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    Wonderful side story, you can really start to see the connections being forged between the characters. Its fleshing out marvelously. The relationship between Hralfur and Robert is an interestin addition and why did Jenkins continue to train a Hralfur knowing of his rabid habits?

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    So, with about three weeks worth of forum lost to the ether, I'll re add all of the chapters that were lost. No new one this week, I've been busy with exams throughout the week and spending spare time working on the new Critic's Quill article. Later!

    Chapter 9: Raiders (Late November 6th)
    Carson jolted awake, face down on the grass. He blinked a few times and tried to move himself. There was something heavy on top of him, and as he tried to shift his body he realised that there was something wet covering his back and a most unpleasant smell, like a rabbit he’d smelt hanging up in the Urbpolis market.

    It all began to come back to him, the shooting and the chaos. Yes, Jenkins had given him to a sailor to protect, only for the sailor to be hit twice in the chest. The very same one that was now pinning him to the ground.

    He struggled to move himself into a more comfortable position, but then he heard voices and laughter in the distance, so he did the only thing his panicked brain could think of, he played dead.

    The voices became clearer and clearer and he recognised the language, a dialect of the chief language of the Hundred Tribes. While certain colloquialisms had evolved for each tribe, the languages all had a lot in common. At least, that was what his language teacher had said when he taught him how to speak it. Fortunately, this was not an obscure dialect and much of it was relatively easy to understand.

    “Fairly good haul I’d say.” Said one voice, tough and gravelly.

    “Aye, Isim bastards never knew what hit them.” Another voice responded, this one seemed younger and more enthusiastic.

    “Take the clothes and burn the bodies?”

    “Of course. Wouldn’t want their foul reek running the scenery, would we?”

    Carson suddenly felt slightly less proud of knowing what they were saying, as would most people if they overheard talk of them being burned. He began to move again, after all, dying fighting was better than being burned alive and he quite liked the idea of being remembered as a war hero, albeit one that never saw much action.

    Then he heard the crunch of boots on the grass behind him and his bravado instantly vanished, he tensed up and his body refused to move. Then the thump as someone knelt down to examine the body on top of him. Then the moment of panic as the body was pushed aside and he felt the weight lift from his back. His hand began to curl into a fist as he felt hands on his shoulder pulling him over onto his back.

    Trying to play dead always seemed very simple in theory but in practice Carson found the nuances rather difficult. Keeping one’s eyes closed while under severe stress without making it obvious proved to be difficult. The person he couldn’t see in front of him certainly wasn’t fooled, as he felt a breath on his neck as the person leaned in, to see if he was breathing.

    Without even thinking, Carson opened his eyes and threw his head forwards, biting the person’s shoulder and throwing punches at them. The person rolled backwards with a high pitched scream, allowing Carson to scramble to his feet. He looked around to take stock of his surroundings and found the dead bodies of about a dozen crewmen. The Sickle was gone, only the indentation on the grass gave any indication that it was there to begin with, and all around stood rough looking people armed with all sorts of weapons.

    They all seemed rather surprised as he stood up, none more so than the person who Carson had attacked. He turned to face them again as they scrambled to their feet, still clutching the shoulder that Carson had bitten and was most surprised to find that he was facing a young woman, face contorted in pain and rage. Although that surprise was replaced by a slightly nastier one, as he saw a rather nasty looking sword at her side, which she slowly drew from its scabbard.

    The other people seemed to find it most hilarious, some leaning on their guns and whistling towards Carson.

    “Hey, Mila! Had a problem with the Isim boy here? Doesn’t seem too much younger than you does he?”

    “Can it, Vladomic!” she shouted back, before she turned back to Carson.

    “You have a nasty set of teeth there. What do they feed up in those high palaces of yours?”

    Carson reached for his sword, but instantly every person with a gun aimed at him, his hand falling to his side in crushing defeat.

    “Now.” Mila said, her left hand curling into a fist.

    “Revenge.”

    She punched him directly in the face, sending him sprawling backwards onto the soft grass. Laughter echoed around him as he staggered up, a cut lip his prize for his bites. He thought what Thaddeus would do in this situation, his one comforting memory in this dark place. Unfortunately he spoke before he thought and did what Thaddeus always did, insulted someone.

    “Not a bad punch…for a girl.” He said with a grin, drawing a few ‘ooooohs’ from the crowd, though he quickly realised that they were mocking him rather than Mila. Then, even more amazingly, she fell for the taunt, drawing her sword and motioning to him.

    “Draw the sword, pinkskin. I’m going to make you eat those words, stab by stab.”

    He couldn’t believe his luck. If he could beat her, maybe even grab her, he could bargain his way out of this. Or he could stall them until Jenkins got back. He would come back of course, Carson assured himself. He wasn’t the sort of man to leave others behind. He drew his sword and held it two handed, his preferred stance for an aggressive fight. He had to end this before the surrounding people noticed he was winning and stepped in. There was no point in being flashy if they were going to put a bullet in him.

    Her stance reeked of slight overconfidence, probably because she had about a dozen others with her, and Carson knew from experience that overconfidence usually led to an embarrassing and painful defeat. Many, many embarrassing and painful defeats.

    She jabbed forward a few times, trying to test his defence and more importantly, his will to fight. Carson did not respond to them, he’d often seen in his practice fights that drawing your opponent to make the first move was a good idea. She fulfilled that expectation, planting her foot forward as she swung her sword diagonally, a blow that would have ripped a hole through his chest was he not prepared.

    He took one step back, the blade passing harmlessly in front of him. He kept his eyes focused on her feet and sure enough she overswung and she took a step to the side to steady herself. It was all he needed. He charged forward and swung downwards, away from her body and towards her blade. Fooled, she raised the blade to block, but it was smashed aside and knocked from her hands, sending her tumbling as well.

    As she tried to get up, Carson darted forward and hoisted her up, placing his blade round her neck as he forced her body in front of his. He’d never killed someone before, let alone in cold blood, but as a cavalry commander had once said when questioned about killing a whole village worth of people, sometimes needs must.

    “Put the weapons down! Or I’ll…I’ll do it! I’ll kill her!”

    He backed away as she started to squirm and then bumped into something. Something very tall and very, very solid. Within moments, the sword was yanked from his hand from behind, Mila ducked and he was pushed forward, toppling over her and falling flat on his face. As he got to his feet and turned, he saw a huge bald man, his face paler even than Hralfur, holding his sword in his left hand.

    The sound of rifles being raised then caught his attention, and he found about half a dozen of them aiming at his face. Before he could even speak or even drop his sword, he heard a footstep behind him and the crack of a rifle butt against his head. He collapsed to the floor, barely conscious as he heard laughter around him.

    “He’s got spirit, that one.” Came the voice of the person who hit him.

    “The boss will want him. After all, he looks like a noble sort of fella. His fingers ain’t as worn as this other lot. Could fetch a nice profit. Plus he tried to kill Mila. The boss ain’t gonna like that.” Replied the younger sounding voice from earlier.

    “Remember old Scirox? Tried to lay hands on her a few years back.”

    “Oh yeah. The boss had him nailed to the ground with his own tent pegs. That was a proper laugh, ‘specially when we came back a year later and he was still where we left him.”

    Before Carson lost conscious completely, he felt himself being lifted up into the air and imagined that Jenkins had come to save him, plucking him from the heathen’s grasp from the deck of the Sickle. With that happy thought, he fell once more into darkness.


    Chapter 10: Discovery (Morning November 6th)
    Nosorum was still in bed, after a particularly good night’s sleep, when his door burst open and Anna rushed in. His initial smile faded when he saw the panic on her face. When Anna was panicked, something really bad must have happened. Her hair was unkempt and wild and her eyes were wild.

    “Carson’s not in his room! And his bed, it hasn’t been slept in!” she said, her words falling out of her mouth so quickly that he barely had time to register them before she grabbed him by the hand and pulled him up.

    “Anna, wait, I-“ he tried to protest, but her grasp on his wrist simply grew tighter as she dragged him out of his room and through the corridors of the Citadel, servants openly laughing as they passed. He felt his embarrassment grow as they went further and further. If father could see him now…

    She shoved open a nearby door, revealing a very neat and tidy bedroom. The bed was made, spotless white sheets with not a blemish upon them. He reminded himself to thank the butlers and maids for their unceasing efforts later, but for now focused on looking as serious and dignified as one could when one is dragged through a doorway in a nightgown while your admiral stares at you.

    Sykil looked shaken, his mouth noticeably twitching as he scanned the room, as if hoping Carson would leap out of a cupboard and this would all be one huge practical joke. A trait that the Hardcastles had in common, as Nosorum had found over the last ten years, often to his detriment and supreme embarrassment.

    “My King.” He said, kneeling before Nosorum.

