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    Default Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle - "Under the Shadow of the Eagle' - By isa0005 (Last Updated: 2/11/2016 - Chapter Five On Hold!)


    Inspired by the acclaimed modifications for
    Napoleon Total War's

    'Le montee de l'Empire'
    and
    Mount and Blade Warband's

    'L'Aigle'

    TWC Award winning writer
    isa0005
    brings you...






    Chapter Index

    Author's Note
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    Character Index

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    Introduction

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    Chapter One
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    Chapter Two
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    Chapter Three
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    Chapter Four

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    Map of Paris
    (1792)
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    Chapter Five
    (On Hold)
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    JFC, August 13, 2010. 'Napoleonic Grandarmee Flag' ed. isa0005, September 28, 2015. URL
    <http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?335380-NAPOLEON-TOTAL-FLAGS-2-3-AND-EPIC-MUSIC/page20>

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    Bonjour mes amis! Before you begin reading my story, I would first like to introduce myself. My name is isa0005, I am from Australia and have been a member of the TWC since 2008. I am currently undertaking a Bachelor of Arts, majoring in English and History. I am not a writer by trade, however it is something I have always been passionate about and I often find it is one of the best ways to express the other love of my life, history! These things have of course culminated in many short stories, essays, poems and distant ideas, yet none I have felt have really been worth sharing here on these forums, until now! So, it is my great pleasure to present to you a true labor of love, my ongoing story, 'Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle' which roughly translates to 'Under the Shadow of the Eagle.'

    As you may have guessed it is set during the Napoleonic era, a period in history of which I admit, I am no expert. In fact, I would say that until I began writing this story, I had progressed only as far as Napoleon Total War had allowed. Inspired by the aforementioned game and its modification 'Le montee de l'Empire' and the the Mount and Blade Warband mod 'L'Aigle,' I conjured up this tale during the mid-year holiday, procrastinating as per usual as I avoided ever looming assessment deadlines. Unlike many other pieces of writing I have spent extended amounts of time on, with 'Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle' I have chosen to enter the world of historical fiction, my favored genres of fantasy and science fiction, feeling over used and not really suited to the TWC, a fact I have come to learn over the years of posting various tidbits.

    My characters however, are in fact renditions of older creations, de la Roche and Chauville having many incarnations, from dashing airship captains to bitter corporate investigators, over the years. While this is of course not my 'magnum opus' it is a piece I have truly enjoyed working on and continue to do so as I try to post as many chapters as I can, when real life isn't being a pain that is. It is my hope that in reading my story, whomever you may be, that you achieve a similar sense of joy as I have felt writing!

    Now, with all that out of the way I want to ensure that a few things are understood before you really get stuck into what I have posted so far.

    1. As an Australian, you may have guessed that French is not my mother tongue. With the nature and setting of this story however I find myself having to learn a few phrases where and when I can. Where I cannot however I am forced to utilize translation software, which I'm sure many of you know, is not as precise or as reliable as a real, deal Frenchman or woman. In this regard, if any of you readers do have a solid understanding of a the French language and see anything out of place, please do not be afraid to post suggestions for alternatives, or even PM me if you would prefer.

    2. If you don't like what I've written, there is no need to be nasty about it. As I am sure you all understand, we're all here to get feedback on our work, but we want positive and constructive feedback, not Negative Nancyness. If you don't have anything useful to post, I'd prefer you didn't post it... but hey, it's the internet so I guess you can do as you please, within the rules.

    3. If you notice any historical inaccuracies or related issues, please do not hesitate to tell me! If you can, provide me with some reading material that I can use and of course always give suggestions and helpful tips.


    - I'd also like to identify in this regard, that not everything is totally historically accurate as I am not always able to find the right sources of info or I feel that the history does not quite work with the story, in this case creative licence must be taken, I hope that this does not offend anyone and of course I will try to stick as close as I can to the history books


    4. Understand that I am a student, as such my time to work on this can by limited, as a result my posts may be few and far between, please respect this!

    5. I am my own editor, I can't spot all my grammatical, spelling and structure mistakes, so if you notice anything please! Please! Identify it and make a suggestion on how to fix it!

    6. If you like, as per usual rate, rep and subscribe!

    I hope you enjoy! Au revoir mes amis!

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    ...



    Name:
    ​Alexandre de La Roche

    Title:
    Comte de la Roche

    Moniker:
    La Roche

    Allegiance(s):
    Chauville
    The French Empire
    Himself

    Bio Info:

    Date of Birth:
    July, 27 1780 -Château de La Roche
    ...

    Family:

    Father:

    Henri de la Roche (Deceased) - Comte de la Roche (Former)

    Mother:

    Marie-Hélène Michon - Comtessa de la Roche

    Sibling(s):

    Angelique
    Cateline




    Name:

    Artemis Chauville

    Title:

    Capitain de Gendarmerie Impériale

    Moniker:

    Chauville

    Allegiance(s):
    Duc d’Otrante Joseph Fouché
    The French Empire
    Unknown

    Bio Info:
    Date of Birth:
    Unknown

    Family:

    Father:
    Unknown
    ​Mother:
    Unknown









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    Jean-Gerard de Brix, Lieutenant.
    Mordaunt le Clarique, Comte de la Fère.
    Joseph Fouché, the Duc d’Otrante and Minister of Police and Internal Affairs.
    Chrétien 'la Centenier' Aleramici, Marquess di Saluzo (Former).


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    (Alexandre de la Roche, 1809)

    ...


    The year is 1809 and from the ashes of its Revolutionary Wars France rises triumphant like a phoenix reborn.Upon its throne sits the Corsican born Napoleon I Bonaparte crowned as the Caesars of old in gilt laurel, garbed in Tyrian purple. Yet the fires of war continue to smolder at France’s borders, her Emperor marching to her defense at the head of Eagle born legions of musket and cannon. Across the frigid shores of the Danube marches the Oesterreich, invading France’s Italian allies under the shade of olive trees. Over the Pyrenees the English haunts her armies in a conflict of Spanish cloak and dagger. To the north, the Russian bear wakes from its deep winter slumber, the lockstep of Prussian jackboots following not far behind. Yet France's future is in flux and the life of her Emperor is threatened from a conspiracy hidden deep within her own walls.

