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    Elric von Rabenfels's Avatar The Devil Inside
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    An Story and history-report with The Long Road.

    It was in the year 1080 when Emperor Heinrich ruled Germany. It was the early, dark age. Sitting in his Residence in Bologna Heinrich made the decision to prepare for an war. Not some little nation versus nation war. He wanted to make Germany the greatest Nation on the world. And so he started his preparations. Till 1095 he was taking the Rebel City´s Antwerp, Hamburg and Metz. The Rebels were fighting hard but the trained sergeants of Germany finally won. Heinrich was sending Diplomats out to all corners of the world, and soon he was trading with all kinds of civilisations, from the tricky Venice traders to the far east of Russia. The English Kingdom became Germany´s most trusted and important ally. At 1101 Heinrich died, but he died happy seeing that Germany was on the best way to grow to one of the most important nation´s in the world.

    Heinrichs son Henry became the new Emperor. Henry knew from his fathers plan and improved Germany´s wealth even more. Germany became one of the most trusted nation´s in the world. Henry died at 1119, and Edmund son of Henry became Emperor. But there was hate in the royal family, Taurus, Heinrichs third son wanted the crown.

    Annoyed by all this family problems Edmund happily joined the Crusade at 1120 to Antioch. He took the city Attalia and Aleppo on the way and finally arrived at Antioch. The battle was bloody and was about 2 hours long. The Muslims fought with great motivation because they knew the crusaders would show no mercy. With high losses Edmund attacked one last time, storming up the siege ladders. A group of 38 Crusader Knights managed to open the gate so the rest of the army could storm the city. Fully in Rage, Edmund was riding into the masses of muslims, who saw their dead coming when staring into Edmund´s eyes. Edmund slaughtered every single one of the Muslims in his rage, supported by his loyal Crusader Knights. Finally, after 20 minutes of street battle Edmund managed to take the city, but badly wounded. With losses of over 600 men it was a bloody battle but the crusade was an sucess.

    Emperor Edmund hunting down the last Muslims



    So the first outpost in the far east was taken, Germany´s door to the Eastern world was open. Edmund, though badly wounded took the city of Tyrus, and died from his injuries in 1122. Taurus finally became Emperor. Things back in Germany got better, but France was a dangerous nation, they were banned by the pope for attacking Milan, and now banned from the church nothing was in the way to attack other christian nations. They started to assault every Catholic Nation at their borders, including Germany and England. This was the first time England and Germany fought in battle side-by-side, like brothers.

    Germany and England together in battle





    Together they were able to strike back the france armies to their towns and castles. Taurus used the chance of the situation, and took Paris in a hard battle with the Francaise Elite, and received no blame from the Pope. France weakened, the door to the riches of the far east open, everything seemed fine for Germany...
    Last edited by Elric von Rabenfels; February 01, 2007 at 09:28 PM.

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    nice. could b better if a few screenies were taken

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    It´s quite good, just bring in some pics plz!

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    And the Era of Knights slowly began...

    Till 1228 Germany took Tolouse and Narbonne from France both were targets for a crusade, Germany had the pope under control. In this year also the Fatimid Caliphate called out an Jihad to get back the City of Antiocha, taken by the Crusaders. They first sieged the city of Tyrus, which was on the way to Antiocha. The Crusaders were outnumbered 1:4. They couldn´t believe their luck as they saw how the Muslime army was moving on to Antiocha without attacking them. 1130 the Muslime army reached Antiocha and started sieging. Back in Germany, the first groups of Feudal Knights were recruited, together with the first Knights of the Teutonic Order at the Castle of Hamburg.

    The first Knights of Germany





    But in the far east, things didn´t looked so good. After many years of siege at 1132 the united Muslime army finally started to storm Antiocha. The Crusader were outnumbered 2:3, Captain Michael with his 1437 men, against an army of over 3000 soldiers. The battle lasted about 3 hours. It was unbelievable bloody and cruel, both sides were inspired by their gods to fight till their dead.

    Memory of the battle

    Captain Michael with his troops awaiting the enemy forces on the wall



    The first enemy army



    The Muslims storm through the gate



    The first army defeated, Captain Michael is fighting against the second at the plazza



    Captain Michaels heroic death, after slaying many enemies



    A crusader seeking for revenge slays the enemy general



    And at least, the battle was finally won. The German soldiers were victorious again.
    Last edited by Elric von Rabenfels; February 02, 2007 at 06:26 AM.

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    wow this is shaping to be rly cool

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    This looks really really well done. Just one minor detail. I don't know whether I'm correct but although the HRE was formed of German states, they were not really Germany as a country. These states were only unified in the late 19th Century by Bismarck.
    Besides that, I really like what u've done with the pictures. keep up the good work.

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    The Muslims kept trying to capture the German cities in the far east, but over time, were pushed back to their homelands. At 1133 A huge Byzantine army attacked Vienna. The Byzantine were attacking Germany´s settlements at their borders in the east before, but this was an huge army, 1615 men, about the half of it were even trained Byzantine Men-At-Arms and Brutal looking norsemen, wearing heavy byzantine armor and 2 handed axes. This was the first greater invasion in the Heartlands of Germany. Nobody thought this would happen so there were only 904 milita soldiers leaded by Jonas von Österreich, a member of the royal family. And the Battle began.

