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Re: Way of the Bow:A Chosokabe AAR-(Updated Chapter XXIV 1/2)
There are so many good things to read in these parts that I'm ashamed to say I haven't finished Way of the Bow (as far as it's got) yet. I'm only on page 2 at the moment, but I keep finding things that make me want to say “oh, I like that”. So I thought I'd better write a post now, because if I wait till I've made it as far as page 10, my list of things I liked will be far too long to post.
Here are a couple of the things that have made me want to comment so far:
In Chapter III, the description of the peace, “like glass it only takes one tap to break” really gives the feeling of the brittleness and fragility of the situation.
In Chapter IV, the little piece of Yuki's childhood, when he and his brother fell asleep in the snow, is a nice way to add depth to his character. I also like that the “fateful day at the village” is still having an effect on him.
I also really like the moments of humour woven through all of it.
Now I'd better get back to reading the remaining eight pages!