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    Default My love .

    This is my entry for the SCW 2017 .

    I am holding you tight and not letting go.
    For the air may carry you away before i know.


    You are my star,my light
    Without you there is no happy site.


    Your touch melts my heart
    Your smile i believe is a thing of art.


    When we first met,i dont remember.
    I believe was on a divine september.


    My life you made colourful.
    Our togetherness was wonderful.


    Bleak was the time, you left me alone for days.
    My only hope was remembering your lovely face.


    And so now we are together
    now and forever.


    Are you my girlfriend or Total war Rome
    Whoever you are,how will i let go?


    And to the reader i really from my heart say
    This is what happens when you play too much in May!
    100% mobile poster so pls forgive grammer

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    Alwyn's Avatar Frothy Goodness
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    Default Re: My love .

    Nicely done and congratulations on your Librarian's Choice award for the Scriptorium Writing Competition!

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    Default Re: My love .

    Thanks so much my man .
    100% mobile poster so pls forgive grammer

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    NorseThing's Avatar Primicerius
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    Default Re: My love .

    I agree that this is a fine Librarian's choice. A great poem and a great shiny pinned to your figurative breast pocket.

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    Default Re: My love .

    Thanks man .Congratz to you too .

    and a great shiny pinned to your figurative breast pocket
    Now i just wish my 'other' shinies came back too .
    100% mobile poster so pls forgive grammer

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