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    Fight-Kill for the Horned Rat!

    In an instant, she found herself at the head of a small squad. Thirty people in all, and she had kept her own equipment, which was good. If she had to do this without the new Blade Of Ulric, things would probably suck. Mostly because the siege was done and she’d have to wait ages to test it out otherwise.


    Complete the Patrol with more than 60% of the squad remaining

    Looking over at her men, he saw them to be the clumsy in field volunteers kind of men who could barely march and were not wearing armour that fit them very well. The test would be more keeping them alive than anything else. She was sure there would be some enemies coming to try kill her and her men, but wasn’t sure what. And that was what put her on edge, waiting for the enemy to arrive. And when they finally did, it caught everyone off guard with who it was. The vanguard scout came sprinting towards them, waving his hands dramatically and shouting.
    “Rats! G-g-Giant rats!” he shouted, arriving in front of Estaria with a panicked face. She mentally sighed, and resolved herself to the fact that this job would be her dealing with a group of paranoid levies. Reaching out to plant a hand on his shoulder, she gave him a the comforting smile that she gave everyone who got spooked out in the field. It was a smile that everyone learned how to do, because everyone got spooked now and then. It was the nature of such high tension.

    “In a situation like this, you can see something at a glance and it can panic you. You can think you have seen something, and you can go running off to tell someone. But you can’t report such things casually. As the forward scout, your report affects the entire squad. You have to be clear, you have to make sure that what you saw is what you saw. If it is not, then you have put everyone in peril” She finished her speech, and he seemed less panicked. A lot more towards the fact that he had seen something and worried rather than getting a clear view. It might have even worked if the speech didn’t immediately lose all credibility as a man pointed and shouted.
    “Gi-giant rats!” The man screamed. The cry of surprise and fear fluttered through the ranks. Even Estaria took a step back. There were many monsters of the world, so why had it made her giant rats to face?

    And then she took a step forward and looked to her men.
    “So the rodents are a bit bigger than usual. I don’t see any giant cats around here, so we have to kill them! Handgunners ready your weapons, Swordsmen gather in a line in front of them! They are threats to the Empire and will be killed as such!” Estaria’s thunderous voice rocked the men on their heels, and halted the rout. And then to punctuate her orders, she pulled out one of her pistols and put a bullet down-wind, Sub-targetting the closest rat’s head. It was a white mook, and so it’s head was blown clean off. And then his friend was also downed as Estaria reloaded the gun with a flourish and fired again. Such precise shooting and the reloading trick that was most impressive gave the men the spine to follow orders and regain their positioning. Estaria’s pistol was joined by handguns, but they were hastily and inaccurately fired, and only a few of the bullets in each volley made it to their intended targets. And so sooner than she had hoped, they were inundated with rat. Scabbied, Swollen with hunger and with dirt-crusted, matted fur, these creatures were desperate like a wild dog. Flailing claw and the occasional stabbing spear - they didn’t even have weapons for the most part - couldn’t hope to get through shield and armour, but the weight of number and desperation was doing what shouldn’t be done and men were going down, shredded with tooth and claw even as they were cut apart.

    Seeing their friends be eaten by giant rats had an understandably adverse effect on the morale, but Estaria kept them in place with her grit and presence, eventually clearing the wave of rodent and concluding the situation. Three people had been mauled to death by the rats, one more was nursing a bleeding claw-strike across his face. And everyone was shaken.
    “Well, that wasn’t exactly the first combat situation I wanted you guys to be in, but you did well. We’ll finish up this patrol and-” Estaria was interrupted by the words of a beast behind her, which caused the whole squad to quall in fear.
    “Kill-stab! Take Life-Bodies for Underempire!” the large, black-furred rat had a fractured grasp of how to talk, but that didn’t make it any less intimidating. A large, well-equipped thing with a dozen others. Taller, broader, more menacing than the half-dead creatures that came before, it occured to Estaria that the ones before had been to shake up the line and test their defenses before the proper warriors arrived.

    The order to fire was one that went unheeded this time, and so with a curse she just rushed the closest rat and struck with her Second Slice. The first blow knocked the vast majority of it’s luck down - and did some damage to health with the ice, it seemed magic didn’t play nice with Luck - and then the second blow sent it sprawling to the ground, where it died. The second black-furred rat thrust his spear, and it bashed against her shield with a jarring thud. Her retaliatory swing clipped most of the luck, but she wasn’t destined to kill it, as a pair of handgun bullets slammed into it. Having lost it’s Luck, the bullets hit home and felled the rat. Her radical charge into the enemy had emboldened her routing squad, at least enough to stand behind her jeering and shooting handguns. Although the way they shuffled back when it looked like she was going to retreat to them implied she was on her own as far as a fight went.

    The support was helpful, as the Handguns snapped at anyone who tried to encircle her, and it seemed that despite being big and well armoured, the rats were not the bravest. None wanted to charge towards the group of gun-wielding men except in number, and every attempt to go around the woman in front would leave them exposed to the Handguns for too long before reaching the enemy. And so that lead to the only possible route, going through the woman. And so the sight of Estaria holding off a dozen giant rats while her men cowered behind her and fired off pot-shots whenever they thought they could, was branded into their minds. The woman captain carving up rats with her sword, each blow cleaving armour and spilling blood until by bullet and blade, there were no more rats left to fight.

    Turning back to her men with a scowl that sent them scurrying back as much as the giant rats had, she cocked her head and wordlessly ordered them to continue the march. It took them a minute to get back into line because nobody wanted to go near the rats and so gave them a wide berth, but eventually they finished the patrol, and got back to came, where Estaria delivered the report of giant rats to the Commander. And one of the black-furred rat’s heads because she knew he would just laugh at her otherwise. Of course, it was spooky to see a giant rat’s head dumped on your desk, but he acknowledged the risk that this presented to his camp, and that night there was double guards around the perimeter. Several squads came back undermanned, a few never came back at all, and it was putting everyone on edge.

    And then, the edge was justified. Rending the night and stirring people from their slumber was the crack of a handgun. All at once the camp came alive with activity, soldiers rushing from their tents to investigate the noise. And from there it was seen, a giant horde of rats descending upon them in the thousands. Chittering, screaming, raging forward like a tidal wave of fur and fang. The more disciplined handgunners among the camp quickly took to firing lines and delivered volleys into the horde, well experienced with the weight of number that many threats could bring. But the rounds were swallowed by the endless tide and there was nothing that could be done to slow it down. The night watchmen were simply absorbed into the teeming mass, and it surged towards the center of the camp where the rest of the men gathered. And a new box.

    The Skaven Descend.

    Lovely and ominous. No quest, no direction, no anything. If these creatures were to overrun this camp, the city beyond them would be helpless. No warning of the oncoming horde, they would be at very least crippled, at worst crushed and emptied entirely. She could stay and fight, but the battle was so one-sided even her powerful attributes would do no good. And yet…

    “Commander! Get a horse and go warn the city! We will hold them off long enough for your warning to matter. And take the head, so they can’t just ignore you” She told him. He had the position and standing to make an impact in the courts, and would at least gain the support of the martial minded nobles. He seemed shocked at the sudden, blunt nature of it all, but quickly felt the truth in the words, grabbed the head, and set off out of the camp on horseback. That was the city saved, but now she needed to deal with the camp. The camp they were all going to die in…

    Well, if it was her destiny to die in this quest to get a Job, then she was going to die with abloom. Returning to the front, she drew her pistol pair and unleashed both rounds, before quick-loading them and firing them off again. Her Cool ran dry from constant reloading, and then the pistols were discarded and she rushed into the fray, backed by swordsmen and halbarders to her sides and handgunners to her back. It was a fight far different from the siege of Middenhiem. There she fought for the city and her life, but here she fought to kill as many of the bastards as she could and to give the Commander as much time to get away as they could manage. A pile of rats grew in front of the line as blade and bullet cut them down like wheat, but no wall held forever. Man after man fell to the swords, the spears, and the fangs of the rats. Some of them were overcome and set about ripping apart whatever they could get their teeth into and eating it.

    Bullets ran out, and so the Handgunners made a desperate charge into the horde, and a momentary split in the wave gave Estaria the view of a large, heavily armoured rat-man, leading on the rest. She didn’t know if this was real or fake, but given the power of the System, it could be either. Or both. And so she pushed off, charging through the hole in their line, swift as the greatest of horses. A lesser man would simply get caught in the throng as it closed back up, but Estaria was fast enough to keep ahead of the curve, and so ending with a great leap, she soared towards the Rat-man, smashing him from his perch with her shield. Rolling to recover from the landing, her blade swiftly took a sizeable chunk from his Luck bar, which was reciprocated very quickly. The rat was fast, and it struck with undue force, but it was a situation where Estaria could truly grasp the speed of her own movements.

    They clashed like lightning, a Rat-man squeaking in the broken tongue of rats, and Estaria blocking, dodging, and weaving. Eventually with extended sub-targetting strikes, she disabled one of the Rat-man’s legs. And with just enough Cool built up, she threw a Double Slice to his head. The first cut triggered a Critical Wound, and with the second, his head came away from his neck. Mercy Of The Wolf providing the damage needed to kill him dead. More black-furred rats came out from around her, screaming in what seemed to be happiness. Why they would be happy that their boss was dead she didn’t know, but she geared herself for the fight. And as her health began to deplete, she was wondering when the quest would be over.

    30%...25%....20%.....15%.....the quest, would be over any minute….10%.....5%.....any, minute……..


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    It sounds like Captain Estaria is lethal with both pistol and blade - and that she was unnerved by the lack of a quest or direction when the Skaven arrived. Good update!

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    It's the feeling you get when you know the situation is ed and nothing you can do will change that in the slightest. A Resignation of the state of affairs. No point worrying, you'll only die sad.




    Suddenly, Estaria was back in her room. She didn’t feel the last blow land, but she was sure it did. And yet, she did not die. That was such a relief, she couldn’t handle dying twice in the same life time. And then, she was giving a simple box in front of her.


    Duty Unto Death.

    Was it, praising her for dying or was there a tone of judgemental disdain behind it, that dying ends your duty and should not be rushed into? Shaking her head, she knew she was thrown off because she was questioning the philosophical meaning of a floating box only she could see. Screw that, there was training to be done. And interestingly, new training as well.

    Physical Training:

    0/4 Mook enemies killed (Melee)
    0/2 Elite enemies killed (melee)
    0/1 Boss enemy killed (melee)
    0/20 Sword Drill
    0/10km Run


    Agility training

    0/2 Mook enemies killed (ranged)
    0/1 Elite enemies killed (Ranged)
    0/1 Beam Walk
    0/1 Handstand for 5 seconds

    While her melee training was just average, kill more things, run more stuff, swing more sword, her not-Melee training had the addition of “Handstand for 5 seconds”. She wondered how that would go down. As a child she had never really done a handstand, or any other of the childish play, come to think of it. Plus….Giant Rats. Did they exist? Were they created for the quest? Estaria was unsure, and that was the worst part. And then snapping back again, she wondered if her Agility was more varied because she was an agility character. It was certainly an interesting idea.

