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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15, temporary break

    SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER


    I may, may come back to this story, but there is a fair chance that I will not what with Age of Charlemagne coming out. Who knows. This is a summary of sorts telling how the story winds down as I have had planned since around mid-summer


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    The house of Y Strafi seemed to rise from nowhere, like a burst of flame or a star blazing across the heavens. When Dunawt was adopted by the King of Ebrauc I was but a boy working inan old monestary.

    He had served first as a common soldier, elevated by chance when he saved the King's life, to whom it turned out he was an illegitimate child of. We are taught that such children are sins unto themselves, and yet in these dark times his adoption into the royal family seemed a beacon of hope and light that, as he matured, only gerew brighter.

    In the Northern Wars his forces were unstoppable, blesed by God and His Angels to bring forth the light of Christ once more. Four and two thousands rode and marched north to bring about the bloody ruin of twenty thousand warriors of the north in three great battles, wherein the use of heavy cavalry was made to great effectiveness by Lord Dunawt and his captains.

    After the wars and when Dunawt had returned to the south with his wife the LAdy Braith and his sons by her sons Owain and Gwrast, who was named for the slain brother of Dunawt, we had peace for some years. Not wholly, for King Mor was in the west fighting Dal Riata and YStrad Clut, and Caedrieth too in the islands there.

    We had peace once Mor, our golden king of darkness had subjugated his norhtern neighbors, exacting from them tribute fit for a king, and from Gwalchmai the rebel who called himself friend of Dunawt. HIs men would be bled by Dunawet's man in the north Elidir and would bleed for him some decades later. It should be remarked upon that our Lord Dunawt was very open to the Germanii and many of them were settled along our shores, and they produced foods along with the Romano Britons and fought as brothers, and this led some to the joyous arms of Christ, for which we gave thanks that our Holy Bastard was governing these lands while his brother went to war.

    But what the Lord giveth, the Lord taketh away, and in truth we should have seen the signs and known what was coming. I think in my heart of hearts I knew ,and thus loved our Dunawt ever the more fiercely; so, too, did many others, and for the same reasons. Had we seen the signs, perhas prayed harder, such hardship we could have averted, such calamity. Brother Gaius called it a second fall of Rome.

    In the year of our Lord 460 our Battle-Prince Dunawt was one of the greatest leaders of men in our fair Isles, soon to be favored by a Pope himself. He was heald among the ranks of Tytila and Cyneweard, Athelwold the Bold and Seaxred and of course Artorius Aurelianus the Horseman, and the dead CUnnedda, also called the HOrseman, as the greatrest prionces of war. A decade later only Dunawt, Athelwold and Seaxred remained, though Tytila still lived and yet he had been maimed fighting in the hills of Guened and Dyfed. ARtorius fell in glorious battle to the wicked baldes of the Suth Seax.

    By this time the root of evil had infected the lands of Ebrauc, sliothering into our King and thus the downfall of Dunawt was arranged. The King himself and Magnus, ever his follower, confronted Dunawt in the lands that had once been East Anglalond, once held by the Concillium Breitannae, once held by Rome.

    I cannot write of this even, so it pains me, and yet I will say that many good men were lost, and faith was broken, and Mor and Dunawt and Gwrast fell with Merriadoc and Cadgor, borthers bound in life and death, and Archanaud Wledic, and Caedrieth. But the king Mor's victory over our Prince was not to last long.

    In 481 Anairin and Gwalchmai the Rebel rose in rebellion with the north with Elidir of DUnuting and Owain of Y Strafi, while Lucco, who was Dunawt's youngest son, raided East Anglalond with a fleet of heathens, having married a Germanii Princess some years prior.

    Magnus was caught up in the uprising of opressed Germanni in this reagion and blood eagled, and no doubt worse still waited for him in the fires of Inferno.

    Mor himself was killed with his heir Dyfnwal in battle against Owain and the North, but in this battle Owain and Aneirin of the Goddodins fell too, and in this great battle was darkness returned to these lands, which had seen a brief ray of hope. With the death of all of their sons, the Ladies Gwenhwyfar and Braith retired to a monastery in the mountains of Guened.

    Many small kingdoms have risen since, but I am no longer involved in their world and petty squabbles. I know they will make attempts to involve themselves in my writings, and so I will hide them with the rest of my earthly master's, with whom I pray I shall be reunited in Paradise. If there is one blessing, it is that Lucco survived, and that the other sons of Dunawt fell righteously into God's waiting embrace.


    Go with God reader, and I pray yours are lighter times
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    Around the margins of another faded treatise is written the account of an unnamed battle in the north in a similar hand - it seems they were written by the same person, perhaps


    Damn this vagueness by Mabon- he gives names but no backstory. His hand at least is clear and easy to translate; perhaps we shall learn more upon the translation of the other documents he alludes to

    Seems to indicate some twenty years of relative stability, then total collapse - could account for how so many small kingdoms arose in Britain

    Why is this Gwalchmai called the Rebel? Again, more backstory would be a godsend

    What part in these events did the Goddodins play? I see only one mention of them by Mabon





    My friends, thank you for reading this, including all you lurkers - I was a lurker too for quite some time, which had no small impact on my name choice. I feel that I must provide at least a summary for the end of this piece, so as to not leave you in the dark. It is not likely at this point that I will return to this, as hunting for pictures is proving very time consuming - see earlier posts. The important parts, the northern campaign and such, have been covered. I believe this was a good first effort, and I thank all those who gave input on the way!

