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Last edited by waveman; June 24, 2015 at 10:10 AM.
Chapter 6, Part 10 or so: two weeks later
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I'm not sure of the exact count, but "chapter 6" contains about 10 or so updates; it has expanded drastically since I originally wrote it. By like 5-6 times. I've also been updating a lot lately, mostly to make up for the rest of summer as I will be beginning classes again next week, which will of course significantly decrease me free time
Last edited by waveman; July 01, 2015 at 09:43 PM.
Here's the family tree: Dunawt and Braith have two sons: Owain (3) and Gwrast (1)
Mor and Gwenhwyfar have two sons: Gwallawg (5) and Dynfwal (0), and a daughter Eigyr (2)
Gwrast and Atia had one son: Ednyfed (4)
Cuenu and Efeillan had one additonal daughter: Ceinwen (7)
Last edited by waveman; June 28, 2015 at 11:54 PM.
An uneasy peace after a costly war. I find it helpful to see the map and the family tree. I wonder what will happen next - in your campaign, it looks like you are close to achieving your victory condition of 20 regions.
It is indeed an uneasy peace, made more uneasy by the Angles to the South - the dark grey. And MY victory conditions (or my characters'!) would be to have Romano-Britons in control of England.
I'm not sure how many regions there are actually in England in this mod, but the long campaign requires 50 regions for victory. In any case, Dunawt and Mor have a lot more work to do
Nice writing! Greatly enjoyed it, I hope you keep on going.
Minecraft for diplomatic games' lovers like me:
https://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?810520-Dejure-Craft-RP-PVP-Factions-MC-Server
Thank you, I certainly will, and hopefully we'll have an update in the next few days. I also forgot to mention that many of the regions that I do have are not very wealthy due to some of the mod'S characteristics. For example forts can't be converted to cities and only a select few settlements can grow to large cities
Braith
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Chapter 6, part 11ish: Braith
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Alwyn has commented on the peace between factions being uneasy, but now it seems the peace within Dunawt's own household is even more shaky. Not entirely surprisingly, in the circumstances - I found it very convincing that a woman in Braith's position, in that era, would fear for her sons' inheritance rather than demanding her warrior husband be faithful to her.
I really liked the battle (your June 19th post). The scale of it - the large numbers of men involved - comes through very well, but you still manage to keep the personal connection with the individual characters and what happens to and around them. (I did spot one or two typos in that post. I'm guessing you were enjoying writing it and weren't stopping to check the tiny details. Enjoying the writing that much is generally a good sign, I think.) Your posts after that, with the viewpoints of different people, add enormously to the battle post itself, too. That was an excellent idea.
I always look forward to coming back and checking this thread, and so far I haven't been disappointed.
Thank you! I have internet again (I may elaborate on this later) so I'm hoping to be updating somewhat soon. And I was indeed both enjoying myself and rushing, because 2/3 of my last updates have been written around the skeleton story that I had originally developed. I've been writing this for several months now and haven't even touched that particular save game, which feels rather odd to me
Totally captivating, I couldn't stop reading, I just read all the way through from the beginning. I may just have to give this mod a try, my cousin used to play it a lot, he wouldn't shut up about it. Looking forward to see what you got next for us.
Thank you DeathtoEgo, I would certainly suggest you try it - although the beginning economical situation is rather slow. I am working in an update, but while my characters may be rejoicing in their respite from war I am stuck trying to work out the angles I can approach peace from
Anyways, here's a short update at least
Last edited by waveman; July 29, 2015 at 12:27 AM.
Chapter 7: Relative Peace
As winter begins, I sail home despite the weather. It matters not, for many of my men are good sailors who hail from the coastal regions of Ebrauc, and I have discovered a love for the sea. My men are content to be returning home and my only regret is that I was unable to bring all of my loyal veterans with me. Some were, by necessity, left with Elidir in Din Eidin to watch the North. While the summer was long and while dull, a man would be hard-pressed to find a man from Ebrauc or the Goddodins who would complain of this. Much time was spent settling disputes, including inheritance squabbles, and overseeing the rebuilding of these lands. Aneirin and Aeronwy have been of great service for they have constantly offered me advice about how the Goddodins traditionally settle such disputes.
We have also picked up Braith and my children. Braith and I share a cabin, and my soldiers are as amused as we are by the exploits of Gwrast and Owain on the ships. It would seem they were born to be sailors. Although I cannot fathom how these men can steer ship from looking at the stars, Owain seems to understand it naturally - as far as can be expected of a child - and I nearly died of shock to see Gwrast climbing the ship's rigging with his pudgy arms. It was unreal, terrifying, and yet I am proud.