    The Byzantine Axeman slaughtering the German Militia



    Jonas fighting with an unearthy rage made the byzantines rout




    Thanks to Jonas, who now has some scars, and is proven as brave warrior, the town of Vienna defended sucessfully against the Byzantine army. After this battle, vienna is now building an stone wall for better protection from following attacks.

    Emperor Taurus took the Byzantine attack as an sign that Germany was getting strong enough for being a thorn in the eye of many other nations who were faced by the fact that Germany was a mighty nation, one cannot ignore. So he prepared to finally bring his fathers dream to truth. Everywhere in Germany warrior´s were training, knights made an oath to aid the Emperor and die for his cause. Germany was preparing for war. At 1141 Emperor Taurus died and his first son, Peter became the new Emperor. Honouring his father and his fore-fathers he improved the German military force even further. 1142 the French were trying to take Paris back, but they stood no chance against the new, well trained German knights.
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    Yea they are great pics

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    i really like your AAR raven darkwing! wow
    and i love those pictures, photoshop?
    keep it up man!
    some rep for you
    proud norwegian

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    Nice

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    Good read

    Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more!

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    Elric von Rabenfels's Avatar The Devil Inside
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    The struggle with the church

    At 1143 the Pope called out an crusade against Spain - one of Germany´s best trading partners. Emperor Peter, thought the trade connections to spain were too important to risk crusading against Spain and refused the Pope´s mission to take the spanish city for the church. Because of this, Pope Biancus started to hate germany. A Nation that would resist an order of his holiness? These heretics have to be crushed! And so he started to make a plan, with the main objective to hunt and burn Emperor Peter to death. The Emperor though, saw this coming and started to train an huge army of gothic knights and Zweihanders, ready to crush the papal states. For the Germans, their Emperor was standing above the pope. At 1146 Prince Godwine the Lewd driven by his insanity stormed, only with his bodyguard a Turkish army with 622 men. Godwine died, and Prince Adolf became the new heir of the throne. 1148 Pope Biancus died, the next pope was Pope Strenna, his hate against Germany was even deeper than pope´s Biancus hate. Fortunaly, Emperor Peter´s Army was ready, and under the Lead of Rainer the Tyrant, one of Germany´s best Generals, started marching against Rome. 1151 Rainer reached Rome and started to siege the city. Germany got excommonicated, but the only City that was revolting was Paris, all true German cities were standing by their Emperor. 1152 the battle for Rome finally began...


    The Battle for Rome

    The German Army awaiting orders



    The Gothic Knights storming towards the wall



    General Rainer climbing up the siege ladder



    The fight on the walls



    The Papal Elite awaiting the intruders on the plazza



    General Rainer fighting his way to the plazza



    Rainer commands to so storm the plazza



    The battle at the plazza



    General Rainer, fallen in battle



    The Victory for Germany



    Finally after heavy losses, and litres of blood spilled, Germany won the battle. General Rainer the Tyrant fell in this battle, a dead without shame and full of glory. The corpse of the Pope wasn´t found, under all those corpses, nobody could identify him anymore. The danger coming from the Papal States was defeated. Once again, Germany was victorious.

    *An Sign on the door of the scriptor reads: "I am terribly sorry to tell you, my fellow readers, that I dont know when I will write the next part of my story, I am occupied with many requests for custom skins, and hava a real-life, in addition." The door is tight shut*
    Last edited by Elric von Rabenfels; February 25, 2007 at 09:21 PM.
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    i've been wondering how on earth your general was dismounted, its a good read interesting effect with the pixs i must confess looking forward to the up date.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hex Khan View Post
    i've been wondering how on earth your general was dismounted, its a good read interesting effect with the pixs i must confess looking forward to the up date.
    He added Dismounted NE bodyguard as a recruitable unit, as it has the generals_unit ability when trained it creates a general character, like recruitable generals in BI.

    Good AAR.

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    Wow, that's quite good. Little less photoshop wouldn't hurt, but I guess it's a matter of taste really. Nothing wrong with a story, quite entertaining.
    Muahah, you just wasted 3 seconds of your life!

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    a great read

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    Just... WOW
    Those Pics are awesome and the read is good, you have your very special writing style man!

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    Elric von Rabenfels's Avatar The Devil Inside
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    I have a difficult question to ask you, my fellow readers. As you noticed I havent written my story for a long time, and because of my Medieval II changing over time, it is not possible to continue with my original Hre campaign. But, if you want it, my fellow readers, I could start another Hre campaign, and continue to write my Aar when I hit the time I stopped writing, I could mask the change of leaders in a ursurpation, or something like that. So, tell me here, do you want me to continue my Aar that way, or write a new one?
    - What can change the nature of a man?

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    Too much filters.

    They're just overdone and cliche now IMO.

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    I love ur images, your style, your faction (HRE rules) but, it's going to be very tricky to merge both the stories together? and also change is always nice every once in awhile,

    so i vote change. AND NEVER GIVE UP WRITING AAR's they are truly amazing

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