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    Default Re: The Tin Isles [IB2 Conqvuestvs Britanniae] updated 5\23\15, twice!

    Thank you Alwyn!

    And thanks to people who've been reading and commenting

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    Nice one, waveman, nice one! The second update, in particular, was pretty brilliant. Now that's the way of exploiting an ingame detail - the meleè ending up in the courtyard of a countryside monastery - to change point of view and write a different styled battle description. I also liked those small details about the monk despising war, but being somehow attracted to the "charm" it has - after all, he has written about it, right?

    As a footnote, I hope you're not disappointed/saddened by the MAARC results. It was your first entry, and hell, you've faced the competition of some works which in all honesty make me feel ashamed too Also, I ust say now you're truly cranking out updates at an incredible rate!

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    Oh it'd be great if I won a competition at some point, but if not that's fine too - and I like every story that was in there too.

    Fast updates are what ya get when I divide and rewrite a chapter, and procrastinate! I love that church battle: it was so random, so beautiful, and just worked out so smoothly!

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    I agree with Roman Heritage. I enjoyed reading about Macsen's encounter with the mysterious scribe in the monastery.

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    Thank you Alwyn, and if the gods of procrastination favor us I shall update later today

    The gods were not in our favor. I shall perform a sacrifice
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    Quote Originally Posted by waveman View Post
    Thank you Alwyn, and if the gods of procrastination favor us I shall update later today

    The gods were not in our favor. I shall perform a sacrifice
    A couple of white bulls will favour us in the eyes of the Gods, aye!

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    The War Council: the fate of the North

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    "I wish to end this war this campaign season." I say this as a challenge, staring at the commanding men of my army as they sit around a great table. I want to hear what my most trusted companions have to say regarding this. But the war has dragged on for years, for too long.



    "How, lord, could you do that?" Fulvius is incredulous. "Grow wings, fly into Din Eidin before the warhosts of the Goddodin can even respond?" Many of the men laugh at this.

    "No, no!' cries Merriadoc. "That would be perfect! We could fly over both their spears and their walls!" More laughter.

    Ælla slams a wooden plate on the table, silencing all. "I am curious as to how this could realistically be done." With that simple statement, order is restored. I nod my thanks to Ælla.


    Elidir nods. "I, too, am curious. For the Goddodins have mustered several thousands south, in the hills."



    "And in the capital, and the lands around it, they may draw a sizable force from militia alone," adds Macsen of Coed Celyddon. "Without a doubt they will raise their spear-levies and recall all warbands to their homeland."

    "And," adds Elidir, "we marched clear past Prince Gwalchmai and his armies. They could come and attack us from the rear or cut off any escape."

    This news casts a dark shadow over the proceedings. Men who had waited eagerly for some audacious plan now look doubtful, and few still have the naive, youthful enthusiasm for war that they once had; they say a year of war ages a man by a decade inside. But I can persuade them. I have to.


    "I know this. But I do not think the Prince will fight." I say. "He is in the southern hills and has done nothing but wait. So many southern armies we have trampled, none led by him or his direct vassals."

    Caedrieth jeers at this: "Coward!"


    Elidir looks up sharply. "He is no coward. He will fight, I know this. I had some contact with him before this war, when our lands were on good terms still." He looks affronted. "Gwalchmai is an honorable and brave man."



    I raise my hands in a gesture to placate him. "Peace, Elidir, I do not mean to imply that he is a coward. I say this for two reasons: from our diplomatic pacts, my brother Cynfyn knows that he is a clever man. He knows he has need of a substantial force to break us where so many have failed, and in such numbers." My councilors mutter amongst themselves; Elidir is unconvinced. I continue. "He may even send others to harry us, but so long as they have a lesser leader and are not too numerous I am not overly worried."

    Old Cynfarch adds his doubts to the debate now. "What does it matter who he sends to fight in his stead? If we fight ten thousand foes I cannot see how we could prevail." He crosses his arms. "Aye, ten thousands the Goddodins could muster-"



    "Secondly, he knows how badly this war goes for his people. While King Llewdin forges bluntly ahead, raging like a bleeding bull, how many thousands of their young men already lay strewn across their lands and ours? How many are cruelly maimed? How many will never till a field again, how much land have they lost?"


    They sit quietly.

    Cynfarch clears his throat. "We must still deal with their numbers. I grant you that if they somehow find a way to field that many men I would be greatly surprised after their defeats and that they would surely be of poor quality. But how would you counter this? I am not wholly against this plan. If it is not sheer foolishness."