    “Apologies for waking you so early, but this is-“

    “I understand, Sykil. Could he have just slipped out of the Citadel for the night? It wouldn’t be entirely uncommon.” He began, but Sykil shook his head instantly, his arms folded.

    “Not possible. The routes Tarkon and I used to use were sealed up a while back after the incident.”

    Nosorum had heard of this ‘incident’ before, but decided not to press for details, irrelevant as it was.

    “So he can’t have left the Citadel by himself?” he asked, running a hand through his black hair.

    “No.”

    Nosorum’s brain began to tick as Sykil’s one word crashed around his head. Could the Thanos Cult have taken him? Father’s murder, Carson disappearing, was this all an attempt to destroy the kingdom? Was this just the beginning? Would he have to fear for his life and carry a loaded pistol everywhere he went?

    Then more suspicious thoughts entered his head. If the enemy had Carson, what if they used him as a bargaining chip? The thoughts of both admirals turning on him turned his blood cold. There had been a long line of Kings assassinated by their own comrades, a line he was eager not to be a part of. No matter what he might think, Carson must be found, for his own sake as well as for the Hardcastles.

    Sykil seemed to have the same idea, he began to head for the door, a look of determination upon his face, which looked at least twenty years older than it should have.

    “I’m heading out on the Fidelis. If those heathen bastards took him, they’ll be heading south.” He muttered quietly.

    “No.” Nosorum placed a hand on him as he tried to walk past. Sykil might be a responsible brother, but as admiral of the fleet sending him out alone would be madness.

    What if he was killed or his Skymaster shot down? And, as much as Nosorum didn’t want to think this, if Carson was in enemy hands, sending him out would also be risking losing a Skymaster and a competent captain to the enemy. And as far as he knew, the Skymaster was essentially invincible.

    “I have to go, my lord. He’s my brother. Please.” Sykil said, even falling to one knee and bowing his head.

    There was a cough from outside the room, all three of them turned to the door as Marshal Sykes entered, leaning on the door frame as she adjusted one of her pale blue gloves.

    “Marshall Sykes? We have a problem, Carson is-“ Nosorum began.

    “He’s perfectly safe, don’t you worry about that.” She replied, cutting him off. He liked that about her, she was not afraid to cut through all of the ‘please sirs and thank you sirs’ that dominated his life.

    “You know where he is?” Sykil said, heading over to her and grabbing her arm. She shook him off like a small insect as he continued, his voice fast and with the slightest hint of panic about his tone,

    “Where is he? Is he alright, unharmed?”

    “He is with Thaddeus on board the Sickle, on a scouting mission. He wanted to experience war first hand.” She smoothed out her uniform from where Sykil had grabbed her.

    “And you-you knew and didn’t tell me?” Sykil seemed incredulous. Nosorum had to agree, what on earth was Thaddeus thinking taken someone so young out into the field?

    “Would you have let him go? The old man and I spoke about it and we agreed that we’d get him on-board for one simple mission. That’s it, no more. You can beat him with that little pin you’ve got there, but I’ll be damned if I deny Robert Hardcastle’s son a wish of his.” She pointed at Sykil’s blade and her voice hit a tone that made it quite clear that her patience was just about worn through.
    Sykil’s breathing slowed as she spoke, he finally seemed to be calming himself down and Nosorum found himself sighing in relief. Having two competent captains at each other’s throats would not have been a wonderful start to his day.

    “I- I need to see to some preparations. Sorry for disturbing your rest, Nosorum.” Sykil said and began to walk to the door, his shoulders sagging slightly, either through exhaustion or nervousness. As he passed Sykes, he turned to her, his face inches from her own.

    “You can promise me that he’s safe?” he said, his voice quiet.

    “Thaddeus is a wily old coot. He’ll be fine.” She responded, with a small smile on her lips. That reassured Nosorum above all else, when she smiled it usually meant she was certain of something.

    With that, the admiral left, leaving an awkward silence between the remaining occupants. Then Sykes turned back to face Nosorum, her eyes back to those hard, emotionless orbs glaring out at him.

    “Apologies for all this, my Prince. I was going to tell you all this morning anyway, but it seems I was a little slow.” She bowed her head a little, Nosorum responding with little more than a nod of his own.

    “It’s perfectly fine Marshal.”

    “Thank you. Oh, I should also mention that we just had fifty ships arrive from Luscon today. The fleet’s almost ready to sail.”

    “Excellent news. I shall be along to witness the preparations later.”

    She nodded and also left the room, leaving him alone. He allowed a rare sigh of relief. He hadn’t quite appreciated the finer details of dealing with people until he’d been put in this position. This whole fiasco had made his left hand sweaty for some bizarre reason…

    He froze as he realised that Anna’s hand had somehow found its way into his own. Turning his head, he saw her massaging her temple with her free hand, her brown hair glimmering in the morning light coming through a nearby window.

    Coughing abruptly, he removed his hand from her grip. She stared at him, a slight hint of irritation flittering across her perfect face-
    Stop it Nosorum. He chastised himself before finally plucking up the courage to speak.

    “Sorry, I just have to…well, a king can hardly go out and organise a war in a nightgown, can he?”
    She smiled at the little joke, the small butterfly in his stomach fluttering overtime at the very idea of her finding him amusing.

    “I suppose you’re right. Go on then, Nos.” She gestured towards the door.

    “I told you not to call me that.” He said softly, glaring at her as the smile on her face continued to grow.

    “You know it’s useless, right?”

    “Yes. Yes it is.” He rolled his eyes and headed to the door. She was right, it was always useless, trying to get her to stop would simply encourage her to torment him more.

    “And Nos?” her voice called out, soft as the softest silk.

    “Hmm? He replied, looking back one last time. She gave a curtsey as she spoke her final sentence.

    “Thanks for letting me drag you out of bed so early. You being here really did help.”

    He nodded and responded with a smile of his own, before heading down the corridor that lead back to his room. He did so with redoubled speed, not even daring to look back. When he finally got back, he slammed the door shut behind him and slumped down, his hands shaking as he held them up.

    She’s just a girl you bloody fool! Shaking’s for being shot at, not for having a girl hold your hand at a most inappropriate moment!


    He shook his thoughts from his head. As much as Anna constantly managed to worm her way into his mind, there were more important things to worry about. He scrambled up and opened his wardrobe, within sat a leather jerkin and trousers. Quickly throwing them on, he reached deeper in and slowly removed a small brown jacket, which went down to his waist. Personally, he’d always wanted a full length one similar to Thaddeus’ one, but he doubted he could pull it off like Thaddeus could.

    Besides, this one was comfortable enough and wasn’t all stuffy like the ridiculous outfits he’d be wearing at formal events. Checking himself in the mirror once more, he gave a quick smile and pushed open his doors, ready to face the challenges of a new day.


    Side Story 3: The Third Apprentice
    “More tea, Thaddeus?” asked George Sykes, Thaddeus’ best friend, as he poured more tea into his own cup.

    “Of course, your tea is the best in the kingdom after all. Hate to waste it.” Thaddeus replied, as he finished his second cup. Beside him sat Hralfur, also enjoying a cup as well as one of the cakes that Sykes’ wife was famous for. George chuckled at that, then looked behind him, his eyes searching for someone.

    “I heard you had two apprentices Thaddeus? Where’s Hardcastle?”

    “He made his excuses and slipped away when we arrived. No doubt he’s off exploring the house. Don’t take it the wrong way, he just really finds such events boring.”
    Thaddeus sighed to himself. He dreaded to think what would happen to the thousand year legacy of the Sykes family once Robert got his hands on it?

    "As long as he doesn’t break anything too expensive.”

    “Don’t worry, he doesn’t have the sense to understand what’s expensive in this house.”

    “Not like young Hralfur then? Boy looks around this place like every single piece of it is a treasure.”

    “He’s an inquisitive lad. He’s like you and me in that way. Say, do you remember when I told you to go look up Melissa Davenheart’s gown-“

    “That’s quite enough of that, old fellow. You see Hralfur, this is the man you have to deal with here. Do me a favour and kill him at some point.”

    “I am a role model for the boy, Sykes. I’ll have you know that he learned more etiquette under me than you learned from all your useless tutors in that subject.”

    “He learned ETIQUETTE from you? Lupum in high heavens…”

    The two laughed together at the joke. Neither were masters of etiquette, they’d spent most of their younger years chasing after various girls from other families. This had often ended quite badly, usually at George’s expense.

    “So how’s the wife Thaddeus? And the boys?” George spoke again, changing topics quickly, to one that Thaddeus found even more uncomfortable.

    “The wife is well, and the boys….well, let’s just say they take after their uncles.”

    “What, they’re halfwits who can’t speak a sentence without irritating half the room?” George asked incredulously. Thaddeus cringed when he thought of his brothers, so unbelievably hopeless that despite being the youngest in the family his father had entrusted him with the family manor. He gripped his mug a little tighter as his memories passed through his head.