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    My name is Alexandre de La Roche, I am, or rather was the heir to the great fortunes of the comte de la Roche, an old and noble family of Crusader stock. Serving the holy cross in subduing the lands of the Turk and conquering the throne of Constantinople, knights, barons, dukes and even kings populate the gnarled, woody branches of my dynasty tree... looking over the pages of old family records, I cannot help but wonder where on earth it all went so horribly wrong. I began my childhood delving through old tomes from Herodotus to Homer, my father, a career noble was at first impressed with my bookish nature, oh how his opinion would change. I learnt the classic histories and ancient mythologies studying the languages of the world as I gorged on the magic of poetry, music and the arts. I suffered under the strict hand of a steady christian tuition at the hands of hired holy men. It was the explored the world of the sciences however that truly caught my attention. Ever wary of priestly gaze of my watchful tutors I discovered mathematics, physics and geometry in secret. frequenting the family library under the cover of night as I searched for Copernicus, Kepler, or Galileo, Vesalius, Ptolemy or Paracelsus studying till the early hours of the morning.

    Those years were but a fleeting experience and somewhere along the way I became a man. The distinction between adulthood and the ‘inquisitive’ nature of adolescence lacked any distinct sensation. There was no ceremony or pomp nor right of passage, it was not instantaneous but a gradual experience. I did not become the man my father needed nor the son he wanted, nevertheless through a haze of maledictions of the skin, strange bodily changes and the discovery of women, I came of age, gripping the freedoms it offered like a vice.To my father’s displeasure I took to a life of liberality, despite my enrollment in military academia spending every coin my family gave me on women, drink, clothes. I whittled away my inheritance, squandered gifts and ruined my family’s high and noble reputation. My attendance at, Brienne-le-Château Military Academy was not without its lessons my keen obsessions with illegal dueling and gambling driving my skills with blade and shot to unparalleled heights. A career fighting for King and Country was not to be however.

    Mired in a life of poverty, debt and drunken debauchery I was disinherited, my only title a mere rake, a stain upon my family’s bloodline. I came to eek out a life of lies and deceit, scamming the elderly, romancing widows and draining the coffers of money lenders. I squeezed what coin I could from friends who knew no better and came to call the streets my home and the gutters my bed, then the revolution came.
    My gambling debts had driven my family into ruin, our assets lost. My father would die in the fighting, defending our family home in the Loire region, from rebellious peasants. Exiled to debtors prison I rotted for a year, what was left of the family gold either divided among my siblings, lost to debt collectors, or stolen. I would hear the last of my family the day the Bastille was stormed. My sisters escaped my shame, the twins marrying a pair of wealthy military men, the sons my father never had. Mother in tow, they escaped to the colonies of the New World and I never saw them again. In their wake, rebellion swept across the nation, social and political upheaval fanning the flames of war. Soon the country was embroiled in widespread civil conflict that seemed to last a century. The guillotine was King of the French and it would take the iron will of one man to restore the greatness of France







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    I remember drunkenly stumbling my way up the Rue de Rivoli, proudly butchering the ‘La Marseillaise.’ Passing by the gardens of the Palais des Tuileries and the Imperial Residence, I gained glimpses of life royal and the luxuries I had once lived among. Driving my singing to drunken sobs I barely remembered that I had spent my day frequenting the Palais-Royale. Visiting its numerous gambling salons I plied my trades of trickery and con-artistry on those easily fooled or amused by common parlor gags. Yet for all their wealth I had received very little of their bounty, the nobility of the Palais-Royale were miserly bunch. They reminded me of my father, holding onto every coin, even if it meant leaving their own sons out in the cold.

    My face was mostly unknown to the higher circles, my once lavish life taking me to less, genial parts of Paris. As such, I was merely looked over as a wandering entertainer or perhaps an equestrian of mercantile birth. Little did they know that my blood line was descended from Eastern Emperors and crusading conquerors of Athens and Thebes. The familial link in truth was tangible at best, yet my father had once insisted that I maintain it. The thought of being of such purple blood in truth was a thrilling thought, but one best kept to myself in this day and age.

    How I came to be wandering down the Rue de Rivoli I only vaguely remember. Somehow I had made it from the Rue de Richelieu, named for the former clergyman, noble, statesman and First Minister, Armand Jean du Plessis, Cardinal-Duke of Richelieu, to King Louis XIII. The shadow of its towering, classically-inspired apartments and tight, cobbled streets hung loosely in my mind, numerous hotels and storefronts an imprint from previous visits as my brain as it filled in the blanks. I had clearly managed to steer clear of traffic, avoiding wheel and hoof of cab and horsemen. I was neither accosted by press gangs or mobsters and all my effects were present and accounted for. As far as I could tell I was very much alive, albeit highly inebriated. Paris by night was a tricky affair, if you weren’t run down by the coming and going of its widespread transport system, one was likely to fall prey to pickpockets or muggers. If one escaped the ever present criminal element then in all likelihood one would wake up chained and heading for the Spanish front. My memory again is blank and somehow I found myself turned about as I made my way up the popular Rue des Lombards. Brief images of the great Place de la Concorde muddled with alleys and side streets as barely recalled my adventure. The vast empty square, death place of kings and queens was a haze, distant memories of a large scale brawl no more the echoes.

    The Rue des Lombards was known for its music clubs, cafes and wild nightlife. It was my kind of place and in truth I had spent many of my formative years, wining and dining with my fellow rogues. My inner history student adored the Rue des Lombards, its medieval architecture, so distinctly Italian, shone through the newer style of France’s previous king Louis XVI. Its age and more importantly its wealth called to me, instilling in me a sense of pride of my heritage and of my country. Italian bankers still made residence, alongside their subsidiary family businesses as dentists, booksellers, butchers, tailors, shoemakers, bakers and even the odd gunsmith here and there. Too drunk to be paying attention, my nose followed the smell of wine as I passed women and boys of the night.

    Sometime later I awoke upon the floor of some hotel, its patrons casually ignoring the foppish drunk before them. My head ached and as I rose, despite my affected vision, I gained a view of the place. The ceiling was high, made of vaulted stone, reminding me of a small chapel. The floors were timber and sparse of furniture, naught for a few rounded tables and chairs. There was a hearth, made of polished marble and above it, the visage of the Empress Joséphine. Behind me was the door and two windows each of which were barred and shuttered. To my left was the bar, its keeper watching me, his rugged, pock marked face staring with a raised eyebrow and a bitter sneer. My disheveled appearance left little to be desired and the stench of stale alcohol followed me wherever I went. Maids flittered about, filling quiet cups as a fiddler played what sounded like a soldier's ditty. The place was no Grand-Hôtel to be sure, but it was nice enough and no doubt the drink would be cheaper then any upper class establishment I tended to frequent.

    As I had gained my bearings I slowly approached the bar, ensuring that I maintained at least an air of decency about me. It would appear I had failed, the bartender being neither kind with his words nor helpful.

    “I’ll not serve ye t’night, sir” He said in what must have been some Occitan accent, perhaps of Gascony “I’ll not have no drunken antics in this here establishment, sir”

    “Could I not ask for but one cup of wine? Watered if it suits you?” The ache in my head worsened still

    “No” the barkeep responded flatly. I desperately required a drink and I brought it upon myself to avail this man of at least one cup of wine to send me off to sleep.

