Ok so, here we are. It took quite a lot of work to review it, especially to link the various sections and articles with the old footnotes: in this I've been helped by Akar's previous work (that can be found here), in particular for the second half of the document.
However, the very purpose of this work was not that of overhauling the old Constitution, but rather that of making it more readable and easier to be understood, in particular by those who have little familiarity with the document in general. We all know what a mess it was, very mixed up and with plenty of stuff left over from past Amendments, not to talk about the many typos. But, it's still the Constitution, with all its limits (I personally find annoying the use of different linguistic registers, but that's just me honestly), so one still needs to carefully read it.
I've also done some minor adjustments and modifications based on logic. For the full list of the main changes/edits, see below:
It might miss one point or two, but I'm confident the most important stuff is all there.
Following this OP I'm going to post the Constitution divided in replies as it will appear if this Amendment will pass. For the sake of making it bearable, if you want to propose some modification (in form, not in content), please do so once and in one post, or I'll end up doing seppuku.