, Mother fr?" Abel said nothing, not breaking eye contact. The guard laughed, and turned back to continue his patrol. The boys dared not speak until he was gone.

    Solomon waited, then spoke again in a steady whisper, "The captain mentioned to another one at Lumba that they used the coup d'etat of Valentine Strasser, and other junior officers from the army in April, before they launched their operation. That the army high command is in disarray right now and they will make leeway in territory gains. The government won't help us now, Abel. All of us are abandoned."

    Abel cut off Solomon, "The Kamajors will continue to fight for us. Even if the army retreats. We have to believe it."

    Jon spoke up, "Goddamnit Abel, curse the government, and curse the Kamajors. Where were they when Lumba was taken? The soldiers stationed there retreated before the rest of us could even get off the field. They hopped in their jeep and drove back to Moyamba. Leaving the rest of us to."

    Abel sharply cut him off, when a dash of anger flared in his voice, "To hell with that, Jon. The Kamajors will fight for us, if nobody else will. Don't be fooled into thinking that the United Nations will step in. They would have by now. The rebels are making ground everywhere. Nobody will aid us. Father even assumed this, but was reassured that the government would protect what territory they had."

    Jon scoffed, "Give it up, Abel. We're captives now. You saw what they did to Leo, and Thomas," he looked to Solomon, "And what they did to Patrice. They are turning kids into soldiers," Jon pointed over to a boy, seated playing cards with a bunch of the other rebels. "Look at that one. His feet don't even touch the ground, where he's seated. He has to be no more than six, or seven. What do you think they will do with us?"

    "Jon," Abel snapped. Realizing he was frightening Musa, and Solomon, he decided to smooth out the situation. "We won't know until they tell us. If they wanted us dead, we'd have joined Leo, and Thomas. We have to do whatever we have to do to survive. One day at a time," His voice lowered, "It seems we'll find out tomorrow."

    The boys watched in silence, as the rebel troops partied, and drank, and some even were shooting up with syringes. There was gangster rap music playing off boom boxes around the camp. The boys could do nothing now, but wait..


    FYI. Kamajors, for those wondering, are a group of Mende hunters formed at first to protect their property, and families. They weren't aligned directly with the government, and were formed as sort of a civilian militia to protect their families, and homes from the cat and mouse game the government, and RUF were playing. They played a key role in the fighting, especially in the closing years of the war by keeping the rebels at bay, and ensuring the often corrupt, and double sided government troops weren't looting their homes.
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    Chapter III is up. Enjoy!

    Chapter III
    III - Caesar's Will

    The next morning, Abel woke to the commotion going on throughout the camp. They had slept on the ground the entire night, in their detainment areas. The camp was lively and busy. The music was off, and there was no rebels playing cards, or singing, or joking around. It was day time, and the rebels went about assuming their individual roles. Captain Chaos was conversing with another man, this one was wearing a dark green beret, similar to the one the rebel whom killed Leo, and Thomas, had worn. But this was a different man. He was tall, and thin. He had a cigar in his mouth, and he wore eyeglasses. He was in full military uniform, with a band around his arm saying 'R.U.F.', signifying his allegiance.

    The man spoke for several minutes longer with the Captain, while others listened in. It was difficult for Abel to make out if this man was the camp commander or not. Jon, and Musa were still asleep, huddled with eachother. Solomon was awake at this point, looking on as Abel did, neither said a word.

    A rebel was walking down the fence line filling bowls with what appeared to be some sort of gruel. It seemed it was a bowl per two captives. He arrived and left a half dozen bowls full, for the dozen captives being held in their cell group. Solomon shared with Abel, and they had woken Jon, and Musa. They were all starving by this point. They ate in silence, Abel keeping his eyes fixated on the conversation between the rebel leaders at the camp.

    Finally, the man with the beret, and glasses threw his cigar down to the ground, and walked away from the other captains. Another rebel, with sun shades, and a camouflage wifebeater walked to the front of the holding areas. He stood there with his arms together, feet apart, in a really odd manner of stance. The man with the glasses approached and stood in front of him, looking at all of the prisoners. Now, everyone was paying attention to him.

    "Welcome to Camp Lungi. I am Commander Caesar," He said, before a long pause and continued, "You have been liberated by the Revolutionary United Front. We have freed you from your corrupt masters. The government of President Joseph Saidu Momoh is a farce. So much a farce, his own military commanders turned on him. His government was corrupted, and bled our mighty nation dry. He ensured that while the rest of us begged for the scraps from his table, that he and his elite, in Freetown, suckled off the wealth of our great nation.

    Surely, some of you may see the R.U.F. as the oppressors. That is incorrect. We are liberators. It is we who will make this country strong again. You all lived under this so called government's authority. They starved you of your rights, and freedoms. This is no more,"
    Commander Caesar waved over to some of his men. Two of the rebel soldiers picked up a bonded army soldier, from his knees, and forcibly walked him over to the commander. Commander Caesar backed up, as one of the rebel soldiers kicked the back of the knee of the soldier, dropping him to his knees.

    "This," he said slowly, "This is one of your oppressors. A coward, captured fleeing from battle. And this is the quality of our nation's army? I think not," He snapped his finger, getting the attention of the crossed arms, sun shade wearing rebel, and then nodded his head. The rebel soldier pulled a bush knife out of a sheathe on his belt. He put it under the bonded soldier's neck, gripping him by his hair in the other hand, and slowly slit his throat. There was utter silence from the soldier, as the knife glided across his neck. Within moments, the wobbling soldier's body dropped to the ground.

    "This is what we will do to the defilers of our nation. Foday Sankoh is a wise, and benevolent leader. He teaches us that it is you, the youth of this nation, that will take it back from our oppressors, and make this country strong, again. We will give Sierra Leone back to the people, eliminating the power hungry elite whom have crippled our great nation. While the army is engaged in political strife, and squabbles over government bank accounts, in Freetown, Foday Sankoh leads our march to liberate the people. The new president, Strasser, is uncouth, and as corrupted as Joseph Momoh. They are cut from the same cloth. Both of them part of the same corrupt army, which Siaka Stevens used to remain in power.

    With our advance, we make a stand. It starts here. You will each serve a purpose, and contribute to the overall success of the R.U.F., and our allies, for the better of Sierra Leone. We are but one nation, brothers bonded together. This is your new home, we are your new family. Welcome, brothers."
    He eyed Abel, and his brother, then his stare went back to Abel.

    Commander Caesar turned, and left the holding area, with the sun shade rebel at his side. The two rebel soldiers dragged away the body of the government soldier.

