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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 06/05 w/ Chapter 11)

    Excellent last two chapters, the three brothers make for a constantly thrilling and humorous read and then the nightmare scene with Carson tantalised us a bit more with the back story. Also at the end do you mean "I'll have Sykil and Tarkon begging for mercy" since it is Carson talking?

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 06/05 w/ Chapter 11)

    Edited. I'm an idiot, thanks for compliments.

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    I decided that the stakes should be upped slightly. A long chapter as well.

    Chapter 12
    Grant could barely grip the wheel of the Sickle, as it heads straight towards the looming Crowltown. His uniform was ripped, covered in blood and not all of that was that of his enemies. His wide eyes scanned the ship, covered in bodies and bullet marks, the surviving crew members stepping between them, trying not to look at them.
    Stephens called up,

    “Captain. Shall we send signals to the-“

    “Damn the signals! Get us down and warn the people to start evacuating!”

    Stephens instantly fell quiet, the ship itself becoming deathly silent, broken only be the wind roaring and the humming of the engines.

    As they reached the skydocks, Grant didn’t even bother going through the usual procedures, simply putting the ship next to the dock, hovering in mid-air.

    “Stephens. Organise the evacuation. I’m heading up to the admiralty to destroy anything important.”

    He didn’t bother waiting for a reply, jumping over the side of the ship and landing on the dock. He began to sprint, rushing past a small crowd that had gathered, garnering looks of shock as he passed, as they noticed the blood.

    He reached the admiralty, up the stairs and burst into Crowl’s office. Jeremy was there, apparently finishing off organising all of the papers. He turned sharply as Grant entered, relief on his face as he realised who it was.

    “Ah, Captain. I wondered when the fleet would arrive. Where’s the admiral?”

    Grant paused for a moment to catch his breath.

    “Dead.” He eventually responded. Jeremy slowly removed his spectacles, his eyes filled with confusion, then shock as he noticed the blood on the uniform.

    “But I was told that he was on his way with the fleet! What happened?”

    “There’s no time. Isim is coming. They caught all three hundred of us in an ambush and Crowl….he...”
    Grant stopped himself. Crowl had survived many scrapes before, but this was something impossible, something that showed how truly out of his depth Crowl was.

    Jeremy turned to the papers.

    “You want to burn them all?”

    “Yes. No compromising information must be left for those bastards. Also…”

    He tossed a bloodstained pistol to Jeremy, who clumsily caught it and stared at it for a moment.

    “Captain, whose pistol is this?”

    “Crowls.”

    “And the bloodstain?”

    Grant bit his bottom lip to compose himself.

    “Crowl’s.”

    Jeremy shook his head, placed the pistol on the table and began rifling through the shelves. Grant joined him, pulling out each and every paper. The fireplace was already lit and soon enough the papers ended up in the hearth, withering in the heat. As they worked, the roar of engines from outside could be heard as merchants and civilian ships alike began to take off. Grant forced a smile at that, Stephens was still very good at doing his work.

    Then the smile faded as he recognised different engine sounds, the sounds of ships slowing down, which was unlikely to happen to a ship taking off. And if ships were coming in to land… Grant poked his head out of the window, to see hundreds of ships bearing the Black Wolf of Isim starting to land near the outskirts of the city, some so brazen as to land directly on the docks. He started to do some calculations in his head. Crowltown had a garrison of five hundred men. Assuming half of them would run, or surrender, the best they could muster would be around four hundred, the crew of the Sickle and the few other ships that had been based in Crowltown before the war could contribute a good deal.

    “We nearly done here?” He asked Jeremy, who was desperately poking the hearth with a pair of tongs.

    “Almost. Do you know who’s leading the invaders?” Jeremy replied, his voice barely able to keep itself from shaking.”

    “Unfortunately. His name is Thaddeus Jenkins.”

    “Jenkins….Jenkins… Wait, THE Thaddeus Jenkins? The pioneer of flight? Isn’t he over seventy?”

