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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 9\20\15 - quasi update

    It may be short, but it's very effective. I particularly like the first section, from Gwalchmai's point of view.






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    PART 2
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    Part 2, Chapter 1 : ​Sicarii

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    463 passed, and so did 464. I ruled with Gwen in Ebrauc while my brother Mor chased the Gaels through the mists of the north until they finally submitted to our rule. Ystrad Clut was humbled, but their mountain fortress only cowed, not broken. War was, as always, rampant in Hibernia, but unless one of those sheep-cheiftains gained enough power and stability to name himself king of at least half of that island, we did not care what happened.


    What we did watch carefully, and what I soon had a special interest in, was developements to the south of us. We weilded our new wealth judiciously, Gwen and I, and each of us knew our place. She ran the estates, the ministers, while I handled 'foreign knowledge.' I paid traders good silver to reporton the lands they visited. In this way we learned that the Suð Seax had pushed the Iotingas nearly out of Britannia, leaving them with only a small island and Wihtgar, king of the Iotingas, dead. These Suð Seax were lead by the brothers Seaxred and Cenhelm, ordered eastward by the Ælla, their king. The Ænglisc warlord Tytila took Caer Luit Coit from Guened after a season's worth of battles - a feat that I was quite attentive to, for it was near our southern border, just south of Deva Victrix. Needless to say, the situation was tense- but not exceptionally so, considering the chaos of the last few decades.






    I am walking back to my quarters after a long debate with the ministers about our policy in the south. They want anything from war to conversion for the people of Greater Ænglalond. We have a hard enough time trying to convert the Germanii in our own lands. I shake my head to clear my thoughts; I have had enough of those talks.


    I walk down the halls that I know so well now. I had dreamed of seeing them as a boy, and see them I have. Now, they no longer crumble. The fort has strong walls and a solid gate, all bathed in golden light by the fires we keep. The town is similarly lit, with torches every so often to discourage any criminals who may make their way to the capital. Cynfyn has told me that other diplomats refer to the Caer as the Golden Hall, although whether that was due to the light or Gwen's hair neither of us knew.


    I am walking at a brisk pace, for Owain ealier told me that he had learned of a new sword-trick, and I am curious to see it. THe meetings have kept me from my sons for too long, especially with having to care for two families now.


    I hear a crash and shriek, and quicken my pace. At the sound or a roar and the ringing of metal clashing with metal, I whip my sword out and break into a sprint towards my rooms. Behind me I can hear my two guards laboring to keep pace with me.


    I freeze in horror as I enter the first room. One guard is dead, sitting in a pool of blood and leaning against the battered wooden doors with a ghastly red smile under his chin. The second in curled on the ground inside. Another shriek comes from within, along with the sound of hammering on wood and soft grunting. I do what I must. I leap into the darkness that leads to the back rooms, to my family.


    I catch the first assassin in the small of the back with my sword, and it grates against bone as I kick him off to face his companions. There are five, but one is propped against the wall with a mangled leg. The other four turn from the door and advance on me. They all wear dark clothes and have cloths wrapped around their faces.

    A spear flicks out of nowhere, flying past me towards the assassins. It misses, but the second does not and slams through a man's padded shirt. The others are surprised, and it is only for that surprise that I did not die right then. I leapt forward and struck at the nearest assassin, but he blocked my blade with a long knife. I can hear my guards fighting now, and a wet thump as an assassin drops. The assassins are at a disadvantage for their short blades are small, made for concealment, and cannot break through my men's armor. Another of them is killed, another wounded.


    We are all gasping now, and the assassins - the three remaining - leap forward as one. My legs are kicked out from under me, and I fall against the wall and howl with pain as a blade is plunged into my back. One of my guards is down, the other struggling for his life, and the man who kicked me turns toward me with his blade, triumph in his eyes


    But the door erupts outward, and a shrieking blur of hair and blue erupts from the doorway and crashed into the man. He stumbles, but only just, snarls, and turns on his new assailant. And then drops in a mist of blood. There is a roar of frustration from behind me, and I can hear the jingle of scale armor and my head is being cradled now, and the sounds of combat begin to fade.


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    continued
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    Pain is good fortune, for it means I am not dead. I wake in my bed, although it is a bed that I have not been in for quit some time. Braith is sitting beside me, and my sons are asleep on the floor. I look around the room - slowly, my head is swimming - and see a half dozen guards; undoubtably more are outside.