    "Senseless drivel," Jon spoke up, "We've seen what these 'liberators' have done for us. Picking and choosing at random who to kill. Nothing more than self-glorified murderers, the lot of them.

    Solomon nodded his head, "There's no difference between them and the juntas which have run the country for the past twenty years. Now this new president, Strasser? I heard he is only twenty five. Are we supposed to expect him to take a stand in ending the war? It's clear these R.U.F. ruffians won't stop until they have taken Freetown. Perhaps that's why the army recalled it's forces."

    Abel listened carefully to the rebel commander. He spent some time taking in the speech, before making his judgement.

    "It's true," Jon continued, "The government is weak. Military junta after military junta. But on the contrary, this won't change with the R.U.F. in power either. We've seen the brutality their capable of."

    Jon looked at Abel, who was day dreaming. "What's on your mind, little bro? Mother, father? Pieter, Nora? Their fine. The rebels were bluffing. They did not take Moyamba, or else we'd be in the town square right now, instead of this make shift camp."

    Abel broke his gaze, and looked up, "Yeah. The Kamajors thwarted the attack," He said, as Jon rolled his eyes, Abel continued, "It's true. They are small in number, but they do not give up ground. Moyamba is the heart of the Kamajors. It won't fall. Infact, they are relatively safe as long as the Kamajors protect the town. Maybe the rebels were repelled. Maybe we won't be here long."

    Jon spoke up, "Don't kid yourself. You heard the commander. We are to join the R.U.F. now. I tell you, the first chance I get.. I will put a bullet in this Foday Sankoh's head. And take as many of them down as I can, after that."

    The boys, for the most part ignored the rant.

    It was past noon, when Abel noticed that some of the captives were being released, and assigned to different groups. A soldier approached the fence. He had a black dorag, and a muscle shirt on, with brown shorts. He had a toothpick in his mouth, constantly moving around, propelled by his tongue. He stood there for a few moments looking at the boys, all of them silent.

    "You," the rebel said, nodding towards Abel. "Pinky. Come, now. The commander wants to speak with you."

    The makeshift gate was opened by a guard, and Abel was ushered out. He followed the rebel soldier to the command hut. No matter where he went, he found, since moving to Sierra Leone, he always drew attention as a white male in a predominately colored nation. The rebels seemed to look upon him indifferently, mostly in amazement by the color of his skin.

    As they arrived at the hut, the soldier stayed outside, and Abel went in by himself. Commander Caesar was seated with his legs up, and his arms behind his head, relaxing, while a large ceiling fan blew above him.

    "My soldiers call you pinky. It's not often we run across a white outside of Freetown. But two, as I saw in your hold. Coincidence?" Caesar asked.

    "Brothers." Abel replied.

    "I see. How did you get caught up in this mess, boy?"

    "Kidnapped, by your men." Abel said with no emotion.

    Caesar laughed, "I like that. Please, sit." He motioned for Abel to take a seat, and in compliance, he did. "Would you like a drink? A beer, perhaps?" The commander said, chuckling. "You know my name, but I don't believe I know yours?"

    "Abel."

    The commander leaned back, "You probably think I'm nothing more than common street trash, rambling on about another long, forbidding dream of power usurpation. Just another day, just another group vying for power in Africa, correct?" Caesar smiled.

    "Actually, it's quite the contrary. I obtained a degree in law, from Cambridge University, in 1983. I then served as an officer in the Sierra Leone Army for six years, and spent a year at a military institute, in Libya. I took to the bush last year with Sankoh, Mansaray, and Kanu."

    Caesar took his feet off the desk, and sat up properly in his chair, he put his arms on the desk, and locked his hands together, staring Abel in the eyes. "The truth is, I earnestly believe in our mission here. Momoh's government has been hoarding the profits from the mines. He claimed a meager salary as president, yet he has multi million dollar estates in Sao Tome, Morocco, Ghana, and the United States." Caesar hissed through his teeth 'tssk tssk', "He is but one, of an elite in Freetown, whom thrive off the suffering of Sierra Leone. Caring solely for bolstering his own coffers, so he might disappear in a few years, with our nation's money. A change must be made. Surely, some of our methodology is violent, but it is necessary to instill fear in our enemies, and obedience in our ranks. Always remember that, Abel.

    "The country needs the youth. It is the youth that promises change. Corrupt politics cloud the upper tiers of the administration of this country and spin a continuance of greed among leaders such as Momoh." Caesar takes a deep breath, and stares at Abel for several moments.

    "You look like a smart boy. Tell me, what do you think of everything that's been going on?"

    Abel cleared his throat, parched from a long day with no water, he spoke, "My father has us study current events in our spare time, and on weekends. So that my siblings, and I will be prepared to take on the world one day. I am not Sierra Leonean. I am South African. So I cannot comment much on this country's political issues, as I have not much knowledge of them." Abel said, lying to the commander so as to seem ignorant.

    Caesar saw through the ploy, "You seem very intelligent for your age, indeed. South African? Well that would explain your color. So you are from the slave master minority that runs South Africa? Was life so difficult being a slave master that your family relocated here?"

    "No. The Apartheid is an abomination, and my father, and mother, are very against it. I may be Afrikaner, but I am against such despicable hatred.." Abel was cut off by Caesar.

    "Alright, I have heard enough," He laughs, "A white in the R.U.F. How will that look on the international stage?"

    "I don't plan on joining the R.U.F." Abel said sharply.

    "Don't be foolish, boy, I'm offering you a way to take on the world now, as your father wants you to. What better way then to assist in the liberation of the country you reside in? How proud your parents would be," Caesar says heartily, "Their son, an intricate part in the freedom of this country. Unlike South Africa, where the power hungry elite, although racially motivated, controls the country with an iron rule. Here, in Sierra Leone, we have a chance to take control, and assuage the anguish of it's people. Our people, Abel. We are both African. You have an opportunity to be a part of change for the greater good. Embrace the opportunity." Caesar holds up a small book, and slides it across the table to Abel.

    "This is Foday Sankoh's writings, 'To Engage in the Will to Make Change Within Ourselves'. In it you will find the intelligible teachings of our leader. We must follow suit, in order to bring about change in the poor administration of this country."

    Abel picked up the book, read the title, and opened it, subconsciously intrigued by it. Glancing quickly over the first page. He looked up and stared at Caesar.

    "Do not worry, keep that, Abel. I take it you are literate. Truly study, and analyze his teachings, and see for yourself. Judge the sensibility, and truth, for yourself." Caesar knocked on his desk, and a guard entered the front door.

