Re: (SSHIP-Pisa) Dreadbolt:Colorful Armies, V-4
I like the line about the 'finely crafted crossbows' at the end of your previous chapter. I guess that it is not a coincidence that this appears underneath the picture of the upgraded Assassins' Guild Headquarters. Considering what happened to Konig Wolfram and most of his guests, it sounds like Pisa's assassins are as reliably effective as her armies.
In your latest chapter, Michel de Milly's encounter with the crossbowmen on the battlefield is nicely done! The references to 'mass graves' and the 'extermination' of the population of Paris show how accustomed Pisa's armies are to indiscriminate brutality. I'm intrigued by the 'odd rumour' at the end.