My relationship with Braith is strained, though it was never the best in any case. We are reserved around each other and I do not go to her bed nearly as often as I had before - I am not usually welcome of course, and I feel wrong to insist upon it as her marital duties. Besides, I already have 2 strong sons. In any case, the separation during her journey to visit Pictavia seems to have somehow mellowed her, to have somehow assuaged some of her anger. I will admit I am confused. Perhaps being with the children helped.
And I enjoy my time with Aeronwy. She is not traveling on my ship, for that would strain the boundaries of decency to the breaking point, but she is traveling south with us. I have talked with her and asked what her plans are, but she smiles enigmatically and gives hollow answers: "I want to see the world," "I want to see the land that birthed such a man," and the like.
Were it not for out sons I do not know if Braith originally would tolerate my presence at all, and they seem to be the main point that brings us together. We can sit as long-lost acquaintances who no longer no each other as we watch them stumble around the ship. Now and then one of us will point our the actions of one of the boys to the other, but it has a forced air and is stiffly done.
I spend much of my time with my sons, for I have not seen them nearly enough, teaching my boys the names of birds and coastal landmarks, helped by the odd soldier and sailor. While these men, my veterans, no longer show me the deference most miles show their commander, they are wholeheartedly loyal to me and show me and my family a huge degree of affection. It as if my sons are surrounded by hundreds of proud uncles. I also take my turns at the ropes, the steerboard, even the oars. Fulvius laughed when he first saw me do this, but now he and the other nobles have joined me. Elidir would be horrified.
The sailors, too are quite friendly. I have found them different from men and women in most other walks of life. Perhaps being so long at sea has broken down the way they see social boundaries. To the captain it is as if we were almost equals. A prince of Northern Britain and a King of a wooden kingdom, his crew all lords. It is strange and yet invigorating.
I can see why this may be. I stand here with the deck surging beneath my feet, the oars and rigging staining as they pull her forward to the musical thrumming of the rigging and creaking of the hull. I can see why the poets call ships sea-steeds. And at times land is nearly completely unable to be seen. It is as if we are in a different world, far from the kings of the green hills and the lords of the fertile valleys, where shipmasters lay down local laws and each ship, every fleet is its own kingdom.
I struggle to suppress a growing impatience as we sail past landmarks that are particularly familiar to me. The crumblings of an old Roman fort, the great hills around Y Strafi and even just visible, the one where my father Cuenu fought his first great battle. I have not seen these lands for far too long and I am sorely tempted to tell the ship master to leave me on these familiar shores. But, as ever, I have a duty to Ebrauc, the Romano-British kingdom north of the Humber.
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Well, that's the end of Dunawt's Northern adventures (at least for now, don't want to give anything away one way or another). I would like to have put up a longer and more cohesive update but figured I should at least do this since it's been a while. Hopefully I won't have another month-or-so-long break, but summer classes....
Ah well. At least I don't have hordes of tribesmen baying for my blood in one direction while the sea darkens with keels full of bloodthirsty pagans in the other.
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Also Callaigh I've noticed my duplicate paragraph so I'll take it out eventually, and its these Romano-British and Germanic names! There are so many red lines as I write! That and the fact that yeah, I am writing fast and yeah, I am enjoying myself
Final Edit: I just find this amusing, but I updated this on July 28th California time but on July 29th TWCenter time
Last edited by waveman; July 29, 2015 at 01:05 AM.
Nicely done, a reflective chapter in which your character looks back on the events and changing relationships. I'm sorry to hear that this is the end of Dunawt's adventures (for now). I like the way that he was torn between the attraction of familiar shores and his duty to Ebrauc. I look forward to your return to writing.
Thank you Alwyn, although I would just like to clarify that Dunawt is simply done with the north. We needed a few months/turns to build up some infrastructure, manage public order and the like
I agree with Alwyn, that's a good place for a calm, contemplative chapter - and that's a well-written calm, contemplative chapter.
I'll look forward to Dunawt's continuing adventures when you have the time to write them. And to finding out what Aeronwy's plans really are!
I'm having troubles with this latest part, partly because nothing really happens, and partly because Dunawt is literally doing almost nothing. He's tired and just taking a breather, but I'll have an update like the previous one soon. This one will provide more information about the world outside of Ebrauc
Ch 7: Relative Peace: Pax Nostrum
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Good chapter! There is a lot going on in the lands around your powerful kingdom. I wonder if any of these events will create opportunities for expansion of your kingdom. Alternatively, perhaps your forces will have to work hard to hold your existing lands against communities like the people of Derenrice who want to break away, rival kingdoms - and, perhaps, invaders from Denmark? Either way, these are exciting times.