    “They’re getting there. It drives me to bloody distraction, it’s like they completely ignored the good side of our family. But enough about them, what about your lads?”

    “Oh, they’re growing into proper gentlemen Thaddeus. It’s Ryla that worries me.”
    Thaddeus saw the concern on his friend’s face at once. From what little he remembered of Ryla, a little redheaded girl, she was always a bit of a strange one.

    “Still acting like a boy?”

    “She’s more of a boy than her brothers. She spars with my men at arms every single day. I ask you, what man would be attracted to a woman who could beat the hell out of them?”

    “You’d be amazed.” Thaddeus responded dryly.

    Hralfur stood up slowly and headed to the window, gazing out at the gardens. Even Thaddeus, no appreciator of fine art, could see the beauty in them, rows of flowers of all sorts of colours. He always mocked George for asking him to bring back any unusual looking flowers when he went travelling, but the fruits of that labour seemed to have borne a bumper crop. Hralfur seemed captivated, his face unmoved but his eyes dancing with delight. Then they flicked downwards and his brow furrowed.

    “Master, you know you were talking about Mr Sykes daughter?” he called. Thaddeus looked back to George, then back to Hralfur. He had a bad feeling about what was about to be said.

    “We were. What of it?”

    “Well, Robert’s being chased by someone who looks a lot like her.”

    He winced slightly as he spoke and Thaddeus stood up immediately to have a look for himself. Peering out, he watched as his apprentice was punched repeatedly in the face by a young woman, with fiery red hair and a fiery red face to match. As Hralfur winced, Thaddeus began to laugh, a hearty laugh that came straight from the stomach. He hadn’t laughed like this for a long time, such a laugh was reserved for seeing friends in misfortune and terribly awkward situations. And this combined both so damned well.
    George headed over and paled as he watched the scene. He turned to Thaddeus and stammered out,

    “I- Thaddeus, I will punish her for this, mark my words. That boy, lad, he-“

    Thaddeus cut him off by patting him on the shoulder and giving him his best grin. He loved seeing Geroge’s eyes under those bushy eyebrows of his fall in despair. They both knew that that particular grin always meant some sort of plan.

    “Oh, my friend….I just had a brilliant idea that will solve both our problems.”

    “What? What could it-“

    “Simple. I want a third apprentice and you want to ensure your daughter doesn’t bring the family into disrepute. Problem solved.”
    George placed a hand over his mouth, speechless, before finally stammering out an answer.

    “This- This is a big ask, Thaddeus.”

    “I know. I want to observe for a little more, so why don’t we go down and get a better look.”

    A few minutes later and they were just outside the front door, watching as Robert and Ryla circled each other, barehanded and glaring at each other. The Ryla darted forward,
    swept Robert’s leg from under him and started punching him again as he fell. He noticed Thaddeus as he fell and called out.

    “A little help old man!” Robert yelped as another punch hit him in the chest.

    “Help yourself!” Thaddeus shouted back, leaning back on the stone threshold.

    “I can’t hit a girl!” he protested again, as a knee caught him in the side

    “She’s more of a man than you.” The reply came. Thaddeus wasn’t interested in such idiot responses; he wanted to see Robert’s desire to win. Or watch as he was beaten up. He wasn’t sure which one he preferred honestly.

    With a grunt, Robert heaved her off him and stepped back a few steps, keeping his distance. Ryla got to her feet, wiping her knuckles on the grass as she stood back up. Thaddeus called out to her in his kindly old voice, the kind that could disarm a serial killer with its innocence.

    “Why did you feel the need to hit Robert, my dear? I admit it’s awfully tempting, but what did he do?”

    “I gave her a compliment!” Robert protested, and he was met with a vicious looking glare from Ryla.

    “He made a comment that I took exception to.” She said slowly and Thaddeus noticed an incensed looking George on his left, this time glaring directly at Robert. If looks could kill, Robert’s extended family would have been hanged by now.

    “Oh? Could you not think of anything funny to say back?”

    “There were too many to choose from, but I thought I’d add a few more insults with my fist.”

    Thaddeus grinned and turned to George, who was still glaring at Robert with a look of pure hatred.

    “I like her more and more, old friend. If she beats Robert any harder, she’ll be a strong eight out of ten at least. A nine if she makes him cry like the mother’s boy he is!”

    She gave a savage grin and rushed forward, driving a right hook directly into Robert’s jaw. He fell back on the ground and she leapt on him, hitting him again and again.
    Thaddeus gave a small tsk as he watched his apprentice get pummelled into the ground.

    Come on you idiot. She’s a girl, that doesn’t mean you can’t hit her.
    He thought to himself. The first women he’d ever hit was a sailor for one of the neighbouring kingdoms who’d tried to skewer him during a battle. He’d been without his sword at the time, so a stiff elbow to the throat had had to do.

    Robert seemed to get the message. Ryla flew back, clutching her face and Robert scrambled to his feet, his right fist clenched from where he’d struck her. Thaddeus kept his gaze on Ryla the whole time, watching for weakness. She seemed slightly shocked at being hit, holding the bridge of her nose as she kept her distance. Robert seemed to see the weakness as well, he got the glint in his eye, like a hunter who just spotted a deer with a limp.

    Clever lad. She’s tough, that’s certain. But no doubt training with George’s guards meant that she never got hit back in return. First blood. Next, distract your opponent. What would distract someone like Ryla? I’m sure you’ll work it out.


    Robert took a step forward and Ryla retaliated by charging forward again, swinging a left hand that Robert caught in his right hand. There was a brief moment when all was still, before he pulled her close and gave her a quick kiss on the lips. She flinched backwards, and he swept her legs from under her, leaving her flat on her back as he placed a foot on her neck.

    Thaddeus heard George growl in his throat and begin to move forward, so he swept out an arm to stop him.

    “None of that. It was a fair tactic.”

    “Damned tactics, he just-“

    “Ryla can punch him as many times as she likes in response. When she’s my apprentice. What do you say? She gets to beat Robert up and you get the satisfaction of me recounting the stories of said beatings.”

    George sat in thought for a moment, before clenching Thaddeus’ hand and shaking it.

    “Make my daughter the best damned fighter out there, Jenkins. That’s a promise I’ll hold you too.”

    Thaddeus gave a toothy grin as he heard another shriek from Robert as Ryla leapt up and punched him in the face again.

    “Oh, don’t you worry. I don’t think I’ll have too much to teach her once Robert’s had his turn.”
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    Chapter 11: Morjan (November 7th)
    Carson woke with a bucket of cold water being thrown over him, a cold chill running through him as he looked up, his uniform soaked and clinging to him. He was in a sort of camp, about two dozen tents or so scattered around the place, with their owners glaring at him. And in front of him stood a bearded man, wearing clothes that looked a little expensive for someone living in such a place. He looked down on Carson with a raised eyebrow.

    “I heard that you gave my daughter some trouble, Isim scum. I don’t take kindly to such insults.” His voice became a low growl as he spoke his final sentence, his accent thick as he spoke the same language that the raiders earlier had.

    Carson didn’t respond, he wanted to but his tongue had decided that now would be a good time to freeze up, leaving him speechless as the man crouched down and grabbed his face in one hand, wrenching it up to look him in the eyes.

    “Now, your next answer determines a good deal of things. Your name and rank in the Navy.”

    He let go and waited for his answer, Carson becoming aware of a large number of rifles being pointed at his head. As much as it pained him to give his name, he didn’t honestly have much choice.

    “Carson Hardcastle. My Rank is…well, my rank doesn’t matter. My brother’s ranks…”

    “Admirals.” The chief finished his sentence for him. His eyes lit up and his tongue flicked out of his mouth and licked his beard as he began to laugh.

    “That’s right my lucky fellows! We have us a prize fit for a king, literally. How much do you think Isim will pay us for him? Eight hundred credits?”
    He grabbed Carson by the ear and jabbed a finger with a jagged nail at him.

    “Maybe a thousand if we threaten to remove some bits.”

    The group cheered, several of the men running up and shaking the chief’s hand vigorously. Forgotten momentarily, Carson had a chance to really check his surroundings and realised that it was morning. Wherever Jenkins had set down the Sickle, it was miles away. Around them were plains that stretched off to the horizon and there were no landmarks that he’d seen from the air.

    Then he was grabbed again and thrown back to the ground. The smile had faded again, and he had that serious look in his eye.

    “Now, I have a couple more questions. The name of the ship you were on. My boys couldn’t quite catch its name owing to the chaos.”

    Carson couldn’t really smile at a time like this, but in his most defiant voice said the two words that would strike fear in the hearts of the enemies of Isim.

    The Sickle.”

