TOG's Art Dump

[cedric37]

+1 with Lift and Pal about the mouth.
Otherwise very good shape.

[ThatOtherGuy]

In all honesty your skill in 3D is done injustice by the choice of a human mouth.
The creature does not look scary, it looks comical.

I'd have said it in a different way but yes, that human mouth doesn't fit with the model. From my humble opinion, something like the Alien's one would be better.

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So basically, black gums and more dark irregular canine teeth,
Overwise, good stuff

Thanks for the feed back!
I was trying to do something a bit more uncanny rather than go down the same path with traditional monster teeth (the usual over canine style). Got the idea from Wayne Barlow's design of Cerebus from Dante's Inferno. I'll defiantly go back and adjust the colors and shape to fit something more on the lines like alien then. Thanks!

[Lifthrasir]

It doesn't need to be necessary in 'Alien style'. That was just my suggestion but that's your stuff actually. So, that's also your choice

[z3n]

I'm curious what the teeth being sharper would look like. Good work!

[cedric37]

You could also try this kind of mouth... I think it would look great on your beast.

[paleologos]

Too much tartar...

[Flinn]

You could also try this kind of mouth... I think it would look great on your beast.

where did you get the picture of my mother-in-law??

[ThatOtherGuy]

Alright, marching on with another boss character. