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Just got inspired by all the AARs, also just got my computer fixed and DL'ed v0.90, so I decided to try making an AAR once again. It's a lot more immersive to play while writing an AAR, but I also wanted to experiment with some different formats to make it easier to read and follow and less bandwidth straining at the same time. This takes quite a while to edit though, so I don't know how far I'll continue, but comments are more than welcome... in fact they are wanted. How is the size, the structure, the text to picture ratio? My monitor is wide screen and has a high rez, so its hard for me to get a good idea sometimes of what size the pics should be. So here it goes.

=================== FRENCH AAR ===================​

EDIT - I have hidden the first part of the AAR, because the picture format is too wide for normal monitors. The rest of the AAR shall have a more suitable format of pictures. You can still, however view the first part, by clicking "show".
The year is 1072, and King Philippe of France has issued a kingdom wide decree that binds all subjects to strive for peace, order, and prosperity. This decree extends to and includes such specific orders as: insuring trade with all neighbors, a general calm of the people, and the quelling of all bordering rebel resistance. As such, the construction of public execution places in all major settlements in the next five years has been promised by each and every vassal, as well as the training of the local population to fight for these undeniably pious causes.

By 1073, son and heir to the Crown, Hugues Capet, is sent to prove his worth to God, Kingdom, and people by liberating the region around Fougeres, which inevitably means the forced capitulation of the occupying forces located in the stronghold at Fougeres itself. And so men from all regions of France are sent to aid.


Fougeres is sieged and starved for over a year. As their supplies run short, soon enough the leader of the resistance comes to realize there is little future in playing the waiting game, and orders a sally.

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Their troops are eager, but hardly organized. They rush Hugues' men in a chaotic matter, one by one hitting the line in different paces, a poor tactic which has little effect on the overall composure of the army.

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Their men soon change their tactics in an opposite, yet equally chaotic manner, that is to say: RETREAT. They are, however, chased and run down along their walls and into their gate.

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Hugues' men left outside the walls soon become anxious, and whilst their general and all their captains are on horse back inside, they pick up the yet unused rams, and push them up to the walls. Their efforts are to no avail though, as men inside the walls are quickly slaying all those still resisting the inevitable. The victory and the stronghold belong to the Frenchmen, but Fougeres is now home only to the stench of the dead. The surrounding population are spared their lives on the condition of pledging allegiance and obedience to King Philippe.

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While Hugues and his men rest and regroup after quelling the North, large groups of rebels, led by those who do not recognize Philippe's decree as righteous, are spotted in the south. Messengers are sent to persuade the rebels to lay down their arms, but not all are convinced of the King's vision. However, few can disagree with an argument which is backed by a hefty sum of gold.

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And so the smart captain joins Hugues to fight those for whom there was not enough gold.


It is now 1075, a little less than a year has passed since Fougeres has been taken as the first step towards peace and order in the Kingdom, and now the promising Crown heir will have to prove himself once again.

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While the snow gently falls, the two armies position themselves. The crossbowmen are on the left flank, backed by horsemen, while the archers are on the right flank, behind a barrier of rock. Captain Odo's men are under the cover of the woods, but Hugues' men are under the cover of numerous deadly volleys of arrows and bolts. And Odo's men quickly find that arrows and bolts offer more protection and decide to return to the woods before they ever reach Hugues' front line.

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While Odo is still hiding in the woods, Hugues marches his men over the dead of the enemy, closer to the trees, hopping to provoke Odo to come out and away from his cover.

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Odo answers the provocation, and sends a wave of footmen and horsemen. This time the charge is more effective, and Hugues himself rushes in to support the right flank. In the mean time, the remaining French cavalry hits the enemy from the back.

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And once again the rebels fall back to the trees. And once again Hugues regroups the men. His ranks now thinned, his arrows and bolts depleted, but moral is still high, and the men are still eager.

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However, now Odo orders his archers to fire. Understanding that he cant allow his men to be pelted by enemy, Hugues now takes the initiative. The men approach their opponents, ready their weapons, and.... CHARGE! The infantry followed closely by the cavalry. This deadly combination quickly breaks the Odo's tired front ranks, only his horsemen stand their ground, but are quickly overwhelmed.

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The victory is decisive, and theres little that remains between Hugues and the next objective - Bordeaux. But the rest of the empire must not be forgotten - is what the distressed messengers from Clermont plead to Philippe!