    While she was heading to the training ground, she scanned the shop for anything interesting, and eventually came across a 10,000gp “Potion Of Greater Experience”. She grinned broadly and, lacking any self control due to having possibly died at the hands of giant rats a few minutes ago, bought 6. Withdrawing the first one and taking off the top, it went down the hatch and froze Estaria in her steps. The taste of the potion was sublime. Never before in her life had she had such a tantalizing taste. Smooth, and rich, it’s texture was perfect and the taste itself didn’t overwhelm her. Even the level up boxes were in the way of the taste, and she had run through them before she even realized it. There was a lot of exp in each one, and she was now level 20, but that wasn’t the point. She struggled with herself, trying not to buy more and simply stormed off to the training ground, here Celerity making good time, and giving her something to throw herself into. Sword Drills and running, a good way to work off strain. She got out of the danger zone and didn’t quite feel so harrowed mentally, and so took a quick break before the dummies, to go over the stuff from her level ups.

    First Job Unlocked: Captain. Traits reduced to once every three levels.

    Ohh, that sucked. Getting less traits was always bad, but she did have plenty of them to begin with, so it wasn’t a massive issue. Keeping up the once every two levels would lead her to be inundated with Traits. She shut that down, and the second one popped up.

    Job Traits unlocked. These traits are special traits related to your Job.

    Who made this? Was there really a need to be so obvious? Shaking her head softly she shut that one down and there was a third. Seems she had ignored quite a bit.

    50 Precision: Advanced Sub-Targetting unlocked. Groin, Eye, Hands, Feet (arrow/knife/bolt only)

    Estaria felt herself cringe upon seeing “Groin” but kept reading anyway.

    Groin: Deals high damage and stuns the enemy when hit. Destroying the Groin causes stun bypassing Resistance.

    Ulric, could she cringe harder? The idea of putting a bullet through a person’s testicle just made her clamp up, despite not having anything down there to be shot.

    Eye: Very difficult shot, but deals immense damage. Destroying the Eye causes instant death or Critical Wound

    That, one made sense. There wasn’t much to the eyeball, and sticking a bullet through it was going to go right to the brainpan.

    Hands: Hitting the Hands will immediately disarm the foe. Destroying the Hands will cause the destroyed hand to be unable to be used.
    Feet(Arrow/Knife/Bolt only): Hitting the Foot immediately stops a person’s movement. Destroying the foot cuts movement speed by one quarter.

    Well, there was a nice bit to counter the cringe of the groin. It was like them old tales where the hero archer pinned a man to the ground with an arrow. Wasn’t something she was going to do though, she used blackpowder, rather than arrows, bolts, or knives.

    50 Agility: Weight-Spread unlocked.
    Weight-Spread: Your weight counts ¼ of it’s actual number for the sake of unstable footholds.


    That looked to be the last box. Letting out a soft sigh from the immense information thrown at her through this one, she was back into work. With the work she did from the basic training, she had more bullets than she knew what to do with. A few hundred standard ones and a hundred Nuln-Forged. They had been used extensively in the siege, to great effect. And the normal ones would allow her to train for weeks on end, even if she didn’t get more as a reward for doing it.

    The Dummies were so below her level at this point that the fight was a joke. She split them in half with one swing. Which wasn’t a surprise for the Mooks, or the Elites, but taking out boss with a single swing was emboldening and enticing. She was getting strong. Of course, the Ulric’s Boon and the sword would help a lot for that but still. She was going to have her ego moment and like it!

    Physical Training:

    4/4 Mook enemies killed (Melee)
    4/2 Elite enemies killed (melee)
    4/1 Boss enemy killed (melee)
    20/20 Sword Drill
    10/10km Run

    Advanced Physical Training Complete: 2 skill points to spend on Strength, Stamina, Constitution

    The training couldn’t be overcompleted, which was sad. But she wasn’t going to complain, she was getting free points for this. Stamina was way ahead of Strength and Constitution due to panic buying when she had just started this, so those pointed needed to go into the others. Ulric’s boon was keeping them nice and high, but it seemed artificial values didn’t give the stat traits. So one point in each. And then another box. One that, while she should have expected but was caught by surprise anyway.

    Hidden Quest Complete

    Kill Mook Dummy with one Swing: 2/1
    Kill Elite Dummy with one Swing: 2/1
    Kill Boss Dummy with one Swing: 2/1

    Accept Rewards? (Vigor Token, Random Box)


    Vigor token. Not so important for her because of her Main Stats being different. But she’d probably stockpile them anyway and see if there was anything cool when they built up. The random box was also interesting, and so she opened that, but it only rolled some different swords and they weren’t all that helpful for her with Ulric’s Fang. She’d make Borrago a gift if there was anything that caught her eye. Giving herself a few moments before going off to the Agility training, she rolled through the Vigor shop. She hadn’t really looked properly last time.

    It was here, she got a red-backed thing with a very angry LOCKEDtext across it. That….was a new thing. She tapped it, and got a bigger red box.

    This is Locked. Complete special requirements to unlock it

    She could almost feel the snappy bite in the first sentence. And what those special requirements were, wasn’t even hinted at.
    “Bloody thing. All right, then keep your secrets” she shook her head, closed it down and headed off to the firing range. This, was easy. That Hidden Quest was so easy to complete these days. One, two, three. Tokens and box. Box gave her more bullets. And it was all good. Heading to the Agility training, the handstand and beam walk were done. The Handstand was strange, but she couldn’t say she didn’t like it. The two points went into dexterity because she was really enjoying how easily her sword was to wield. It flowed like silk across skin, and that was a boon beyond most in the battlefield. And then finally, with her training done, she headed back to her room, pulled open the status screen, and looked over the two traits she got.

    Two were orange-edged, and certainly had an interesting name. Clearly, a Job Trait.
    So she tapped it to read up on it.

    For The Empire!: A steely shout to light a fire in the hearts of your men! +10 to all stats (Excluding yourself) to anyone who can hear your shout.
    Captain’s Shadow: Snap of a Captain’s finger, and the target falls. Designate a target to be hit with a Hotchland Long Rifle bullet. Usable every 10 minutes.


    Fair traits they were. And so Estaria caught some sleep, for what tomorrow would bring.


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    I like the line "she couldn’t handle dying twice in the same life time" and I'm enjoying the way that you use a game-system superimposed over reality (so that is is kind of the reverse of an AAR based on a campaign - that's a story overload over elements of a game, while here you have elements of a game overload over a story). It sounds like Estaria is deadlier than ever!

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    Admittedly, I have been really neglecting this in favour of my Royal Road one. It's got shiny stuff that impresses me. But, I felt bad, so I came to bring you chapter 8, as seen on Royal Road.

    Spoilered for sensitive content.
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    Ok, so I tried to make the joke but TWC broke. Again. Returns to RR

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    It's a shame that the server issues prevented your joke from working. Now that TWC is back (admittedly running more slowly while the server index is rebuilt after the update), I hope you'll post more of this.

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    I have admittedly migrated almost entirely over to Royal Road, where I have recently published the 17th chapter. If you are interested in it, there is where to find it. It is just easier for me in every respect on that site.

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    Thanks for sharing your stories here previously, good luck with your future writing!

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    Link to the Royal Road version has been posted. Unless that is illegal, then...I dunno, just delete the thread or something.

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    Why? Dunno.





    Suddenly, Estaria was back in her room. She didn’t feel the last blow land, but she was sure it did. And yet, she did not die. That was such a relief, she couldn’t handle dying twice in the same lifetime. And then, she was giving a simple box in front of her.

    Duty Unto Death.

    Was it, praising her for dying or was there a tone of judgemental disdain behind it, that death ends your duty and should not be rushed into? Shaking her head, she knew she was thrown off because she was questioning the philosophical meaning of a floating box only she could see. Screw that, there was training to be done. And interestingly, new training as well.

    Physical Training:

    0/4 Mook enemies killed (Melee)
    0/2 Elite enemies killed (melee)
    0/1 Boss enemy killed (melee)
    0/20 Sword Drill
    0/10km Run



    Agility training

    0/2 Mook enemies killed (ranged)
    0/1 Elite enemies killed (Ranged)
    0/1 Beam Walk
    0/1 Handstand for 5 seconds

    While her melee training was just average, kill more things, run more stuff, swing more sword, her not-Melee training had the addition of “Handstand for 5 seconds”. She wondered how that would go down. As a child, she had never really done a handstand, or any other of the childish play, come to think of it. Plus….Giant Rats. Did they exist? Were they created for the quest? Estaria was unsure, and that was the worst part. And then snapping back again, she wondered if her Agility was more varied because she was an agility character. It was certainly an interesting idea.

    While she was heading to the training ground, she scanned the shop for anything interesting, and eventually came across a 10,000gp “Potion Of Greater Experience”. She grinned broadly and, lacking any self-control due to having possibly died at the hands of giant rats a few minutes ago, bought 6. Withdrawing the first one and taking off the top, it went down the hatch and froze Estaria in her steps. The taste of the potion was sublime. Never before in her life had she had such a tantalizing taste. Smooth, and rich, it’s texture was perfect and the taste itself didn’t overwhelm her. Even the level up boxes was in the way of the taste, and she had run through them before she even realized it. There was a lot of exp in each one, and she was now level 20, but that wasn’t the point. She struggled with herself, trying not to buy more and simply stormed off to the training ground, here Celerity making good time, and giving her something to throw herself into. Sword Drills and running, a good way to work off strain. She got out of the danger zone and didn’t quite feel so harrowed mentally, and so took a quick break before the dummies, to go over the stuff from her level ups.

    First Job Unlocked: Captain. Traits reduced to once every three levels.

    Ohh, that sucked. Getting fewer traits was always bad, but she did have plenty of them, to begin with, so it wasn’t a massive issue. Keeping up the once every two levels would lead her to be inundated with Traits. She shut that down, and the second one popped up.

    Job Traits unlocked. These traits are special traits related to your Job.

    Who made this? Was there really a need to be so obvious? Shaking her head softly she shut that one down and there was a third. Seems she had ignored quite a bit.

    50 Precision: Advanced Sub-Targetting unlocked. Groin, Eye, Hands, Feet (arrow/knife/bolt only)

    Estaria felt herself cringe upon seeing “Groin” but kept reading anyway.

    Groin: Deals high damage and stuns the enemy when hit. Destroying the Groin causes stun bypassing Resistance.

    Ulric, could she cringe harder? The idea of putting a bullet through a person’s testicle just made her clamp up, despite not having anything down there to be shot.

    Eye: Very difficult shot, but deals immense damage. Destroying the Eye causes instant death or Critical Wound

    That, one made sense. There wasn’t much to the eyeball, and sticking a bullet through it was going to go right to the brainpan.

    Hands: Hitting the Hands will immediately disarm the foe. Destroying the Hands will cause the destroyed hand to be unable to be used.
    Feet(Arrow/Knife/Bolt only): Hitting the Foot immediately stops a person’s movement. Destroying the foot cuts movement speed by one quarter.

    Well, there was a nice bit to counter the cringe of the groin. It was like the old tales where the hero archer pinned a man to the ground with an arrow. Wasn’t something she was going to do though, she used black powder, rather than arrows, bolts, or knives.

    50 Agility: Weight-Spread unlocked.
    Weight-Spread: Your weight counts ¼ of its actual number for the sake of unstable footholds.

    That looked to be the last box. Letting out a soft sigh from the immense information thrown at her through this one, she was back into work. With the work she did from the basic training, she had more bullets than she knew what to do with. A few hundred standard ones and a hundred Nuln-Forged. They had been used extensively in the siege, to great effect. And the normal ones would allow her to train for weeks on end, even if she didn’t get more as a reward for doing it.

    The Dummies were so below her level at this point that the fight was a joke. She split them in half with one swing. Which wasn’t a surprise for the Mooks, or the Elites, but taking out the boss with a single swing was emboldening and enticing. She was getting strong. Of course, the Ulric’s Boon and the sword would help a lot for that but still. She was going to have her ego moment and like it!