    The chief laughed again and motioned to the people around him.

    “You heard that? We only went and attacked Thaddeus Jenkins ship! Oh I can’t WAIT to see the look on his face when he gives us our money in exchange for the boy. We made a fool out of the best captain out there and there’s nothing he can do about it but turn his heels and flee back to his king like a whipped dog!”

    More cheering came from the crowd and Carson could only slump forward in defeat. So much for Thaddeus’ reputation, clearly it meant nothing to these barbarians. In moments, he was dragged away and tied to a rock in the middle of the camp. The rope was old and worn, but it was strong, strong enough to hold his arms tight to his sides. He struggled for a few moments, but seeing that there was no way out, simply sat in silence as the camp went about its business.

    However, his day was made slightly more miserable when the chief approached and sat beside the rock, staring out at his people go about their work. Then he spoke, this
    time in the language of Isim. It made sense, if he was going to rob everyone he came across, he might as well have learned the language to insult them.

    “I suppose we must seem like cruel folk to you, Carson?”

    “I may be slightly biased.” He responded, not bothering to hide his sarcasm.

    “Well, I’m not a cruel man anyway. Name’s Morjan. Remember it and thank me that I didn’t have you gutted on the spot for laying hands on my daughter.” He glanced behind him as Mila walked around in the background, barking some orders.

    “As much as she wanted me to.” He finished, before leaning back on the rock, head next to Carson’s.

    There was a moment’s silence before the chief spoke again, chuckling to himself.

    “Y’know, I wonder if I’ve gone soft in my old age.”

    Carson turned his head towards him and raised an eyebrow. If tying people to rocks and threatening to remove bits of them was considered soft in the Hundred Tribes, then he didn’t want to know what the toughest of people would have done to him.

    “You see,” the chief continued, ignoring Carson’s expression, “Back in the day I wasn’t going to be inheriting this old place. My old man was going to give it to my brother, but sadly his life was cut short when another scumbag decided that he wanted this place. Burned his tent down in the night. Shame really, there were some really valuable pieces there. So Martan and I were sent off into the wilds, armed with only a pistol.”

    Then he turned properly to Carson and grinned, revealing several missing teeth. He leaned in close and whispered the next part.

    “So, a week later, we were set on by a pack of bison. You ever seen the bison round here boy?”

    Carson shook his head and the chief chuckled again.

    “These things, twice the size of a normal bison with grinding teeth and two horns the length of my arm. Well, normally they can be stopped by throwing some meat at them and legging it. So, as I had the pistol, I did what I could. I shot Martan in the leg and made a run for it. Poor old guy, never had much brains on him. I do sometimes miss him when I think of the screams he made as they opened him up.”

    Carson recoiled slightly as he told this story.

    “How? How could you kill your own brother?” He asked incredulously

    “You think I liked the idea? Nah, it was life and death boy. You’ll learn that one day.” The chief responded with a shrug, before resuming with his story again.

    “So, I was alive. But still without a place to call my own. So I let the brain tick for a while, before I thought of a brilliant idea. Off I went to the nearest of the Hundred Tribes and politely asked the man in charge, a young, clever one called Bjorn, for a bit of help. I even offered to leave his lands alone and go raid in some other part of the land. So, how surprised do you think the usurper was when I come back with a rather large army behind me? Surprised enough to run screaming into the night, that’s for certain.”

    Carson’s blood went cold. He was certainly not dealing with some stupid barbarian, anyone capable of convincing one of the Hundred Tribes for help was good. With a sigh, Morjan rose and dusted off his clothes.

    “So you see Carson, I’ve done some horrible things to get where I am. Just in case you had any thoughts of escape, or somehow that I’d be convinced to release you even if I didn’t receive the ransom.”

    So it wasn’t a story for the sake of boredom. He was trying to intimidate Carson, make him feel feeble in the face of a madman. If there was one thing that people said defined the Hardcastles, it was stubbornness. Stubbornness that Carson would happily show this chief.

    “You made a mistake attacking Jenkins. Isim will respond in kind.” He said defiantly, before spitting at the chief’s feet. It was a hopeless and stupid gesture, but unlike Morjan he didn’t have a long story detailing Isim’s vengeance on those who wronged the kingdom.

    “Save the spitting, boy. If the ransom doesn’t come through…well, you’ll have plenty to spit then.”

    And with that he’d left, leaving Carson alone in the midday sun. The temperature was the least of his worries though, as it cooled by a breeze blowing in from the south. He turned to look that way, the wind buffeting his face as he saw the endless plains stretching before him, the black storm clouds gathering in the distance rearing up like a horse does before it’s rider spurs him on into a bloody melee.

    And there he’d sat for the whole day, watching the nomads go about their business. A messenger had been sent out on the fastest horse, carrying a message that would be delivered directly to Nosorum’s doors. Then they’d gone out on a hunting trip, coming back with several horse carcasses and several sets of bloody clothing. More unfortunates fallen foul of the ruffians, Carson thought to himself, as they began to share the spoils amongst themselves.

    As night fell, his head lolled and he braced himself for a rough night. He’d slept in strange places, most notably on a balcony in the Citadel after a night of exploration went wrong, but none would be quite as uncomfortable as this position. He tried to move himself to get more comfortable, yet the knots were knotted tight, he could barely move his wrists, let alone the rest of his body.

    With a grunt, he leaned back, head on the extremely rough rock he was tied too. Nothing would be pleasant tonight, he was sure of that. It seemed as though everything about this rock was purposefully designed to hurt, a small protrusion constantly jammed itself into his back. He let out a groan of despair and shuffled a little to try and get a little more comfortable.

    Then he felt the knife pressed against his neck. A voice hissed into his ear,

    “Listen closely and nod if you understand. I’m taking you back to Isim. Understood?”

    Carson nodded slowly, each time he did the blade inched closer to his neck. He was wrong, being tied to a rock would be ideal compared to having a knife wielder drag him
    away. But he didn’t have much of a choice in the matter.

    “If I deliver you, I’ll want a nice reward for it. I need you to promise me that.” The voice spoke again, more urgently.

    Carson nodded again. Whoever this person was, he’d sell them out to the hangman instantly given the chance, but one’s thoughts tend to veer away from treachery when a knife is against your flesh.

    “Good.”

    Then the knife moved away and he heard the sound of his ropes being cut through. A few grunts later and they came free, Carson slowly getting to his feet, wincing as he finally stood up straight after a day of sitting. Then the knife came back to his neck and the voice continued talking.

    “Now, we walk out of here quietly. If you shout, you die.”
    With a nod, Carson began to walk, his footsteps soft as he passed several sleeping nomads, snoring into their horseskin rugs. For what seemed like an eternity, he stepped between them, the knife never leaving his throat, his kidnapper’s footsteps constantly behind him.

    Eventually they cleared the camp, but still he walked until they were well away from the light of the fires. Then the pressure on his neck finally relented, allowing him to gasp out his relief. He turned to face his kidnapper and found himself face to face with Morjun’s daughter, Mila.

    “You?”

    “Shut up.” She said, casually raising Carson’s pistol. Loaded, of course.
    “We’re going to walk for a few hours then sleep. If you try anything, you get a bullet in the leg. If you want to see home again, you’ll do exactly as I say.”
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    Ugh...so, where do I begin?

    First of all, sorry for the lack of update this week. Honestly, for a long time I was able to keep ahead for a long time because I'd written much of the early chapters in August. But at the moment I'm in quite the rut creatively. I know where I'm going, but getting there is proving to be tricky. I will have an update for Sunday, though I don't quite know what form that update will take, whether it'll be a new side story or a new main chapter. We will see.

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    Side Story 4: The Prince on the Piano

    22 years previously

    Thaddeus looked up from his bedside table, as the heavy rain intensified outside and started to make audible noise on the window.

    “What a night for this nonsense.” He sighed to nobody in particular. Of all the people to choose to represent Isim as an ambassador to Castfor, Victor has chosen him. If Thaddeus didn’t know any better, he’d have called him an idiot.

    Now here he was, in the very capital city of the rival kingdom. While Flosellum couldn’t quite compare to the majesty of Urbpolis, even Thaddeus had to admit that it was a very beautiful place, row upon row of flowers along the sides of the streets that fascinated his apprentices to no end. And yet, a mere fifty miles from Urbpolis, Thaddeus had never felt so far from home. From a young age he’d been told of the evils of Castfor, how they’d aggressively attacked in the past and wanted to replace the Black Wolf with their own emblem, the Red and Gold Sun.

    He adjusted his pristine naval uniform and checked to see if he’d properly shaved in a nearby mirror. He would’ve worn his usual coat, but Victor had simply glared at him when he suggested it and Thaddeus had known better than to question that look. He had to admit that he looked even more devilishly handsome than usual, twisting his body to admire the way the blue jacket with gold trimming looked. Then he noticed something and leaned forward, grabbing a small chunk of his brown hair. And there, a grey hair sticking out from his head.