    "Take him to his new room," Caesar told the guard, "He has some reading to do," He turned to Abel, "We will speak soon."

    As Abel got up, and was lead out the door by the rebel, he turned back to Caesar, and glanced at him, before heading out. Once out, a grin crept on Caesar's face, as he leaned back on his chair, clearly he has intentions for Abel..
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    ...and you can bet those intentions are not good.

    Another great update

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    Intriguing. Look forward to more. I quite like this Caesar character

    Some technical points: you need to proofreading your writing - there are cases of they're/their etc, makeshift is one word, minor things like that which are easily corrected. A shame since the plot is so good. You also use quite colloquial language which isn't so suited to writing sometimes. Also, try to use comparisons that are less cliché and more original.

    Other than that, great work
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    Default Re: Histories of a Boy Soldier (Ch. V - 01/30)

    I shall review the story, and make some hidden grammatical changes, where needed. Thanks for the input, Chief!

    I hope you are all enjoying the story so far!


    Chapter IV
    IV - A Hidden Talent

    Moral weakness begets immoral decisions. The weakness of a leader is within their own mind, once consumed by a need for greed, a leader will often forget the importance that their position entails, to lead with earnest regard for followers, and the well being of what their responsible for. Most importantly the authority instilled in them by their position. When a leader has the loyal support of a class of peers, little will assuage that support, as long as a leader continues with the ability to rule, and control the lesser classes, and the general populace, they will not be defeated. The key to power usurpation is to sever the link of support between the ruling class, and the general populace.

    When a leader is unable to lead any longer, they must be replaced. There is no substitute for inadequacy, except to remove the inadequate one. A leader must be strong, dedicated, charismatic, genuine to peers, and able to exemplify all these characteristics without hesitation, or signs of weakness.

    A good leader must be willing to sacrifice everything, and all things. If you want to succeed as much as you want to breathe, you will be successful. You must be willing to bleed. You must be willing to fight. You must be willing to cast aside emotions. Emotions will cause you to fail. You must be willing to cast aside all those who will prevent you from achieving success, regardless of whom they are. Through any means, whatever is necessary, you must numb your core, and rebuff the weakness of heart.


    A door outside his room opened, heavy boots could be heard on the hardwood flooring. Closer, and closer the sound got. There was a pound on the door, and the boots could be heard passing by, continuing down the corridor.

    Abel shut the book, and placed it on a plain bed stand. He got up, and walked to the door. The room was plain, simple. Nothing but a beat up mattress strewn upon a simple cot, a plain table by the bed, and a high window. It was much like a cell, without a lock on the door.

    He walked out of the room, and met several other recruits. They walked out into the courtyard, outside the barracks. Several rebels greeted them, and lined them up. A man approached the new recruits. He stood, hands linked behind his back. He overlooked the recruits.

    "Three weeks you have been here now. You have already began your basic military training. Today you will begin your officer's training. You fifteen have been selected as officers," the man said, walking down the line, eyeing each as he passed by. "Do not question why you have been chosen, only accept that you have been chosen. Each of you will lead a squad. Your squads will consist of no more than a half dozen soldiers," the man stopped, and faced the line of recruits, "You will be responsible, and held accountable, for the successes, and failures of your individual squads. Weakness. Weakness is not a valid option in this position. You must be strong." He stops himself from speaking, "You will be hardened. Each of you must be willing to endure pain, both physically, and mentally."

    "I am Captain Rambo. I am your company commander. You will answer to me, as I answer to my superiors. You will remember this, or I will help you remember it," he said sternly.

    "You," Rambo pointed to a boy the recruits came to know as Jumon, "You, come here," he waved his hand slightly so to extract Jumon from the lineup, putting Jumon to stand on one side of him.

    Rambo looked from side to side, eyeing down the rest of the fourteen of the boys. He pointed to another boy, next to Abel, the boys knew as Michael. He waved Michael over to stand on the side opposite Jumon. Rambo turned around to face the two recruits.

    "You will fight each other. A show of a man's ability to lead, is to show his ability to win a melee if he needs to, and an overall worthiness to lead," Rambo said, as he turned to the rest of the boys. Jumon, and Michael looked at each other uneasily.

    "You won't always have a weapon with you. You must learn to master weapons God has given you. For your subordinates to respect you, you must show them that you are ready to lead them, in all aspects of battle, including scrapping."

    Rambo turned to Jumon, and Michael, again. He slapped Michael so hard that he fell to the ground, clearly unexpecting the slap. Michael held his face, and got back up, looking at Rambo blankly.

    "Do not look at me, fool," Rambo said, pointing at Jumon, "He is the one who slapped you. Kick his ass."

    Michael looked to Jumon, who was in a sort of a shock from what was going on. Jumon glanced from Rambo to Michael, and back, clearly not wanting to fight. Michael had a fury in his eyes. He lashed out punching Jumon in the face. Jumon hit the ground, backing up, stumbling over his feet trying to pick himself up, he turned back to Michael who ran at him to land another strike. Jumon put his head down, and charged at Michael, planting his right shoulder on Michael's waist, he scooped his arms behind Michael's legs. Michael landed two punches at Jumon's back, as he slowly lost his upright balance, Jumon successfully lifted both of Michael's legs off the ground and dropped Michael on his back, tumbling on top of him. Michael continued to throw strikes at Jumon's unprotected body. Jumon grabbed Michael's striking arm, and pulled it over his body, preventing any form of leverage to strike, Jumon began to strike Michael in the face, both men were bleeding at this point, Rambo grabbed Jumon, and forcibly threw him backwards, causing Jumon to fall flat on his back. Michael rose to his feet quickly, and attempted to continue attacking a fallen Jumon, but Rambo grabbed Michael by his hair, and threw him back to the ground.

    "Enough!" He said, turning back to the rest of the recruits. "You must get pissed off. That is how you will engage the rage within you. You must learn to control this rage. Harness it to your benefit. It will give you the adrenaline rush you need to defeat your opponent," he looked to Jumon, and then Michael, and back to the rest of the recruits, "These pansies are done. Now, who is next."

    Rambo pointed out, and selected two more recruits from the bunch, sending Jumon, and Michael back, the two of them looking at each other angrily, but lining themselves back up.

    Tristan, and James both moved to the front, and another fight ensued, began by Rambo. Boys after boys, pairs were randomly matched and put to fight one another, continuously, sometimes a boy had to fight back to back with another selection.

    Abel was now selected. Put to face the other recruit whom had not yet fought, the boy went by the name Ernest. Rambo eyed down Abel, recognizing him as Caesar's chosen protege, a fact well known to the other captains by this point. Still, he seemed indifferent to Abel.

    "Here's a real treat," he smiled, stepping aside, as Ernest, and Abel faced each other.

    Ernest looked at Abel, but did not hesitate long before charging at him, with no particular strategy but to engage his foe. Abel stood ready, waiting to receive the first strike from Ernest, who lazily threw his clenched fist forwards, aiming straight at Abel's head. Abel tilted his head right, and brushed aside the strike, with his right hand grabbing Ernest's extended right forearm. He struck Ernest in the left side of his stomach, with his own clenched left fist, as he passed by him. Ernest lost his balance, and held his stomach, the wind knocked out of him. Abel circled around back, as Ernest turned to face him, Abel did not continue a fury of assault. Ernest gathered wind for a few moments, before taking a left hook at Abel. Abel put up his right arm, blocking the strike from proceeding further, and he connected a straight jab with his left fist, connecting to Ernest's face. Blood exploded down from Ernest's nose, as he fell to the ground, falling back over his collapsed legs. He did not get up, instead holding his face, the blood seeping through his hands, getting all over him.

    Rambo took off his sun glasses, and squinted in disbelief, at Abel. He snapped his fingers and pointed to Omry, one of the boys whom had beat two others already. Omry eyed Abel with a loathsome hatred, and hustled to position himself opposite Abel. He raised both his hands, in a boxer-like stance, ready to engage Abel.

    Abel watched Omry, but did not bother to create a show like him.

    Rambo turned to the rest of the boys, "The championship!" He said, placing his shades back on.

    "Go," he said quietly enough for the close vicinity of recruits to here.

    Omry smiled, and nodded his head at Abel, trying to instigate him to make the first move. When Abel did not move, Omry slowly crept forward, hopping slightly, trying to mimic a boxer about to initiate a fight. He playfully circled Abel, Abel turning just slightly when required to face Omry, who was hopping around, dancing with his feet, creating a show for onlookers. Some gathered rebels cheered him on, Kill that pink skin, Beat his ass, two of the chants heard repeated were. The other recruits just looked on, rubbing, and tending to their wounds in their own ways.

    Omry finally lashed out without warning, except to Abel whom watched him carefully, and he jabbed several times, Abel just backing up enough to dodge them, without making any retaliatory strikes. Then Omry became overconfident, must like Ernest, and threw all his might into one lunging punch, while Abel swiped his arm aside, pushing it forward slightly with his right hand, so as to bolster the momentum in the punch, until in a moment, Omry's face approached Abel's body, and Abel struck back with his might, he drew his guiding hand in, extending his elbow towards Omry's face, then bashed it, using Omry's own momentum to increase the force of impact, Abel connected to Omry's nose, causing an unexpected whelp of pain, the strike leading to a similar outcome with that of Ernest, causing a stream of blood to poor from Omry's face, as Omry dropped down immediately to his knees, trying to balance his body in the unexpected situation, when Abel looked to the cheering rebels, now silent, and he grabbed a defenseless Omry by the hair, using both hands on each side of his head, he pulled Omry's head in, driving his knee cap straight to Omry's face, another whelp could be heard, echoing the first one, as Omry dropped to the ground, unconscious. None of the onlookers had any form of emotion, except a form of silent disbelief.

    Rambo took his shades off again, an emotion of surprise strewn upon his face, in an awkward expression. He turned to the other recruits, many of them with their eyes wide, and he turned back to Abel, "What the fk was that," he asked.

    "Martial arts," he said quietly, and emotionless.

    Rambo smiled with a very sinister grin, "It seems Caesar has made a wise choice, after all," He said, laughing, "The pink skin warrior," he continued jokingly, as Abel returned back to the lineup.

    Before Rambo could speak, Caesar appeared from a group of onlookers, clapping, and laughing. "I see you have met our prodigy, Captain," he said to Rambo. "Abel is a prime example of the type of youth troop officer we need in our ranks."

    Caesar faced the recruits, "Return to your rooms. Officer initiation is over, for today." He looked to Abel, "Except you. Come here."

    Rambo waved on some rebels to usher the boys back to their rooms. They had been segregated now, from the regular recruits.

    Rambo then joined Caesar, and Abel, as they walked back to the camp command building.

    Caesar turned to Rambo, "Did I not tell you this one was a special one?" He turns to Abel and smiles, "A true hidden leader." He turns again to Rambo, "Just need to chip away some rough edges, but he will be a powerful addition to the revolution."

    Abel remained emotionless, as the three men arrived at the command building. Outside the building, there was three military vehicles. They were government army vehicles. There was a full regalia government soldier mounting a machine gun on the top of the central APC, there were two more sitting in a jeep in front, and two visible in a closed in APC, in the back.

    Caesar continued inside, waving in Abel. Rambo stayed outside the building, with several other rebel soldiers, all carrying their weapons, including one with an RPG. It was an uneasy confrontation, Abel noticed. Inside the building, there stood a fully dressed government officer, standing opposite a man Abel did not recognize, but the half dressed military man was common among the rebels. He was talking to the officer, but he moved aside, and stood silent when Caesar passed by the officer, and to his desk, where he arranged some papers.

    "Yu owa debwey. Wi gita pay na na," the officer said sharply to Caesar.

    "Yuwa arm in da ritri. Yu da no deman of mi, Cap'n," Caesar barked back quickly.

    The captain puts his clenched fists on the desk, and leans over it putting his face close to Caesar's, "Mayu da ron wan ta negoti wit, eh? Maymi tak da arm, n plan a offen wit da Mende hunts? If yu na pay, a wa da greemen'," He leans closer to Caesar's face.

    Abel watched it all unfold, he did not speak much Creole, the hardest part understanding was how fast it was spoken, but he made out the gist of the conversation, for himself.

    Caesar looked right back at the captain, an inch or two away, the two men's faces were separated. He put his hand on the hilt of his sidearm. It was dead silent in the room, the two men stared each other down. Caesar removed the safety on his gun, not breaking eye contact with the army captain.

    The captain's eyes shifted to Caesar's sidearm, and then back to Caesar. He smiled, and withdrew his stance in the intense stare down, keeping a stern expression, he says, "Dis na ov. Dis mayu hom, but dis na ov, Cees. I be bak, yu con a da," the captain backed away. A guard's hand was on the hilt of his AK47, as he had it facing the bottom half of lesser army officer, the two men in a stare down of their own.

