Great chapter! I look forward to seeing how and when Rome strikes back. I like your use of the images of the eggshell and the wounded animal, nicely done!
Great chapter! I look forward to seeing how and when Rome strikes back. I like your use of the images of the eggshell and the wounded animal, nicely done!
Chapter Twenty-five
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The opening sets up the chapter beautifully ... over-confidence leading to bitter defeat (+rep). I like the way that you tell the story of this battle, the order to avoid a repetition and the raising of a new army of Bear-Sons to avenge the old. I look forward to the return of your AAR in July.
So, Nevelung has left us and Meginhard fatally underestimated the Romans - although at least Leudagar seems to be doing everything he can to prevent that happening again. Leudagar seems surprisingly optimistic for a man who has just suffered such a defeat, in fact!
I'm enjoying your writing, as always. How will I manage to wait till July?![]()
I'm looking forward to it, especially with the promise of rapid change.
(Since it's got beyond "the end of next week", I assume there were problems. I hope they were only the nice kind of problem (like being distracted by playing other games you're enjoying).)
Yeah, my personal life is very full right now so Im not finding any time at all for my AAR unfortunately.