    "Speed," I say. "Speed is everything. How many months did it take to assemble our own forces? And how long to train them and equip them until we lead an army, not a rabble? Even if they had ten thousands at one point, how many would now have to be replaced? A few thousand spear-armed farmers are hardly an army."

    Anoirin, the Goddodin noble, thumps the table at this. "It has long been one of our, their problems. The North lacks the wealth of the south. As such the roads are worse, among other problems. So it takes men time to gather. Also... the nature of summoning tribes is a chaotic affair. It also takes much time."

    My advisers sit silent and think. I have them.

    "And finally, there is the information that we.... obtained from a captive." Elidir grimaces at this. "The Goddodins are mustering. They are drawing on their last reserves from the farthest corners of their lands. If we march now we can strike before they have gathered! If not, then we will have to fall back. How far, I do not know, but I do not want to sacrifice our recent gains."



    Macsen is the first to speak: "Well, brother, I will follow you on this mad gamble." He laughs. "The bards will write songs about us for ages regardless of the outcome!"


    This turns the tide, for one by one my bodyguard, my closest friends, my most trusted advisers, commit themselves to this lightning attack in the hopes of outrunning the Goddodin hordes. Even the cautious Cynfarch agrees, while the rash younger men agree with little hesitation.


    If it can be done, I shall see it happen, the war ended, the Goddodins subjugated, and my men home.




    The preparations for our march begin immediately; I intend to march before the month of March has come to a close in two weeks' time. Equipment is repaired and the baggage organized. A rear-guard is determined. A feeling of excitement and anticipation pervades the Spring air. With this plan, the men can see an end to the war and of course, more riches. I can only pray we get both.


    The gods have favored us after such sacrifices! Rejoice!
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    The advantage of not having had chance to read this for a while is that when I come back, there's lots more to read than usual, which is great!

    I'm really enjoying the politics in this - the different groups of people with different motivations for fighting (or not) in any given battle - and the different personalities of your main characters in their discussions are nice. I wonder if the war can be ended this season...






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    Thanks for the appreciation, and I'm glad the political scene is coming through, as it were. I had meant to update tonight, but I had some epic technical difficulties with several games. But hopefully by tomorrow evening we'll have an update.

    Blood will be shed

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    Just had the chance to read it, amazing work, and indeed I'm looking further to the next update Your writing is sensibly improving, in my humble opinion.

    Just one little nuisance: in the last update's title there's two "fate" The Gods act in strange ways...

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    Chapter 6, Part 6: sanguinem et pluviam
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    Such High hopes I had. I did not think they would be able to counter my audacity, marching miles through enemy territory to strike at the heart of the beast. But King Llewdin is perhaps less of a fool than I thought, for he has already levied his forces and is holed up in his fortress. Only days away to our rear is another Goddodin army; we have no way out. The men are tense. Tense but hopeful. But they do not know the true danger we face.


    For streaming from the high hills of Cwn Cawlwyd will come 2000 tribesmen screaming for our deaths. But they will not be alone, for the King himself has some three or four thousands in Din Eidin who will no doubt sally out as soon as they see their countrymen. I possess neither the means nor the men for a direct assault on the fortress - it is well provisioned and sits atop a high hill.


    More bad news - Caltram's siege has failed, he retreats back to the mountains of Pictavia, freeing the men of Dal Riata to come after us, if they wish.


    Fulvius knows this. Gone are most of his jokes. Ælla spends his time practicing his swordcraft; Elidir wanders amongst the troops trying to inspire them though most remain in a black mood. Macsen of Coed Celyddon listens day in and day out to the scouts, hoping to learn some small bit of information that could save us.
    And it comes. From the smile that lights his face one would think a plague suddenly overtook the enemy, or that the Pictavi or Mor were at this moment rushing to reinforce us. But his news, while not of that magnitude, may just preserve us.

    For the Prince of the Goddodins will not be leading this second army. And so Macsen comes to speak with me.


    "Here lord! We focus on this second army. Throw them into dissaray. Prince Gwalchmai is not leading them. Then, strike back at the King!"


    It is a risk, but I think Macsen may have the begginings of a plan. Without the leadership of the prince, a tried and tested commander, they may well be easily broken. The divides within the court of the Goddodins may well save us.


    With my other captains we begin to draw up some rough plans...

    The men have regained their high spirits, to some extent. The veterans were always resigned to their fate - they would fight, and fight hard, no matter what the odds. But the younger main are again confident in my "invincibility." Glasobrin, Merriadoc, Cadgor and Caedrieth; they and the younger miles are boasting of the feats they will do and the great renown to come from winning what they have already called the Battle for the North. In a way it is a fitting name for should we be victorious then Ebracu will be the leading power of the north. Should we lose however, I do not know if our kingdom could recover from the loss of so many men.