    "Yu wa b payu, Cap'n, as pa da greemen'. Ba yu com he 'gin an tem ta dispe mi, I promiyu b sorsor," Caesar said, placing the safety back on his sidearm, and removing his hand from it, "Na git de fu'k ah."

    The army captain snapped his finger, and his subordinate followed him out of the building, the captain looked to one rebel guard standing on the side of the room, trading uneasy stares, then he walks by Abel, whom he is drastically taller than, and Abel eyes him back. The officer doesn't break his furious expression, and keeps walking out. Slight commotion could be heard as the two men entered their vehicles, a trade of words between the rebels and the army soldiers, and then the vehicles began to drive off, all visible through the screen door, at the entrance of the building. Caesar was busy collecting more papers, and made some small talk with the man next to his desk, before looking up to Abel, "Come here, boy."

    Abel walked over to the desk. The other man eyed him down, and Caesar spoke, "This is Abel, my boy protege," he said smiling, and raising his hand to reference to the man, "This is Uwengi, my adjutant. He has arrived to assist in the administration of the camp."

    The man reached out to shake hands with Abel, meeting hands, the man's grasp was very firm, he had no emotion on his face.

    "This is the boy protege? A pink skin?"

    Caesar laughed, "I told you he was special, Usengi," he giggles again.

    "Does he speak?," Usengi asked.

    "I do." Abel spoke up, before Caesar could respond.

    Caesar looked up smiling, "He does."

    "How does a pink skin end up in this situation?" Usengi asked Abel.

    "Just lucky, I guess," he responded.

    Uwengi looks to Caesar and laughs hysterically, before he takes his leave, and walks out of a side door of the office.

    Caesar watches him go, and says to Abel, "He's a short man, don't mind that."

    Abel brushes it off and speaks, "Who were those men?"

    "Soldiers, in the army." Caesar pauses, realizing he needed to explain it better, "Well, the civilians, and the Kamajors call them 'sobels'. Soldiers by day, rebels by night. With all the chaotic instability of politics, in Freetown, much of the army isn't getting paid properly. So commanders, like that one, try to make deals with us. Personally, I do not fear the army, so I don't see such deals as necessary, but my superiors do, so I abide by the agreements. These scoundrels are more like mercenaries."

    Abel thinks back to when the R.U.F. attacked Lumba, and the army soldiers stationed there fled, without a fight, before even the rest of them could flee. He thought maybe the soldiers at Lumba were 'sobels', the thought infuriated him, seeing so many of his friends die that day, but he had to cast aside the hatred, if he was committed to surviving this.

    "Now, that was an impressive performance in the fighting group," he pauses, "Now, tell me, why keep that hidden until now? The lot of them respect a good fighter. You could have earned respect weeks ago."

    "I did what I needed to today. If you want me to fight, I fight. If one day I must lead, then I must lead. But I don't have to like it."

    Caesar looked up, cross with the tone Abel used, "Don't forget your place. You may be a favored boy here in the camp, but you have attitude like that with lots of the boys here, you better know how to fight, or they will likely cut your throat, without a thought. Don't mistake my generosity for weakness, Abel. Now get out of here," he was certainly unimpressed by Abel's brashness.

    Abel took a deep, silent breath, and turned, leaving the building through the front door.
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    I liked chapter four immensely nice break down of the moves, Krav Maga or Muai Thai?

    Not to keen on one arm blocks myself to easy too break through

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    A very interesting story you have chosen to write I will watch this closely!

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    I really like the setting of this story, and you're pulling it off really well. Caesar is an interesting character...

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    Thanks for the support guys, I truly appreciate it. A small group of core followers is really propelling my motivational gears!

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    Chapter V
    V - Came and Able

    November 30, 1992
    Camp Lungi, Moyamba District


    Bang Bang Bang

    The shots rung out, disrupting the relative silence of the camp. It was late evening, and the youth troop was practicing at the firing range.

    Bang Bang Bang

    Another barrage was ordered, with near consistent shot ambience.

    Rambo raised his hand, "Stop!", he shouted. He proceeded down the firing range, towards the targets to inspect the accuracy of the boy soldiers, as they shouldered their rifles and Abel, who had been attentive on the side, issuing the fire commands approached the front of his squad members, and waited for Captain Rambo to arrive and address the group.

    As Rambo inspected the six targets, Abel noticed the other youth officers lined up on the side of the firing range, each squinting, trying to see down, at how accurate Abel's squad had been. Abel saw all but one officer looking down range. Omry, the soldier he had defeated in melee combat over a month earlier had been eyeing him down. Once Omry realized he had Abel's attention, he spit to the ground, keeping his eyes fixated on Abel.

    Abel brushed aside the slight, and by this time, Rambo was already returning to address him on the squad's performance.

    Rambo confronted Abel, and remained silent. He turned his head to look at the other youth officers, and then back to Abel. He edged himself aside, looking over Abel's shoulder at his squad members. Then he finally faced Abel, "Well done. Each of your men nailed the targets with near perfect accuracy. I see you have been working on their weaponry discipline quite a bit this past month. Well done indeed, Pinky."

    Commander Caesar had been inspecting the weapons training session on the side of the range, with his bodyguards by his side, as oft they were. He had his arms crossed, and his right arm up, with his hand stroking the stubble on his chin. He looked on keenly for several moments, while Rambo's men collected the weapons from Abel's men.

    Caesar approached them, and Rambo stepped back, in attention for his superior officer. Caesar clapped his hands, as a grin crept up his face. "Excellent commands, Abel. By far the most accurate, and well disciplined of the youth squads, wouldn't you agree, Captain?" He glanced at Rambo.

    "Yes, Commander."

    Caesar glanced back at Abel, "It seems you continue to impress." He pats Abel on the back, and laughs. "Is there anything you need? Liquor? Drugs? A woman, perhaps?" He lets out another roaring laugh. "I take care of my soldiers, Abel. Especially the wheels that make my finely tuned war machine move. Perhaps your not there yet, but you will be."

    "On that note, you are hereby promoted to First Captain of the youth troop. You will not command them wholly yet, but in time, you will. With that rank comes a proper moniker. Able. Captain Able. Seems suitable, to match your extensive, and constant exhibiting of intellectual, and physical prowess. Wouldn't you agree, Captain?" He turns, saying to Rambo.

    "Absolutely, Commander," Rambo says, with a noticeably sarcastic tone.

