Wish I had discovered this earlier! I just read through it all in one go - the bite-sized chapters make the effort fly by, and I think they add some good focus to each installment as well. You really show mastery of the art, in my opinion, as you present flavorful bits like the contemplations of the commanders or excerpts from the primary source records, without ever breaking the pace of your overarching gameplay narrative. I think AAR's are often best when they are light-hearted and relatable, like this one is!!
It seems like you might be just keeping a realistic set of expectations, as to the production value you want out of the tale. So you doubtless know already, but as my two cents, you could add a little bit more to the experience if you documented more of your gameplay, especially as it relates to your finances and your purchases. The do-or-die circumstances come through in your maps and in your prose, constituting a great hook for the reader, but I for one wish that I could be more involved in the strategic efforts you're making to keep the ship of state afloat, especially as you hint at an exciting backstory to this AAR when you went "from rags to riches" and back again, so to speak.