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    By April 7th, only two days after the news of Prince Gwalchmai's refusal to fight us yet again and only two weeks since we began this final march the men have regained their high spirits, to some extent. The veterans were always resigned to their fate - they would fight, and fight hard, no matter what the odds. But the younger main are again confident in my "invincibility." Glasobrin, Merriadoc, Cadgor and Caedrieth; they and the younger miles are boasting of the feats they will do and the great renown to come from winning what they have already called the Battle for the North. In a way it is a fitting name for should we be victorious then Ebracu will be the leading power in the entirety of the north, more powerful even than our Picti allies. Should we lose however, I do not know if our kingdom could recover from the loss of so many men.

    The enemy have arrived. Thousands of men are preparing for battle: swords and spears are sharpened, armour inspected, prayers said. We will have need of all of these things.



    Thank you RH, duly noted and taken care of. And for anyone who may be reading this, the battle is in the final stages of editing, so stay tuned!
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    I'm really enjoying this for a number of reasons. It's well told with informative screenshots and it allows me to see a mod I never got running on my old system, that's similar to Arthurian, which is one of my all time favorites. Keep up the great storytelling and immersive flavor.
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    The Battle

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    I mean to fight this battle as the great Alexandros might have: my infantry will be the anvil to hold the enemy with their spears, and my horse the hammers that break them and send them fleeing back into their hills. For in this battle I shall have at my disposal well over 200 heavy cavalry. Let them prove their worth to Mor!


    The battle commences: out of the mists emerge the Goddodins of Cwn Cawlwyd, the province to the south. They have left their prince sitting in his fortress and marched to war, and by God war is what they shall have! They have arrived before we were fully ready, but it matters not. My miles form their lines faultlessly; the cavalry divide fluidly into their squadrons

    "Remember!" I call to my captains, "the infantry will hold the line, and the cavalry will take from behind! Now GO!" And with that they depart, leading the men to their assigned flanks.

    The Goddodins do not wait but simply charge at us.




    They fly at us, and our numbers are very nearly equal. My stolid men of Ebrauc check the Goddodin's reckless charge. The enemy's infantry is stopped, his horse begin to fall. My miles have discipline on their side - brothers of the shieldwall fighting together as a unit rather than the wild individualist attack of the Goddodins.


    I look to Macsen and Elidir and nod. Each of them counts 50 heavy cavalrymen of Ebrauc under his banner. Each knows his job. I make eye contact with all of my other men: Ælla and Uchryd, Cadgor and Meriadoc, old Cynfarch, Glasobrin and Fulvius and Caedrieth. My signaller blows his horn. At this signal both contingents of Marchomar Ebrauc move to the wings, supported by more, lighter, cavalry. The infantry begin chanting and push forward.


    At the next horn, nearly 200 heavy horse fall upn the enemy's flanks. Then, they withdraw, only to return in more devastating charges. The Goddodin are left no space to breath, no time to recover.




    I too join the fray, for from the north behind us King Llewdin's host has been spotted.



    While they have no clear battle order, there are over 3000 of them running through the rain.

    The battle rages on. Charge. Crash. Withdraw. Regroup. Repeat. The Goddodin are fierce but they cannot take such punishment for long. Surely they must break soon! My casualties are begining to mount. My formations are slowly being whittled down; if the King arrives too soon there is no way my men can stand. A charge from the flanks, as more cavalry ride past:



    Despite any fear my men may have, they hold the line, and they make the Goddodin warriors pay dearly for every man of Ebrauc that falls,






    There are so many men rushing at us, full of hate and rage. I pause and wipe water from my eyes. Damn this rain!


    "Lord! Macsen is surrounded!" I know not who screams this warning, but I heed it and lead my company towards the center in a desperate charge to relieve Macsen's force. We crash into the rear of his assailants and our spears and swords are soon covered in blood. It is everywhere. Unable to handle the ferocity of the attack the Goddodin break - men throw down their spears and shields and sprint in every direction, desperate to escape death's embrace.


    A harsh cry tears from my throat, for there on the sodden ground lies the broken body of my friend Macsen! We were too late for him, but I have no time to grieve: thousands of my countrymens' lives hang in the balance.


    "Fulvius! Take Macsen's men and break these Goddodin!"


    "What about the King?" he asks as he reorders them.


    "I'll see to him!" I call over my shoulder, for I am already riding away. "Turn around, around! The threat is to the rear!"


    The enemy horse lay dead as Llewdin's men approach



    Slowly, so slowly, or at least it seems that way to me, my formations turn to face the next onslaught of Goddodins even as they are still locked in combat with the remnants of the first force.