    Physical Training:

    4/4 Mook enemies killed (Melee)
    4/2 Elite enemies killed (melee)
    4/1 Boss enemy killed (melee)
    20/20 Sword Drill
    10/10km Run

    Advanced Physical Training Complete: 2 skill points to spend on Strength, Stamina, Constitution

    The training couldn’t be over-completed, which was sad. But she wasn’t going to complain, she was getting free points for this. Stamina was way ahead of Strength and Constitution due to panic buying when she had just started this, so those pointed needed to go into the others. Ulric’s boon was keeping them nice and high, but it seemed artificial values didn’t give the stat traits. So one point in each. And then another box. One that, while she should have expected but was caught by surprise anyway.

    Hidden Quest Complete

    Kill Mook Dummy with one Swing: 2/1
    Kill Elite Dummy with one Swing: 2/1
    Kill Boss Dummy with one Swing: 2/1

    Accept Rewards? (Vigor Token, Random Box)

    Vigour token. Not so important for her because of her Main Stats being different. But she’d probably stockpile them anyway and see if there was anything cool when they built up. The random box was also interesting, and so she opened that, but it only rolled some different swords and they weren’t all that helpful for her with Ulric’s Fang. She’d make Borrago a gift if there was anything that caught her eye. Giving herself a few moments before going off to the Agility training, she rolled through the Vigor shop. She hadn’t really looked properly last time.

    It was here, she got a red-backed thing with a very angry LOCKED text across it. That….was a new thing. She tapped it and got a bigger red box.

    This is Locked. Complete special requirements to unlock it

    She could almost feel the snappy bite in the first sentence. And what those special requirements were, wasn’t even hinted at.
    “Bloody thing. All right, then keep your secrets” she shook her head, closed it down and headed off to the firing range. This was easy. That Hidden Quest was so easy to complete these days. One, two, three. Tokens and box. Box gave her more bullets. And it was all good. Heading to the Agility training, the handstand and beam walk was done. The Handstand was strange, but she couldn’t say she didn’t like it. The two points went into dexterity because she was really enjoying how easily her sword was to wield. It flowed like silk across the skin, and that was a boon beyond most in the battlefield. And then finally, with her training done, she headed back to her room, pulled open the status screen, and looked over the two traits she got.

    Two were orange-edged and certainly had an interesting name. Clearly, a Job Trait.
    So she tapped it to read up on it.

    For The Empire!: A steely shout to light a fire in the hearts of your men! +10 to all stats (Excluding yourself) to anyone who can hear your shout.
    Captain’s Shadow: Snap of a Captain’s finger, and the target falls. Designate a target to be hit with a Hotchland Long Rifle bullet. Usable every 10 minutes.

    Fair traits they were. And so Estaria caught some sleep, for what tomorrow would bring.

  12. #32

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    The training went on for a week, with every day making Estaria feel more and more powerful.. Her dexterity was growing in leaps and bounds, and this new “Advanced” training was making it even faster. Her sword was like a light, streaking through the air and bringing death to dummies. She wondered how it would go for a real target. Probably, really badly. Estaria was acutely aware of meetings going on around her, but she didn’t feel like she was someone who was needed. A low-born captain didn’t need to attend now the siege was done. Plus, she had other problems. A few days into moving the bodies, they came across the Warrior-Priest, at the gates. His grim visage marred by multiple fresh scars, and his armour pitted with axe wounds, he died clenching his hammer, and the bodies of Chaos lay all around him.

    While he died valiantly, he still died, and it was playing hell on morale. A man like that, being felled by the foul forces of chaos, was seen by many as the foulest omen of what was to come for the Empire as a whole. Added to the fact the Middenhiemers didn’t hesitate to bring up the fact that their warrior priest had survived, and this was an omen of what Southerners could do against the Chaos Horde. Which was a really strange mindset to have, but The Empire really didn’t like itself. She had four men in stocks from fighting with the Middenhiemers, and more were probably going to follow. With no Chaos left to fight, the tension, cultural and religious, between North and South grew to clashing. And Estaria just hoped they could get out of here with an intact regiment.

    Fortunately, she had gotten orders this morning to return to Altdorf, and so today was spent gathering the men and preparing for departure. It was hard, as disgruntled soldiers were scattered across the city in less than ready states of being. Still, Borrago and the other sargents took no excuse, and her column was filled by mid-day, with the bruised and hungover vagrants as much as the men who had arrived within the hour, raring to get home and out of this strange, cold place. The march would be slow, and they would be lucky to get out of the immediate surroundings of Middenhiem before night fell. The plan was to return to Altdorf directly, through the road that cut through Drakwald Forest. Of course, that plan didn’t go down well at all due to the infestation of creatures that lingered in Drakwald, but even in these times it was patrolled and guarded. A much better choice than taking the Old North Road to Marienburg and then going to Altdorf from there.

    Deciding to try and motivate people, Estaria announced that if they made good time they would camp in one of the fortified inns that were along the forest road. But she wasn’t sure how good it was at that goal because she was distracted by a man standing by the gate with his guard retinue.
    “I have heard you name, Captain Zashira, and I thank you for the support you have led to my city. I heard you fought with great passion in the siege. It is women like you that the Empire needs if it is going to survive. The Al-Uric mentioned his desire to see you stay, but this is not ours to decide”

    Estaria listened, and felt abashed by the compliments of the one-eyed elector count. She could lead and she could fight, but being called out and brought to the spotlight was something she suffered under.
    “Give this letter to those in Altdorf. I would send a runner, but you are heading that way anyway” Borris handed Estaria a letter, who quickly put it in her inventory so it would come to no harm. With that done, he nodded and bid them save travels before returning to the castle proper. Estaria took this opportunity to leave before anyone else tried to come and start anything. Gods, she hoped this whole Ulric business would stay here in Middenheim. She was no hero, no chosen, just a Captain. With, a strange system that made her a superhuman monster…

    The march was slow and fortunately uneventful. Camping was equally uneventful, and they met none of the monsters that the forest was famous for in the first few days.
    “Excited to see some Beastmen, Borrago?” Estaria asked with a grin on the third day.
    “Haha! I know all the best recipes for Beastman! Some Minotaur Steak would put some steel into the spine of these men!” His thunderous boom was heard quite far, and the debate of Minotaur steak and other food made from Beastman sparked into being, with some discussing the taste and the culinary techniques needed, while others pondered the moral and theological impact of such food.

    While in camp on the third night, Estaria thought to skim the shop to see what she could ear-mark for later use. There, she saw a collection of keys to what were called “Dungeons”. Drakwald Dungeons. Each key had a rating and were relatively cheap. The S-rank key that promised such good fun, was only 10,000, where as the D-rank was 500. Buying one of every rank, she first took out the D-rank and held it in her hand. A few seconds passed before she got herself a box.

    Enter Dungeon? Yes/No

    The answer was obvious. She wouldn’t have bought the damn thing if she wasn’t going to enter, so it was exactly what she did and the world turned white for a few moments before depositing her outside a small campfire. A small box popped up in front of her to explain the situations.

    Dungeons are localized instances where you face challenges relevant to the location you have entered the dungeon from. Each dungeon has a monster superior to the rest, and larger dungeons can have several. A Dungeon is complete and the rewards given when all the monsters are killed - for smaller dungeons - or the final boss slain - for lager dungeons. Slaying more monsters will grant additional rewards. Monsters respawn if the boss is still alive, to a maximum of 5 times. Wounds gained in the dungeon are healed when you leave, but dying in the dungeon will cause a temporary debuff outside and inside other dungeons, as well as ejecting you without a reward. Escaping a Dungeon can be done at any time, forgoing completion bonus and half the gathered rewards. Fatigue gained in Dungeons is retained.

    Having Dungeon keys all the way up to S-rank would let her see the scope and scale of these dungeons. They could be a great source of money and experience if there were good creatures in them, but getting to greedy could lead her to die in the dungeon and lose all the gold. For this one though, she felt far outleveled. White-level mooks and a white level elite as the dungeon boss. A dozen small, hornless creatures braying around the fire while eating something Estaria decided to not look into. One creature, slightly taller with stubby, half-horns, looked over them. Well, she was only here to test this whole thing out. Estaria clicked her fingers, and a cracking bang rang out, the half-horned creature taking a bullet to the head and expiring quickly. The dozen braying creatures looked up, but they were not quick enough to catch Estaria bursting from the bushes with unnatural speed. Driving the Blade of Ulric into the chest of the first creature, she gave a graceful spin and beheaded the second.

    In a whirl of motion, a dozen creatures laid dead at her feet. These creatures were hardly worth calling a challenge to anything that wasn’t a farmhand, so it was a poor show of her skill, but did let her understand what was going on inside.

    Dungeon complete! 700+150 gold earned. Exitting in 10 seconds

    So, no more D-ranks then. Possibly these things were something she was meant to learn of earlier. Or before she got into a massive Horde Battle that gave her some thirteen or so levels. With one final flash, she was back in camp. There was still a few days of marching to go, and it wouldn’t do to go through all of her dungeons in one day, so she decided to try some more tomorrow. Dealing with the men, she got some food and then went to bed.

  13. #33

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    Breaking camp and setting off, the lack of activity was not to last, as the vanguard scouts came back to report that a large Beastman horde had broken into one of the small forts along the road and was currently fighting the beleaguered garrison. Ordering a double-time at the news, Estaria’s column took flight. Most men had recovered from their lack of self-control in Middenhiem, but not really from the loss of morale caused by the dead priest and goading of the Northerners. Still, any man would run to the aid of another when the Beastmen were involved. The battle was going poorly for the fort, but that meant it was going to go well for the sudden reinforcements, as they crashed through the gate and took up positions there, a sudden fanged wall to their backs, and handguns besides. Estaria then rose her sword and let out a deep bellow to be heard by every man.

    “For The Empire!”

    Not only a shout for their morale but also the activation of her trait as a Captain, the men roared in return, the garrison of the fort pushing with renewed vigour, crushing Beastman between two flanks. Savagery and thick hides did not save them from the blades of the swordsmen, but it did allow them to exact a toll before finally being taken down. Finally, the last creature was brought low by Estaria’s men, and the battle calmed. All was not over yet, however, because a deep, gullettal roar filled the air, and from the forest undergrowth burst a Minotaur and it’s Bovigor followers. Borrago reacted sharply, his miniature cannon blowing off the Minotaurs kneecap and causing it to stumble and crash into the ground. Estaria took a pair of Bovigors, but the rest smashed into her line, tossing men and buckling armour with feral rage and great horns. Estaria sprinted into the thick of it with her disturbing grace, and her blade sung against Beastmen too feral, and thus considered Monsters. Her high strength and high-quality sword allowed her to do great damage to the beasts, but she was still on her toes for any shield work that needed doing.

    It was hard fought, considering there were less than a dozen, but eventually the last creature bled it’s last into the ground. The crippled Minotaur didn’t get its desire, and amidst a roar of defiance, it was torn apart by a volley from the Handgunners. Which was good, that thing was huge. With it dead, She got a box about how the “Captain’s Halflings” gathered the loot and sold them for 15,000. Which kind of made sense, not a lot of loot to be had from Beastmen. Unless you counted dirty fur and ancient weapons.
    “These lot would be if anyone tried to escape, I’m guessing” She commented, before looking around the bodies. She had educated herself on the enemies of the Empire, so best to work her ability to kill them. “Did you find the Bestigor?” she asked the man who looked to be in charge. He gave a blank stare for a few moments, still shell-shocked and feeling like he had stared death in the face only to be pulled back a few seconds before the teeth snapped.