    “Yeah. He also beat Crowl to death with his own gun. He’s a damned monster. He might also have a personal problem with me.”

    “Have you met him before? Insulted him?”

    “No. But I’m sure you’ve read about the ship he made the first ever flight in.”

    “Yes…it was called….the Sickle if I remember correct-“

    His face paled and he shot a glance at Grant.

    “Your ship is called the Sickle.”

    “It is.”

    “You didn’t seriously-“

    “I didn’t realise until I looked over the side of the ship the day after the Exodus…”

    “You stole Thaddeus Jenkins ship? You suicidal-”

    He was interrupted by the sounds of gunfire that could be heard in the distance now and Jeremy’s actions became more hurried. Grant wondered if the Sickle got out of the way in time. He’d hate to see the ship be taken, even if it was technically stolen to begin with. Jeremy grunted and called over to Grant,

    “Captain, I’m just about finished. Can you check just to make sure it’s all up to standards?”

    Grant headed over and began to poke the ruined paper with tongs. It all seemed rather blackened and twisted enough.

    “It must be heart-breaking for you to have to burn all this.”

    “I’ve been tempted several times while I was trying to organise it.”

    It was nice to see that someone could find humour in such terrible times. As he spoke, Jeremy headed over to the window.

    “What did Jenkins look like? I’m rather curious on what the father of flight is like.”

    “White coat, practically bald. Got a nasty looking scimitar.” Grant replied. In his mind, he saw him walking through the crowds of desperate fighters, his scimitar dripping with blood. Crowl rushing up and being sliced across the chest like he was some amateurish fighter and the pistol being raised over and over by Jenkins as he slammed it into Crowl’s head.

    Jeremy froze suddenly and swallowed. Grant looked up.

    “What is it?”

    “There’s a man in a white coat heading down the road.”

    Grant cursed and rushed to the window. The admiral’s room overlooked the street in front of the building, the man in white was heading from the left side. With him came around two dozen men, armed with rifles and swords.

    “Did our resistance fall so easily?” Jeremy mused. Grant doubted that there had been much, if any. Still, they’d found some resistance here at
    least.

    Grant leaned his head out of the window and called out,

    “Isim bastards! I’ve got a present from Admiral Crowl for you!”

    And he emptied his pistol at Jenkins. The bullets bounced all around him, one striking a man behind him in the leg. As he fell, Jenkins looked up at Grant, a look of disapproval on his face. He gave a wave and two of the men fell out of line. The rest suddenly aimed their rifles up at Grant.

    Oh Shi-


    He grabbed Jeremy and pulled him down as the resulting rifle fire tore the window to pieces, shot after shot hitting the ceiling and bouncing all around. Then silence. Grant slowly raised his head, shaking loose bits of glass from his hair. The window was practically gone, the wood smashed and the glass in pieces around them.

    He got to his feet and handed Crowl’s pistol to Jeremy as he too rose.

    “Shoot at them. Have you ever shot something before?”

    “No.”

    “Well, everyone has to do something for the first time.”

    Grant turned and headed out of the room. By now, Jenkins and his cronies were probably in the building. Grant reloaded his pistol as fast as he could, when he heard the sound of clunking feet on the stairs. He peered over the banisters, below him three men were ascending, one of them was Jenkins, scimitar drawn. Grant took aim and fired, the first shot grazing the bannister next to Jenkins. The second shot struck the man in front of him in the head, sending him to the ground. The third, fourth and fifth shots struck the man behind Jenkins, sending him tumbling back down the stairs screaming. The sixth shot bounced off the scimitar, leaving a tiny dent in the gleaming surface.

    Jenkins glanced at his dead comrade and then began to run with a speed that Grant would not have expected a seventy year old man to have. He ran for Crowl’s door and slammed it shut behind him, just as a huge explosion rocked the outside of the building. He saw Jeremy holding a smoking pistol, in his mouth was the pin of a hand grenade. Grant didn’t bother asking at first, he dragged the now empty shelf to the door and lay it down to block the door.