    They are just in time. There is a tremendous clammor as the kings men engage my own. I can see my lines bend under the stress. I have not seen Elidir since the opening of the battle. I can only hope that he and his men still live. Still, they have done their job for most of the enemies' horsemen lie slain.


    And while I do not see Fulvius or Elidir, Ælla is pulling at my sleeve, pointing frantically and yelling something I cannot here over the din of battle.
    But I can see what he was pointing at. King Llewdin has engaged my flank and my miles simply cannot hold back his Marchomar, his bodyguard of heavy horse. They are being pushed back. There is but one thing to do.


    I reign in my horse, dress my bodyguards' lines, though many of them have fallen. "For Ebrauc!" I cry. "Dunawt for Ebrauc!" they answer. Their unwavering loyalty nearly brings tears to my eyes, the rush of emotion I feel is so great.


    Our horses leap forward, our speartips drop down. Knee to knee we drive into Llewdin's bodyguard. My spear tip embeds itself into a Marchomar's shield, wrenching it away violently, and another man's spear buries itself in his chest, throwing up a shower of blood and metal scales torn from his corselet. I think it was Uchryd's spear but I cannot be sure for we are swept apart in the melee. This was precisely what I did not want to happen. I trade blows with one of Llewdin's bodyguard for a time but our swords find only shields or armor before we too are swept apart. I have no way of knowing what is happening in the battle. Does my right flank, which was once my left, still hold? Is my cavalry dead?


    There is a victorious cry from some distance away, but I do not know what for. I only know that we are being pushed back and more Goddodin infantry are entering the fray. Some of my men are pulled from their horses and butchered. I can see King Llewdin, marked by his armor: it is a glorious vest of silver and gold scales, ornate and finely made with a patina of dents and scratches. I can only watch as Ælla breaks through the press of men to challenge him. They trade blows for some seconds before Llewdin's guardsmen push him aside. But not before he has struck down Ælla.


    However, in their desire to protect their lord, they have pushed him towards me. I rain blows upon him but his armor catches the few I can slip past his shield. We are swept apart, him towards his men and me to face several spearmen.





    There is a crash and a shockwave ripples through the melee. Men and horses scream. I can see Elidir's banners! Somehow he and his men have survived to charge into this flank, greatly easing the pressure on my own bodyguard.


    Lewdin's men are left reeling by the attack from the rear. They stumble back through the rain towards us and again I see Llewdin. I kick my horse toward him and slam the flat of my sword against the helm of a wounded Goddodin, forcing him from his horse and to the ground while Caedrieth hauls another man out of my way and dispatches him. I punch my shield at Llewdin, unbalancing him and unleach a flurry of blows that are all savagery and no skill. I beat aside his sword and finally hack through his fine armor, ripping a terrible gash open in his pectoral. I can see the death in his eyes, for he knows.


    And in that instant it is as if we have a wordless conversation. He knows he is dead and the battle probably lost. We, two warlords, neither willing to submit to the other no matter what the circumstances, have come to this end, each with equal amounts of hatred and respect for the other.


    I end our brief bout with a thrust to his throat just below his beard which instantly turns read. My men notice and scream to the heavens "Llewdin is dead! The Goddodin king is fallen!" I raise my bloody sword in victory, though the blood itself is soon washed off of the blade.






    With this news the rest of Cadoc's force breaks and runs for their hills. Llewdin's men begin to give ground and again I lead my weary men in a series or hammer-and-anvil strikes upon them.






    Suddenly and almost as one the Goddodin break.

    Thousands of them.

    Running.


    My exhausted men persue for they are not so tired as to not be able to avenge their losses and punish the insolence of the Goddodins. They continue hacking at the enemy, grappling with them, scooping up discarded weapons and even rocks to continue their brutal work. The remnants of my horsemen give chases as well and inflict bloody slaughter on them, hacking hundreds down from behind. My sword arm aches fiercely and my chest throbs from where a spear thrust dented by armor, but it is done. We are victorious at last.





    The carnage is on a scale I have never seen. Thousands lie fallen in the mud. The calls of the wounded are grevous to hear. Men and horses lie broken and strewn for miles









    God, let this be an end. Let this slaughter break them, that we may have peace. Thousands lie dead and maimed on this field. I have shattered their armies, slain their king. Surely this must be the end. We march on the now undefended capital Din Eidin.


    We have taken many prisoneres - most of them wounded. Or rather we had. My men in their frustration, their grief, their rage, have set about systematically slaughtering them. And I do not stop them. We cannot guard them all, cannot risk ransoming them back. Their pleas for mercy go unsanswered.