    “Big thing. Large horns. Probably armoured” she expanded. It seemed to snap the man to the present because he shook his head. “So it’s still out there. You need to send a runner to replace your losses. I don’t expect them to give up on this place” she told him. He didn’t even question her, a sign that either he had gotten command because the true commander had lost his head, or that he was seriously stunned from the fight. Looking about, she could see the rest of the men. Now the fight was over, a dark cloud loomed over them. Desertions followed this kind of morale, so she let out a sigh and went to find the Quartermaster.
    “Magic trick for you. Everyone out there is basically dead out there, morale-wise” She told the Quartermaster, who shook his head.
    “It’s Drakwald. Nobody is happy to be here” he replied a gruff growl to his voice. However, his jaw dropped when he saw Estaria pull a barrel out of nowhere.
    “Let’s try help out, hmm?” The barrel had ‘Bugman’s XXXXXX’ on it, and she could see the Quartermaster’s eyes glisten with admiration and desire.
    “Where…?!” He was cut off by Estaria holding up a finger.
    “I didn’t. You did. Rainy day, you know?” She gave him a knowing nod, and then went out. Basic camp had been broken, and wounded were being tended to while the dead were being prepared to burn. Apparently, people were not buried in Drakwald, the lot of them a superstitious bunch. Too drained emotionally and physically to even ask where all the equipment that Estaria’s invisible Halflings took had gone.
    “Alright! Quartermaster is putting on a show. But we gotta earn it because it’s quite the show. We are going to need a barricade at the broken gate till it can get fixed” She told her men. There were grumbles, but the idea of getting invited to the show that was being put on was enough for them to gather boxes, scrap, and stakes to make a temporary barricade against anything that tried to come in. It wouldn’t hold forever, but it would give them some time.

    Alright lads!” came the shout of the Quartermaster. “It’s been a hell of a day and gonna be a hell of a night! That’s why I brought this out. Any man who volunteers for sentry duty gets double helping. Just take care! It’s a strong drink, and we don’t need a bunch of lifeless dullards” He put the Bugman’s barrel in front of him, and word quickly spread across the fort. Sentry duty was well filled that night, and Estaria got a cup of what was considered liquid gold by many. Taking a swig, she could really get behind its reputation. Smooth, but with a strong taste and not with the acrid burn that strong alcohol usually had. She was tempted just to spend all her gold on barrels of this and open a tavern. Dungeons to keep her in supply, and a happy town.

    Still, that went the same way as her idea to retire in Bretonnia. So after finishing off the cup and getting dinner - Borrago cooked his Minotaur Steak marinated in Bugman’s as well as other dishes - she looked at the key to a C-rank dungeon. Time to explore!

    Are you-

    She didn’t even bother reading the whole of it before hitting the yes button and getting transported into the dungeon. Campfires ahead of her, she brought up something she rarely used. This system did have a minimap, but most of the time it was easier to talk to someone than try to translate it. The map gave her a great sense of scale. The camp ahead was self-contained, but was on the wings of a larger camp, with a second satellite camp on the other wing of the large camp. Like the way a larger war host would break camp. She knew these creatures could make a loud noise, but a firearm was louder, and out of place, so she wasn’t going to use one of them. Plus, these places did respawn as long as the boss was still around.

    Walking up, she saw the enemy were light orange, more like yellow. Maybe a level ahead of her, they would require a fair amount of time for her to get advantageous reaping from. So, B-rank it was for farming. Kicking off with her incredible speed, she slammed into the back of one of the Ungor. Bigger and stronger than the Brays, they were still pretty human in their size and durability. So her blade slipped in and stole his life. The shock of her sudden, swift arrival allowed her to cut down three of them before they reacted to her presence. Each slash killed another creature, the skin freezing from the runes that adorned her blade. As she cut through the Ungor like chaff, she felt like a God descending to the earth to smite the unfaithful. It was a foolish thought to have since these creatures were a match for the regular footman but could hardly hold up to veterans, Knights and Greatswordsmen. But it was not something she could really hold off. Turning the camp to a bloodbath, she flicked off her sword and took off, circumventing the large camp and arriving at the second small one. There she delivered bloody vengeance on their existence, before walking into the main camp. Sparsely populated, this was the commander’s camp, as she saw not Ungor but Gor. Large things, as much beast as man and thick hides. All a standard orange, which made the blood-soaked Estaria grin.

    The Ungor had not been a challenge enough to do more than a small chunk of damage to her luck bar, and the blood that covered her was scented as their own, leaving the Gor wary. And then, out of the far tent, came a large creature with magnificent horns. It spoke, but in a harsh language Estaria had no understanding of - although a box did pop up with a progression bar of comprehension, which was a system she was totally ignorant of, plus an option to spend XP to speed up the progress - but with the new box she had, she felt it would be, at very least fun to talk back, at most a tactical advantage to understand the enemy. And so she spent the xp and suddenly, it’s words made sense.

    “--Of Gnak Bonechewer! We will grind man-thing into the ground, make you part of Gnak. Make you strong like Gnak!” the bellow was strange to understand but even stronger to reply.
    “I dunno. I don’t think I’d like to be part of you. I like having a bath, ya know?” She grinned as Gnak just stood there, shocked that Estaria had responded.
    “...We will kill talking man-thing!” Gnak most elegantly shouted. Growling and braying filled the camp but Estaria shouted before they charged. It was a gamble on what she was going to do, but with the Brays having no horns, the Ungor having stubby horns, and the Bestigors having rather magnificent horns, she thought that horns were rather important in their culture.

    “Fake-Horned Cretin! Can you not face me yourself?!” she retorted. Stunned into silence, the roar of outrage from Gnak was thrice as loud.
    “Will kill! Will eat! Man-Thing is Gnaks!!” right on the money. Horns were a touchy subject. It rushed at her and Estaria first thought to slow his charge with a swing, but the creature was enraged and would probably charge through it, so she threw herself to the side, letting him charge wide before using her speed to blitz past him, taking a piece out of his luck bar, before spinning and taking the second piece. His frenzied rage couldn’t hold a candle to the Dexterity that Estaria possessed, and every attack was deflected and parried, answered with a lightning-fast riposte. It was not long before she gave him a critical wound and then ended him spectacularly with a called shot to the head, decapitating him in a mighty blow. So this was her powers. A woman could get addicted to this kind of skill.

    Boss defeated. Exit dungeon?

    Estaria, hit no. Wanting to exploit this power a bit more. The Gors stared at their fallen Bestigor but didn’t get enough time to register it properly before the controlled devastation of Estaria was upon them. It didn’t last long.

    Total Obliteration. 5000+2000 gold. Bestigor Blood earned. Exiting in 10 seconds.

    Once arriving back in the world, she checked her fatigue. Seeing it around 31%, she decided to just catch some sleep. Extensive murder was rather exhausting. And she’d rather not ruin the taste and memory of Bugman’s with Bestigor blood. That certainly did not sound appetizing at all.

  14. #34

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    Minotaurtaur, Tiny Minotaurtaur, Little Minotaurtaur, Mini Minotaurtaur.
    "I'm a tiny Minotaur, little Minotaur, kill you any minute-aurr!"
    (I'm sorry, it had to be done. I couldn't resist)



    Waking in the morning, the mood was better than yesterday night. Probably because of the excellent beer and feeling of comradery. She learned later from Borrago that this was a home fort, where people lived, and so the soldiers wives had come out later to dance for them, joined by some of the drunker husbands. It had been a bright night, and truly showcased the brilliance of humanity. And to add to that, the morning showed a relief force coming through the barricade made at the gate, with men to replace that which was lost and materials to replace the gate. Beastmen could attack again, but they would face the same situation as they faced before, possible defeat even without Estaria’s intervention.

    With high spirits and a lot of drunks, Estaria shook her head and worked out a sharing of rations so that her men could stay a day or two and recover from the hangover before heading out to Drakwald. Borrago shared his recipes to ensure that the Drakwald Fort could reinforce their rations with meat. The big man had been industrious last night, and so there was a lot of prepared, salted meat that was shared between the fort and her column. Estaria looked to the B-rank key in her hand, and thought about it. Did she want to run into a Minotaur? It was a question she pondered for a short while after returning to her tent. To allow her some moments to think, she took out the Bestigor blood and knocked it back, blanching at the taste and general act.



    Blood consumed. Random Physical Stat increased

    Well, yay, she guessed. Still debatable if it was worth it. Shutting that box down, there was a second one beneath it.

    50 strength: Overwhelming - A mighty blow can fell a hardy foe in one swing! Damage that causes a Critical Wound now spills over (but does not create a second Critical Wound)

    That, would be helpful against bosses and monsters. And now, to go test it out. No more procrastinating, she brought out the B-rank and used it.

    Do yo-

    The flash of light took her to the dungeon, and it was not a camp, but instead a fort. Burning and broken, it had clearly just suffered from a severe Beastman attack. Opening the mini-map, she saw herself inundated with dots. Too many to fight, even for her, she’d be overwhelmed. She’d need to think tactically. There was a nice expanse outside the fort, she wasn’t restricted to fighting in there exclusively. So, with a bit of thought, she gave a smile, and walked through the gate. Drawing her pistol, she shot one of the Ungors in the head, and got the attentions of everyone. All manner of Gors, a surprisingly slim amount of Ungors, and no Brays. This was a true Warherd. Drawing the attention of everyone in earshot, she grinned and then ran away, followed by raging hordes of monster. The lack of Centigors meant that they couldn’t keep up with her, however, and so she was able to circle around and double-back into the courtyard, and then face a reduced force of those who were either too far away to start the run or didn’t want to give up their dinner.

    Estaria had hoped to get some of the fat trimmed before the large party she led out came back, but Gors were stronger than Ungors. The previous ones she had faced were few in number and shocked at the Bestigor’s sudden decapitation. These beasts were more numerous and ready for a fight, so she had to work at killing them. She was fast but they were ferocious, and several attacks had to be aborted to avoid a wild swing that would not have done her any favours. She had five of them dead by the time the roar behind her signaled the return of the bulk. Not a favourable number, andGors were cunning, a human intelligence behind that bestial savagery. Two pistol shots went through the eyes of the closest Gors, and then Estaria darted away, up the walls where she could get an advantage of height on them, and be somewhat secured. The steps up to the wall were made for human feet, not bestial hooves, and the Gors - Bovigors especially - were too large a creature to handily traverse the stone steps. Given time, they would be able to make the ascent, but Estaria had no desire to give them time. The closest Gors took fire from her pistols, their blood and entrails slicked the stone steps, making it even more of a hellish foothold.

    Eventually, however, her Cool ran out, and she could no longer reload with a flourish. She would have to put her sword away to do the reload, and that was not something she wanted to do. Plus, a spear whizzed past her head and made her turn to the Gor on the ground. Furious over being unable to reach her, they had begun to throw things at her. With little choice remaining - she could not return fire on them and the creatures climbing the stairs with any degree of speed to keep them both at bay - she let out a soft sigh of resignation and leaped off the walls, into the mass of Gor. Her blade came down and seperated a Gor into two halves, before disarming another. Using her shield as much as a weapon than a defensive piece of equipment, she tore her way out of the Gors that had gathered. B-rank truly was the best place to farm for loot and exp. A-rank and S-rank would be way more than she could manage right now. B-rank was enough of a challenge that she had no luck and 80% health by the time she had finished with these Gors.