    “What of rooms then? I should like to rent a room for the evening what are you prices?”

    “Fifty for the room, twenty for a meal, fifteen for… other services” he nodded towards the bar maids… “pay now or pay later, whatever suits … as long as you pay”

    “Very well, I shall pay you seventy in full on the morrow… perhaps the smallest cup to send me off to the land of nod?” The bartender looked at me gruffly, up and down.
    “One cup. No more.”

    “One cup it is” I handed the man the correct change and sat down to what was more vinegar than wine, though it suited for the time being. Somehow, I had to pay the man how? Well I was not entirely sure. The coins I gave him were my last, at least until I could fleece another unsuspecting citizen mind you.

    As I sat in my state of inebriation I happened to catch a conversation passing between two gentlemen. They appeared of military stock, carrying an air of officers of the ‘Grande Armée.’ Although plain clothed, they sat stiff and rigid as they sipped their wine cups, their shoulders back and chests out. Their movements were practiced, precise and almost mechanical in manner, yet to the untrained eye they would have blended into what few patrons populated the place. I knew the type well and thought it best to steer clear, yet my curiosity had gotten the better of me and so I listened onward.

    “...have you heard the news?” Asked one, speaking in hushed tones. Despite his bearings, he was more disheveled them myself, his hair sat as though he had just awoke and his black riding coat was ruffled in a way that told me he had most likely slept in it. His face was tired, the deep bags under his eyes speaking volumes. I guessed that he had rode most of the previous night and much of the day, his sleep deprivation obvious.

    Military courier, must be I thought, through the haze and headache

    “No, what?” said the other, he was perhaps more sensibly dressed in a double breasted waist coat, pressed shirt and tight plain leather breeches.

    “The Emperor, Napoleon… Bonaparte has been defeated!” This quiet statement clearly bothered the speakers companion, how? I could not tell, his discomfort neither that of a distressed or excited man. “Yes, at Aspern-Essling correct? I had read the news from on the dispatches yesterday… I rode as quickly as I could to get the news back, could this be the moment we have been waiting for?”

    “Oh yes, of course! I heard the news a few days ago, No, I should think not, it would take far more than that to defeat Bonaparte outright”

    “Indeed… yes I suppose it would”

    “The man’s a military genius, there isn’t another individual in Europe that could beat him… besides you and I both know that there is little we can do until we hear from our brothers. Either way I heard that it was Masséna’s loss of the town of Aspern is what costed the Emperor. I suspect it will be the shortcomings of those under him that will bring about the demise of this Corsican tyrant”

    “Masséna you say? Here I thought the man was one of the greatest generals France has ever seen… next to the Corsican of course...” The pair suddenly ceased their conversation, their eyes drifting towards me. “Here now! it would seem we have a little spy in our midst” Said the well dressed man “Keep those ears and eyes to yourself if you know what's good for you, you sodden rat!”

    “My apologies sir, I did not mean to…”

    “Eavesdrop?” Said disheveled one, standing as he placed a hand upon the pommel of a drik hidden until now at his waist

    “No... I-i-i simply meant to say…”

    “That you’re a spy? Working for the Austrians perhaps?”

    “What?!” Though drunk, my face screamed with incredulity. Both now standing, the pair approached my table, the man with the dirk lay it on my wooden surface, his hand tightly wrapped around its gripp. He leant close and whispered with an icy rage

    “I will not suffer your drunken insolence! You rat! You dog! You dastardly blackguard. You’re are a spy I know it…!”

    “Sent by Fouché, I’m sure” said the other

    “You are a traitor to your country!” He stood, drawing the blade to my throat. That word, traitor burned in my mind, setting alight a rage the likes of which only a drunken man could feel.

    How dare this, this peasant call me, Alexandre de La Roche, a traitor! I drunken rake perhaps! But never a traitor! Whatever my noble blood may have meant, was little compared to my sense of patriotism, how I felt for my country and my people!
    “How dare you, sir!” I bellowed, standing with a start, my legs barely able to hold my weight “Do you know with whom you’re speaking to!?” What was left of my better judgment stopped me from giving my name to the man, knowing all too well that despite my sentiments, it would only fan the flames and most likely end in a lynching or a trip to the Nationale Razor. And yet the rage within me demanded satisfaction, my blood, my ancestors, brave knights who bore the cross across the mighty walls of Constantinople, screamed with rage at this insult.

    “I care not for who you are citizen” said the man “I call you a spy, a betrayer to this country and her Emperor.”

    “Damn you, sir. Damn you! Barkeep!” I slurred “See that this man does not leave on the morrow. I challenge you sir!” I exclaimed at the bar keep, my fiery gaze never leaving the pair in front of me

    “Very well sir, a duel it is. I shall have you on the morn be it with shot or blade, mark my words I shall have you!” He drew a white glove from his pant pocket and threw it before him. As was custom I responded by slapping him in the face with my own leather gauntlet. I then nodded as curtly as my state would allow and then stalked off to my room. I would awake with no memory of the night's proceedings nor would understand how the day’s occurrences would change my life forever.








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    This is impressive indeed! Enjoyable story-telling in an authentic historical setting, written with style. I wonder if you would be interested in entering this excellent story for the Monthly Creative Writing Competition?

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    He was named Chauville, a curt and serious man, dressed in a black frock coat, waistcoat, cravat, plain white shirt, the most handsome of bicornes and a long coat that could keep even the frost of the Siberia at bay. He had declared himself my second for no other reason than he had fortunately been passing by as my opponent and I heatedly discussed the terms of the duel. Without weapons I was at a loss and were it not for the timely appearance of my new companion, I would have forfeited the duel and thus my life
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    The wind was cold, biting at the back of my neck like the touch of Death. It was late Autumn, yet the icy chill of Winter had come early this year, forcing many in doors out of fear of catching their end. Chauville, despite the chill, looked at me with a wry smile as he handed me his pistol and sword. They were fine weapons, well made and strong, they had seen frequent use and were clearly maintained by a man who was wise about the ways of weaponry.
    “It is certainly fortuitous that you happened upon this sorry event, my friend” I said quietly, Chauville responding with a mild mannered chuckle
    “It is most fortuitous indeed mon ami” his wry smile wriggled with amusement neath his impressive ebon moustache. Despite his kindness, I could not help but feel his appearance was almost too timely. It was of my experience that such luck always had a catch, in return for his arms and comradeship this mysterious Chauville must have ulterior motives, that was the way the world worked, everything had a price. Whatever that might be for the moment was unimportant, yet I will not lie I did felt ill at ease with the man.

