Re: [IBFD AAR] Saviours of Roma
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It's great to see an AAR set in the fifth century as the Western Roman Empire struggles for survival. I'm reading Adrian Golsworthy's book The Fall of the West: The Death of the Roman Superpower, I find this period fascinating.
You set the scene well, introducing us to Constantinus, proclaimed emperor by the remnants of the garrison in a remote province and fighting to restore Roman order in chaotic times. Your English is good and I enjoyed your report of the battle. (You don't need to screenshot the battle results; you can, if you want do.) I hope that Constans, son of Constantinus, will have more success than Maximus, son of Gerontius!