    He winks at Abel, and pats him on the shoulder, before turning to continue about his daily business.

    Rambo scoffs at the appraisal for Abel, and turns to the other officers, he walks over to them, "Dismissed," he waves his hand in an outward motion, and walks away from the range, himself.

    Abel stood there, his squad members still in attention. Musa, and Solomon, had been hand selected by Abel for his squad. His brother, Jon, was selected as well, but Caesar kept him in a different squad, apart from Abel.

    Jon walked up, not even looking at Abel, and Abel turned to greet his brother, and Jon put his shoulder into Abel's, causing him to stumble backwards slightly. Solomon grabbed Abel, and assisted with his balance. Jon turned around, continuing to walk backwards, looking at the three of them, "Good
    work, Abe. You've appeased your masters. They no longer have to crack the whip on you, just the rest of us, eh?"
    Then Jon turned back around and walked forwards again, towards the barracks.

    Abel remained silent, looking down slightly to the ground, reflecting on Jon's words, "What is wrong with him."

    Solomon spoke up, "Jealousy, Abel. He doesn't understand why Caesar chose you. The younger of you and your brother. Sensibly, at first glance, it doesn't seem to make much sense. He's three years older than you, and your an officer, in fact, First Officer of the youth troop. It's a hard pill for him to swallow, I suppose."

    "Yeah, but he doesn't have to be an ae about it." Musa blurted out, "But.. I have heard talk. He has been causing some minor dissension among the boys. He doesn't want to be a part of the revolution."

    "It is true," Solomon continued, "There has been talk, he has alot of disdain towards you, and utterly despises Caesar."

    "If he's not careful, he's going to get himself into alot of trouble," Abel responded, pausing slightly, looking between the two of them, "Wouldn't you agree?"

    "He isn't playing it very smart. This isn't a game, I hope he realizes that, Abel." Solomon said worriedly.

    Abel looked across the grounds, his brother now out of site, but he was lost in thought, he snapped back to it, "It doesn't have to be this way. Everyday, he is taking the risk of being exposed for not wanting to be a part of the revolution. If they determine that, well.. I fear for the worst. He needs to turn it around. I need to go talk to him, I will see you guys later. Well done today, we'll pick up on it again tomorrow."

    Musa nods, "Okay, bro. See you tomorrow," as the two of them left back to their barracks, opposite Jon's.

    Abel headed towards the barracks, he opened the door, and walked to Jon's room. Regulars were roomed together, in threes. Jon was alone in the room, looking out the window, the door open, when Abel walked by, and saw him. He came back, and went in his brother's room, knocking on the door.

    "Can we talk?"

    Jon swiveled his head, and then turned back to look outside.

    Abel ignored the silence, "Jon. What's going on? What has been eating at you. I'm your brother. Talk to me, man."

    Jon smirked, and shook his head slightly, "You don't get it, do you? Your lost in this," He turns around, opening his arms, as to show display the room, "All of this. You want it all. You want to be this fantasy warrior, Abe. Some special figure, a figment of imagination. Alexander the Great, Genghis Khan, Julius Caesar, Napoleon even. Do you honestly believe in all the bt that Caesar, and the others have been feeding you? Revolution? This war is nothing more than a grab for power, at a perfect moment to take it. Better of the people? Yeah, we've seen what they do for the people, Abe. The reports come back daily. More, and more attacks. More and more ground being swapped from side to side, everyday. More, and more Sierra Leoneans dying. This camp doesn't even do justice to the atrocities being committed by other camps, in the central, and north of the country. It's all one big farce, Abe."

    Abel could not hold his tongue any longer, "Jon. Stop. You don't know what you're talking about.."

    Jon cut him off, "Save it, Abe. I know what I'm talking about. It's all I've thought about for three months. Don't you ever wonder what mum, and dad think? Where we are? Do you think they know? Do you think they would be impressed with what is going on here? With what we're turning into?"

    "We are fighting for the rights and," Abel was cut off once again.

    "Stop. Just stop it, Abel. I don't need to be fed all this bt, that you seem to believe. That little book you always carry around. It's trash, Abel. It's the R.U.F. version of Mein Kampf. That's all. It's used to spin minds like yours to believe in the ridiculously untrue ideals that constitute their organization. They are brainwashing us," he notices Abel about to speak, and puts his hand up to silence him through movement, "Let me finish, Abe. All that book is responsible for is to coerce fools like you into believing Foday Sankoh's ramblings. Did you ever consider that he wrote that in prison? Like Hitler. He is the African Hitler, Abel. And you are a history buff. You know exactly where that led."

    Jon shook his head in disbelief, "Your twelve years old, Abel. This isn't for us. We're goddamn kids. We need to get as far away from this as possible."

    "I can't, Jon. I'm going to make a difference here."

    "What difference is that? To get Foday Sankoh in power, in Freetown? And then what? Become one of his gangster patsies? Is that all you want to accomplish? Your living in your little dream world. This isn't the Abel I knew my whole life."

    "Jon. If you don't want to be a part of the revolution, then your name will fade away. Nobody will ever know you. This is our chance," Abel spoke heartily, "Our chance to make a change. Our chance to be somebody. To enshrine our names on the annals of history, for all."

    "Jesus Christ, Abel. Save that drivel for your squadlings. Foday Sankoh is a devilish individual. He's not an evil man. For Christ sake, he was in Libya, training side by side, with terrorists. Your master, Caesar there, yeah, Caesar. He was with him. Charles Taylor. He was there too, Abel. All of them, training under Muammar Gaddafi. That man is as horrible as they come. He's a terrorist acting as head of state of a nation. That's what Charles Taylor seeks to accomplish in Liberia, and it's what Foday Sankoh seeks to accomplish here, in Sierra Leone. Yeah, Abel, I've had a lot of time to think about this. Didn't need no goddamn book to tell me it either. It's common sense.

    Your being brainwashed. They might favor you today, but your just as expendable as me, as Musa, as Solo, anything. Don't try and patronize me, like you have those other fools convinced. It won't settle, Abe. If you continue this perilous adventure you seem so convinced to undertake, it will end two ways. You will end up in prison, or dead, Abel. Your nothing to them. Foday Sankoh will never know your name. Your one of Caesar's lab rats. Nothing more than a project to him. It's got to stop, Abe."


    "Shut up, Jon!" Abel shouted. "Shut up, save your diatribe, your being an idiot right now."

    "I'm done with you, Abe. Get the fk out of here." He said, turning his back to Abel, again.