    The field of honour had been chosen earlier that morning as my opponent and I left the hotel. An abandoned farm a day's ride outside of Paris had been my destination, the place ransacked by soldiers, its fields overgrown with weeds. The main house, where the owner of the land must have lived, lay empty and ruin. It was a burned out carcass and what was left of the once pleasant town house was little more than scorched rubble.
    “Your opponent has given you the choice of how this duel shall proceed, what manner of combat will it be?” I was given a choice of pistols or sword, highly proficient in both forms combat, it was a hard decision. I had become accustomed to a varied assortment of weaponry over the years, my experience in dueling, competitive combat, allowing me to broaden my martial horizons.
    Perhaps there is more of my father in me then I realized I thought, remembering his skills with the sword “the blade will do” I chose, knowing all too well that the cold, wet weather could affect the efficiency of the firearm, damp powder often want to lay dormant, despite the weapons condition and clear military standard.

    I had awoke stiff and sore to the barkeeper wrapping upon my door, demanding that I take my morning meal and pay up. Met by his stern face and irritable rapport, I found myself eating a bowl of gruel that tasted of nothing, in the shadow of my opponent who stared me down with the ferocity of a wolf. As I had guessed he was of military stock, a curiassier to be precise. He wore the typical garb of a soldier of his kind with a steel breastplate under which lay the blue fanfare of a French cavalryman. About his shoulders were the epaulets of an officer and a dark woollen riding cloak that protected him from the elements. His hair, now in light appeared a bright red-gold, marking him as a product of the Auld Alliance’ and thus of Franco-Scottish blood. His hair was in an au natural style, powdered wigs once born by officers discarded for more fashionable styles. Cropped back and sides with a long top and front combed forward, his unruly curls bore a resemblance to the Roman busts of Caesar, Titus or Brutus. The look was the height of men’s fashion, even I had adorned my scalp with such a wild style.

    I looked him up and down, noting his height, his big, heavy set frame. Tall men were often want to overreach or balance, while they might be capable of striking from a distance it left them open to faster attacks. Yet it would be his overconfidence as seen in his lack of posture that would be his undoing, his stance would be off and it would be a simple matter of pushing as violently and as hard as possible to bring him to the ground and finish it.

    “I hope you are as proficient with the sword as you are with challenging men to duels my friend” Chauville’s smile brightened, revealing a set of tobacco stained teeth “ I know this man, might I offer you some advice?”

    “Of course, though I suspect this will be a quick fight.”

    “I’m not so sure about that, he is Lieutenant Le Jean-Gerard de Brix of the 11th Cuirassier Reserve and despite his appearances this man is as vicious as he is hot-headed, his Scottish blood sets him in good stead in this regard. Now I know what you’re thinking his frame is lazy and yes you might play his significant height to your advantage, but I have seen him at work and not all is as it seems. I can see you are skilled, you have an air of experience about you, yet be warned he is a dastardly one and will not hesitate to kick you while you’re down” I appreciated the advice and gave him a curt nod in thanks. I then took my position and readied myself for the combat to come. My opponent's second stepped forward, looking as though he had just awoken. In a droll tone, proceeded to announce the rules

    “We gather here today on a matter of honour, myself and my most esteemed counterpart are here to see that it is carried out honourably. There will be no backstabbing…” This first rule made my opponent smirk and wink at me with his left eye “... you shall not throw, hurl or toss your blades, nor will any weapons other than those provided, unless agreed upon prior by both parties shall be used. If mercy is asked, quarter must be given…” I thought this man unlikely to ask for such things, his gaze telling me he meant to kill me outright “Now, gentlemen you will take your positions and commence upon my signal!”


    We took our places as a deluge from the heavens began to fall, the dirt grounds of the fenced round pen turning muddy and slippery. He stood side on, in the middle of the pen, sabre in a low, but defensive position in his right hand. His left rested upon his hip all these positions told me he intended to face me cautiously and slowly, it would seem I would make the first move. I took a more offensive stance, spreading my legs shoulder width apart, raising the blade to eye level and resting its tip on my outstretched, free left forearm.

    “Begin!” I did not know it, but from that moment, as Chauville uttered that single word, my life was forever changed. I was set upon a path that only the Fates would know, guided by an unknown Destiny and at the mercy of Fortune. This strange, mysterious man would become a pillar of my life and one day I would even call him friend and comrade in arms, at least for a time.

    I faced Jean-Gerard front on, circling for a moment not willing to engage. I watched him closely for any nervous ticks, knee jerk reactions that might tell me of skittish behaviors. There were none, he was a solid as stone and un-moving as any mountain, I was forced to take the first move as I had predicted. I leaped forward off the back foot, rotating to a side on position. I feinted with a lunge but in an instant I brought my blade in a sweeping motion across. Had it hit its target, a ghastly gash would have marked my opponent's chest and would’ve most likely killed him. Yet he parried easily and calmly enough, bringing his sabre up and deflecting the blow simply, but effectively. I stepped back, taking a few swings at the ground, my shoulders tight and muscles bunched. The nights previous escapades, whatever they were, had left me feeling rather poorly.

    I made another move, if only to stir him into the attack, I circled to the right, swinging my blade in an arch, smiling devilishly. He moved away, dashing backwards, my weapon narrowly missing his right cheek. He followed my every move now, rotating his stance as I moved, watching me keenly it felt like an age had past. Than he struck, his long arms stretching as far as they could, his blade reaching out in a stabbing motion overhead, a common attack among cavalrymen. I dodged the blade as it grazed my my left ear. Blood trickled down my neck as I winced from the sting

    “First blood goes to me you foolish dog!” Said the soldier, breaking barely a sweat. I was on the retreat now as he drove at me with an unexpected ferocity. He hacked and hacked and hacked with the strength I had expected, yet with the fury of a caged animal. Were it not for my experience in the art of swordplay I’d have been cut to pieces, but I blocked each incoming attack with what ability I could muster from neath the haze and ache last night's excess.
    A rage took control over my opponent, a bloody wrath the likes of which I’d have never seen before. It would be later in life that I too would discover such a sensation, a ‘warrior aspect’ if you will. A state of mind when all fear and thought are banished, in their place nothing but the instinct to survive.

    We fought close now, our bodies colliding with every strike. I tired, my sword arm weakening and even despite my opponents low guard I could not seem to break his barrage of attacks. Desperation began to take hold as he hastened, each attack coming with greater strength and savagery than the last… And there it was, beneath the folds of shirt the silver dirk I had seen last night, laying hidden its point glinting in the rain.
    So this is how it is to be played then, very well I thought. I had assumed that a man of such military background and fighting calibre would not resort to such actions of cheating. He should have known that his victory was close, he should have known that I was starting to tire and yet he resorted to such low blows, Chauville was right, there was more, or perhaps less to this, Jean-Gerard then at first seemed.