    Thirty eight years old and already going grey. He yanked it out and glared at it, willing it to just be a trick of the light. But no, it was an honest to Lupum grey hair. He decided to blame Robert for this, the boy had taken at least a decade off his life and it was fun to blame him for anything that went wrong. Plus the boy had been mocking his age ever since they’d met, he dreaded the laughter that would follow if he actually saw the grey.

    He was interrupted by a knock at the door.

    “Come in.” he called out and Robert stepped into the room, also immaculately dressed. Thaddeus couldn’t quite believe it. He’d had trouble introducing him to the finer points of bathing for the first two years and yet here he was, everything so perfectly well done. And he looked almost as good as Thaddeus had at that age. Not quite, but fairly close.

    “How is it?” Robert asked, his voice full of concern. It was perfectly natural, when Thaddeus first had to dress smartly at an official engagement, he’d pestered his father to check him to make sure he hadn’t messed anything up. With a glance, Thaddeus saw nothing wrong with Robert’s look.

    “A-astonishing. You tied your own shoelaces as well?”

    “Well...not exactly, I had to have Hralfur help me with that but the rest was all me.”

    Speaking of Hralfur, he entered next wearing the same outfit as both Thaddeus and Robert. He wore it well, though the scimitar at his waist probably made him look slightly more intimidating. Behind him, Ryla walked in, wearing a dress that Thaddeus had had to practically force her into wearing. It was nice though, slightly behind the times in terms of fashion because it went down to her knees rather than being one of the long, flowing kind that many rich young ladies were starting to were. It was also much, much less expensive.

    “I look ridiculous.” She said, looking herself up and down and shaking her head.

    “No need to sell yourself so short. I’m sure loads and loads of rich young men will be queuing up to dance with you.” Robert replied as he adjusted his belt. That got him a glare that could have shattered stone.

    With all four gathered, Thaddeus shushed the two of them. As fun as infighting was back home, in this place it would be a very, very bad idea. He pulled all three of them close and checked that every door and window was shut. It would not do to have someone hear about this.

    “All right. First of all, don’t do anything that might bring disrepute on the kingdom. I brought you all because I was sure it would make a good impression, especially on King Avelor.”

    He looked up again. Still nobody there. Good.

    “Speaking of Avelor, you three are not to speak with him. Talk to anyone else, but leave him to me. He’s a Castforian through and through, a snake that will try and trick you with his words. I can handle that forked tongue of his. Got it?”

    All three of them nodded and he let out a sigh of relief. Maybe Victor’s faith wasn’t so misplaced after all. Motioning for them to follow, he opened the door and headed out into the corridor.

    They came to a door, guarded by two men in the red and gold of Castfor. Thaddeus stepped towards them and was unsurprised to see the spring loaded bayonets release immediately with a metallic screech, grating on his ears.

    “Thaddeus Jenkins, Isim’s ambassador. Unarmed.” he glared at them as he spoke and with a nervous glance they relented, pulling their weapons back. Of course, Thaddeus wasn’t really unarmed, he’d put a pistol in his inner pocket and all of the ‘ceremonial’ weapons that Robert and Hralfur were carrying were also deadly. Not that these paranoid fools needed to know that.

    The doors swung open, revealing a sight that made Thaddeus raise an eyebrow in surprise. By far, it was the biggest ballroom he’d ever seen, his own one could not even be considered small when compared to this gigantic structure. Hundreds upon hundreds of people were there, feasting from tables filled to the brim with food and drink and in the middle of the room there was a tremendous crowd of people dancing to the music of fiddlers and drums.

    “Wow.” He heard Hralfur mutter and he quite agreed. If only Castfor spent it’s wealth on warships instead of wine, Isim’s days would almost certainly be numbered. Fortunately, their king seemed far too busy with merriment to bother with such matters, Thaddeus could see him standing at the highest table, raising a toast with a large number of inebriated men, many of whom seemed about ready to collapse.

    Turning to his three apprentices, Thaddeus pointed at Avelor.

    “I’ll talk to him. Mingle with the rest of them and try to make small talk. Ryla, speak with me later about anything interesting you learn. If we have to drink as much as they are, we might as well do something before we pass out.”

    With that, they drifted apart, merging into the crowd as Thaddeus looked on, an uneasy feeling in his heart. Steeling himself, he pushed past several people on his way to that top table. Fortunately, the crowd had parted and Avelor could be seen leaning back in his chair, observing his party with a smile of satisfaction etched onto that face. His eyes drifted as Thaddeus approached and instantly became slightly wider, which Thaddeus noted with a smug feeling of satisfaction.

    My reputation precedes me! Victor will love to hear that I made this fool flinch.


    “Captain Jenkins!” Avelor rose from his seat and took Thaddeus’ hand, shaking it eagerly. His smile did seem genuine, so Thaddeus tried his best to smile back, but it felt forced.

    “Avelor…Victor sends his happiest regards. He heard that you suffered a nasty fall a few months back and wanted to know how you were getting on. And as you invited him to your party, I thought I’d take up his position.”

    “Well, my hip was broken, but it’s healed rather well, thank you very much. I must say that when I received Victor’s letter saying that he wouldn’t be coming I was….heartbroken.” He placed a hand on his heart as he spoke and sighed wistfully. Thaddeus kept his smile, but he wanted to punch this insulting wretch in the face for being so coy about his dislike of Victor. To be fair, the feeling between the two kings was quite mutual.

    “Well, he couldn’t come, the Queen is very close to giving birth. You will understand that he wanted to stay.”

    “I understand entirely, I remember my own son being born like it was only yesterday. It’s a big moment in a man’s life. Just let him know that the next few years will likely be hell, assuming his kid screams as much as mine.”

    “I’ll be sure to do that. Anyway, if you don’t mind, I’ll go ahead and mingle with your guests and drink your alcohol.”

    Avelor laughed and slapped Thaddeus on shoulder, he made a mental note to wash that uniform later.

    “Of course! I’ll leave you to it then. But before you go, would you like to have breakfast with me tomorrow? I’d be delighted to speak with you somewhere private.” He extended his hand again, but Thaddeus kept his arms by his side and shook his head with a soft laugh.

    “Forgive me, Avelor. I intend to fully drink myself into a stupor and I’ll not wake until at least mid-afternoon. I appreciate the offer though, have a wonderful night.”

    Thaddeus bowed and quickly hurried away. Anything to get as far away from the head of this coiled snake as possible. Passing a nearby table, he reached down and grabbed a glass of wine, a reward for his troubles and certainly more than Victor would ever have given him. He noticed an open doorway, leading to a room that was lit by a solitary candle. His curiosity was piqued and he headed for that door, pausing on the threshold to look for his apprentices.

    He finally found Hralfur, who seemed to be trapped next to one of the pillars that surrounding the rectangular hall by a large group of young ladies, all in dresses that looked as though they cost ten times what Ryla was wearing. Thaddeus stifled a laugh for the poor boy, for these girls he was practically exotic, one of the strange heathen folk whom they had never seen. They seemed to be pestering him with questions and one had slipped her arm into his and was practically pulling him towards the middle of the room.

    Robert and Ryla were nowhere to be seen, but he cast his worry aside. After all, the two of them were more than capable to looking after themselves. He walked into the room and shut the door behind him, muffling the music. It was then that he was able to hear something else above it all, the faint sounds of a piano playing. It brought a lot of memories flooding back as he took a sip of his glass of wine. His father had often sat and played piano for him as a child, had even used the same tune that was being played now.

    He followed the noise to another open door at the opposite end of the room and emerged into a smaller ballroom, this one poorly lit and much smaller. He could not help but think that this place had far too many ballrooms for its own good, surely one would have sufficed? He turned left as he entered and saw a lone piano, with a boy playing it.

    His back was turned as he played and Thaddeus had no intention of stopping him. He leaned on the door frame with his eyes closed, listening to the tune intently. It was almost as good a tune as he remembered, a few minor mistakes here and there but nothing bad enough to ruin it.

    He took another sip of wine as the tune reached its climax, ending with the boy running his hands down the keys and ending the song on the lowest note. Just as he remembered, just the way it should have been.

    “You play rather well,” he spoke softly. The boy jumped out of his seat and spun around, pressing his back into the piano.

    “Who are you and why were you watching me play? If you lay a hand on me, my father will-“

    His eyes went wide as Thaddeus stepped into the light.

    “Wait. Are you- are you Thaddeus Jenkins?” he stammered, his hands clenching the edge of the instrument.

    “Aye, that’s me. Since we’re doing introductions, may I ask your name and why you enjoy playing that tune so very much?” Thaddeus responded, raising his free hand and giving a comforting smile.