    It seems no one has noticed me wake, the guards are taking pains to be vigilant at this hour even though they must have been waiting well past their shifts. Braith is lost in thought and she is gripping the sheets fiercely. I do what any renowned war-leader would do in this situation: I cough.


    This shakes everyone from their thoughts, and I am made to say a thousand times that I feel fine. Braith dismisses the guards and the physician who I had not noticed, but I call one back.


    "You lad, what's your name? I recognize you. And not just from that fight."


    "Berengarius, lord. I was posted as your guard here, fought the Goddodins till I was wounded a few years back."


    I nod remembering. I had taken him after hearing good reports from his superiors after he had returned to duty. "They say you're clever, boy. Is that so?"


    He looks startled and confused. "Why?" he asks, eyes narrowed. I would be surprised if he was a day over 20.


    "Answer your lord!" snaps Braith, but I raise my had to calm both of them.


    "By that answer I will assume you are. Braith, do you have any money? Yes? Give him a few coins." I cut off his stammering. "Now, if you want to serve me further, I have a job for you. I need you to track down these assassins..... Did any escape?"


    He nods.


    "Track them then, use any information you can from their dead companions. Take the rest of this money, and God go with you." Berengarius nods again and leaves.


    And then Braith falls on me, weeping.

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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 9\22\15

    I really liked these chapters, that's a relly nice description of surprise and, honestly, really left me wondering who ever sent those killers...expecially since it seems they had been sent there to kill his family before him. Looking forward for more!
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    That's a nice bit of drama - and a nice bit of intrigue, with the mystery of who sent the assassins. I agree with Roman Heritage that planning to kill the family before killing Dunawt is interesting.

    I wonder whether the family's brush with death will have any effect on Dunawt and Braith's relationship once the immediate crisis is over.






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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 9\25\15

    Peart 2, Chapter 2

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    Every step I take in the night aches, and the cold certainly doesn't help. I walk with a grimace, and yet I am happy it is night - despite the confusion, despite the protests of my commanders - chiefly Merriadoc and Fulvius - for it hides my pain. The night is our friend, however much my captains may curse me for tasking them with shepherding thousands of men without even torches to guide them.


    For the first time in living memory, the first time since Coel Hen's days when Roma was more than just a fading memory, we are sending men south of the Humber. And it is not some paltry force, not mere raiders, no. Eight thousands now are crowding the banks of the river, waiting to be ferried across, a huge host.


    "Why have you returned so soon? Are you not serving Berengarius in his hunt for the assassins? I asked.

    The man was clearly nervous. "Yes, m'lord. He said it was urgent and that-"

    "Well, then, let's here it!"

    "The assassins were Germanii," he said, speaking in a rush. "We don't know who hired them, or even what kingdom hired them. Not even where they were from. But it was the Germanii. Just as you watch them with caution to the south, so too do they watch you from the south." He shrugged. "That is all he told me to tell you."


    And so here I am. We do not yet have the strength to attack the Kingdom of Greater Ænglaland. Instead, we make for one of the last small kingdoms, Colonia Lindum. Under other circumstances our places might have been reversed: it is a state founded around a Roman fort with high stone walls, much like Caer Ebrauc. But unlike us, they were not always fighting off invaders. Instead, they often paid them off and are on friendly terms with the Ænglisc - while amidst a Germanic sea. Their king, Berdic, has bought peace rather than earning it.


    Now it is my turn to board a boat, and I am ferried across the river, its surface obsidian cut with silver, carried towards yet more conflict, for as Matthew said, "He that is not with me is against me; and he that gathereth not with me scattereth abroad."


    I will see them broken and scattered for the good of these isles, for the good of Ebrauc, and for the good of my family. They will not expect us coming, not this black night as the days grow ever shorter, and the nights ever colder.






    So here we are. I've finally run out of material from my last session of feverish writing, and school is resuming for me, so updates may be a little slower or irregular.

    Thank you both! As for the assassins and family matters.......................................................
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    Great updates - I enjoyed reading about the mysterious assassins - and the huge host crossing a river to march against their enemies, as the weather turns colder. Will this large army take Colonia Lindum before winter comes? Whenever the next updates come, they will be worth waiting for.