    With his back to Chauville, de Brix lunged again, bringing his secret into action. In his right hand came his sabre blade and in his left the dirk. One came high the other low

    Now or never I thought it was high time this fight had ended. I spun into action, mustering unknown sources of energy, missing his dirk by inches. Feeling the sabre cut across my back, I blocked out the pain and brought my blade out in a quick and decisive strike at his head. To fast for him to see, my steel connected with his skull, cutting deep into his brain. With a look of utter shock and bewilderment he stumbled back, dropping both weapons upon the muddied ground. Blood tricked down his forehead, gushing from a wound hidden deep in his mess of red-gold locks. He then fell to the ground as dead as a doornail.

    “Well, that settles it I suppose. That will be the last our friend Jean-Gerade’s flippant duels” Chauville sighed, eyeing the now dead soldier’s shocked compatriot “I congratulate you on your victory La Roche, come let us settle your debts with the tavern keeper and I shall buy you a drink, but first I must ask that I settle a few matters” Chauville grasped my hand as my opponents second crouched over his lifeless corpse, murder in his eyes.
    We turned towards the road and our horses but not before I heard the cock and lock of firearm.

    “Stop you murderer! I’ll have your scalp for this!” Then, faster than I thought humanly possible, Chauville spun, his great cloak flowing in the bitter wind and rain. He drew a hidden pistol from his coat, a double barreled Dutch weapon. He fired and as the smoke cleared it became apparent that each shot had hit its mark, one in the forehead, one in the chest.


    “That takes care of that sorry business” said Chauville dower in his affectations as he approached the bodies. He decided they were better free of their valuables then not, taking two fat coin purses, passing one and the riding cloak of de Brix to me as I lay in the mud “Get up boy I have business matter to settle then”

    The hour’s ride back to Paris was a blur as was the adventure through her streets. The duel had left me drained and I think, a part of me had died during the melee. The desperation with which I fought had driven some piece of me away, perhaps the child that had lay within my soul. I had not experienced such a fight before, a fight for survival. A fight to the death was one I knew well but of all my experiences, it was this one that I had first been forced to fight for mine own life. I thought my mind would be righted come the morn, yet little did I know that the death of Jean-Gerard de Brix would haunt my dreams for many years come.










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    The day was forgotten to me, glimpses of faces unknown, hushed conversations between Chauville and strangers unheard to my deafened ears. From what memories I could muster we rode half way across the city and back. Chauville would disappear into some building, I in a state of daze, kept watch over the horses. He would reappear, often with that wry smile I had seen when we had met. There were a few times here and there that he emerged with a frown, but I thought nothing of it as my mind drifted over and over, the morning's events

    “I-i-i-i almost died” I whispered, de Brix’s bloodied bodied clear in my minds eye

    “Indeed” said Chauville riding ahead, the sun setting before him “fear not my friend, some food and a good drink will set you right, tis almost night and I should think after all this travel, a rest is what you need.”

    Again my memory went blank as I found myself at the same inn of the previous evening, seated before me a warm meal of mutton, roasted vegetables and a decanter of the finest wine the barkeep had on offer. Chauville sat oppopsite, stoking an ebony pipe covered in all manner of gilt, oriental designs. Most notable of these was what I would later discover to be the ‘mon’ or crest of the Tokugawa Shogunate of the lands of the Japon. With the unfortunate events of the day behind me I ate in what peace I could find under the serene silence and contemplation Chauville had offered.

    “You were there…” I said, taking a moment to look at the man before me. Chaville was supremely comfortable in silence, not one to fidget uncomfortably. He seemed to enjoy the death of conversation, revel in it almost, thrive in company of awkwardness “...last night I mean” I took a sip of my wine “You knew of the duel didn’t you?” The man broke the silence a moment later with a simple answer as he placed his bicorn upon the table

    “Indeed”

    “Why did you aid me so?”

    “It was a gentleman’s duty”

    “Oh please Monsieur Chauville, you and I both know that in this day and age a gentleman’s duty is to them and theirs.” Chauville said nothing again, lighting his pipe and inhaling deeply, grey blue smoke leaking from his nostrils. “Young though I may be, I have lived in this world and I have seen what humanity is capable of, I know that we are a selfish race, prone to acts of utter violence and depravity simply on a whim. I know that every man, no matter how honourable he might claim to be, always has his own self interests at heart and any man who claims otherwise is foolish or mentally deficient and you monsieur are neither I think.” Chauville continued to watch me for, smoke now seeping from his lips, it’s acrid smell stinging my nostrils.
    “Well said my friend, or should I say my lord? You are the rightful heir to the comte de la Roche are you not?”

    “Yes” I answered shortly “but I don’t suppose you’re not really here to ask about that are you?”

    “Direct and true, right to the point aren’t we? Very well let us be done with small talk, I will come clean if you’ll permit me?”

    “ Go on”

    “In truth, sir I have been following you and the man you happened to accost for weeks. I am Captain Artemis Chauville of the Gendarmerie Impériale. I am an agent of the Minister of Police and Internal Affairs the first Duc d’Otrante Joseph Fouché and former non-commissioned officer of the Garde Impériale.”

    “Good god” I uttered, the man might as well have been Bonaparte himself with connections like that, the exclamation making Chauville smile charmingly

    “You see the man you killed and his compatriot were members of a violent group of anarchists calling themselves the ‘la Confrérie de Bruti.’ The Brotherhood of Brutus for a decade now this group sought to bring down the throne and restore République. From what we know, they are a splinter group of radical revolutionaries, its members mostly former supporters of the Jacobins and Montagnards.Through an informant of ours we have come to learn that they plan to assassinate his Imperial Majesty at some point, we know not how, nor when what we do know, is that they are growing in numbers ever month, recruiting from across the Empire and the rest of Europe, we have even heard that they have secured aid from Italian and Portuguese guerrillas. I am tasked with their arrest, however I figured that the duel you so conveniently declared, would accomplish my ends all the same, whilst sparing me the pains of Imperial bureaucracy.”

    “So you dragged me into your little ‘operation’ because you’d rather not dot your ‘i’s and cross your ‘t’s?” I said with an air incredulity that oozed contempt.

    “On the contrary my friend, for you I had, or rather have, different plans”

    “Oh there is more is there?” Sarcasm was now the order of the day

    “Indeed. As I have said I’ve been watching you for a number of weeks, seeing you drift from various states of inebriation. In this time I have come to realize that you are a man with the knack for survival. Despite the fact that I often found you laying in some gutter and even begging for coins from those you once considered below you, you have, against all odds, survived. At points even thrived, in a strange destitute kind of way...”
    “What is your point Chauville…!” I interrupted “yes I am a beggar in a frock coat, yes I am ensnared by vice, was your plan to publicly humiliate me? To destroy the last heir of the comte de la Roche? Because I assure you, I have already done that myself...”