    Reunion with the remainder of my horsemen is an affair of mixed emotions. Fulvius and I embrace each other in relief, then others: Elidir, Wiglaf, Aedh, Meriadoc and Cadgor, many others, even the stoic and stern Cynfarch embraces us despite sporting a maimed right arm. But many more are gone. Ælla lies wounded and may never walk again, let alone fight. Macsen, noble Macsen, is dead, his scale armor mangled and his chest in bloody ruin. They say he lived long enough to hear of Llewdin's fall, and I pray they are right, that he had that bit of information to ease his passing. It would explain the look of peace on his face. We bury many, so many.


    The celebration oscillates wildly between drunken celebration, mourning, and debauchery. When some miles discovered some Goddodin fugitives hiding in a nearby village, well. It was not pretty. But I do not blame the men and cannot restrain them on this night of costly victory. Tommorrow we will begin to see this through. With the sunrise will come the beginning of the end.

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    Aeronwy

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    She had felt numb at first. The sheer scale of the loss was hard to comprehend. Thousands of men and beasts lay crumpled across the gently rolling hills, and if one simply walked behind the slopes of a certain few it was possible to escape from the nightmarish scene altogether. Aeronwy was not sure how to feel. Her man, her chosen country had emerged from disastrous circumstances victorious. Which was good.

    The price was the thousands of Goddodins who were dead. Were they still her countrymen? No doubt she had lost relatives this day.

    God, but she had learned a lot. Too much even. Too much about men and their fickle moods, their terrible pride, too much about the wars they fought and the horrors they sowed.

    But not enough of their brotherhoods. Not enough about what would drive a hardened warrior, a man who had killed dozens, to weep over the loss of his men, many of whom he had never truly known.

    And so she comforted Dunawt that night of his most glorious and terrible victory after he had retired from the men - despite his hurts, both mental and physical, he had insisted upon walking around the camp, sharing a drink with his soldiers, his brothers in arms. A surprisingly sober Merriadoc returned him to his tent without a word and then left.

    Walking amongst the soldiers and sharing in their sorrow and joy seemed to have returned Dunawt to himself, and after a brief time they made passionate, desperate love. After, Dunawt lay silent for some time, and then began recanting the stories of Macsen. And then Bladth. And then Geront, Titilus, Ælla, Cynfarch, Bredon, and many others.

    An astounding number, really, as she thought about it; men whose names she had never even heard, men who she could not remember ever seeing though she spent much of her time with Dunawt, but perhaps this was some of what drove thousands of men to risk their lives along with him.

    There was a monk somewhere in the camp who had followed the army. He was ostensibly there to record details of the countryside first and foremost and the spiritual state of the people, but she knew he was also recording a history of these tumultuous times. And there were stories she had just learned that deserved to be remembered.


    Aneirin of the Goddodins
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    Aneirin was proud. Proud to have proved his loyalty. Proud to have ridden into battle alongside Ebrauc's warrior-prince, and proud to have been nearby when Llewdin was struck down. He thrust a stick into his campfire, disturbing the logs and sending a shower of sparks skyward. Like all the Goddodin souls escaping their earthly bonds.

    The thought left a black taste in his mouth. So many men of the tribes dead. But why did he feel this way! He had ensured the safety and prosperity of Mylfnar and her people. Those lands would remain untouched by this war despite his father and brother's best efforts to bring them to ruin.

    He took another long drought of wine, and continued to stare into the fire.


    Merriadoc

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    This night, of all nights, most poeple would have assumed that Merriadoc would be but one of the drunken soldiers. He knew this, and found no fault with these people. They were, after all, correct in this assumption. Except for one thing.

    He stared down at his brother Cadgor whose pale face was drenched in sweat. Remarkably both brothers had survived the battle despite the heavy casualties suffered by their units, although neither had been entirely unscathed. But just hours after the battle Cadgor had slipped into a fever no doubt brought on as a result of the heavy blood loss he had suffered. ​God, let this be the end. I will amend my ways. No more whoring, blasphemy, looting... just save me my brother. Him, Dunawt and Mor. Those two can bring peace, I know it. And we need it. And I need Cadgor. He was always the better one of us.
    And so he sat by his brother's side, lapsing in and out of consciousness as the monks and camp women made their rounds, checking the wounded, and other men took away the dead.
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    Thank you Lugotorix, and may I add that I was happy to see your own recent update and thoroughly enjoyed it

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    Chapter 6, part 7: Drohten

    Merriadoc of the Brigantes
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    By necessity Dunawt had to leave some men behind. The fatal blow had to be struck at Din Eidin, and soon, for the Goddodins could not be allowed more time to regroup yet again. As such many of the wounded were being sent south. Merriadoc had volunteered to lead them so he could escort his brother Cadgor, who had still not recovered from his infection.