    Abel approached Jon and pushed him. Jon turned around and took a swing at his brother, Abel ducked and Jon missed, then Abel wrapped his arms around Jon's exposed torso, and took him down to the bed, then they rolled onto the floor, both landing body shot punches on each other. The tussle continued, until Jon's roommates, and some other boys from the hall came in, and broke up the fight. Abel, and Jon were both pulled apart.

    Abel was pulled outside of the room, shaking his head, his lip cut, he felt the blood with his finger.

    Jon's veins were popping, he was in a rage, "Your done, Abel. Your nothing, we're finished!" He spit on the floor.

    Abel shook himself free from the boys holding him, and walked out of the barracks.
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    Ah sibling rivalry Still we all know that Jon is only speaking the truth.

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    Finally had time to catch up. I loved the fight scene in the last chapter. The rivalry with Jon promises much too.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rex Anglorvm View Post
    Ah sibling rivalry Still we all know that Jon is only speaking the truth.

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    And their rivalry shall deepen, my friend!

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    Finally had time to catch up. I loved the fight scene in the last chapter. The rivalry with Jon promises much too.
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    And the story continues!

    Chapter VI
    VI - Milk, Cookies, and Guns

    Christmas Eve, 1992
    Camp Lungi, Moyamba District


    Abel and Solomon were cleaning their guns, after a long day of target practice, with fellow squad members Silas, and Remy.

    Remy was tall and slender, with a crisp Creole accent. He is viewed as a gambler, and gamer, and a little bit of a joker, by the general populace of the camp. One of Caesar's hand selected boys, for Abel's new squad.

    Silas was a taller than all the other boys in camp. He was very stocky, with a muscular physique, the definition of which was hidden by his naturally big boned physique. All the boys referred to him as Big Sy. He was even stronger than many of the adult rebels, in the camp. He, alike Remy, and others in Abel's squad, had the respect of generally all the other youth troops in the camp, but all of them had yet to earn the true respect of the adult rebels, until they first experience combat. This, among the R.U.F., and very common among many other modern day rebel factions, was a rite of passage, and an initiation into soldiery.

    "Where did you get them Ray Bans, fool?" Big Sy asked Remy.

    "At da poker game. Tutu's squad. Dat fool, he cry bout dem glasses after, but fk man, dey look good on me, don't you think, brotha?

    No nevermind bout me, brah, did you put dem milk n cookies out for Santy?"
    Remy replied, laughing.

    "Always the joker, you."

    Abel, and Solomon laughed it off, as Big Sy, and of course, Remy joined in.

    Musa came up to the table, slamming down a 40 of liquor on the tabletop. The boys noticed him to be tipsy by this point, unsure of how much had had drunk yet.

    Abel grew immediately cross. "What the hell are you doing, Mus?"

    "What do you mean, bro?"
    Musa looked puzzled.

    Abel grabbed the liquor bottle off of the table, "What are you thinking?" He said, shaking the bottle at Musa. "This?" He threw it on the ground next to the table, and it rolled away, in the dirt, the bottle was open, it was leaking out as it rolled.

    "What the hell, man? What is wrong with yo—"

    "We could be sent any day now into our first battle, and you pull this? Do you really want to go into battle drunk? Numbing all of your senses, most importantly your common sense?" He looks to the bottle of liquor, still spilling out of the dropped bottle, "That, is more dangerous than the enemy, Mus. If you lose your senses, you might as well run into the enemy screaming 'shoot me'." The other boys began to laugh.

    "I'm sorry, Abe, I didn—"

    "Think." Abel snapped back, "you didn't think, Mus." Abel got up, and walked away from the table. The rest of the boys just looked at him walk away.

    As he walked, Abel passed by several fire places, many of them were divided squad by squad, a manoeuvre by the camp command to make the squads a more compact, tight knit group, in preparation for battle, rumoured to be looming any time over the next few weeks. Oddly, few of the boys had alcohol, or drugs. It was a weird, Abel noticed, almost every night for months, they engorged themselves on the poisons. All the adults had disappeared. There were some girls brought by that morning, from another camp, which kept them occupied, for most of the day. He kept walking, out of the camp, and towards the bridge, over Lungi river. He passed by a few rebel sentries protecting the camp side of the bridge. They just watched him as he passed, all recognizing who he was, they didn't say a word. He walked halfway across the bridge, and stopped on the side, leaning over the guard rails, he looked into the river, the water a lit from the luminescent moon overhead. It was a full moon, and the sky was clear. The stars dotted it from all angles. The natural ambience of the night time wildlife, outside the camp, created a tranquil atmosphere, and an escape from the hectic business of the camp.

    As Abel leaned over the side, lost deep in thought, he puked into the water. As he wiped his mouth, he turned and noticed Solomon standing there.

    "How long have you been there?" Abel asked, slightly embarrassed.

    "Long enough, Cap."

    Abel smirked, "around the other guys, you can call me that, but don't be so formal in private."

    "Right, Abe. Is it the nerves getting to you?" Solomon leaned on the railing, beside Abel, "It's been getting us all on edge a little bit. No definitive date for the assault."

    Abel nodded, "one of the boys from Gandy's squad," he shook his head, "tried to make a run for it this morning."

    "Yeah, I heard," Solomon said, a saddened tone in his voice.

    "Four months. And we've come to this."

    Solomon nodded, "the true test is coming, Abe."

    The boys were suddenly interrupted, when Captain Hazy, one of the adult officers came down the bridge, a cigar in one hand, and a bottle of vodka in the other, was walking sluggishly towards them, they both turns, when they heard the relative silence of the location broken by the clumping of combat boots on the wooden bridge. Hazy wore a camouflage ball cap, backwards, slung downwards, hanging lazily off his unkempt hair. He wore a golden rolex watch, with no shirt on, just a camouflage vest with some insignias on it, and full camouflage pants, standard military issue, which the boys commonly joked he stole it off a dead government soldier.

    "Ey, you. Abel. The commander want to speak wit ya. Getta moo on. And you, you get back to your racks now, it's pass curfew, ya ear me?" Hazy blurted out, his words in a slight slur, "Go, go, go youngin'. Back to ya racks," he continued, as Solomon and Abel passed him.

    Solomon began a light jog away, passed Hazy, as he turned to Abel, "I'll catch up with you tomorrow, Cap."