To be continued..... maybe

----------UPDATE----------
(March 19)

Map of King Philippe's France in 1081
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It has been 10 years since Philippe sent out his son and heir Hugues to carry out his decree peace and prosperity over the many barbarous and rebellious regions surrounding the Kingdom. Loyal to his father and his divine decree, he has swept full circle around the borders of France; first taking Fougeres in the North-West, followed by Bordeaux, Toulouse and Arles in the Sounth, and finally the regions of Geneva and Bern in the East were put under French control while emissaries finished negotiations with Genova and Milano, who rightfully chose to capitulate under large sums of money rather than sword and spear.

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Gloriously returning to Paris, Hugues Capet is no longer a boy, but an accomplished and respected general, leading an army or seasoned troops. Of course, he has faced forces greatly outnumbering his, but they would be sooner called unorganized mobs rather than armies, led by men of no royal blood. However, that may change at any time, as now France shares its borders with many kingdoms easily called magnificent, but ruled by kings not so easily called trustful...

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thei pics are at a good ratio and are very descriptive and good looking, however with 3 pics per colum your post is too long for standard sized screens and i have to keep scrolling from left to right......

Your browser should have a button to fitting the screen-seize to the application-seize = whole window/application on the screen viewable, i mean from left to right, then you need only to scroll vertical.
 
Nice AAR. I like the picture format except you should stick to 2 pictures across so we dont have to scroll over. In fact editing your post to do this would be a good idea cause otherwise the first page of the AAR will all be stretched. I guess perhaps for you it fits because of your resolution of 1600x1050 but Its not good for my 1280x1024 or anything lower.
 
Some tips on AARs - from my opinion.

Never use clickable thumbnails. They are a pain and I almost always dont look at them.

Dont overuse screenshots especially of battles. On the battle you did you used more screenshots than I would about one battle. I think its best to get a few really nice shots of the battle rather than one normal shot of each thing. It also makes less clutter.

Never use BMP format for screenshots as it takes a lot longer than JPG for people to see when they look at the thread.

Something I tried once and it worked well was to keep the entire AAR at the beginning of the thread by editing my first post. So people wouldnt have to look through lots of comments to find actual AAR content.

Don't write too much about a short period of time. Especially the beginning of the campaign where the moves will be nearly the same in every campaign, its not terribly interesting to read about every person's invasion of scotland Etc. Would be more interesting to read about stuff later in the campaign that wont happen to everyone. In my England AAR I personally think I wrote too much about the beginning.

I'm sure there are more things I could think of but thats enough for now. This post I guess should be addressed to everyone not just Drak since its turned into general thoughts on AARs from me.
 
If the pics are JPGs it takes no time at all, seriously. JPGs are like 1/20th the size of BMPs or somewhere around there.

Of course its just my opinion but if an AAR has a long row of clickable thumbnails I assume that most of it gets ignored. Better to have a few nice pictures than a lot of thumbnails.
 
I am thinking of making an AAR with a Muslim factions with ChivTW v1.0 but with a brand new idea :cool: . The AAR itself will be a PDF file viewable by Acrobat Reader. What do you people think of that?

Regards/Ahmose
 
well, my pics are all JPEGs (though I could lower their quality a bit more), but it still takes them a bit to load for me here at school, with a fast connection. Its not very long, but it still takes time, and at home its even worse since I have a slower DSL connection. Though it also greatly depends on where you upload the pics to... and sometimes the server is slower than other times.

a PDF (or maybe even a power point presentation) is a good idea, I guess, though I'm not sure how big it would end up being, since you would have to DL it every time.
 
Perfect! I love this next part of the AAR. I love the border around your empire picture, also its a really good idea to make all the bigger pictures in your AAR the same width which I see you did, it helps it to look nice and organised.

It seems you expanded really fast though, to have all that empire by 1081! What difficulty are you playing on? And what houserules do you have? In my Aragon game I got squeezed to death by castile, france and the moors by 1094. So I have started a new game as Castile.

Oh, and that flag in the last picture looks like its in the hand of the feudal sergeant.. is that because you have banners turned on? I will have to try using banners I guess.
 
well, I'm playing on H/H, but I dont have too many house rules, at least they are not at strict as yours. Pretty much, my only rule is that all my settlements are garisoned with only one unit, unless there is too much unrest, and I only have 1 army fielded, which I plan to disband once their planned conquest is completel. Of course, I am not at war with anyone, and I've only took rebel settlements... To do it so fast, I've also bribed one of their armies, and two of their settlements (if you remember from the AAR). However, I have retrained my experienced troops, which means they kicked rebel ass, but I am about to disban that army, since I have taken all the settlements I planned to, and you also have to consider that the rebels had have no real generals, which is very important for moral on H and VH difficulty levels...

As for the flag, I have banners dissabled, now, and as I mentioned, that is something we have been working on, so you dont have it in your build, yet...
 

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