    Their ragged column consisted of just over a hundred men strong enough to fight and march themselves, with a further hundred walking wounded and yet another hundred loaded into carts. It was a long, slow march made longer by the incessant rain and the delays it caused the wagons.


    The rugged beauty of the landscape was largely lost on these men and the women accompanying them, obscured in equal parts by constant mists that transitioned easily to rain, which would then give way to mists again, and the pain of the wounded and the task of caring for them. The sun was only rarely able to break through the bleak weather.


    Still, as they continued less men died and more strength returned to the living and by the fourth day of the trek the cloud of silence that had hung over the column broke, and conversations could be heard. Merriadoc often found himself talking with a man called Eiryf, who had evidently been one of the Pedites Ebrauc to bring down Cadoc, the captain of the smaller Goddodin force from the south.


    "Tell me," Merriadoc said on the fifth day of the journey as he eyed the man's bronz-adorned armor as they limped southward, "Why do some men wear such armor? What is the point of standing out so on the battlefield?"


    Eiryf laughed, then replied in his raspy voice; he had had his throat nearly crushed by an axe haft in the battle. "For more glory, lord. Glory, and reputation, and to strike fear into lesser men." He said this all proudly, and a few men nearby voiced their agreement with his statement. He drank triumphantly from his water skin.


    "Fear?" laughed Merriadoc. "Why would I fear that? What of the wolf-masks the Seax wear? I'd fear that over some soft golden armor!"


    Eiryf nearly choked. "No! This armor is the mark of a warrior! Look at these scales, lord. All hard steel, plated with the bronze. It costs a fortune. I'd show you my helm, but it is a mangled thing now. Did its job though." He laughed.


    "Not well enough," another man grunted, earning him a good-natured glare from Eiryf.


    "In any case drohten Merriadoc, this armor is a mark of status. It marks a warrior of the Pedites Ebrauc, the unbreakable core of out army. You pretty boys on your horses are one thing, but we stand and fight to the last man in the shield wall." He smiled. "No offense, of course."


    "Of course."


    "We are to the infantry as your Marchomar are to the rest of the cavalry. Most of us are drawn from the rherel, as they have better equipment and training than most miles. Of the seven Pedites Ebrauc in this column five were drawn from their ranks. Two were once miles. A man with exceptional skill from either class can be recruited into the Pedites Ebrauc."

    One of the others, viciously scarred though he looked no older than twenty or twenty-five, entered the conversation at this point. "Aye, and this modest bastard was from the miles. It's a tough thing to get such recognition lord. Make no mistake he's a fierce one." He smiled, and his Ænglisc accent grew stronger. "But then, we all are!" he said, laughing.

    Merriadoc was silent for a moment, thinking. "So if there are seven of you in this column, how many did we have at the battle?"

    The smiles faded off of the Pedites' faces. " 'Round seventy," a Romano-British Pedite answered. He grimaced. "Lost twenty to death, and another... ten? Ten of us hurt too bad to finish the campaign. We go where the fight is hardest," he finished.

    The Ænglo-briton followed this with what must have been a well-known counter, at least among the Pedites: "And then we make it harder."



    They continued walking in silence, each man lost in his own thoughts.



    Finally Merriadoc broke what had been a comfortable silence. "When we reach the south of the wall, I would be honored to host you and the other Pedites."


    "That's an honor we would love to accept, drohten."


    Merriadoc paused again. "What is that word you keep calling me? I can not remember ever hearing it before."


    The Ænglo-Briton laughed. "It comes from my people. It means leader. "


    "But why that word?"


    The man shrugged. "Because you are a drohten. You fight in the front and lead your men."


    "It seemed fitting, lord," Eiryf added. "Many in our ranks are Germanii and they have awarded the term to a few of our nobles. You are one of them. Ælla approves. As for the rest of us, we like them, and we like their word."


    "How do you know Ælla?" asked Merriadoc.


    They all glanced back to the wagons where Ælla rode, still unconscious.


    "Oh," said the Ænglo-briton. "He is my uncle."
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    Cast of Characters, Other
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    Aella is an Angle warrior and strong swordsman who has settled in Ebrauc, around midway between Y Strafi in the north and the capital of Ebrauc. He is a quiet and taciturn man with several years of campaign experience and rumored to be an ex-viking. Is beginning to open up as he starts to feel more accepted by his Romano-British comrades

    He has been severely wounded in the battle between Dunawt and King Llewdin

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    An older man in Dunawt's guard, Cynfarch Sanctus hails from an old Roman family. His oldest sons were killed by Germanic raiders.