    “Oh shut up Alexandre!” Chauville slammed his fist on the table, nonplussed by the eyes that now lay upon us. For a moment I thought to declare myself, to demand satisfaction of him. He like that blasted Jean-Gerard had wounded what honour I had left… and then the visage of de Brix’s compatriot came to my mind, the bullet wounds on his body. Instead I remained silent rather preferring my brains not be scrambled powder and shot. “Can you not see my business proposal?!” It was a rhetorical question “I have need of men like you, not only have you survived destitution, but the Revolution, the Terror... there are very few men of noble blood that claim to have done what you have and it is for this reason that I ask, my lord…” It had been a decade or more since anyone had ever styled me in such a way. “... you have proven to me you are able with a blade and I’m sure your skill in musketry and pistoleering stand in equal sted, as such I offer you the chance for gainful employment AND if the opportunity presents itself, the chance to regain your titles, restore your family name and your personal honour.” He was brief and short of temper. It was my turn to sit in silence, I felt like a spanked pup in the presence of an elder. It was true, he spoke of a great opportunity, one that had not been offered to me in some time. The daze still hung over me as my brain slowly processed his proposal. It was all a bit much in truth, the duel and all, I was feeling faint and ill, hunger gnawed at my brain and a great thirst tugged at my soul.

    What did I have to loose I thought to myself I have nothing, I am a lost soul without family or friends, no property to call my own, no reputation to speak of I was fading into the deepest annals of the lowliest of histories faster than

    “I apologize for angering you Captain Chauville…” I said

    “It is nothing…” he said “do you accept my offer?” The thought of money, danger and presumably women was enough to push me to say yes. Yet the learned part of me, the side my father had spent some much time grooming wanted to know more.

    “...and if I do not wish to become your agent, then what?”

    “Them I’m afraid monsieur La Roche, I cannot protect you from the consequences of your illegal dueling. You know just as well as I do, that the penalty for such sport is death. Worse still if you manage to weasel your way out of the charges, the fact that you murdered an officer of the Grande Armée would be enough to see you hang. That alone I should think, ought to be the very least motivation for you to accept my offer”

    “I see” Knowing that in reality that was all I was going to get out of him I extended my hand, in a binding agreement “I accept your offer Captain Chauville”

    “Good!” He grasped my hand and shook it with a bright, albeit yellow smile “down to business then!” Over the following hours he briefed me on our enemy. According to Chauville, it would seem that the Brotherhood of Brutus was centered somewhere in south-eastern France. He had managed to track their location to somewhere within the Alps, narrowing down the search to the foothills of the Chartreuse Mountains. From there the trail had gone cold however.

    It was said the band of rebels were led by an individual calling themselves ‘la Centenier.’ The Centurion’ led a violent band Italo-Swiss Mercenaries. All were former soldiers of the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardinia and Papal Swiss Guard. Styled as the ‘La Legione Nera’ or ‘The Black Legion,’ they had sworn vengeance against France in the name of their exiled king and deposed and deceased pope. They burned, pillaged and plundered French villages, ambushed patrols and caused general havoc in the region. Were it not for his Iberian Campaign, Emperor Bonaparte would have dealt with them. Yet his majesty was fighting a war on two fronts and couldn’t spare the wherewithal to take the fight to the guerrillas.

    “This is where you come in” Said Chauville gesticulating with his eating iron “la Centenier knows our faces, our names… in fact it seems there is not much the Centurion does not know… our movements, our numbers and at times our locations… his agents are almost as numerous and skilled as mine own...” He stopped, his face growing distant as though he gazed into some distant past. At the time I thought nothing of the break in conversation. Yet later I would learn of the traitor that had once existed among his ranks. He inhaled and begun again “... you however mon ami are un homme nouveau, a new man to our organisation. You are the proverbial ace up our sleeve” He looked at me with a smile most sly, his plotting mind at work.

    “Hmm-m-m-m” I mused, leaning forward in my chair, clasping my hands in front of me “This begs the question Captain what am I to do? What is your stratégie? What is my role in this game of… du chat et de la souris”

    “A good question sir, infiltration is the order of the day I should think” Chauville was casual with the matter as he sipped at his wine cup, again stoking his pipe with fresh tobacco. “ You will travel to the commune of Saint-Pierre-de-Chartreuse. There you will meet a man of mine and he will point you in the right direction. I worn you, the Doctor can be quite acerbic, he is English after all. We will of course supply you with everything you require.”

    “How will I find him?”

    “You’ll know him when you see him” It wasn’t much to go on, but it would have to do.

    English Doctor with a temper, I’m sure there can’t be many of those around the French Alps I thought, curious to meet this mysterious ‘Apothicaire Anglais “When am I to leave?” Admittedly I was eager to see Paris from a distance. Though it was my home I was due for a holiday and I had the sneaking suspicion that debt collectors were wise to my location.

    “Three weeks from today, we have plans to make” and I would get little more from Chauville on the matter. “I expect you to have your affairs settled by then. How you do so is of course your choice and I will guarantee your safety come what may. Though I would ask one small favour, try not to kill anyone for the time being. One soldier is enough I should think, anyone else and I dare not say how Minister Fouché would react”

    “Of course, ermm-m-m there is but one other matter I should like to discuss before finish our meals…”

    “Yes?”

    Debt was something I was familiar with, it had run me into the ground, incarcerated me for the better part of three years and had taught me to sleep with one eye open. Life-debts on the other hand were an entirely different beast such things could never be repaid, at least not in full anyhow
    “Some months ago, I was in, shall we say... un peu de la merde…”

    “When are you not in the s#17 La Roche?” Chauville jested, chewing thoroughly on a piece of mutton

    “Haha, indeed” I chuckled, smarting at the cheap shot, though entertained by its truth nonetheless. “I would say it was was a more than a little problem truth I can’t really think of the words to do it justice, it was quite the sticky situation…”

    “Oh do get on with it mon ami, we have better things to do with our time then discussing semantics” I had a tendency to ramble when nervous, a habit developed at the hands of brutish thugs as I wormed my way out of their nasty interrogation tactics. Chauville was right, he was no debt collector’s interrogator or gangster’s strong arm and nor was I being threatened with the loss of a limb

    “Very well...” I breathed, settling my nerves, taking a sip of wine to harden them “I have a friend, who is currently imprisoned.”