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    Very stylish, waveman.

    "...I am ferried across the river, its surface obsidian cut with silver, carried towards yet more conflict, for as Matthew said, "He that is not with me is against me; and he that gathereth not with me scattereth abroad."

    I will see them broken and scattered for the good of these isles, for the good of Ebrauc, and for the good of my family. They will not expect us coming, not this black night as the days grow ever shorter, and the nights ever colder."



    That's beautiful writing.






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    Part 2, Chapter 3: The Price of Freedom

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    "Have you ever been besieged?" I ask calmly, and cut Magnus off before he can respond. "Because I have. Briefly. Or near enough. In enemy territory, you see, if you let yourself get cut off in a settlement or fort without supply lines - and it is an easy thing to do that - your enemy need not actually lay siege. He can wait around, kill any foragers you send out, and bide his time while he grows his strength. It is bearable for him. But for you, it is terrible: there is the anxiety, the discontent, the boredom and worry as your food. Slowly. Diminishes. I shudder to think of what that would be like in the winter." I am speaking slowly now, almost patronizingly, and I am enjoying myself. "Perhaps we suffer some discomfort. But we need only escort carts overflowing with grain and bread and meat from the river to our camp. We have no need to worry about starving, or running out of firewood. When the snows fall - then we will assault King Berdic's walls."


    Magnus storms off; it must be the eighteenth time he has tried to persuade me to attack the walls of Colonia Lindum, but we will wait for time to sap the strength of the men atop them. Magnus cannot take them by himself. He may be Mor's captain and have over 4,ooo men under his command, but any assault that consisted of less than six thousands would be doomed to failure. So it does not matter that he controls slightly more than half of our host. And he does not have my northern veterans.



    November 14th, 464


    The snow came late this year. But it did fall eventully, and still I elected to wait. My camp has been calm. Me aids are in accord with my plan and my veterans are confident in my abilities and those of their captains. Their confidence has spread to the others, conscripts and volunteers who hail mostly from the southern lowlands and the west, men who were too young for or too far from the Northern Wars.


    "Send them in," I say. I cannot fight in this battle. The wounds I suffered in the assassnation attempt have yet to heal. Instead Fulvius will direct this half of the assault. He has certainly seen enough sieges.




    He kicks his horse forward now, and his signifer blows a horn. Signifer. Another bastardization of a once-Roman word. Several groups of men rush forward, braving a hail of arrows to throw their
    ladders against the grey walls. Yet more slowly haul a pair of rams towards the oak gates.


    These two ideas came from Fulvius and Merriadoc. Both have changed greatly since the Northen Wars, each becoming more serious, although Fulvius has retained his sense of humor much more than Merriadoc. At least unless the subject revolves around death.


    Macsen's death had a powerful effect on the man. While we both mourned, Fulvius seemed to first examine himself for any faults that could have caused our friend's death. Perhaps it was also because many of the Marchomar cavalrymen he lead fell as well. In any case, he then turned to our military in an endeavor to reduce Ebrauc casualties in any way possible. And so we attack the walls and archers first with heavy, disciplined infantry.


    Merriadoc has grown harder. He was still a boy, I think, until Cadgor was wounded almost unto death. Despite his brother's recovery, Merriadoc seems to have taken it upon himself to see to his well-being in ways that I do not think any of us will understand. Cadgor himself is nearly unchanged save physically. Another result has been Merriadoc's continued involvement with the Pedites Ebrauc, the elite core of our infantry. How he came to be associated with them I cannot understand, for they generally hold themself aloof from horsemen.




    Very well, I said. We will send the ladders first, with the Rherell. Fulvius smiled and stepped back.
    Then Merriadoc stepped forward. Lord, he said, I might also suggest more rams.
    More rams?
    Yes, more rams.
    If one should burn, or get caught, we would not then need to wait. A combined attack is much stronger than a single strike.
    True, I nod.



    And so here we are. I have Gwrast's son Ednyfed with me, a boy of 10 years who reminds me of my dead brother in his mannerisms and his attentiveness to the ways of war though it has been years since his father died. Also with me is my eldest son, Owain, who is nearly 9. It is time for them to begin their education as nobles in the art of war.


