What I remember off the top of my head is I deleted a bunch of repeated words from the temples ('the the' for example), added semi-colons in front of all the howevers, and re-worded something from the silk road description (I think it was only the silk road fort) and the fire temple.
I also Americanized a few spellings in the beginning; they're still grammatically correct but not consistent with the rest of it (non-american English). I'll see if I can change them back if you thing that's a big deal.
I think the forum is still having issues with attachments. You will probably have to upload to another site (like MediaFire) and provide a download link.
I will take a look at your corrections and integrate them with the export_buildings file intended for the next patch.
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