the Once Great Slave of Nurn

[AlphApe]

I have decided to write tommorrow night as I have revamped and edited the first couple of chapters. Please read again

[AlphApe]

Keep reading guys, it's freshly edited.

[chunkymonkey]

Great aar AlphApe, am enjoying reading so far. Prologue was something unique. Hopefully we will see how the rest of the story unfolds. (I am kinda motivated to dabble in an aar myself, but for now I'll just read others )

[AgentSmith]

Cool I like this allot I've read it 5 times(am I obsessed) I'm really looking forward to what you have in store for us
Oh BTW. if you haven't figured out what to name chapter 2, I was think of "The Bloody Matrimony". Is it good or not?

[AlphApe]

Very nice name, I'll continue tonight. sorry i have not been writing. I have work

[Dea Paladin]

Hmm... I dont really like the "I died" part. Because I dont think he knows hes dead. Maybe you should write something like "And suddenly blackness, nothing"

[AlphApe]

Hmm... I dont really like the "I died" part. Because I dont think he knows hes dead. Maybe you should write something like "And suddenly blackness, nothing

It will become relevant later on
New part guys. read on, sorry it's so short though. Writers block

[Inarus]

The Elf wants him as spy in mordor?

The Elf wants to revert him back to an Elf as he once was?

He He.... I read with interest.

[AlphApe]

You don't miss a trick do you Inarus

[AgentSmith]

I hate writers block!! Man this story has me on the edge of my seat! seriously! The details are soo awesome its like you were there takin' notes

[AlphApe]

haha thanks lol, but how else do you think I know this? Seriously...
I'm actually a ranger of Arnor

[AlphApe]

New Part/chapter/character!

Read on my dears, if you like, don't forget to +rep (don't know what it does but people ask for rep so i suppose it's good)

I hate writers block!!

Don't worry, i never had it I just couldn't be asked to write. I have to all planned out in my head.
aaahh... It's so hard being a genius

[Inarus]

New Part/chapter/character!

Read on my dears, if you like, don't forget to +rep (don't know what it does but people ask for rep so i suppose it's good)


Don't worry, i never had it I just couldn't be asked to write. I have to all planned out in my head.
aaahh... It's so hard being a genius

Good job you aren't a genius then!

[AlphApe]

Well I am. How else would I know that it's hard...
Read! !

[AgentSmith]

Ok i've read the next part. at first i had no idea what was going on and had to read it a few times(I didn't notice you had said you switched narrators at the time) Im really enjoying this. lookin' forward to the next part

[AlphApe]

Thanks again
Keep commenting guys!

[AlphApe]

I'll be takinga break from writing this for the time being. I've just entered my last year of British school and I want to get settled and finish my coursework before I continue with this piece
All you loyal fans will get a PM when I'm back writing.
I'll still be around

- AlphApe

[Inarus]

I'll be takinga break from writing this for the time being. I've just entered my last year of British school and I want to get settled and finish my coursework before I continue with this piece
All you loyal fans will get a PM when I'm back writing.
I'll still be around

- AlphApe

Hehehe, School? I'm a year ahead of you and if you think it's hard at GCSE and you have no free time, well...

you're gonna hate college!

I haven't written a thing because of the latter, I miss all my characters!

That new part confused me until I read your footnote, about the note, could you move/resize/spoiler it because it looks like part of the story.

[GrumpyBean]

I'll be takinga break from writing this for the time being. I've just entered my last year of British school and I want to get settled and finish my coursework before I continue with this piece
All you loyal fans will get a PM when I'm back writing.
I'll still be around

- AlphApe

AAwwww thats a shame well i hope you remember everything still lol

[AlphApe]

I'm back! Ohhhh yeaaaaaahhhhh!

Let's Party! Let's Party! Let's Party! Let's Party! Let's Party! Let's Party! Let's Party!

(im away im away im away im away)