    Taking a moment to catch her breath and regenerate her luck, she reloaded her pistols and then realized these buggers would respawn if she didn’t kill the boss. So she moved on, into the keep. Larger, better equipped Gors stood in her path, but their numbers were less, so she could deal with them much easier. She was a duelist kind of girl, excellent against a single target, but not so great against hordes. Eventually, she got into the centre of the keep, where a giant Minotaur stood next to a smaller Bestigor.
    “How is this woman here? The Warherd sits outside” the Bestigor spoke. So, coherent. Clearly a dangerous Bestigor. Maybe even on it’s way to Beastlord.
    “Killed them” Estaria replied, her voice choppy and short to hide the fact that she was still recovering from the fight outside, and not enough to have gone through the Gors outside.
    “Through many Gor by yourself, and speak the Beast Tongue. A most strange thing..” The Bestigor cocked it’s head, as if studying her. But the blood-red coating on Estaria’s armour was too much for the Minotaur.

    With a roar, it rushed her, wanting to get into the gore-slick fight, to crush, and kill. When one was not intimidated by the size of the thing, there was an advantage to a woman fighting a Minotaur. As it charged, she rushed in herself, before sliding along her knees slashing at it’s leg. Gods, it was like hitting a tree-trunk! She cut the thing but not deep enough to be notable. And the Minotaur saw her slide and span around, it’s crude hammer club smashing against Estaria’s shield and knocking her clean off her feet. The second charge was met probably not so intelligently. Shield up and braced, she rushed the creature at her full speed, bouncing off him but feeling something break as the force of his charge met with the force of Estaria’s own shield. Her body was slowly, not aching so much. The pain was drifting away and getting replaced with a focused zeal, a rush of adrenaline and hyper-focused mentality in such a dangerous situation she might die - if only in a dungeon. Getting back to her feet she rushed forward with a thrust of her blade, driving it two inches into his chest, which gave her an elated feeling of victory and meant she totally missed the head that smashed her clean off her feet and into the wall, some three foot above the floor. The fall from that one was not gentle. *AND* her sword was now in his chest.

    But that was not the end. Instead, Estaria just grinned and had a mad plan. Drawing her pistol while the Minotaur roared from the frostbite growing out from the freezing blade, she zeroed in and pulled the trigger. The ball flew through the air, and precisely hit the handle of her sword, the force of the gunshot driving the blade deep into his chest. The Minotaur staggered towards her, but it did not get far enough before it’s internals were frozen solid, and it collapsed, not to get up. , there really was a reason she didn’t want to fight one of them things. She was quite possibly stronger than Borrago, and still struggled to cut the dam thing. Getting up and walking over to the Minotaur, she ripped her blade out of it’s chest, and then turned to the Bestigor. Which was probably going to kill her.

    “Khorne demands the best of fights. To kill you now would be a bare sliver of what I would get to face you when you were at your peak. Khorne’s eyes are upon me, and besting you shall see me gain his favour. Recover, metal woman. I shall wait” the Bestigor said. Estaria, just stared in disbelief. She...what?
    “Khorne is a mad dog of a God! Why...would you?” She asked. The Bestigor bristled at her words, but retained himself.
    “Khorne is many things, Metal woman. You see what is easiest to see” he then turned his back on her, to rummage through a large pile, clearly the loot from his fight. She could just, stick a pair of bullets in his legs and the fight would be done like that. And yet, she didn’t. Something about the overwhelming confidence he had, and the faith in his God. She couldn’t help but somewhat respect the Beastman. He was snacking on an arm and so she wasn’t going to be making friends, but found it hard to hate him.

    So she did as he said, and recovered. Health regeneration seemed specced off Constitution, which she had a lot of. And her fatigue was dipping until it was 0. Eventually, she was as recovered as she would be, and got up, speaking to the man.
    “This has been a most strange day for me, Bestigor. But I think it is one I will remember for a long time” she told him, smiling to herself. The creature drew a pair of swords longer than her own Scimitar, and battle, was joined.

  15. #35

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    The Bestigor was prepared for her, but Estaria was confident in her new stats, and so she rushed the thing, starting with a shield ram and then following up with a Second Slice attack. Unfortunately, the size and general bulk of the Bestigor meant that the ram did little, and then he parried both attacks before taking a chunk of luck off her bar. This, creature was more powerful than Estaria could have comprehended. Did they get buffs for being in dungeons? Either way, there was no time to be thinking about that, no time to be doing anything but fighting this most powerful of foes. She’d certainly gain combat experience, if not actual Experience.

    Estaria flowed like water, and the Bestigor came like falling rocks, each one striking, countering and then trying to exploit a minute window left in the other’s defenses. Luck chipped away little by little, and soon Estaria was on her health, though quickly followed by the Bestigor. Eventually, she decided this fight was not going to be won without some drastic action. So she grasped her blade, gritted her teeth and feinted with her shield, leaving an opening that the Bestigor exploited. His blade bit deep into her armoured side, and the pain near knocked her off her stride. But she persevered with grit and fury, and made a Called Shot to the Bestigor’s arm as it stabbed her. She threw a Second Slice to make sure that she really cut it off, but as blade hit body, she got a strange, popup.

    Shadows of the Future: 300% Damage

    There and gone in the same breath, it lasted long enough for her to cut the Bestigor’s arm off, and then was gone as if there was no evidence it had ever been to begin with. The Bestigor’s backswing was fast and brutal, slashing through Estaria’s armour and spilling copious amounts of blood on the ground. Her health dropped dangerously low, and the shock of it threw her from her feet. The Bestigor roared in pain from his lost limb, and Estaria knew she needed to get up, but her whole body felt numb. Breath coming out in gasps. Her hands felt cold, her whole body felt cold. If she could just...sleep for a moment…

    The thumping footsteps of an angry Bestigor brought her back to reality, and she barely managed to roll out of the way of the incoming hoof before it crushed her head. Now, was not the time for dying. Forcing her body up and regaining some semblance of balance, there was one last chance to finish this off. Come round from his armless zone and stick a sword through his eye. High damage, plus Overwhelming and Ulric’s “Mercy of the Wolf” would help her do enough to take him out in one swing. If she could manage the blow, of course. He was shown to be as fast as she was, and as skilled. The only benefit she had, was two arms to his one. But, it was a benefit she was going to push.

    Rushing at him, she then shifted of to the size and leapt, his blade coming at her and being blocked by her shield as she thrust the sword forward, driving her entire body into the blow that penetrated his eye socket and drove the creature to the ground. Finally….Finally….the fight was over. Estaria collapsed for a few moments, and then hit the yes button when the button came up to leave the dungeon.

    Dungeon finished, 25000+6000 gold. Greater Potion of Experience earned. Exitting in 10 seconds.

    She laid there for ten seconds before she was back in the camp. Her wounds gone and the cold feeling subsidized, but the bone-deep weariness did not. Ignoring whatever else might be happening, Estaria dragged herself to the tent and collapsed to the sound of a new box.

    You have leveled up

  16. #36

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    Estaria woke groggily in the morning, and went out to see how things were getting on. The shoddy barricade had gone and was now in the process of being replaced by a proper gate, with the materials that the relief force had brought in. No sudden attack in the night, and nothing going horribly wrong. Which was very good, so Estaria leant against a pole and opened the screen to pop her newest trait down. Scrolling through, one Captain Trait looked good, so she opened it up.


    Your fight is with me! - Instantly taunt any enemy to fight with you, ignoring any other target between you. Debuff surrounding troops if you lose or run


    That was bought. Very good skill for pulling in the enemy commander and getting an intimate one on one with him. Just had to make sure that she could beat him and didn’t have to run away from him. That would be bad. Guys didn’t need debuffs more than being humans already did for them. Next, she opened her inventory and stared at the A-rank dungeon key. The last dungeon was a mess, and she wasn’t eager to have a repeat performance or worse in a hostile territory like Drakwald. Maybe when they got back to Altdorf.


    And speaking if, it was time to get her guys moving on back there. Didn’t want to be proclaimed dead or anything crazy like that. Putting on her gear, Estaria headed out, and first saw a few men gathered around a wagon. At first she thought it was the supply wagon from the way they were all crowded, but it turned out to be the wagon carrying the building supplies. What led everyone to crowd it was revealed when she got closer and saw people trying to lift it, and not doing so well since it was a large, ladened wagon.


    “What’s going on?” Estaria asked, looking over at the apparent situation.
    “Ahh, Captain. We’ve got sommat stuck in the wheel. Guys trying to lift the cart and get it out but so far it’s not going to well. ‘Eavy laden cart, ya know?” the man replied. Estaria looked it over, and then nodded, grasping the cart and hefting it up. The weight was nothing compared to her strength stat, and it was hoisted off the ground, giving the man plenty of time to free the wheel before she put it down.
    “Nice lift Captain! Gotta share your secret with me” a man exclaimed. Laughter and repeated accolades followed, and then the men dispersed. Going to find Borrago to get everyone ready to leave, she suddenly stopped in her tracks and looked back at the wagon. It might have been normal for her, but the others should have definitely said something about her lifting some six hundred pounds off the ground by herself. But...apparently no. Did it just not occur to anyone? Or was there more to it than that?


    Estaria thought for a moment, and then just shook her head. This wasn’t going to get her anywhere. Maybe later she could go talk to a scholar or Wizard in Altdorf about it, if she ever could start that conversation...How would she start that? ‘Hello, a floating set of boxes that control reality are giving me superpowers. Care to explain?’. That really wouldn’t go down well at all. Insane asylum at best. And that would really cripple her career...Although the jackets that were used to restrain the patients were kind of cute. She’d keep it around as a possibility if all this soldiering fell through, and went off to go see Borrago. With him, she gathered her men and proceeded to make the journey back to Altdorf. Fortunately, nothing else happened along the way, they made good time out of the forest, not meeting anything more than small packets of Beastmen. The Drakwald Patrol had kicked up three times as much in the face of the oncoming Chaos Horde, and so the road home was finally over. Altdorf loomed in front of them. Beautiful, beautiful Altdorf. Never would she have thought those walls would have produced such relief in her.


    Letting her men go to the barracks or their families - and claiming to shoulder any flak they got for that order - Estaria wanted to retreat to her little hovel and just enjoy not being in a life-threatening situation for a few days, but she had duties to get to - she went to go report to her commanding officer, and deliver the letter as well. She found the Major in his office, and entered after knocking and being told to come in.
    “Ahh, Estaria! We were expecting you back days ago. How was it?” the Major asked. She’d never really got his name, he was always just “Major” to her.


    “We arrived in time to repel the attack, Major. But we have suffered several battles on this outing. First we were hit by an outrider horde in a hamlet, and then after the siege itself, we took the Drakwald road and came across a fort currently under attack. After that, we were pitted with multiple minor skirmishes on the way home, resulting in considerable loss of life. The ultimate objective, however, has been achieved perfectly. The Count of Middenhiem has sent this letter with my regiment to ‘Those in Altdorf’.” Estaria withdrew the letter from her inventory - subtle like so it seemed like she was getting it out of her pocket - and handed it to the Major. He was high enough of a rank or just self-absorbed enough to open it and read the contents. Then he closed it again and nodded.


