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    In the Nerve-Wracking Duel between

    King Athelstan and Swaeft

    both duelists have proven themselves of equal strength as this mighty Duel ends in a Draw!


    Shower your Praise (and Rep) upon both our Honoured Duelists:


    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

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    Those who were so Unfortunate as to miss the Duel may read both entries here:
    King Athelstan's Submission


    It all feels so cold. Half my heart is gone, and the other has turned to ice. I knew him for less than 10 years, but he was my whole life. He was my everything, he shaped me into who I am, and who I'll become. Today, almost 9 years after it happened I still can't comprehend that he's truly, fully gone. I remember all the happy moments. We didn't have much, but he always strode the extra mile for me. The time we saw Robin Hood. My first LEGO Star Wars set. Memories I'll treasure forever. Moments I'll never experience again. They say no father should have to bury their child, but to be a child while burying his father is heartbreaking. Even now as I think of it I can feel my eyes swelling up, and my throat clamping together as if a potato was lodged in there. I dread the day I forget each little moment. His eyes. His voice. Playing the Empire tutorial on the neighbour's computer because our couldn't. The little minute he was conscious and feebly kissed my hand before he minutes later lost his year-long battle with cancer. I miss him.


    Swaeft's Submission
    Winter’s foul breath chilled every bone in my body.

    The abandoned homes we marched by provided no source of refuge, for everything had been taken or destroyed, and the holes in the walls allowed the unrelenting, freezing wind to grace us with her presence, killing those she deemed unfit to carry on.

    And yet we pushed onward, shouldering our muskets and shivering in our fur coats.

    The lakes had long frozen into ice, leaving 200,000 men with no supply of water. The man to my right had lips as white as snow, and the man to my left had eyes so glazed over he may as well have been dead. We passed by abandoned farms – those that hadn’t already been burnt to a crisp, that is – with fields of dead crops wilting under the already weakening rays of the Sun. In these conditions, any one of us would have killed for even a taste of ordinary potatoes.

    And yet we carried on, plodding forth to meet the enemy, if he ever deigned to show up.

    Our faith in our Emperor was the only thing keeping us going at this point, but even that was fast expiring…as was I.

    Thank you to all who participated, and congratulations to both Duellists.






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    Congratulations, you two.
    No winner also means no loser. No matter. The damage has been dealt. Twice.


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    Congrats to both survivors. Unless you both managed to kill each other. That would've counted as a draw too, I guess.

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    A...a draw?

    A DRAW?

    Damn your good writing, KA! A fine job you did too, caught me completely off guard. Thanks to all who voted and cheered, and to Turk the spymaster for running this! Much appreciated

    Guess I'll have to find someone else to skewer...

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    Congratulations Swaeft, and thank you to all who voted for us. Cheers for running this Turk
    Well, a draw's not too bad, eh? Victory won't be as swaeft as you hoped for, friend.

    What inspired you to write your bit?
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    I demand a gun duel to close the matter, no draws will be tolerated!

    Great entries, both very moving short stories
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    Quote Originally Posted by Flinn View Post
    I demand a gun duel to close the matter, no draws will be tolerated!
    How are they to use their guns if they aren't allowed to draw them, eh?

    Quote Originally Posted by Cookiegod View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by King Athelstan View Post
    Congratulations Swaeft, and thank you to all who voted for us. Cheers for running this Turk
    Well, a draw's not too bad, eh? Victory won't be as swaeft as you hoped for, friend.

    What inspired you to write your bit?
    Well I was playing Napoleon Total War as France, trying to conquer Russia, when I remembered his march during winter. Probably his most famous defeat. After that I immediately thought: hey, I could write something about this, shall I make it a duel?

    Of course I had to deal with the unexpected sack of potatoes (potatoes as a keyword!) but I think it came along okay. (It was actually a refreshing twist to try and fit it in, thanks for that!)

    Now I am hesitant to ask what inspired yours...


    Quote Originally Posted by Flinn View Post
    I demand a gun duel to close the matter, no draws will be tolerated!

    Great entries, both very moving short stories
    I agree, somehow I don't feel satisfied...perhaps a whipping or two?


    Quote Originally Posted by Cookiegod View Post
    How are they to use their guns if they aren't allowed to draw them, eh?
    That is brilliant! Great one

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    Great stories, King Athelstan and Swaeft! Thanks, Turk!

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    Well done you two, but I also feel like a duel can't really properly end in a tie (unless, you know, you've both been mortally wounded, but then your posts above would be more along the lines of "AAaaaaagggghhhh" rather than the kind words you've thrown around). I for one would love to see you guys duke it out again, to really settle the matter!
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