Poetic Parade

Simple as that, continue previous poetic lines with two new sentences.

Life is like a dream, when you wake, it's over. Dream, dream on, because then we truly know we are alive.

Originally Posted by Ragabash

Simple as that, continue previous poetic lines with two new sentences.

Life is like a dream, when you wake, it's over. Dream, dream on, because then we truly know we are alive.

Unless we're conflicted from the things for which we strive
Then we know the life we lead is somehow lower

Originally Posted by turtle

Unless we're conflicted from the things for which we strive
Then we know the life we lead is somehow lower

Just thought I'd keep this cool idea going.

With inner strength rebuilt we stand on pillars of grace
Acknolwedging our restraints out from this infernal place

Poems are only cool when they actually mean something, not when theyre just random flowery phrases without any deeper complexity

Originally Posted by RZZZA

Poems are only cool when they actually mean something, not when theyre just random flowery phrases without any deeper complexity

Very true RZZZA, which is why I don't indulge in that kind of pointless writing. If you think my previous words to be on the level of that, I believe you may be misinterpreting them. Every line I've written in this thread has meaning, pertaining to the first posts' lines or the post previous to it. If you can't see the meaning, please don't assume they are meaningless, that's just rude and disrespectful.

Of course, just thought I'd share my feelings, sorry if I've offended anyone and sorry for disrupting your thread ragabash.


Please continue

Originally Posted by RZZZA

Of course, just thought I'd share my feelings, sorry if I've offended anyone and sorry for disrupting your thread ragabash.


Please continue

I kind of doubt that anyone will continue this thread, as far as the poetic parade goes.

Sure they will, the problem is that poems are personal things and you cant maintain a sense of cohesion of meaning with a round of poetry, at least not without a lot of rehearsing beforehand. But we can try

Originally Posted by turtle

With inner strength rebuilt we stand on pillars of grace
Acknolwedging our restraints out from this infernal place

With ravenous glee we find we yearn for the taste
of marvelous duckling a l'orange from Alsace

Originally Posted by RZZZA

Sure they will, the problem is that poems are personal things and you cant maintain a sense of cohesion of meaning with a round of poetry, at least not without a lot of rehearsing beforehand. But we can try



With ravenous glee we find we yearn for the taste
of marvelous duckling a l'orange from Alsace

Yeah, we kind of have to try and interpret what the other says in our own way, then use the idea and create another line or two; which is not easy for many people.



Indulge amidst this powerful sense we may
In doing so we can't prevent eternal decay

(presuming Alsace rhymes with day)