    “Good. Excluding any emergency deployment, you and your regiment has the fortnight off to rest and recover. We will refill your ranks while you are on leave, and then you will be in charge of training them up to scratch for any future deployments. You are dismissed” The Major gave a nod, and then got back to his paperwork. Estaria was glad for Captaincy, she didn’t want to go any higher though, it seemed a hell of paper and red tape. Still, couldn’t argue at two weeks off. Probably more to drum up recruits, arm and basic boot camp the sods than to actually rest the men. A few screaming brats in nine months would be testament to how tired her men were coming home. Giving him a salute, Estaria left his office, and went home.


    Once there, a hovel of a thing that she shared with another - she had splashed out on better gear with her pay, but would probably get new accomodations soon - she stripped out of all her clothes and quickly got into the bath. Her roomate worked as a blacksmith during the day, so little chance of him appearing. After laying there for an unspecified amount of time, soaking in the water, she returned to her senses and looking over her body. Her abdominal muscles were rippling, and her arms muscular. She couldn’t remember if this was some subtle progression or if she had popped into this overnight or some other strange third thing. Not that she was complaining, a set of abs like this were always good on a girl.


    Estaria opened her inventory to lazily browse while soaking, and saw she had a few of those potions put away. She forgot to finish them off in all the catastrophe she had since then and now. No matter, she was now in a prime position to do just that, so she fished them out and took all four of them. Together, they were just enough to push her over the edge. The stat page, was looking very healthy indeed, these days. She could open it up and get a broad relay of what she had, which was lovely.


    Strength: 53 (72)
    Stamina: 60
    Constitution: 49 (69)
    Dexterity: 76
    Agility: 66
    Precision: 70
    Intelligence: 32
    Wisdom: 32
    Luck: 32


    Gold: 69134


    Powder Matriarch: Black Powder is your Blood. While you may lack academic understanding, your practical knowhow rivals an Engineer, and even the most unruly of firearms bow to you. 70% increase to range, 50% increase to damage. Imprecise is removed
    Decorated Veteran: Well known, and well respected, your name is toasted to by many. Increase the rewards of Tokens, Medals and Medallions by 1.
    Swordswoman: Learning the way of the sword is hard, but with practice, one can be a venerable cause on the field. Grants subtargetting for melee weaponry.
    Celerity: Swifter than most, you run with the grace of ten men and the speed of five. Add +20 to agility for the sake of movement speed.
    Quick-Load: In the blink of an eye, you are ready to fire again. Spend Cool to instantly reload your firearm with a flourish.
    Your fight is with me! - Instantly taunt any enemy to fight with you, ignoring any other target between you. -20 stats to surrounding troops if you lose or run
    For The Empire!: A steely shout to light a fire in the hearts of your men! +10 to all stats (Excluding yourself) to anyone who can hear your shout.Captain’s Shadow: Snap of a Captain’s finger, and the target falls. Designate a target to be hit with a Hotchland Long Rifle bullet. Usable every 10 minutes
    Captain’s Half-Dozen Halflings: Sneaky little half-men with large sacks, loot all enemies at the end of every fight, regardless of the fight.


    50 Stamina: Furious Zeal - Stats are reduced by 65% at 100% fatigue rather than immediate unconsciousness.
    50 Dexterity: Second Slice - The blade is like flowing water, always moving from one spot to the next with incredible grace. Spend Cool to make a second melee attack immediately after the first.
    50 Agility: Weight-Spread: Your weight counts ¼ of it’s actual number for the sake of unstable footholds.
    50 Precision: Advanced Sub-Targetting unlocked. Groin, Eye, Hands, Feet (arrow/knife/bolt only)
    50 strength: Overwhelming - A mighty blow can fell a hardy foe in one swing! Damage that causes a Critical Wound now spills over (but does not create a second Critical Wound)
    Groin: Deals high damage and stuns the enemy when hit. Destroying the Groin causes stun bypassing Resistance.
    Eye: Very difficult shot, but deals immense damage. Destroying the Eye causes instant death or Critical Wound
    Hands: Hitting the Hands will immediately disarm the foe. Destroying the Hands will cause the destroyed hand to be unable to be used.
    Feet(Arrow/Knife/Bolt only): Hitting the Foot immediately stops a person’s movement. Destroying the foot cuts movement speed by one quarter.


    There was a new one. One she hadn’t seen before. From this, she could surmise she got a trait at 50 of every stat. Whenever she got to 50 stamina, she must have just missed the box telling her about it. Gold was nice and healthy, so she opened the shop and bought the 50,000 gold head-sized chunk of Gromril. It was a hefty metal, and pure Gromril at that. The beauty she could make out of that. Or, give it to a Dwarf, make a friend for life...She wasn’t feeling the wisdom or intelligence though. Maybe they were dud stats? Meant to be used on Magic and so without magic, she didn’t really get anything out of them? Entirely possible.


    With stats checked, money spent and xp potions drunk, Estaria bathed and then when that was done, got out and dried herself off. Clothes were nothing fancy, but she certainly wasn’t getting back into her army gear. Besides, she wanted something that’d show off these abs. Staring down at them with a dopey grin, she still wasn’t over the fact that they were there. Totally caught up on her own body, she heard nothing, until;


    “Umgi? Where did you get those muscles?” came the rough voice from the door. Estaria looked up to see her dwarven room-mate standing there, staring at her.
    “Dawi..you are meant to be at work!” She exclaimed, dashing to the bed and pulling the sheets from it to wrap herself in.
    “Boss has closed up for a week, he’s joining an expedition. I came home to get my gear because I am also joining him. And, you were there. Naked” Dawi had a stunned voice, staring more at the place where Estaria was than the woman herself.
    “I got a bath. Didn’t, think you’d be home…” Estaria replied, her face flushed as she scooted over to the wardrobe and pulled some clothes from it. “S-so, this expedition” the prompt was to stop Dawi from looking at her while she dressed, and yet not have an awkward silence. It worked well enough, as he started to talk.
    “Aye, there is talk of a new mining operation being built in the caves west of Black Water. It’s not quite the cursed Khark itself, but still saw heavy opposition, with equally lucrative amounts of Gromril. We got word of it, and the city is abuzz. The Dawi want all the hands they can get, so even Umgi mercenaries are in on this. It’s a big thing, and while a lot of mercenaries are already attached to Altdorf and other cities because of the invasion, there are still plenty of hands”


    Dawi finished explaining by the time Estaria was dressed in her nice dress. It was far from nobility, but she liked it, and it was also clearly not peasantry.
    “Problem being, you gotta buy into the expedition and then you get a cut of any rewards found. Bigger buy in, the larger the cut. So we got a lot of merchants in the expedition, but not actually in the expedition. And enough cuts have been given out that nobody else is getting rich” He looked up at Estaria, and shrugged. “Still, all the Dawi in the slums are joining, pretty much. The cut isn’t as important as helping our kin. Though the money would be welcome. They are buying in as cheaply as a pint of ale, to get up there. The hope is that they will impress someone and get into one of the Throngs” He finished, and then with Estaria dressed, went about getting his gear.


    Ancient axe and well-worn crossbow, a shield and some leather, he didn’t have much in the way of gear, but he had guts and spirit like most Dawi.
    “Well then, let’s go get in this expedition then. Being on leave would just have bored me anyway” Estaria gave a broad, confident grin, and Dawi led the way. While he did, he grumbled about what he was going to use as the buy in and how much he was going to buy in for. If he wanted to get a big buy and risk it, or little buy and just be present. If there was going to be any good Throngs up in the mountians, if he was going to meet anyone proper. Essentially, like the average dwarf, he grumbled about everything there was to grumble about.

  17. #37

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    Arrival, buy-in - which surprised Dawi, to have Estaria just pull out two barrels of Bugmans - and then eventually taking off. All of which was nice, simple, and streamlined. Arriving at the foothills where the dwarves and humans had gathered - even one or two Ogres, which meant the mercenary job was widely advertised - Estaria settled in and got a tent up. It was a massive, sprawling camp of a dozen different companies and dwarven throngs. It was more like an army than an expedition. This was no sneak in and grab before the enemy came. This was far more sit there and hunker down, reclaim the Karak, become legendary warriors. Gain a new Gromril mine. A noble endeavor, and maybe the Dwarves would be driven enough to clash with the Greenskins and keep them out of the Empire.


    While wandering, Estaria caught the rough, harsh language of the dwarves, and while she couldn’t understand it, the tone made it’s grumbling pretty clear. Spending some experience to gain fluency in the Dwarf Tongue so she could understand it, Estaria went looking for the man and found him, sat alone. But she was caught off guard by the readout hovering above his head.
    Traukon Brightbelly - Level 29 Ironbreaker


    Player Interaction - Interacting with other players can be done in many different forms. Open the “Interaction Screen” to see what can be done.


    Estaria couldn’t even move, because she was shocked to find this place had other players. Sure, it was kind of hubris to think that there was only her given this massive superpower in the world, but she didn’t think that there would be other people this close. She expected them to be exotic Lustirans or mighty Chaos Lords. This guy was a dwarf. A really overt dwarf, given the bulky armour and large axe, but still not quite what she thought other players would be. But then, she was just your average human with a special sword, so there was always that.


    “What’cha staring at, Umgi?” Traukon asked, his eyes flicking up for a moment and then returning to his dinner.
    “Ohh. I’m, just, it’s-” she stammered, and that was not something that he was enthusiastic about hearing.
    “You never seen a true-blooded Dawi?” he looked up properly this time, and then paused, and made a sound. “Ohh…”
    “My thoughts exactly. I never thought I’d see another player. I never knew there was another player in the system to meet” Elou said, moving over to him and taking a seat next to him.
    “Mmm….ever thought that strange? The, fact that you call it a system, and yourself, a player?” Traukon asked, finishing his food and looking up. Estaria opened her mouth to speak, and then paused, and frowned. Thinking on that one.
    “No. Until you pointed it out” She muttered, now being irate at the fact that it hadn’t bothered her.
    “The same here. Me thinking it was never a problem, but you saying it sounded strange and wrong” Traukon shook his head, grabbing his ale and drinking deep. “Although this system is a great boon. I am stronger than any dwarf, as robust as the mountains, and wield my axes like lightning. Down in the tunnels, I cut a bloody swath through the foe, and now I stand ready to reclaim a Karak! New tunnels to explore, new foe to bring low-”
    “If we succeed” Estaria cut in. “There is a reason why most expeditions that way have been small and quick” she pointed out.
    “Ack! Just like an Umgi! You share the boon, and your level is such that you are sufficient to have surpassed any Umgi, and yet you still doubt” the ale was finished and he rose to find more.


    “Mmm, I’ve just met enough foes to know it never goes smoothly” she then got off the morosesubject, and grinned “But this does. I got some Bugman’s from the shop. Middenheim was besieged and so I got a massive windfall, and bought cool stuff” she told him, the dwarf grinned, clearly having had his own supply of it, but never one to pass up free ale!


    “So, have you ever had other people not really notice the extreme capacity of your actions? I lifted this six-hundred pound wagon and they just looked at me like it was a normal thing” Estaria asked, curious.
    “Aye...at one point I tossed an axe some hundred paces into a Goblin’s skull. An impossible throw, something that should have raised incredible ruckus. But, it didn’t. My brothers saw it, and then returned to their post because that was the last” he told Estaria, shaking his head. The conversation then turned to other things, and Estaria made a new friend over a pint, culminating in exploring each other’s status screen. A Hidden trait that one couldn’t see themselves popped up, and each was told their own. Traukon had Son Of Stone which gave him reduced negatives for Critical Wounds and Fatigue, where as Estaria had Human Ingenuity which gave her a bonus to EXP gain. Which, made Traukon’s higher level even more alarming. HE must have gotten into a fight every day since the system dropped to get that level.