    I think I will return to this mod in the future for I love it dearly, but in a different location - perhaps Ireland, or shipborn invaders from the mainland - or perhaps a different perspective - a princess, a spy, a merchant, so as to broaden my range of writing- and certainly at a harder difficulty level.

    In any case, I shall continue writing and rambling, and I think I have developed a better way of saving my info - I seem to get better with that every time! -


    Archaeologist's notes that follow the manuscript inspired by SeniorBatavianHorse

    Feel free to post any question, comments, concerns, praise, etc etc, rants about my abandoning this...


    Also.. RH - your comparison of Dunawt to Ragnar made me feel quite satisfied with myself, I must say ERE
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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] "finished"

    A suitably stirring ending for an AAR of real quality. I'm sad to see this come to an end. A very good first effort, indeed! I look forward to reading your stories in future (perhaps there might even be a sequel to The Tin Isles, maybe telling the story of Lucco and his Princess of the Germanii).

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    Thanks Alwyn. I think in the end this ended up being more a chronicle of the wars in the north and a feeler for my writing. I do think that a sequel could have some solid potential, eventually

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    Sequel might come sooner than anticipated. I miss these isles

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    If you write a sequel, I look forward to reading it!

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    Excellent story! Especially when you do not have to wait for updates due to being late with reading it... You've managed very well to describe the context and background of the battles and the mod looks really interesting.

    My only point of criticism would be the banners, in my opinion it looks much better with banners turned off.
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    Thank you very much Maltacus. I did have quite the internal debate about those banners, but I opted to keep them to indicate battle lines. But I very much see where you're coming from; if they had been in the stvyle of the vanilla banners I would not have kept them, or if there had been banner carrierslike those in rome I or shogun 2

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    Bravo! A well told tale. I liked the epilogue, and would have wanted to know more about the corrupting factors in King Mor. Congratulations on the nominations for this past year that you've received so far, and I've very much enjoyed reading this.
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    if they had been in the stvyle of the vanilla banners I would not have kept them, or if there had been banner carrierslike those in rome I or shogun 2
    So IB lacks those? What a shame, they add a lot to the impression of the mods that do (Stainless steel and Call of warhammer for example).
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    Yeah. There are a few units that have the banners but I believe that they are all the high tier and general units. Romano British heavy cab have nice, flowing draco banners. But otherwise in the screenshots it would be hard to differentiate between my dirty spear-peasants and the enemy dirty spear-peasants

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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] "finished"

    Thanks Lugo, sorry, I forgot to respond. Basically Dunawt had this epic campaign against the Goddodins on the eastern side of te island, and there were times I thought he wouldnt make it through the campaign. He was nearly always outnumbered and in the beginning had very little cav. Once he got more he was outnumbered by even more (like in that last battle against the king). Macsen died in that battle, and my characters annd I really like him

    Mor's campaign on the western side against Ystrad Clut was considerably easier, with only one pitched battle in the beginning. After that it was all siegefs, most of which I/he simply autoresolved. At one point he even says someth along the lines of its just a siege, throw a few rams and ladders at the walls, then your men.

    Later, once the Goddodin War is finished he fights Dal Riata. It was onstensibly to help Ebrauc's Pictish allies, but he provoked the absolute crap out of them until they had quite a large army. This served to break their power in the region in one decisive battle and to bring him some of the war-glory that Dunawt had been receiving. Then he had to pacify the Goddodins while Dunawt eventually began the punitive campaign against the Angles (at which point I ended the story).

    Long story short he felt jealous and threatened by Dunawt's epic succeses, and for his part Dunawt never slowed down.

    Author's Note: I really did have to work hard to get that battle against the Dal Riatans. I besieged 2 of their fortresses, and IB2 has garrison scripts for faction capitals. It worked to get Mor his big battle and almost killed Dunawt in his last battle against the Goddodins. I felt it made sense that Mor would get increasingly jealous of his half-brother's success and try for great victories himself
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    Congrats on finishing your AAR waveman, never an easy task! +rep
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    Thank you Shankbot

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    [Raises hand] Me, sir! I spotted it, sir! A classic reference, if I may say so.






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    Nice Callaigh, Gold Star to you Sir!

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    I read the whole thing in two sittings. It's great waveman, seriously. You have a real talent for portraying relationships between characters and making them complex and human. I am not very good at idyll scenes and description, whereas I think you are quite skilled! Hopefully you will inspire me

    Looking forward to reading your Shogun piece soon

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    Thanks Beckitz! I've got Shogun 2, some Attila, and more Med II if I can find the time for it. Perhaps I've bitten off more than I can chew....

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