    Abel was walking normally, as Hazy walked with him. "The commander has some plans for you, eh Pinky?" He slung his arm around Abel, who kind of shrugged off the comment, paying it no never mind, but going along with Hazy's sarcastic ranting, "I guess we'll find some use for you, if you survive the assault, eh? Better be quick, and on your feet. You just a youngin' right now, I seen a hundred like you in battle, stting bricks the firs sign o danger, and ya wet ya pant. Once the guns star goin' off—BANG, BANG, BANG, da pant start gettin wet, da boys star to cry, they try ta run, they get shot down. There is no room for cower in the ARR. YOUU. EFF. This I sure you, Pinky."

    It was clear that Hazy had too much to drink that night, and then he put his hand on Abel's shoulder, as he broke away from him, and pushed him towards the command headquarters building, as he stumbled away in a different direction.

    Abel just shook his head, and continued up the command headquarters. Several guards lingered outside, lazily, as he passed by them, they paid him no heed, he just kept walking.

    Inside, there was nobody in the front lobby, where Caesar's desk faced the door, but the door in the back was open, with lights on inside, and commotion could be heard from there. Abel approached, and once he walked in, he saw over two dozen people in there. All the youth officers were seated on one side, and a dozen adult officers on the other. Caesar stood with two of his direct subordinates, Usengi, his adjutant, whom Abel had briefly met, shortly after first meeting Caesar, and Major Red.

    Abel had heard of Major Red, but seldom seen him around camp. From his knowledge gained about the man, Red was a notoriously brutal assault commander, whom answered directly to Caesar. He served as chief of the secret police, under former president, Siaka Stevens' regime. After Stevens' government was toppled, in 1985, Red became an outlaw, taking to the bush in the southern part of Sierra Leone, after being labelled a traitor by Joseph Momoh's government, and INTERPOL issued a warrant for his arrest, internationally, in 1986, for crimes committed. In mid-1992, he was sentenced in absentia to life in prison. In 1989, he had found his way to Liberia, where he joined with Charles Taylor, in his own civil war in Liberia. In 1992, Red returned from fighting in Liberia, to join the R.U.F., under Foday Sankoh, and toppled Joseph Momoh's seven year tyrannical government. Even after Momoh's departure from office, Red stayed on with the R.U.F. He now served, as many did, under the command of the eccentric young, and very reputable, Caesar.

    Abel continued forward, with caution.

    "From there, we strike at the heart of the government's central command po—Abel," Caesar said, stopping his hang gestures, which he often did, when speaking. "Behold, gentlemen. Captain Able, First Officer of the youth troop."

    Caesar did a fairly curt nod, slipping a grin, "nice of you to join us. Take a seat, there," he pointed to an available seat, at the front, reserved for him, he assumed.

    "Now," Caesar said, continuing, "we will not attack where they expect it most. My scouting reports, these past few weeks, say the government expects us to strike at Moyamba, again. The fools believed the original attack to be a full out assault. They fell right into the position I needed them too. Comfortably, they wait, in Moyamba, with the Kamajors. We will avoid this area, leaving a skeleton force, at Lumba. The bulk of the attacking force will heard north, towards Yonibara, where our forces, from Lungi, will link up with Commander Zero's troops, at Kwelu. From Kwelu, we will strike northward to the Moyamba junction. Our last reports, two days ago, are that our skeleton force, at the junction, had retreated to Kwelu, due to overwhelming odds, when the government moved in to secure the junction. This junction is vital, to cut off supply lines to the government, in the east of the country. We will take it, by any means necessary." Caesar looked around, "any questions?"

    Captain Rambo, leaned back on his chair, his legs straight, and crossed, he played with a toothpick in his mouth, as he spoke, "yeah. What about Moyamba? The force there is strong enough to launch an attack on our positions, here. With the Kamajor, that could be a dangerous force."

    Caesar nodded his head, "indeed. But, the Kamajor are a civil defence force. They will not strike out, past the boundaries of their homes. The government, and the Kamajors have a loose alliance right now. Too loose is their alliance to strike against us. Without Kamajor numbers, the government stationed in Moyamba will be unable to strike out, not knowing our strength at Lumba, and here. Captain Hero will lead a skirmish force west, to Moyamba. Any wandering government patrols, or stray Kamajors, will be dealt with accordingly. We will keep them far enough away from Lungi, so that they will not know of the attack, until it is too late. We will take the bush to Kwelu, and to the junction, and strike at once. Once we secure the junction, the east of the country will collapse, in turn." Noticing he had answered the question, Caesar looked around for more questions.

    Omry shot his arm up.

    Caesar, whom stood, with his hands linked behind his back, in a soldier's stance. He brought one arm around, and pointed towards Omry, signaling for the boy to ask his question.

    "Yeah, what about us. Do all of the youth squads go to the Kwelu, and the junction?"


    Caesar nodded, "yes, all of you. I will leave the skirmishing to a few of my experienced men, and the rest of the senior members here will make for the junction, with the youth squads."

    Looking around, seeing no more hands, Caesar clapped his hands. "We move out in four hours, gentlemen. Prepare yourselves. Dismissed."

    All of the youth officers got up to leave, as did most of the regular officers. They all departed their separate ways, Caesar remained, as did Major Red, and Usengi.

    Abel turned to leave, but Caesar spoke up, "wait. Come here, Abel."

    Abel turned back around, and walked towards Caesar.

    Caesar stood up, and motioned to Major Red. "This, is one of the finest tuned warriors in my arsenal. He will be accompanying us to Kwelu. You could learn a lot, about soldiery, from Major Red, Abel. I recommend you follow in his footsteps, in the field. He will take direct command of three youth squads, yours included. You will served as his direct subordinate."

    Major Red just stood there, emotionless, not even looking at Abel.

    "Dismissed, Major," Caesar said, then he looked to Usengi, "return to Bomako, with report."

    Usengi nodded, as did Major Red, and both men took their leave.

    Caesar, and Abel, were now alone. Caesar spoke up, "didn't think it would be this soon, did you? It wasn't originally planned like this. They are resting. The government is weak right now. It is the moment to attack.

    We will march for Kwelu. There are transport vehicles waiting, a few kilometres from here. Major Red, and some other senior members, will also be involved in the strike attack, before the main force reaches the junction."


    Caesar looked at Abel, "you look uneasy. Don't be afraid. Every soldier has his first battle. You are far more capable to survive that first battle, then most of my soldiers. Go, get some sleep, Abel. We have a long year ahead of us," Caesar smiled.

    Abel took his leave. As he exited the building, he noticed the camp had, for the most part, died down, in activity. The soldiers all knew, the battle was soon upon them.
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    You can bet Major Red will not be a very pleasant character if his pal was CT.

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