    “What the hell was that?” he shouted to Jeremy.

    “I just remembered that the admiral kept a hand grenade in his desk. Apparently it was a sentimental piece from a fight with a pirate.”
    Grant remembered it all right. The Grenadier, a pirate renowned for his use of explosives. When cornered by Crowl, he’d panicked and hurled a grenade without removing the pin. Crowl caught it in one hand, while skewering the pirate with the other. He would have been happy to see it put to such good use.

    “How many did you get?”

    Jeremy peered out of the window and blanched.

    “Not sure. There’s…a lot of bits.”

    “Reload your pistol then. We’ve got Jenkins just outside the d-“

    As he spoke, the door broke apart as Thaddeus Jenkins’ boot came through, followed by the rest of the man. His aged face had the texture of worn sandstone, his eyes sparkling with the glow of a man who had achieved great things. He spoke, his voice stern and sharp.

    “I don’t appreciate being shot at, rebels.”

    “I don’t appreciate a full scale takeover of a city.”

    Jenkins seemed to consider him for a brief moment.

    “You were the bastard at the wheel of the Sickle during that engagement. Yes, I recognise your snivelling hide, the repugnant odour of a man who let his commander die, then succeeded only in retrieving the weapon used and not the actual body. So, where is the Sickle? Where is my ship?”

    So he hasn’t found it yet. Good.


    Jenkins raised his scimitar.

    “I suggest fighting. I’ve been ordered to take no prisoners, so surrendering is really pointless.”

    As he spoke, a roar came from outside the ruined window and the view was suddenly obscured by the deck of an airship. As Grant frowned in confusion, he saw Stephens standing next a small firing squad, aiming directly through the window.

    “DOWN!” Grant shouted and ducked as the room was torn apart by rifle fire. Jenkins dived as well, behind the desk as bullets went everywhere. As they stopped, Grant grabbed Jeremy and held him close.

    “I’m going to kill him. You go.”

    As he was about to throw Jeremy through the window onto the deck, he pulled him back.

    “Oh, and when you see Melissa, tell her…”

    He tried to think of something grandiose and romantic. Nothing sensible came to mind, so he just went with whatever he could think up.

    “Tell her that she’s aged rather well.”

    With that, he threw Jeremy onto the deck of the schooner, waving it away even as Stephens beckoned to him. Sure enough, it flew away, engines roaring into the distance. It was at this moment that Grant realised that he may have just insulted his love in his last romantic message.

    By now Jenkins was on his feet, a small smile on his face.

    “Clever little trick, though I’m sure you didn’t plan it.”

    Grant drew his own sword, though it wasn’t nearly as imposing as the scimitar.

    “You ramble like an old man…though I suppose it’s hardly surprising.” Grant shot back.

    “Age jokes? I see the art of humour has bypassed your nation, though with Tarkon in charge I’m more surprised that he hasn’t banned fun. Oh well, enough of your poor banter.”

    Jenkins leapt forward, striking with the scimitar. Grant parried the strike and thrust at Jenkins, who dodged to the side. The room had turned into an obstacle course, with glass and wood and plaster everywhere, with the table and furniture providing cover. The two began to duel, fighting over the tables, Grant even picked up a handful of broken masonry and hurled it at Jenkins, who fell back to avoid it. All the while neither managed to land a hit. Was Jenkins tiring? Was this seventy year old legend finally showing that he was a human? With a roar, Grant thrust forward and cut Jenkins cheek as he tried to back away. The old man reached up and touched the wound, letting out a small hiss of pain as he felt it.

    “I’m rather impressed. It’s been almost 25 years since someone landed a hit on me.”

    “Is old age impairing you?” Grant taunted him yet again.

    “Aye. This has become a game for young men.”

    Grant charged forward again. He swung his sword sideways, but Jenkins blocked it and shoulder barged him against the wall. Grant grunted as Thaddeus stood back and whipped out his pistol. Two shots went off instantly, right into his chest and he flew back against the wall.

    “However, when it comes to shooting a pistol, I’m still the best.” Jenkins finished. Grant slid down the wall, trying to speak, but nothing came out. Not even his breath, he guessed that both lungs were punctured. And then he felt something he hadn’t truly felt for a long time. Fear. Fear of dying alone, even in battle he would have been amongst friends.

    No. I can’t die here, I won’t!


    And yet, even as he tried to raise himself to his feet, that’s exactly what happened to him.
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    A talky chapter, but one which has a bit more backstory in it.

    Chapter 13
    There was a deathly silence as Jeremy recounted his tale, the whole of the Grand Admiral’s room seemed to be filled with it. Admirals Gus, Sera, Tarkon himself, they all listened in growing horror as Jeremy finally reached the part where Captain Calrich had thrown him out of the window to save him. He paused and the Grand Admiral spoke.

    “And you don’t know whether Calrich survived?”

    “No…but he told me that Admiral Crowl was dead.”

    The room seemed to darken at that. Tarkon seemed to think for a moment, before scribbling down a note onto a small piece of parchment. Handing over to one of his staff, he said,

    “Send this to Loran.”

    The man nodded and left without a word. Tarkon sighed, his eyes closed, contemplating his next action. Then he turned to Gus and Sera.

    “The Southwestern fleet will be directed here. Use them to keep Jenkins near Crowltown. If he tries to make a break for Central, you have my permission to
    engage.”

    They too left the room, leaving only Stephens, Jeremy and Tarkon. The Grand Admiral stood up and turned to Stephens.

    “As Calrich’s First Mate, I don’t suppose you have a problem with being made Captain of the Sickle?”

    “Not one bit, Grand Admiral.

    “Rest assured that Jenkins will have his dance with the devil someday. Now, go and rest.”

    With that, Stephens and Jeremy walked out of the room together, as the Grand Admiral sat back down and continued to brood. As they headed down the maze of corridors that made up the City Hall, Stephens turned his head to Jeremy.

    “Want a drink?”

    Jeremy wasn’t one for a drink, but considering what he’d seen in the past week…

    “Damn it all, I’ll take one.” He replied.

    Stephens lead him through the streets of Central, filled with sailors and people who were busy muttering about the fall of Crowltown, as well as the war in general. Soon they ended up in a pub on a street corner, an old ramshackle looking place with fogged up windows. Stephens entered first, to be welcomed by the bartender, who was busy wiping a particularly fetid looking mug.

    “Stephens, you old bastard! What do you need from me today?”

    “Nothing special, just two mugs of ale. And I want the proper mugs, not those rust buckets that were used as a toilet for two years.”

    The bartender gave a chuckle at that and went out to find the ‘proper mugs’ Stephens showed Jeremy to a table near the window and they sat, the boy able to see the man’s face properly. He looked every inch the stereotypical old sailor, a few scars, a weather-beaten face and white whiskers growing from his chin.

    There was a brief silence before Stephens spoke.

    “So, what’re you going to do now?”

    “I…don’t really know.” Jeremy admitted. He was only really good at administrative work, and he doubted that there was much call for such work in times of war.

    “Well then, I could always do with some extra crew.”

    “Wait, surely you want people who can fight and do….sailing things?”

    “Aye, but people like that are more common than pig on a farm. People like me are easy to come by. People like you and Captain Calrich are rare.”

    Jeremy felt a certain amount of pride in being compared to Captain Calrich. The man was a very competent captain.

    “I-“

    “Boy, I can find some work for you on the ship. You’ll be fine, so long as we don’t run into ol’ Jenkins.”
    Jeremy shuddered at the thought of meeting that man again. Still, he felt he had to confirm the story that Calrich had told him.

    “Did he actually….beat Admiral Crowl to death?”

    Stephens shook his head, a sigh of resignation on his lips.

    “Aye. He did and there was nothing we could do about it. We only managed to salvage his bloody gun because Jenkins tossed it aside and forgot about it.”
    Jeremy had that very gun stowed away under his coat. He figured that it might be necessary if Isim reached Central, or anywhere that he might end up.

    The bartender placed two mugs on the table and left quietly. The two lifted the mugs and clunked them together, before raising them to their lips. As the liquid passed Jeremy’s lips, he regretted his decision, it tasted like water that had been strained through a dirty sieve a dozen times, and then had a corpse thrown in for good measure.

    “Ah. That hits the spot. The taste, the texture, it brings back my younger days.” Stephens said happily, downing the miserable excuse for ale.

    “Did you drink terrible alcohol back then as well?”

    Stephens chuckled, downing more of the revolting ale. Jeremy then remembered something else that Captain Calrich has told him.

    “I was told that the Sickle was stolen from Jenkins…”

    “Aye, that’s right. I was there the night it was stolen as well. Though granted, I just happened to be on board when I saw the rebels approaching. So, I decided to do the sensible thing, I turned and put a hole through one of Jenkins’ cronies. Like they say, if you can’t beat them, betray your friends.”

    “Was he a friend?”

    “God no. He was a bastard and I enjoyed watching his surprised look as he fell over the side. I lower the gangplank for the rebels to climb on board, and who should be first but some ugly eighteen year old. My first impression of Mr Calrich was not exactly one of awe.”

    Jeremy didn’t quite realise that Stephens and Calrich went that far back, or that Calrich had ever been anything other than mildly attractive. Stephens continued, still downing his mug.

    “But believe me, he should be the least of your worries. Isim still hasn’t unleashed their greatest threat.”

    He leaned closer, checking to make sure no-one was listening.

    “You’re a well-read lad. Have you heard of the Three Admirals?”

    “Yes. Carson, Tarkon and Sykil. The three admirals of the Royal Fleet, heroes of the First and Second Heathen Wars.”

    “Aye. Well, you should also know about their underlings, the three Lieutenants.”

    Jeremy racked his brains for a moment. A gap appeared where the names should have been. He hated not knowing something.

    Damn it.


    He shook his head and Stephens started to talk again.

    “First Lieutenant. Thaddeus Jenkins. Second Lieutenant, Loran Davenheart.”

    Jeremy remembered now. Admiral Loran may have been promoted to his post, but he’d been serving Tarkon for years. And the third name finally revealed itself to him.

    “And third…” Stephens began.

    “Was Ryla Sykes.” Jeremy finished. Stephens smiled softly, took another sip and put the mug down slowly, gently.

    “Aye, you’re right. Ryla Sykes, the queen of the skies. During the First Heathen War, I was on Jenkins ship, fighting alongside her. She put Jenkins to shame in that fight. She accepted no surrender, I can tell you that. Villages were torched. She once led a night attack at an enemy camp and personally killed six heathen chiefs. She wields two swords, two pistols strapped to her belt. And don’t think she stops there. She once spent two months pretending to be smitten by a treacherous noble, and once he’d confessed of his plot to kill the king after a particularly wild night, she strangled him with his breeches and then massacred the entire house.”

    Jeremy was now sufficiently terrified of this woman, but Stephens wasn’t finished.

    “There’s one thing that the other five you mentioned have in common. They all got their backsides handed to them on a silver platter by her. If she comes across mere mortals like us, we might as well put a bullet in ourselves.”

    Jeremy immediately took a large gulp of the revolting ale.

    “I see why you drink this stuff now.”

    “Aye. As we used to say, drink might kill you slowly, but not as slowly as Ryla Sykes.” Stephens replied, a grimace on his face.

    Five days later, the Daven’s Heart.

    Loran stood upon the upper decks of his ship, observing the clouds that formed a barrier above him. While his ship was currently on solid ground, he was not idle. The Isim fleet heading towards the North East has been advancing ever further into his territory, but he had not let them advance without a fight. Years of fighting pirates and other assortments of scum in the North West had made him particularly fond of guerrilla warfare. Even in the clouds, such things were possible, his patented five schooner assault squads had been menacing enemy scouts, even going so far as to sneak up behind the enemy fleet and launch a devastating volley of rifle fire, before retreating. He’d managed to delay the enemy by at least a week and forced the entire fleet to land twice. Even then, he’d had his assault squads fly over and deliver rifle and grenade attacks from the air.

    Still, he hoped to have his elite North Western forces arrive soon, once they were there he could catch the entire fleet in a trap. As he went over his plan in his head, he spotted a white bird heading straight for the ship. A messenger bird, no doubt. In that case, the only person sending the bird would be the Grand Admiral. The bird landed next to him, raising its left leg as it had been taught, revealing the message. After neatly removing it, he shooed the bird away and it flapped into the night. He unrolled the message, revealing the Grand Admiral’s handwriting.

    Crowl is dead. Crowltown has fallen. Jenkins leads southern wing of fleet.


    Wipe out northern fleet, whatever the cost. Enemy commander is to be killed. If commander happens to be Sykes, kill her slowly.


    Loran stared at the message, his face frozen in shock. Crowl, the man who had survived so long by being a meat headed fighter, dead? The admiral slowly crushed the paper in his clenched fist, as the cloud banks were broken by a frigate, descending towards the ground. Behind it came more ships, dozens, then hundreds.

    Even with the sudden loss of such a friend, Loran couldn't help but smile, as he dropped the crushed note over the side of his Skymaster. The Northwest had arrived.

    “You didn’t need to put it in that last paragraph, Tarkon. I would have quite happily killed them all anyway.” He said quietly to himself.

    He chuckled as the ships came lower and lower and he spoke once more.

    “Crowl, you insufferable bastard, I hope you save some room in hell for all the people I’ll be sending your way.”

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Updated 05/07 w/Chapter 13)

    I'd like to announce that this story is discontinued for now, in it's current form. Guess what, I've started overthinking things with this story, have numerous detailed backstories for lots of the characters that I didn't have at the start, and honestly it doesn't quite fit what I've written. So, sorry about that, a complete rewrite will have to be done at some point while I work on the backstories a little more, perhaps write some stuff about how Carson came to be the man he is...anyway, toodles.

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Discontinued as of 19/08. See last post for details.)

    (How did I miss that last post? I suppose at least I've found it now...)

    Well, on the one hand, I'm disappointed to hear that The Stormy Skies isn't continuing for the moment. On the other, I get to look forward to the rewrite!

    Hope the new version works out, Lortano - I'd like to know what happens, and I'm sure those new and improved backstories will be interesting.






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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Discontinued as of 19/08. See last post for details.)

    I'm intrigued by your ideas about the backstories. I wonder if you would like to post a prequel - that might help you to clarify your thinking about the backstories. You never know what a prequel might turn into (didn't the famous novel To Kill A Mockingbird start out as a prequel for the unpublished-until-recently book Go Set A Watchman?).

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    Default Re: The Stormy Skies (Discontinued as of 19/08. See last post for details.)

    Quote Originally Posted by Alwyn View Post
    I'm intrigued by your ideas about the backstories. I wonder if you would like to post a prequel - that might help you to clarify your thinking about the backstories. You never know what a prequel might turn into (didn't the famous novel To Kill A Mockingbird start out as a prequel for the unpublished-until-recently book Go Set A Watchman?).
    As it so happens, that's exactly what I've been doing over the past couple of weeks. It was...interesting how things went, shall we say. I'm not sue whether or not I should rewrite this story with the backstory I've created in mind, or publish the prequel itself.

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