    “Alexavier, sir. Prince Alexavier. The pleasure is all mine though,” the boy replied, pushing himself off the piano and shaking Thaddeus hand vigorously. And though Thaddeus smiled and responded in kind, he couldn’t help but feel a slight tingling in his stomach. Prince Alexavier, the only son of Alevor and heir to Castfor, was mere feet from the pistol hidden in his jacket. It would be so easy just to-

    He’s just a child man!


    He pulled his thoughts away from the pistol and focused more on the young man in front of him. He seemed lost for words as he shook Thaddeus’ hand, just staring at him. Clearly he would have to take charge of the situation.

    “You didn’t answer my second question. How did you learn to play that little tune and why play it now, when your father invited half the important people in all the civilised world? Shouldn’t you be out shaking hands and faking smiles?”

    “I will be playing the piano for the last dance of the evening. I was just getting some practice in beforehand. As well as my fake smiles and handshaking skills.”

    As Thaddeus chuckled, Alexavier continued,

    “But enough about me, I imagine you have FAR more interesting stories than a mere fourteen year boy does. I want to hear some, especially some of the more outlandish ones.”

    He pointed towards the other end of the ballroom, where there was a large door that led outside, the moon starting to shine as it emerged from behind a cloud.

    “Walk with me.” The Prince asked and Thaddeus obliged him, still holding the wine glass as he followed him out of the door. They emerged on the skydocks, not half as big as Urbpolis’ version, but still fairly large. As they strolled past row upon row of schooners, Alexavier began to pester him with questions.

    “Is it true that you once evacuated an entire company that was trapped in Rivcon, while running a gauntlet of cannon and musket fire?”

    “One of my finest moments, actually. The old Sickle lost a propeller and had a hole put in the sails but on she went and saved a lot of lives.” Thaddeus replied, with a wistful sigh as he took another sip from his glass.

    “What about the one where you seduced the King of Rivcon’s wife and got her to poison him?”

    He almost spat out the wine at that and glared at Alexavier, who looked mildly amused. Thaddeus stopped walking and, though keeping his voice low, shouted at him.

    “Seduced the King of- what idiot fed you that little bit of nonsense?”

    “Actually, father brought it up one day over dinner.” The prince shrugged at him and kept on walking. They were now reaching the end of the docks and above them loomed a frigate, a fairly new one at that.

    Thaddeus reminded himself to continue thinking up insults about Alevor. In the meantime, he continued to protest his innocence.

    “I did NOT seduce his wife! I’ve never even been close to his wife. I don’t even know her name! What kind of stories does your father make up about people from Isim?”

    “You wouldn’t want to hear what he once accused your King of doing. Anyway, I wanted you out here because I wanted to show you this.” He pointed to the frigate and stared expectantly at Thaddeus. He stared at the ship for a moment, sizing it up. Then he chuckled at Alexavier and patted him on the shoulder.

    “Not a bad ship, boy. Yours, I’m guessing.”

    “Yes. I asked for it so I could…well, I suppose follow in your footsteps.”

    “That’s stupid.” Thaddeus replied instantly, glaring at him. He drained his glass and walked over to the side of the skydocks, holding it over the edge of the thirty foot drop. It was a stupid thing to say and now presented the perfect opportunity to put this upstart in his place.

    “What are you doing?” Alexavier asked, suddenly quite nervous.

    “Let me explain. Say that my deeds are the wine that once filled this glass. Every story tastes slightly differently, but this particular glass makes it unique. Now say that the glass is my body and watch it fall.”

    He dropped the glass over the side and about three seconds later it smashed onto the grassy hill below, breaking into a hundred pieces. He spoke once more, this time quieter and softer.

    “Ultimately, if a different glass is used for the same sort of wine, it will never taste the same and certainly will never taste as good. So take this little lesson, the only lesson I’d ever give to a Castforian, to heart. If you want to surpass me, don’t seek to follow me, because nobody will ever be as good as me at what I do. Do you really think that this heap of sticks would impress me? Do you really think a mere fourteen year old could ever hope to surpass me in my own little kingdom, the sky itself?”

    Alexavier stood dumbfounded, his mouth slightly open,his tongue well and truly tied. Thaddeus felt that smug satisfaction once more. If he couldn’t mock Avelor openly, he could at least chastise his son’s hubris. Then he was thrown right back into reality as Alexavier marched forward and stood toe to toe with Thaddeus, glaring up at him despite being almost two heads shorter. And he spoke, calmly but with a fire behind his eyes that surprised even Thaddeus.

    “Is that a challenge, Captain Jenkins?”

    “No. It was a warning. You will never be as good as me and that’s the end of it.” Thaddeus replied sternly. These personal honour types were irritating as anything he’d ever had to deal with. He’d just started getting Hralfur to stand quietly if someone even breathed something disrespectful to him, and now this upstart wanted to fight because of the hard, painful truth.

    Yet it was a truth that he seemed to want to ignore, he removed a lone glove and threw it at Thaddeus’ feet.

    “I’ll train myself, my crew and my fleet. And one day, I’ll be back to get that glove back from your cold, dead hands. Have a good day.”

    He walked away, hands in his pockets, with a scowl on his face. Thaddeus couldn’t resist throwing one final line at him.

    “Stick to playing the piano boy. You’ll be so much happier there than you will be trying to fight me.”

    He kept on walking, disappearing into the night as Thaddeus stared after him, chuckling into his hand. Had he been a bit harsh? Perhaps, but that boy’s determination had been unexpected, to say the least. It would be best to stop him before he became strong enough to challenge him. Because, as much as Thaddeus wanted to believe otherwise, he saw a little of himself in that boy and that frightened him, chilled him to the bone. For if one Thaddeus Jenkins could change the world, what might two manage to accomplish?


    A day later than planned, this side story was a little longer than I expected, but I think I got everything in I needed to. Hopefully you enjoy it.
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    Haha, what an epic line to start with for the side story.

    This will take me some time but I'm liking this a lot Lortano, really great work has been put into this.





















































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    Haha, what an epic line to start with for the side story.

    This will take me some time but I'm liking this a lot Lortano, really great work has been put into this.
    This turned into something far bigger than I initially planned, but it seems to have turned out alright. I have the outline for next few main story chapters, leading up to the end of the first Act of this story. It will be fun to see how it continues. Everyone's support is always appreciated though.

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    I'm very happy to see this is still going well. I enjoyed your "side-story", and I'm intrigued to discover what Mila's plan is; surely if she tries to take Carson all the way to Isim, she's likely to be captured (or killed) the moment she has the reward she wants? Or possibly even sooner. So now I want to know what she's planning to do!






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    So, once more updated at absurd times in the morning, here's the next chapter, another one for Nosorum. Initially, this was created in order to get one character to go to where I wanted them, so I decided to expand it a little in order to look further at Nosorum. I'd also like to note that, for the purpose of continuity, I will be posting the date each chapter takes place on in the chapter titles, relative to each other. Unfortunately, I am spectacularly lame at month naming, so I'm afraid we'll be using the usual dating system.

    Chapter 12: The Letter and the Notes (November 8th)


    Nosorum leaned on one of the many balconies that stuck out of the Citadel as the evening sun began to sink towards the horizon. Below him, the Royal Navy sat in dock, the army of sailors beginning to thin as night drew close.

    He stretched out his arms and yawned loudly. It had been a particularly busy day, as all his days had been for the past week. With all the stresses of dealing with Carson’s absence a few days previously out of the way, fresh new stresses had come about. Organising a fighting formation was a pain, the egos he had to deal with all wrestled for the best positions. This captain wanted to be in the vanguard, this one wanted to be in the rear guard, this one wanted to be next to Sykil. Endless, maddening and ultimately pointless were the words that came to mind as he thought about this bickering.

    He turned to go, longing for a hot bath and a bed, only to find Marshal Sykes heading towards him, her strides filled with purpose. She came close, her uniform creased from
    all of the running about she’d undoubtedly been doing that day, a small piece of a paper scrunched up in her hand.

    “My King. I just received a message from Thaddeus’ messenger pigeon.”

    Nosorum raised an eyebrow. Thaddeus wasn’t supposed to be back for another week. What could possibly-

    “Did something happen?” he asked.

    She held up the letter, a broken green seal had been holding the thing together, and spoke again.

    “Just a few shots fired by some raiders. Nothing to worry about. But he wants me to come on out and supply him with some more men and to take the wounded home.”

    “Is Carson-“, Nosorum began.

    “He’s fine.” She interrupted him immediately. She knew as well as he did that if Carson was injured in any way, Sykil would immediately send for the fastest ship possible and go after them. And Anna…he didn’t even want to think about what she’d do.

    “Wouldn’t it be easier to send out a faster ship?” he asked again, but she shook her head and once again gestured to the letter.

    “Normally we would but in this case, he feels that having someone he trusts to do the job properly would be a better idea.”

    “Very well then. You can go. Lupum’s blessing upon you Marshal.” Nosorum finally relented and bowed his head. He trusted her enough to do her job well and the fleet wouldn’t be ready to sail for at least another two weeks, so it wouldn’t be a huge problem.

    “Good. But, and this is a personal request, don’t tell the admirals where I’ve gone. If they thought even a hair on Carson’s head had been harmed…”

    She was right, of course. The last thing he needed were both admirals rushing off into potential disaster. So Nosorum nodded again in response.

    “I dread to think. Very well. I’ll let them know you’ve headed south to oversee the levying of extra troops. I want you back as soon as possible though. I need someone to shut the louder captains up.”

    “Thank you your majesty. I’ll be back as quickly as I can,” she replied, giving a curt bow as she turned to leave. She paused as she reached the doors and spoke one final time, her voice lower and quieter.

    “Keep the loudmouths in check while I’m gone. You are the King after all, I’m sure a few veiled threats here and there will do wonders for the headache they give you.”

    He gave a reassured smile and gave her a farewell wave.

    “I’ll keep it in mind. Good luck, Marshal. Give Thaddeus my blessing.”

    And with that, she was gone, lost in the corridors that were so vast Nosorum once got lost in them when he was younger. He was alone once again, once more lost in his dark and troubled thoughts. It wasn’t so bad when he was speaking to someone, anyone else, but whenever he was alone he heard the shot once more and that voice, as cold as the heart of a Rivconese moneylender, repeating in his head.

    My name is Hralfur of the Thanos Cult. Farewell King Nosorum, may your reign be profitable.”

    And every time he heard the voice, his hand would start to hurt again, throbbing into the bandage. He’d think of his reply to that monster, his promise to kill anyone who opposed him in his quest for vengeance, wondering if he had the guts to go through with it. But of course he did. These heathens were vile people indeed if they would protect a band of murdering lunatics, why should he feel bad for the deaths of such scum?

    And if the first scouting reports were true, there were a lot of heathen scum to kill. So far, at least ten of the hundred tribes had begun to move south and these were merely the northern ones, the central and southern tribes would likely be moving in even greater numbers. So many willing to lay down their lives for the actions of a murderer, who followed a god who cared little for them.

    He began to walk back to his room, nodding and smiling at those he met while his mind whirled with thoughts of revenge, how best to end the war decisively, how best to force the Prince of Hierofalt to pay for what he had done. And even if the assassin had lied about his employer, it mattered little, ultimately Krolssi wanted to stand between them, he was as guilty as they were even if he had done nothing wrong.

    When at last he bolted his door behind him, he found himself looking at one of his walls, which was covered by a huge piece of parchment with large pins pinning it to his wall. At the very top of this parchment, written in his own hand, were three words.

    The Thanos Cult.


    He hadn’t entirely slept through his history classes, one of the most important things he’d learned was that knowledge was almost as powerful as having a large army and lots of guns. So he had found as many books as he could on the Cult in the Citadel’s extensive library and got to reading about them. And he had learned much in a short space of time, though details were extremely sketchy to say the least.

    There were four chief positions within the Cult itself. The Head, the Mouth, the Spear and the Dagger. He’d split the parchment into four pieces respectively, each one dedicated to these leaders. Only one was filled out at all, that being the Spear. Hralfur had been kind enough to give his rank, so he’d also taken the chance to find out as much as he could about him, especially from Ryla. The rest were blank, no book had any inkling of who might currently lead the Cult, nor about any other important members for that matter.

    What frightened him the most about Hralfur was that, before betraying them for the Cult, he’d been a loyal servant. He’d served in the one war Nosorum had ever lived through, the War for the Queen, against the Kingdom of Castfor and even earned a honourary lordship from Father after the Battle of the Skies that had ended that war. Unlike the rest of them, he was no degenerate born in a backwater who knew no different. He CHOSE to leave and be a hired killer. Who could do that? Who could betray something like father with no remorse and kill him for money? No one Nosorum wanted to be left alive, that’s for sure.

    The other frightening thing was the description for the Dagger in one of the books. Unlike the rest, the Dagger did not operate from the main Temple of Thanos in Hierofalt. He was the ultimate spy, usually a secret convert who lived in the Hundred Tribes, or even in Isim or Castfor. From there, they posted information back to the Cult. That worried him even more than Hralfur, at least with Hralfur he had a face, a name and knowledge about him. The Head and Mouth could be identified with time. But the Dagger could be his own generals, his own admirals, even his own servants.

    He grabbed one of the books he was halfway through reading, a detailed history of the Cult from the very beginning and lay down on his bed. Rather uncomfortably, there was a chapter titled ‘The King slayers, Kings of Isim murdered by the Cult.’ He decided to skip that one and found himself on a page that had been written on, small letters written in black ink filled the margins. He turned the book on its side to read it and he had to try hard to, because unlike the beautifully written work in the middle of the page, this was scruffy and barely legible. Eventually, he finally managed to decipher it and it read,

    “The four leaders of the Cult come together and I can attest that they are Thanos Incarnate, as if the God himself came among mortals and cried his black tears of doom.”

    A second part on the bottom of the page was even scruffier than the one above,

    “The Dagger revealed himself as Lord Davenheart, who murdered the King after the Cult slaughtered his entire entourage in an ambush. He drove a knife into his heart.”

    And finally, at the very bottom of the page, was signed the name of the man who authored these little notes.

    “I am Localos Davenheart, the Dagger of Thanos.”

    His blood ran cold as he read that name. To think that a Thanos Cultist was able to sign his name in a book after he had committed high treason…
    He slammed the book shut and hurriedly placed it on his bedside table. If there was one thing he wanted more than ever, it was that nice, hot bath and to shove these nasty thoughts from his head for a while.

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    So, once again I miss a deadline due to work and the fact that I'm having trouble getting these last few chapters up to standard. While I can't really give you anything substantial, I will give this little tidbit from the far future. It doesn't spoil anything!

    Lortano's little tidbit.


    The mood was depressing, but there was one saving grace. At last Ryla had gained an apprentice. Finally she could raise others the way Thaddeus had raised her. She’d caught a relatively big fish, a member of the Davenheart family, supposedly quite skilled already. She’d asked him to visit her that very night and sure enough she heard the knock on her cabin door.


    “Come in.” she said, her voice stern as she placed the glass on her desk and stared unblinking at the entrance.


    The door creaked open and in walked a young man, the same age as Nosorum. His blond hair fell past his shoulders and seemed to shimmer in the flickering candlelight. As much as she was disinterested by looks in a fighter, he was hardly the best looking person, with a hooked nose and a mouth permanently twisted into an annoying smile.


    As he walked in, he brought his cane down on the floor, scratching it slightly. She tightened her grip on her glass, that floor had been kept pristine for years under her watch, now this smiling joke of a man thought he could just scratch it?


    You’ll pay for that, Davenheart.



    “Hello, Marshal Sykes.” The man said, leaning on the cane, though it looked more to be a fashion statement than an actual walking aid. Another reason to go extra hard on him when it came to training. He gave that smile again and continued.


    “We already spoke via letter, but let me introduce myself properly. I’m Loran. Loran Davenheart.”




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    Loran Davenheart, is it? Well, well...

    Nicely done, as always. I like your description of Nosorum's thoughts about Hralfur.

    (And I'm happy you with using the current English names of months (and so on). Invented calendars can be fun, but as a reader I find they are sometimes hard to keep track of. (Is it winter? Is it summer? When should the crops be harvested? Is it a really long time since the previous chapter, or just a week and a half?))






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    The Davenheart family sound intriguing and dangerous. I wonder whether, when the identity of the Dagger of Thanos has been revealed, a different assassin becomes the new Dagger, so that the Thanos Cult continue to have an unknown spy.

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    Maybe my work with Attila: Total War inspired this one, but I feel that this makes a bit of sense in the context of the world.

    Chapter 13: The Migration: 10th November


    Three days. For three days he had been dragged on this miserable journey by a crazy girl who would sooner put a bullet in him than speak one word. Carson had endured much these past days, for three it had rained nonstop, for one he’d gone five hours without water. The most vicious slave driver could not have compared to Mila, she kept his hands bound while they walked and when they slept she bound his legs as well for good measure. And the silence. For the first day they hadn’t said a word to each other. It had nearly driven him mad and almost made him wish that he was back in Morjan’s camp hearing more rambling stories from the chief.

    “How long until we reach Isim?” he said, trying to manoeuver his hands into a more comfortable position.

    “A day or two.” She replied, not one drop of empathy or enthusiasm in her voice.

    “You said that for the past two days!”

    “It’s because you spend more time asking questions than walking!” she snapped back, pointing to the pistol at her side. He sighed and kept walking. They’d reached an area that was slightly hillier, with many bushes with all sorts of colourful fruits on them. She, being the ever helpful person she was, had informed him that half of the fruits would kill him and the other half would make him wish he was dead. He imagined force feeding her one. It felt far more satisfying than it otherwise should.

    As he put his head down and prepared for another miserable day, he heard something in the distance. The sound that had filled his ears every day in the Citadel. The sound of a schooner engine. He stopped and turned around, scanning the skies for this schooner.

    “What is it?” Mila asked, slowly removing the pistol from its holster.

    “Schooner engines.”

    “They belong to your lot?” she asked, raising the pistol

    “Maybe-“

    She shoved him from behind and he tumbled down a small hill directly into a small bush, ripping his clothes and scratching his face as he cried out in surprise. He rolled out of the bush, groaning in pain as Mila rushed down the hill and leapt down to lay beside him, keeping her eyes on the sky.

    “You could have killed me!” he said, spitting at her feet.

    “A real shame.” She responded, with obvious sarcasm.

    “Lupum above if I ever get free I will throttle-“

    He froze as a schooner passed overhead, very, very close the ground.

    “One of yours?” Mila asked, clutching the pistol tighter.

    He looked up at the sails and saw not the Black Wolf of Isim, but writing in the language of Hierofalt. And it read ‘The True Successors,’ the infamous words that the first Prince of Hierofalt had supposedly uttered over a thousand years previously.

    “Since when did Hierofalt have schooners?” he asked, mostly to himself but Mila stared at him as if he were mad.

    “Do you actually believe that Hierofalt wouldn’t have flying ships? If there’s one thing they’re good at, it’s playing catch up. In any case, that’s a relief. Your schooners are actually pretty sharp, Hierofalt’s are sloppy and untrained.”

    Carson ignored her, worried for his brothers. If they had schooners, what else did that have up their sleeves? He was snapped out it by her dragging him to his feet again, brushing down some loose bits of bush that had gotten onto him during his fall.

    “There you are. Nothing broken, is there?” she asked, grinning at him. He pulled the nastiest scowl he could through his bruised face. Rolling her eyes, she half dragged him up the dip of the hill, before sitting down and sighing, running her hands through the grass. He lay next to her, still looking out for the schooner. And there, in the distance, he saw a cloud of dust approaching. He sat up, raising his tied hands and pointing in the direction of that cloud.

    “What is that?” he asked, as she frowned and sat up as well. She blinked a few times and stared at the cloud.

    “Oh bollocks.” She muttered and Carson felt the hand on his shoulder and another shove. With a cry of surprise, he tumbled back down the hill, becoming reacquainted with the bush at the bottom.

    “What now?” he growled at her, as she rolled him out, laying him on his front.

    “One of the Hundred Tribes. They’re migrating because of the war. Off to join Krolssi.”

    “Wait, the WHOLE tribe? As in the whole city?” The idea of a city on the move was as alien to Carson as some of the strangest rituals he’d heard about happening in the mountains of Rivcon.

    “Morjan told me about it. They leave the elderly and sick behind and enough food to keep them fed. Then they take everything that isn’t nailed down and head to Hierofalt. He’d know, he always complained about the measly pickings from when he robbed the empty cities.”

    “I have to see this, help me up.” He motioned to the crest of the hill and she stared at him with a look of dismay.

    “Are you mad? I’m not being spotted by a tribe, ESPECIALLY this tribe.”

    “Why this tribe? Did you kidnap one of them too?” Carson retorted. It was a foolish insult, but he would be lying if he said that he didn’t find it a little amusing.

    She hit him on the back of the head and threw him back to the ground.

    “It’s the Red River Tribe. They are vicious, even by the standards round here.”

    She paused for a moment and then let out a sigh of despair.

    “Fine, if you want to see them, I’ll show you. But these people are not nice folks that will bring you home, so don’t shout at them.”

    With that, she hauled Carson up the side of the dip and lay next to him, staring out at the most bizarre procession he had ever seen.

    At the front were lines and lines of men on horses. These horses were possibly the most brutal looking creatures Carson had ever laid eyes on, they all had armour on that covered their chests and heads, their eyes were beady dots that stared straight ahead. The men didn’t look much better, they all had large scimitars at their sides and over their backs were slung large rifles. Carson recognised these guns and was stunned when he saw what kind they were.

    “Those are four shot rifles. I thought Isim and Castfor were the only ones who had lots of them.”

    “You clearly haven’t heard much about these people. How do you think they got the name Red River?”

    He looked up again and saw the many banners that were fluttering in the wind and saw exactly how they got the name. The emblem was that of a man missing both arms, with blood gushing from the stumps and forming a stream at the unfortunate man’s feet. It would have been comical if he didn’t believe wholeheartedly that they would do that to him if they caught him.

    “I’m guessing they didn’t get it from their love of music.” He replied and Mila rolled her eyes again.

    “No. These scumbags want to keep up with the greatest military technology. They make all their wealth from mercenary work, all the great fighters form companies, make money and come back to deliver it to the city. If they’ve joined up with Krolssi, then your lot are going to have a serious time.”

    By now the infantry was passing them, marching in five columns with rifles across their backs, a sword on one side and a pistol on the other. He’d heard the term ‘Dressed to kill’ before, but never had he seen it used quite so literally. Otherwise, they all wore different clothing, no uniforms, not even a tabard to identify themselves.

    The same could not be said of the leader of this mad looking bunch, his clothes were essentially a giant signal fire calling attention to his greatness. For starters, he didn’t ride a horse, he rode a bison. And Carson had a horrible feeling that it was one of the carnivorous bison that Morjan had told him about, because this beast was gigantic. Even Mila took in a sharp intake of breath when she saw it.

    “How in all the gods’ names did he manage to tame that?” she said incredulously.

    The man himself was a giant, with a huge white beard that had streaks of red in it. The rest of his face was hidden under a metallic helmet, a visor covering his eyes. His arms were uncovered and they were so thick that Carson could practically see the muscles bulging underneath. He wasn’t sure which creature he’d rather face, the bison or the man riding it.

    “Maybe he just grabbed it and throttled it until it gave up.” He responded and for once Mila had nothing else to say, she just stared blankly at that huge monster of a man. He tore his eyes away from the bison and focused on what was following. There were cannons, with six men dragging each one. They were huge, twice as big as the men dragging it and he could barely imagine the size of the cannonball that could fit inside the gaping maw of those beasts.

    As he sat gaping, he felt himself being grabbed and once again he tumbled down the hill, this time hitting his head several times on the way down. Dazed, confused and with the desire to break a certain girl’s neck firmly entrenched in his mind, he sat up as Mila once again scurried down to him. She grinned at him and sat down, laying back with her arms behind her head.

    “Get some sleep, pinkskin. We aren’t going to be moving again until nightfall. There’s still tens of thousands of them coming and I’m not going out there until they’re all far away.”

    “Aren’t you going to tie my legs first?” he asked, almost hoping that she’d started to trust him.

    “Sure, get up there and run for it. I wonder what will kill you first, the rifles or that giant bison?”

    She had a point, a very annoying but very true point. Foiled once again, Carson lay back as well and rolled over so he faced away from her, directing his frustration at the bush that he’d become acquainted with so often. He glared at it and it merely waved back and forth in the breeze, as if it were giving him a mocking wave.

    Stupid bush, stupid kidnappers, stupid giant man eating bison.

    And with many, many childish insults on his mind, Carson drifted off to sleep and dreamt of all the places he’d rather be but sitting beneath a bush while the heathen armies marched past. Which in fairness was pretty much everywhere else he could think of at that moment.




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    So.

    At the moment, I'm working on the next chapter. It has turned out to be a HUGE chapter, I haven't even added any serious description or any indications as to who is actually speaking yet and it is already over 2000 words long. I doubt you'll see a chapter today, but if you do, it will likely be this mega chapter cut in half to help with readability.

    Later.

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    You know, I had entirely convinced myself that I'd already posted to tell you how much I liked that last chapter. But that was obviously just me going a bit mad. So, I really liked that chapter. The mad tribe and their enormous-carnivorous-bison riding leader are fun.

    I'll look forward to (some of) the next chapter whenever it's ready.






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    Default Re: The Skymaster's Shadow (Updated: 29/02/16) New updates every Sunday!)

    Quote Originally Posted by Caillagh View Post
    You know, I had entirely convinced myself that I'd already posted to tell you how much I liked that last chapter. But that was obviously just me going a bit mad. So, I really liked that chapter. The mad tribe and their enormous-carnivorous-bison riding leader are fun.

    I'll look forward to (some of) the next chapter whenever it's ready.
    The carnivorous bison is my favourite character thus far.

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