    “I see” Chaville looked at me pensively “go on”

    “Last autumn I had come into a spot of trouble. I’d been running my usual tricks throughout the city, cheating the wealthy out of their money with loaded dice, trick cards and the like.”

    “How honest of you”

    “Anyhow, I ran afoul of a particular man who styled himself the Sire de La Fère.”

    “Lord La Fère, I know of him, a rather sour character if memory serves”

    “Oh indeed, mon capitaine, the man was as ghastly as they came. I had planned to fleece the gentleman alone, but my friend was down on their luck and was in need of a job. So I let them tag along. Success was not to be, my friend slipped up and somehow revealed how true nature to his Lordship. There was a scuffle and I killed the Lord of La Fère in our defence”

    “Ah, yes I had heard of the affair” Chauville waved off the incident as a mere trifle. Little did I know that it was the death of the Lord of La Fère that had set the Captain on my trail.

    “Before we knew it the Gendarmerie were upon us like vultures to carrion, apparently La Fère’s goons had seen the whole thing and called for the city guard. We ran for our lives, well aware that we’d finally meet the Nationale Razor. My friend stopped before me, took up my bloodied blade and the last I saw of them was their arrest at the point of twenty bayonets. I had heard they had taken the blame for the death of La Fère but beyond that, there has been nothing. And so I find myself in the present situation, my friend is imprisoned in a plague pit and I am at the mercy of an agent of the Minister of Police”

    “I see, do you even know if your friend is alive”

    “Oh they are certainly alive, mon capitaine, of that you can be certain”

    “Indeed, what makes you so confidant?” Chauville drank more of his wine and looking at me with that wry smile once more, as he took another puff of his pipe

    “I’ve known them long enough to understand that they have a nifty little trick of always landing on their feet cat burglars are called that for a reason.”

    “A cat burglar? Now what’s a man of your high status doing, mixing with cat burglars?” It was a rhetorical question, Chauville’s small smile turned a toothy grin, he knew all too well what my social life had degenerated to, the company of cat burglars was luxury these days, least of all someone I could call friend. “Now, where is this friend of yours being held hmm-m-m-m?”

    “La Conciergerie” I answered flatly and truthfully, knowing exactly what would come next. Chauville’s eyes widened, his brow furrowed deeply and I saw what I could only be described as fear in those deep brown eyes of his, fear and utter

    La Conciergerie! Are you mad?! One does not simply break into the Conciergerie!” Chauville was flabbergasted “the Autrichienne spent her last days there for a reason you know, the place is impregnable and worse still its passages are like a damn maze! If the Queen of France can’t escape then you can sure as hell bet that your friend is going to die in there.” The Conciergerie had been the epicenter of Robespierre's Reign of Terror some sixteen years ago. Locked away in debtor's prison as a young man, I had missed the carnage, yet I had heard stories of the ‘National Razor’ and its slaughter. Tens of thousands were executed across France and Paris was of no exception to the butchery. After their slipshod trials and drumhead court-marshals, over two thousand souls were sent the guillotine be they members of L'Ancien Régime or anyone deemed as ‘counter revolutionaries.’

    “Robespierre escaped…” I said the irony that the very ‘soul of the Terror’ had been interned in his own dungeon was not lost on me. Though he died soon after, he had manage to escape with the aid of his supporters. If ‘the Incorruptible’ Maximilien Robespierre could escape from the walls of the Conciergerie then anyone could do it. Surely it was an even simpler matter of gaining entrance, the only difficulty would be in finding my friend, for all I knew they were buried deep in the darkest of rat holes.

    “Robespierre had connections that we could not possibly attain, he and his damn Jacobins ran the damn country…”

    “We have you” I interrupted

    “Please, your flattery will help not help the situation La Roche. There is very little I can do, nor would anyone be willing to help me. Anyhow, What is so important about this friend of yours?” Chauville’s mood had settled somewhat, his eyes softening, returning to their mysterious, blank gaze.

    “They saved my life, that’s what’s important. A debt is a debt and I repay them, even if it means incarceration. Listen, I can gain access easily enough, it's escaping that will be tricky, I think I know a way in all I ask is that you give me a way out and my friend and I will do the rest, I have survived this long on the streets of Paris, who’s to say I can’t live a little longer aye?” Chaville continued to smoke his pipe, staring at me for a long while. His dark eyes were unfocused however, glassy and distant once again. It was as though he looked through me, ahead into some unknown space, perhaps into an unknown past once again? Smoke curled from his lips, a manicured hand reaching up slowly to stroke his oiled moustache. We sat for what felt like hours, my mind as blank as a slate and Chauville’s clearly busy, hard at work strategizing, assessing variables, weighing chances and accounting worth. I would never gain insight into the man’s mind and no one ever would. The inner workings of Chauville’s brain were only known to the man himself and never would he share what went on within that spymaster’s mind palace of his.

    In this moment of silence, I took the time to quickly gauge our surroundings. The scene had changed in the tavern since I had arrived the previous night. The clientele we rowdy and drunk, enjoying a far more boardy tune played by the resident fiddler who was joined by a Spanish piper. At the center the crowded tavern were a couple who danced loudly to the garish folk tune, their eyes speaking volumes of love and affection for one another. The maids rushed about with buckets, scrubbing floors and tables, serving food and drink all the while avoiding the irksome harassments of drunken patrons. It seemed there was some form of family event near by as well, a group of women and older folk sat in the far corner coddling crying babes and young children, as they spied on their men. Like them, the keeper was ever watchful, I also noted that his gaze tended to linger on our table a moment longer then the other patrons. I didn’t blame him for his suspicions of course, in my opinion quietness in a room of noise was always something to be wary of. In truth, I was comforted that the man kept a good watch over his establishment, especially over those he deemed mistrustful. The two of us must have struck him as certainly curious, earlier events not passing unbeknownst to the man. I hadn’t noticed it the night before, but the keeper was a giant, at least six foot and five. He was as bald as a babe yet his brows and beard were thick and black. His skin was tan, body muscular like a hulking ox.
    Of Moorishdescent? I wondered, France did indeed have colonies in Maroc.

    “It means that much to you does it? Chauville said, finally breaking the silence

    “Yes, any other loose ends I may have in this damn city I will have resolved within the week” That much, I could promise and it would seem it was all Chauville needed.

    “Very well, if it so important to you you shall have your jailbreak, but on one condition.” I suspected there was to be a fly in this ointment

    “Yes?” I was curious, I won’t deny it.

    “Your friend will accompany you on your mission”

    “I’m not so sure they’ll agree to that, a year behind bars of the Conciergerie would make anyone beg for their freedom ”

    “That is not my problem mon ami, your friend will accompany you.” He gaze shifted once more, the lazy, distant look he’d been giving me most of the night was as hard as steel.

