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Thread: A lonely drive through the dark woods : A poem

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    Default A lonely drive through the dark woods : A poem

    A lonely drive through the woods.

    And then there are they
    They who play in the shadows
    They who loom along dark meadows
    They who reside in your eye's corner
    And they who make your gaze wander

    And then there are they

    They who maketh your fingers quiver
    They who make your mind waver
    They who make you want to hide
    And they who might be right by your side

    And then there are they

    They whos footsteps you hear right behind your ride
    They who make you faster drive
    They who make you blind in panic
    And they who make the moment seem satanic

    And then there are they

    They who you now seem to see clear enough
    And they who make you wish you were strong and tough
    Yet they who seldom cannot be seen
    And they who always make you want to scream

    And then there are they
    Who are they
    What are they
    Were there really 'they' some
    Or were there never 'they' none ?
    Last edited by mad orc; September 30, 2019 at 10:50 AM.
    Life is beautiful

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    Default Re: A lonely night through the dark woods : A poem

    I might have left TWC
    But I do admit that this community is still the best for presenting my poems

    Do tell me how much I have improved since I left
    Life is beautiful

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    Default Re: A lonely drive through the dark woods : A poem

    Welcome back! The mixture of playfulness and threat among those lurking in the shadows adds mystery to your poem.

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    Default Re: A lonely drive through the dark woods : A poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    Welcome back! The mixture of playfulness and threat among those lurking in the shadows adds mystery to your poem.
    Thanks
    That's what I intended it to be !
    Life is beautiful

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