    Now the ladders are at the wall. "Look well lads," Ælla says in his gruff voice. "The ladders are at the walls now. Would you have the courage to be the first over the battlements?" They look at him wide-eyed, in awe of this grizzled warrior and terrified. "A man must lead to be a leader, a drohten. See," he gestures at the base of the walls, and they look, "there is Merriadoc with the infantry, directing them up the ladders. Mark him; he'll go through the gates with the first of the Pedites Ebrauc." The boys nod. "Lord Dunawt leads as well - usually. You've seen his scars." Again they nod. Poor Ælla. How he longs for battle, yet he can hardly walk.


    I thump the boys gently on the head. "But a leader must also know when to hold back." I point with my sword to where Fulvius' horsemen are, and as they watch three break off in a gallop to distribute more orders. "Not a man here would doubt his bravery, and he must hold back to direct the movement of men and materials." He is doing a good job of it too, as far as I can tell, but this day it will be the infantry who will carry us to victory.


    The archers are silenced for the most part now, and one of our rams is at the gates, battering at them. Another lies abandoned, mired in mud, the third ready should the first falter. It is not too long until the gates are battered down, and the Pedites pour through, followed by more of our soldiers. Fulvius directs more and more men through the gateway and up the ladders, and soon there are hundreds of our men in the town. A messenger has reported that Magnus' attack is under way as well.




    We ride closer to the walls, and the boys can catch glimpses of the desperate struggles on top as the defenders are slowly pushed away from the ladders, and fall. They are enthralled, fixated, yet slightly pale. Finallly, the soldiers tasked with securing the gatehouse are successful, and roar their triumph, shaking bloody weapons at the sky. They are giants; they are invincible.


    The fighting is in the streets now, and that means we have won. We ride into the city, over the corpses of those who fell at the foot of the walls. "Make no mistake, this is the price of war," I say, gesturing at the broken bodies. The boys look ill now. "But never forget, that is what we fight for." Now I am pointing at the purple banners of Ebrauc hanging from the gatehouses. "We fight so this carnage is kept from our borders, so it never touches Ebrauc. We fight so our names are known in this world, so our people feel safe and our enemies tremble."




    Cheering has begun now from the center of the city, and it has fallen. We try to keep the looting to a minimum, but the men must have some reward for their struggles. My assault, or Fulvius and Merriadoc's, has been incredibly successful, with only a few hundred losses. Magnus, on the other hand, lost close to nine hundred dead. While his men were of lesser quality, I did not expect him to take such heavy casualties.



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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15

    I must confess I am far behind in reading the updates to this aar but I looking forwaed to read them all, keep this up

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    What can I say that hasn't already been said? Great writing; great pictures.

    I wonder how well Magnus will take his unexpectedly heavy casualties. Will he blame Dunawt (because he didn't like Dunawt's plan)?






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    Thanks to the both of you, and good to see you back demagagos

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    Great update! I love the way how Dunawt has truly turned into some kind of a master to both his sons and youngest officers. It truly makes him into a well-shaped character, conscious of the price of war, and yet how war cannot be avoided but sometimes embraced.

    He somehow remembers me the character progression of Ragnar Lodbroke in the Vikings' series. He starts as young and ambitious, grows in rank and prestige, but at the same time gets older and wiser. Nice writing!

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    Good writing! I enjoyed the action, the great images, the reaction of the boys and the words about why they fight.

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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15, temporary break

    THank you. Unfortunately RL is getting quite busy, so I'm going to have to take a break from this one - I don't have enough time to play and to write, edit pics, etc. Should be back though once I get my stuff sorted out

    I've also come up with another project that I'm excited about and is significantly less time-consuming
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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15, temporary break

    Awww... No more Tin Isles! (But a return is promised! )

    Another project, hmm? How very mysterious...






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    I look forward to the return of The Tin Isles, when you get the chance. In the meantime, I am also intrigued by your other project.

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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15, temporary break

    Great updates- Despite that I can't pronounce a lick of Welsh, the character's carry dramatic weight to them. This is one of my favorite AAR projects from Medieval 2. I wonder how old King Mor is....
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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 10\5\15, temporary break

    Mor and Dunawt are around 30 at this point, with Dunawt being 2 years older I believe. I would like to continue working on this, but as it is right now I just don't have time to play, take notes, pics, edits them, write.... hopefully soon

    Yeah, I don't know how to pronounce a good ammount of the names as well...

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