    He, too was wounded in the battle against king Llewdin

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    A young man from a very small village by Y Strafi and third son of its headman, Caedrieith snuck away from his father's house to beg Dunawt to take him as a companion to Ebrauc after Dunawt's adoption. He has been thrown into warfare and fought in the battle against King Llewdin, his first major battle aside from some small winter skirmished

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    Macsen of Coed Celyddon is another minor noble from around Y Strafi, and is known for his abilities with the spear. His father was a military adviser to King Cuenu before he lost a leg to a Seax axe. Macen was a strong warrior and had a good grasp of tactics. He was slain by a spear in the battle against King Llewdin of the Goddodins

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    Son of one of the most powerful of Ebrauc's lords, Elidir was always superior to Dunawt and the others, but frequently made time for them. Well-versed in the classics and military theory, he had always expected to serve in Ebrauc's military, and so offered himself to serve in Dunawt's guard. He is often asked for tactical advice and usually coordinates the scouts of Dunawt's army

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    Son of the sons of legionaries, Fulvius lacks noble blood. However, this did not stop him from spending his time with nobles, both because he enjoyed their company and as a way of advancement. He tries to find humor in most situations and was a key factor in the young Dunawt's escapades, before he was recognized as royalty. Wounded at the battle of the Northway

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    Gundoland is the son of wealthy traders in Ebrauc. As the second son, he needed a profession and so trained to be a noble's bodyguard

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    Thelonius is the descended from legionaries who deserted rather than abandon their lives in Britannia when they were called to do so by the Empire. Understands ships and the sea, and grew up along the River Ouse, the southern boarder of Ebrauc

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    Another Angle, cousin of Aella. Is in training to become another guard, as recommended by Aella. Was brought north to replace the heavy casualties suffered by the cavalry against the Goddodins, and fought against King Llewdin

    Llawr of Argoed: A minor noble from the lands just north of Ebrauc
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    Brother of Cadgor, he is young, brash and always ready to laugh with Fulvius. Wants to prove himself in battle. Has recently started acting more responsibly after his brother was wounded

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    Brotherof Meriadoc, he is the more serious of the two, but not by a lot. An excellent horseman. After The fight against King Llewdin he suffered from a fever brought on by infection of his wounds







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    A lesser king of the Pictavi, he reigns over much of the western portion of the country, which often sees attacks from the Gaels of Dal Riata. Caltram has proven himself to be arguably the most resilient general of the North, recovering and regrouping from seemingly catastrophic defeats inflicted on his rag-tag levies, only to rise again to harry and even defeat his enemies

    *As a side note, I made up some of these characters, and others were made by the game in later turns and then inserted into the story
    **There will be more characterization to happen. My original plan was to just write about the campaign events, but since I've already assigned these characters traits and personalities and the like, I will be branching out a bit
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    Anoirin was one of the earlier Goddodin nobles to pledge for Ebrauc. His father and elder brother were killed fighting against Ebrauc, and he blamed their deaths on King Llewdin.

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    Aeronwy is an independent woman - something of a rarity in this time. She is onstensibly the ruler of a Goddodin town and the men of her family were most likely killed fighting Dunawt or brigands that sprung up during the chaos of invasion and defeat. She bargained for the safety of her town and came to be Dunawt's lover, and is fighting earn civil treatment for the Goddodins under Ebrauc rule. Her presence amongst forces from Ebrauc reassures many Goddodins


    This list will be updated more once I have located suitable pictures for some characters

    King Gwalchmai , son of King Llewdin of the Goddodins; effectively refused to fight agains Ebrauc after the Goddodins had suffered several heavy defeats despite having a fairly distinguished military record; around 25 years old
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    Love the cast of characters- I should add portraits to mine. The last chapter was very thrilling. I'm going to keep up with this one.
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    Thank you again Lugotorix

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    April 21, 459
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    As dawn breaks and the men begin to stir, a weary-looking Elidir rushes wakes me in my tent. "What is it?" I mumble. He is not as insistent as he would be if we were under attack, but I do not like the look of worry on his face.


    "It may be nothing," he says hesitantly. "But scouts are reporting movements of men..." he shrugs. "It was too dark for them to see clearly."
    "Perhaps it was fugitives from the battle?"


    He shakes his head, no. "We haven't seen any for several days now, since the battle really, and have not been marching fast enough to catch any. It just doesn't make sense."