    Still, eventually Estaria was drawn over to a Dwarven merchant who had set up shop on the outskirts. Apparently, selling goods and trade for money was not the most well-received of Dwarven exploits, and Traukon left her to return to his Ironbreaker brothers. Estaria didn’t have much in the way of money, but found this a great time to learn the exchange rate. Double-tapping the coin counter on the inventory, she converted ten coins to Thrones, just to see. And out came a hefty bag, that once counted out, had a hundred thrones in it. 1:10 exchange rate….While this would make it hard to use real world wealth to fortify her game currency, it would allow her to do practically anything she desired in the world. Armed with this new, near-infinite wealth, she headed to the stand, and talked. He had followed the mercenary armies up from Altdorf and made a venerable fortune on their equipment, which he would take home with him. Unlike Dawi, this one was no warrior, which he did not see as a huge problem since his family had lived in Altdorf for hundreds of years, and they were small Empire citizens now, not Karak dwellers.


    This did not stop them from being exceptional craftsman then, and Estaria put in her pistols, shield and armour for some rework and repair. After a little bit of thought, the sword also went. Barter price went to 90 Thrones, which she paid and then a tip for express. With that all done, she found her tent - going to the Quartermaster when she realized she was out all of her equipment, and getting loans - she then opened up her inventory and used a B-rank DUngeon key. She was going to get some money and xp grinding in a dungeon, and not targeting the boss because she got trashed last time.


    This time, there were no Beastmen, but instead Greenskins. A large and rambling camp of goblins and orcs, expanding quite a distance. She couldn’t see the center of the camp from where she was, but she was sure the Warboss was there. She wanted to know where to avoid, but she could always run away or leave the dungeon if it came to that. She wasn’t planning to stick around for completion after all. Darting in, she used her speed and strength to drive the blade through an Orc’s back and then tear him in half, before dispatching the group of goblins he was harassing with her shield, and some kicks. Goblin punting was surprisingly fun, as it turned out, and she could aim them pretty precisely to use them as projectiles. These were slave goblins more than warrior goblins, so she went through them easily, and a punted goblin smacked on the back of a feasting Orc, which then turned and upon seeing Estaria, roared.


    The hulking mass then charged at her while the rest of the Orc gathered themselves to charge with him. Having learned from the Minotaur, Estaria leapt over the Orc, spinning and slicing her blade into his helmet. But, such a simple blade could not pierce an Orc’s helmet and skull with a single swing, so she merely cut his head and then deflected the second orc’s axe. It was a strong blow, but her stats these days were high enough to take it with little problem. Estaria took her blade to the next Orc and crashed it against his breastplate, only to have the damn thing crack and split in half.


    She let out a surprised yelp and got smashed to the ground by another Orc for her troubles, rolling quickly to recover and discarding the hilt of the broken blade. Her Blade Of Ulric was something of great durability and strength, but simple mould-forged broadsword was not going to help her in this kind of fight, with her kind of strength. So she grabbed the axe from one of the fallen Orcs and got a little ping off to the side, telling her there was a new tutorial note. Something for later that.


    Now facing off against all these creatures, she noticed there was no Luck bar. All Orcs counted as Monsters, and so had a lot of health and no Luck. Which, was interesting, so she could just get stuck in with this all-too-heavy axe and start butchering. It broke eventually, but she simply replaced it with another fallen weapon and turned the Orcs into mince meat. The Dungeon kept enforced creature zones, so no Orc moved from their zone to where she was, leaving her to kill with impunity. After they were all dead, Estaria looked up the Tutorial and saw it was about Racials. Weapons she lacked any Racial Proficiency in would have reduced damage and durability, which explained why they broke as quickly as they did.


    She would need to be careful, and keep a bunch of weapons around so she didn’t end up breaking and running out. Still, even the B-rank orcs were not a huge problem so long as she stayed out of the large zone, with the Trolls and Black Orcs. So she went about it, catching some rests between killing, and after a few hours, she left the Dungeon. No gold reward and half loot, but that still netted her a tidy five grand and two level-ups, which was nice. Took her a long time to get those levels, but she was grinding mooks...so it was all swings and roundabouts, really. She’d get her next trait at 27 tomorrow, since they were waiting here for three days for everyone to turn up, and then join in this expedition with great confidence. Things really were looking up for her.

  18. #38

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    The intention in the morning, was to go run another dungeon. She felt it kind of fun to mow down hordes of Orcs, and while her stats weren’t quite high enough for thirty of them to be like chaff, she could still do it. Mostly by staying out of the big boys circle and avoiding anything big, but still. However, went she went to go get her gear and see if that made any difference, she was accosted by a Dwarf with a large beard and strange regalia.
    “Your sword. How much will you sell it for?” he demanded, getting right to the crux of the matter. At first, she thought she’d asked buying price, at 500,000 Thrones. But, then she thought for a moment. There was no guarantee that Orange-rank equipment could be bought again.
    “Excuse me, for a second” she said, In Khazalid, just to confuse him. Turning from him and opening the inventory - it seemed others didn’t really question the gesticulating that using the system caused, like they didn’t question you lifting 800lb or running a mile in less than a minute - and got to the store. There, she scrolled down, and saw Sword Of Ulric - Sold Out. Which...made things a huge risk. Sold out because she had one and it was a one at a time thing, or sold out because it was sold out? If she sold that weapon she’d be out a blade she loved, and didn’t have the capital to buy anything that was in the same vein. Plus, 500,000 Thrones didn’t come out of your back pocket, so she’d not have it for a while.

    “Sorry, It’s an ancient family heirloom. I can’t sell it to anyone. Dishonour to my ancestors, and all. Why, are you so enthusiastic about buying it?” Estaria asked, giving the Dwarf a smile and hopefully placading him. Whatever it was about her sword, it was pressing enough that her Khazalid - which was a Big ing Deal - wasn’t even mentioned.
    “It has Runes. Lost Runes. Regaining the knowledge of even one of them would be a greater achievement than this expedition. I need the sword so my Master can catalog every rune etched into it, and relearn the Lost Runes” The Dwarf had an almost frantic tone of voice, which didn’t suit a Dwarf at all.
    “Well, I am sure I can hang around your Karak for a week or two while you do your work. I mean, exploring a Dwarven Karak? That’s worth more than a million Thrones” she grinned, and then walked up to the merchant’s stall. “But after. The blade is irreplaceable, and I don’t want to die because I let you look over it” she told him. The Dwarf took in her words, and then nodded and headed off, probably to go tell his Master.

    “I don’t know about no Runes, but I dealt with the sword’s physical body. It is very sturdy, and holds an edge better than anything I have seen. But there is a difference between holding an edge and being sharp, so I sharpened it for you. The rest gave a bit of Dwarven love to it, should work better on the field now” the merchant told her. It was quite amazing that he got this all done in one night, but the amount she was paying to get it done then probably had him up all night. The equipment went on, and Estaria nodded.
    “Thanks. See you after the fight, when we are all rich” she gave him a wink - knowing who to talk to properly and who to bolster, as any good Captain did - and headed off back to her tent. There, she got a new key, and entered the B-rank dungeon again. From here, she engaged herself a new set of Orcs with her new sword.

    The difference was incredible and immediately obvious. She split the Orc from shoulder to hip with one blow, and it made her laugh. Further slaughter of the Orcs rose the laughter to a surprisingly disturbing degree. She had a theory that this game system was messing with her head to make sure her head didn’t go quite so insane from everything she was doing. But that didn’t mean she couldn’t feel some emotional extremes. Like the beastman camp, she went through the Orcs like a bloody whirlwind. It felt glorious, it felt empowering, it felt….surprisingly hard actually. Like, physically, her sword had just hit something really hard. Looking up, there was a massive, Black-clad Orc staring down at her. Black Orc Bigg’un…..she’d entered the inner circle. , her head had gone again. The blade of his axe took a chunk of her Luck and she got out of his range, killing the two Orcs that came at her as she did so.

    “I really need to stop doing that. One day I’m going to come face to face with a damned Dragon. And who’ll be laughing then?” Estaria muttered, her blade going up in the air and a pair of pistols being drawn. Sub-targetting aimed both bullets into the Orc’s eyes, and then he was dead, the pistols were away, and she caught the sword. Taking a deep breath, she saw the rest of the Orcs were coming, but wasn’t so sure she was in the mood for a fight with rankers like this. Still, desire overcame logic, and with a raised blade she rushed into the horde.

    Not exactly the worst idea she had, after cleaning up the horde and taking a break on one of the bodies. The sword gave her a strong advantage, and her armour plus the shield were better than they were, but she still wasn’t good enough to take this many enemies and not get health damage. Though, with one of these Black Orcs being a match for a human Greatsword, and she took 20% health damage, it was actually damn good going.
    “Bloody superhuman is what” she muttered, shaking her head. Was she going to lose herself? Grow apart from normal humans now she was strong as a Troll, fast as a horse and as durable as a rockface? Would she grow as Chaos does, as Orcs do? Seeing humans as frail, feeble things that are inferior to her? Ahh, more killing would get rid of this mindset. While the boss of last time was enough to keep her away this time, the inner circle needed cleaning up a bit, and her blade was thirsty.
    “Best get to it then”

  19. #39

    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    You have leveled up
    You have leveled up
    You have leveled up

    You gained 10,500 gold
    You gained Troll Meat

    The inner circle really was worth the effort, it seemed. The Troll she had thought was surprisingly less trouble than she had expected, but then it was just your ordinary Troll. If the boss room was anything like the beastman Boss-room, he would have a Stone Troll or River Troll or possibly even a Chaos Troll - though she doubted that last one. Big Guy that nearly killed her was a young Doombull, after all. Far from an ordinary Minotaur as a Knight was from a peasant. Though not matured and at the bottom rung of his power, he was still a force to be reckoned with. And so too would be a Stone Troll. Creatures that were strong enough to take cannon fire without splitting apart as normal things did. Would her sword break such a thing’s hide? Though she had no desire for it to be a River Troll and get vomited on either. Instead of thinking about that, she went to go find her friend Borrago. She had seen his unmistakable appearance and decided he had come along for some extra cash as much as she had for the fun of it and the exp.

    “Hey big guy! Do you have any recipes for Troll?” She asked, grinning to herself.
    “Captain! I didn’t see you around! But, yes, I do indeed! Come over to the cook-pot” he waved her over, and she brought out her Troll, which went into the pot along with several other things that Estaria mentally marked down. She wanted to be able to replicate this, if Troll was going to be a constant enemy.
    “They say Troll Meat is good for you, because you can absorb their regenerative capabilities if you eat a lot of it. Trouble is, nobody has killed and eaten enough Troll to find out!” Borrago then broke into laughter, which was infectious and pervasive. He was a jolly guy, and probably would remain jolly in the jaws of a Dragon he no doubt intended to eat.
    “I’ll settle for tasting nice. Marching rations leave a lot to be desired” she replied, the pot getting a lot of people gathering around it, so Estaria had Troll Stew in the company of many, while Borrago told another tale of his exploits. This, was about the time he broke into a camp with his men to rescue a lost patrol, and after the fighting they found female Beastmen. Surprisingly gentle creatures, they were shy and fled as soon as they had an opening, not a single attempt or even the hint of an attempt at attacking was made. And despite many more treks, he had never seen them again, leading him to wonder if they had been some sort of strange Ungor. Certainly, if the Beastmen had their own women, they wouldn’t have to kidnap so many humans.

    After Borrago finished, people continued to swap stories, and Estaria, just listened, hearing the whole session go from past exploits to boasting to competitive boasting. Who could wrap the biggest lie in the skeen of the truth so that others would believe him? It passed the time excellently, and night fell with no delay. Day followed, and camp was packed up, the Throng and the mercenaries all heading out as to Karak Varn. The Dwarves were full of stories, of tales and expliots. Of Kadrin Redmane and his glorious last stand, of the great Rune Hammer that sits in the depths of the Blackwater, and of the beasts that also lurk there. The talks grew, and Dwarves began a debate of Dwarven culture that the humans were left in the dark about, but followed for the nature of something to do. The march was without incident, and the arrival was met with hallowed silence. Prospectors immediately lined the shores and panned for anything that had been washed up, Warriors gathered with the Quarellers to protect them, and the Mercenaries were split into groups and sent off to different parts of the mountain. While the Dwarves would handle setting up a defensive fort with which to range out from and slowly remove the threat of the enemy from Karak Varn, the Mercenaries were being sent to ensure that any reinforcements from other parts of the mountain or the Underway were stalled so that construction could go unmolested.

    The Dawi had little faith in the steel of the Mercenaries, both mentally and physically, but they decided to let the humans take the brunt of any incoming attacks, and so got to work with ordered discipline that could be hard for any human army to match, splitting into the Fort group, the Mountain Group - which rushed away into the rocky depths to slay any enemy they could find - and the reserve group, that would watch the Umgi and shore up the inevitable cracks. Estaria and her group got the largest gap, a venerable pathway into the Underway. Staring down into that yawning abyss wasn’t the best, and so Estaria decided to see what new trait she could get to ease the tension. While looking there, she saw a new ability for 50 Constitution.

    50 Constitution: Sturdy Skin - gain 10% Armour that stacks with worn armour.

    Would, probably explain why she did so well against the Orcs, health-wise. And to further improve the day, a collection of traits were shown. Each one called “Captain’s Retinue”, it seemed to summon a dozen men with specific weaponry. Swords, spears, Crossbows, Handguns, Axes. Right now, the one most required was the Handgunners, so she picked that one.

    Captain’s Retinue (Handgunners) - Spawn a dozen units for 5 minutes, with 30 minute cooldown

    Added to the list of traits, Estaria felt better about what they were doing, which was good because a new pop-up came.

    Defence Mission - Hold The Line against waves of attackers with limited reinforcements. Rewards increase with every three waves repelled. (This mission allows for three sets of Dwarf reinforcements, but each set reduces rewards by 15%)

    So that was how it was. Stay here, kill the enemy, try not to call the dwarves. They were rules she could live by. For other people…..well, the great WAARRGHHH!!! That came from the Underway set a kernel of fear in other’s hearts, so she summoned her handgunners and rose her own sword in preperation.

    “For The Empire!”

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    Default Re: Hammer (Warhammer Fanfic, 15531 words)

    The Greenskins came rushing out of the hole, and a cracking boom of handguns raked their frontline. Her dozen men along with three dozen mercenaries delivered a powerful first strike, the Precision boon that she had given them allowed them to hit more soundly than they would have, and as a result, the first wave was reduced to nothing in a pair of volleys. Estaria had dropped a few hundred spare Nuln-forged bullets into the Mercenaries ammo barrel earlier - they were like droplets of rain to her these days - and so they had ammo for several volleys. And that was exactly what they needed, as she got a pop-up.

    Wave 1 completed. Commencing Wave 2 in 60 seconds

    The wait time was skipped after the handgunners had reloaded, because she didn’t want to run down the clock and lose her men. This next rush held the same Boyz, but in a larger number, and some with shields. The whittling volleys managed to reduce them in number, but there was some skirmish on the front-line with a few surviving Orcs. Waves 3 and 4 went the same way, though more and more Orcs were reaching the frontline. On Wave 5 - designated the Boss Wave - a Boar-riding Biggun came out and Estaria cored his brain with her Hotchland shot. By Wave 6, most of the front line had been replaced with large, Black Orcs, who’s armour reflected the bullets and massive physique soaked any that managed to hit them. It was here that the butchering began. Close quarters in vicious numbers, Estaria brought her sword to many of them, and with a surprising zeal, she was joined by the mercenaries. Men fell to Orc axes, Orcs fell to Human blades, and the bodies mounted up on both sides with alarming speed. In front of them was a minefield of Orc and Human, leading for some treasonous footing that more than one Orc tripped on as he charged the human line.

    By Wave 10, the human line was flagging. Tired, wounded, and thin, it stood against a second Boss Wave, where a Biggun and his Trolls charged the line. This was not going to go well, but Estaria whipped out her pistols and took down the Biggun in a hail of gunfire, before rushing to get stuck into the Trolls.A few Handgunners had managed to survive, and were taking pot-shots, but most were dead or wounded. Summoning her men again, and using the Hotchland strike, Estaria pulled out all the stops and used all her skills to push back the Trolls. It was rough work, and not work she escaped from unscathed. Even with her stamina, the Fatigue bar was encroaching 60% and she was on her Health, luck having been depleted a while back. But with zeal and fury, she managed to push back the last Troll, drive her sword into his skull, and then lean on it. There was no way she’d hold Wave 11. Maybe she should call the Dwarves, and damn the rewards?

    Congratulations - you have completed the Defence Mission

    A much welcome pop-up was seen after the last troll was down, but she really wished it would be more clear. There was no indication that there was only ten waves to do. Still, no use crying over spilled milk, aye? A Dwarf detachment appeared to tell her what she already knew - that it was time to pull back - and Estaria nodded. Gotta get the people that were wounded back to the camp, the dead into the ground, and then talk to the Dwarves some more. There was no chance she was passing up this opportunity to obtain some serious, honest-to-Sigmar Dwarven Equipment. Plus, the head-sized chunk of Gromril might make a few of the Dwarves happy.

    Captain’s Halflings have looted the battlefield You gained 25,000 gold pieces
    You gained 3x Troll Meat
    You have leveled up
    Experience limit reached. Please choose a Job to continue gaining experience

    Secondary job - at level 30, you can earn your secondary Job, giving you access to more traits and skills.

    Relationship with the Dwarves increased. Simple Dwarven craft is now accessible in the Shop

    You have earned a Red Job - Red Jobs are jobs that require certain standing in society. Unlike Orange jobs, they are not objectively superior to normal jobs, but can open doors to new places and equipment that is otherwise difficult to possess.

    Estaria got inundated with a host of windows after the defense mission. Reading them and then shutting them down, she bashed it all to the side and helped out with the carrying of the people to the carts kept safely in the rear. Dead for one cart, injured for a second, and everyone was on their way back to the camp. What they saw there was a marvel of Dwarven engineering and robust work ethic. In but a few hours, they had dug in and made a sturdy redoubt that would be able to resist large-scale attacks, and were even starting on stone-work to make it a true Fortified Camp, walls and all. They truly were a magnificent race to be able to do this in such a short time. Pulling in the dead cart and informing the human Organizer of the reason behind it, Estaria headed out to find the Dwarven Commander of the Redoubt.

    “One of the Orcs was carrying this chunk of Rock. It looked like metal, so I was wondering if you could tell me what it is” she asked, pulling out the large chunk of Gromril. The Dwarf’s eyes went wide and he quickly took the rock and set it on the ground, beginning a series of tests before returning his gaze to Estaria.
    “This is Pure Gromril. Exactly what we came here looking for. How much do you want for it?” He asked Estaria, who just waved her hand.
    “It’s just a rock to me. So you keep it, make something nice.” she said told him. The poor Dwarf’s eyes were about to pop out of his head when he heard that, and quickly it was picked up and taken to a small stone building with a heavy door, clearly some sort of Vault for the Gromril.

    Relationship with the Dwarves increased. Advanced Dwarven Craft is now accessible in the Shop

    Not like she’d be able to afford it right now though, her cash was a little on the slim side. But maybe she could rectify that with a show of skill around the Karak she was going to be lounging about for a while. As if thought summoned the Dwarf, with Traukon at his side, there was the one who tried to buy her sword. A “Level 30 Ironbeard” which reminded Estaria to check her own status later.
    “There is not much left for Mercenaries to do, outside of maybe guard duty and some manual labour. Neither of which is a fit job for someone of your standing” he exclaimed, before, with vigorous passion, she was bundled into a Dwarven cart that had brought the materials, and was heading back to the Dwarf’s Karak.
    “So, they seem to like you. What did you get up to?” Traukon asked, while he sat with Estaria in the back of the wagon.
    “I got a Relationship boost for succeeding in the Defence mission, possibly without calling any Dwarf reinforcements. And then a second one for giving a large chunk of Gromril to the overseer” Estaria explained. And well, Gromril was quite important because Traukon’s eyebrows rose.
    “The one from the shop?” he asked, to which Estaria nodded. “The 50,000 gold pieces one from the shop?” he emphasized, to which she nodded again. “You just gave away 50,000 gold pieces? How much did you even get from the siege?!” He demanded, leaning forward in his seat.
    “Just shy of 200 grand. There was thousands of Marauders, and 88 Chaos Warriors there. As well as monsters, and it strips ally as well as enemy ”

    Traukon sat back in his seat, and shook his head. It was preposterous that such a thing would happen.
    “Without the system, I probably would never have survived. But I did, and so got stupidly rich and blew a lot of it on stupid stuff. Like the Gromril. And less stupid stuff like my Sword that the guy in front has” She said, leaning back.
    “So Orange equipment has Runes? Lost Runes?” he asked. Gromril was one thing, but Lost Runes were entirely different.
    “I wouldn’t say for certain. It was 50,000, same as the Gromril, so I never bought a second. But I would say it is a good chance” she told him. Traukon looked thoughtful, and then started to mess with his system. Apparently others of the game could see when another was doing it.

    Taking this opportunity, Estaria opened her own and thought for a moment. She had a trait, and if she did her job first, she could unlock new job traits. But at the same time, being able to summon an entire regiment by herself would be fun….decisions, decisions. Eventually, she went with the Job first, and opened the list. The Red Job was at the top, and made Estaria just stare at it for many moments, until a bump in the road jolted her back into thought.

    Greatswordsman

    Why? She hadn’t done anything to earn that title. It was something reserved for those of the highest bravery. She felt bad even thinking about taking it, but take it she did, and added it to the list. Her job changed from Captain to “Empire Hero” which was too much flattery for her, so she just blushed and opened her traits. A lot of offensive traits, some defensive traits, and “To Me, My Brothers” trait, which summoned 4 Greatswordsmen to her. That was the one that she picked, 4 of the most valorous foot-soldiers in the Empire, armed with their Zweihander and armoured with Dwarf-forged Full Plate, they were a force to be reckoned with. And even 4 of them would be a grand boon to her. Dungeoneering with those would be made almost simple, doubly so because of her buff.

    Second Job Unlocked: Greatswordsman. Traits reduced to one every four levels.

    Ascension of Duty - Report to Altdorf

    New quest, which had no time limit on it, so she decided to just brush it to one side. Most probably due to her new Job, which she still found hard to believe she had. She was just a Handgunner….she wasn’t designed for all of this. So instead, she just bought herself a minor potion of Experience, and pushed the bar over the edge, to level 31. With that done, she leaned back and stared into space. Greatswordsman, chosen bodyguards of the Elector Count, most valued none-Noble soldiers in the Empire. From there, it was a half-step to a Knighthood, were one to carry on such valorous action...That would be something she couldn’t handle. Being Sir Zashira….

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