    “Why?”

    “Bread crumbs La Roche, we cannot leave a trail. Once we’ve quit the city we will be followed of this I can be sure, we must make it as hard as possible for them to find us,.no one can know who your friend is or who you are. You go in and out as quickly and quietly as you can. Furthermore who's to say your friend, after they’re sprung will keep quiet about their escapade? Who’s to say that if left behind won’t link them to you and thus, potentially to me. We cannot have that. They come along, as much for your safety as mine own, simple.”

    “Yes, but how?”

    “That’s your problem, I’m sure you’re smart enough to work something out. In the meantime I shall have you and your things moved to my apartments in the Marais. We shall go over your little prison break in greater detail later in the week.” Chauville stood abruptly, his plate and cup somehow empty and his pipe cleaned, polished and hidden away in the pockets of his black riding coat. He donned his bicorn, gave me a curt nod and a friendly smile and headed towards to the door, he paused a moment, turned briefly with a strange look in his eye “...before I forget, I’ll have one of my men pick you up on the morrow”

    “How will I know him?”

    “You won’t, he’ll find you. Do as you like once you are settled, come Wednesday meet me at the foot of Notre-Dame, midday, sharp.”

    “Understood” and at that he was gone, briskly turning on his boot heels, deftly throwing a bag of coins on the bar as he left. The purse I knew was enough to cover my expenses here and then some.

    Come the morning, I decided it best I purchase some better clothing, the garb I wore, a battered, dark green frock coat, brown trousers, white shirt, cravat and muddied boots would not suite my coming endeavours. Fortunately the weapons and horse Chauville had lent me were left in my care, so I would not go unarmed and traversing the busy streets of Paris would not be such an effort.

    And so I slept, a rest I dearly needed. My bones and muscles burned and ached, my nerves still frayed from the life threatening melee I had previously endured. The pain in my head had dulled yet there existed still an aching of the mind as though my brain was stung by an irate insect. With it came a voice, a desperate voice, a voice so riddled with the terror of the unknown that were it not for my better judgment it would have had me through the door and halfway to Bordeaux.

    Do not trust this man it called, do not trust Chauville, he is a demon, a monster in the dark!

    “He saved my life” I answered to no one “I owe him at the very least some form of trust”

    Do you Alexandre? A man does nothing without a reason, there is no such thing as charity, only veiled kindnesses neath ulterior motives, you know that, best of all!

    “You speak the truth whoever you are, aye, there is something about him.” The voice came no more, yet the sensation in my mind prompted me to answer the silence “I will be wary” and then came a dreamless sleep, deep, dark, pleasant and somehow strangely contented, satisfied. And so I slept.










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    Just need to ask, I'm having trouble seeing my images and chapter titles, is anyone else experiencing this? I get the feeling Image Shack is being stupid...
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    Sorry to hear that your images and chapter titles are causing problems. I can see them, they look excellent! I like the images with the authentic-looking frames.

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    Sorry to hear that your images and chapter titles are causing problems. I can see them, they look excellent! I like the images with the authentic-looking frames.
    Excellent, then I managed to solve the problem Yes I'm quite happy with them as well the oil painting effect I added to them makes them look really rather splendid! thank you for the kind words

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    For those who are interested Chapter Three is up. I've edited it the to the best of my ability! I've also run over the other chapters, editing the work where I can. Things are starting to get moving now with regard to the overall story, so let me know what you all think of it.
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    This is intriguing. I wonder why Chauville agreed to help free de la Roche's friend; he strikes me as a man who does nothing unless he has a good reason for it. Well, no doubt we'll find out in good time!

    I'm looking forward to meeting this acerbic English doctor.






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    I am enjoying this! I look forward to the continuing adventures of La Roche and Chauville. I, too, am intrigued about Chauville's willingness to help La Roche's friend. I notice that La Roche uses 'them/their' to describe his friend the cat burglar - perhaps his friend is a woman?

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    Default Re: Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle (Updated: 10/1/2015, Chapter Three Released!)

    This is intriguing. I wonder why Chauville agreed to help free de la Roche's friend; he strikes me as a man who does nothing unless he has a good reason for it. Well, no doubt we'll find out in good time!

    I'm looking forward to meeting this acerbic English doctor.
    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    I am enjoying this! I look forward to the continuing adventures of La Roche and Chauville. I, too, am intrigued about Chauville's willingness to help La Roche's friend. I notice that La Roche uses 'them/their' to describe his friend the cat burglar - perhaps his friend is a woman?
    Thanks guys, glad you like it yes all shall be revealed in the next few chapters I should think. I'm heading back to university next week and all my final assignments and exams are coming up, so things will be going a little slow for the next six weeks, but I should get the fourth chapter soon, perhaps in a week or two, though don't hold me to that

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    Wow, isa0005 this is a really great piece of CW you have here. It helps a little for me because I'm practically in love with this time period as well. I love the character you have created out of La Roche, he has all these natural talents and yet chooses to waste them away and I think his lifestyle makes the story so very interesting. Oooh and Chauville. Only time will tell I think on him. General all round amazing writing as well, I'm glad Alwyn suggested you submit this to the MCWC. Can't wait to read about the prison break.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Merchant of Venice View Post
    Wow, isa0005 this is a really great piece of CW you have here. It helps a little for me because I'm practically in love with this time period as well. I love the character you have created out of La Roche, he has all these natural talents and yet chooses to waste them away and I think his lifestyle makes the story so very interesting. Oooh and Chauville. Only time will tell I think on him. General all round amazing writing as well, I'm glad Alwyn suggested you submit this to the MCWC. Can't wait to read about the prison break.
    Thanks for the kind words mate, it really helps! So far I havn't been able to really get much done on Chapter IV as I've have all my final assessment tasks and exams. As I said above once they're done hopefully I'll be really able to get back into this, I've been thinking about it allot! I'm really glad you like my characters I've had allot of fun with La Roche and Chauville as for the prison break, we won't be seeing that most likely till chapter V I have a little twist in store for Chapter IV that I think will make things a little fun

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    Default Re: Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle (Updated: 10/1/2015, Chapter Three Released!)

    Don't worry at all, real life is a barrier to all of our writing at times. Can't wait for the twist you have up your sleeve as well.

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    Default Re: Dans l'ombre de l'Aigle (Updated: 10/1/2015, Chapter Three Released!)

    So, for those interested as of next week I should be free to start working on this again. I haven't touched any form of creative writing since I posted Chapter Three, I can't tell you how itching I am to get back in the proverbial saddle haha. I have my last assessment due this coming Friday, once that's done I intend to really get stuck into this as much as I can!

    Keep you all posted
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    Good to here you'll be free soon to continue this wonderful story.

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