    I rise, disturbing Aeronwy lightly, and begin to dress. After a moment's hesitation, I don my armor. When I am dressed Elidir and I walk out into the camp.
    It would seem that the scouts' news has been spread amongst the men; they seem to be eating their rations cold, and the many campfires that typically dot the camp in the mornings are absent. Many men, like me, are already wearing armor, and most of the nobles are already heading toward me.


    We will break camp and ready for battle. While I don't expect any trouble, it pays to be prepared.



    *********



    After several hours of cautious marching we still have seen no sign of enemies. The sun has now risen, making any attempt at an ambush much more difficult. And we march some distance from any landmarks that could shelter an army, like a large hill or forest
    .
    On the other hand our progress has been much slower today. Perhaps that is their goal. I turn to suggest this to Elidir, but I am cut off.


    Horns. Warhorns. What madness is this? Have they no sense at all? Will they fight us until every last man, woman and child in these God-forsaken hills is dead?
    Over the next hill I can see the war-banners of yet more Goddodins.


    The men look around them in dismay. How many more must we kill? Is there no end to them?


    I can see these questions in their eyes. Before any panic begins I ride out in front of them, the startled remnants of my guard trailing behind me.


    "Men! Do not be worried!" I cry. I can see many expressions on their faces, my brave soldiers, including incredulity, scorn, fear, doubt, but also some confidence. "My men, my dear soldiers and brothers in arms. I say again do not fear."


    "Why should we not? God has clearly forsaken us!" an anonymous soldier cries.


    "Have we not destroyed their greatest armies? Slain the cream of their youth? Taken land, women, slaves, fortresses?" This mollifies some.
    "Have we not raged across their lands? Have we not slain their King??" I see more confidence in their faces.


    "Llewdin himself was slain by my hand, and if that's not a sign then by God I don't know what is!


    "If these men of the Goddodin Tribes want a fight, then by God they shall have it! What man among you cannot be counted among the fiercest of veterans on this island? And if they want a fight with you, will you give it? Will you fight once more for me, and for the land of our fathers? Put an end to their raiding??"


    They roar their approval at this, and run to form battle lines. But I have one more surprise for them. As the enemy closes, I pull a small sack from my saddlebag. I speak more softly now:


    "We fight with the favor of God and his angels brother Mabon tells me." The men, stirred at this point, grin and cross themselves, kiss their crucifixes. "But in these wild lands I think a return to the old way is called for!"


    With that, I whip Llewdin's head from the sack. "Behold the king!" I cry. "Should we return him to his people?" The men howl their agreement and surge forward.
    I urge them on, whipping them into a frenzy. "Have not even their own lords abandoned them?? Where is Prince, now King Gwalchmai?? He knows this war is lost, he knows it should have been over months ago! Even now some of their chieftains are joining us!"


    I gesture to Aneirin, the valley chief who held back his men and declared for us relatively early on in the war. But now that the main Goddodin forces are broken he felt safe enough to lead more warriors to join us.


    The men howl their approval, screaming at and taunting the Goddodins.



    **********



    The battle that followed was bloody yet short. The Goddodin expected to find their quarry worn, weary and from what I gather half expected us to surrender to their superior numbers. Instead they found the men of Ebrauc eager to face them, without a doubt the fiercest veterans north of the Humber, howling war cries, singing and chanting. It unnerved them. I condensed my forces in preparation of being surrounded but such a precaution was hardly necessary. Their leaders were quickly felled, along with scores of their men, by my elite corps of Pedites Ebrauc, veterans of a half-decade of war. The rest soon broke and fled to the hills fleeing from the men singing of the death of their king, though at this point my men were too exhausted to pursue most of them.




    We have lost a staggering amount of men in this campaign: near three thousands dead and greivously wounded. What men have survived have not done so unscathed: there are very few men in my army who have not been injured to at least some degreee. The enemy has suffered obscene losses: near seven thousands in these last two battles alone, and easily over ten thousands all told.


    When we reached Din Eidin we found the gates thrown open and half of the fortress-town deserted. I remained outside the walls with 1000 men while Elidir went inside to negotiate for two reasons. One was to guard against treachery. The other was because I am not unaware of what they call me, especially this far north. I am known variously in these lands as Deathbringer, Slaughterwolf, the Scourge, and Kingslayer. I am the Sourge of the Goddodins, I am the Headtaker. They call me Dunawt the Implacable and Dunawt Blood-Bather.


    And so I remain outside. And Cynfyn says the subtleties of diplomacy are beyond me. Ha.


    After some hours we enter the Din. The people watch with some trepidation, but are gradually reassured by the general lack of wanton slaughter, rape and looting. No, this will be a peaceful occupation. To some extent. The men and banners of Ebrauc are here to stay.


    Now there is only King Gwalchmai to deal with.



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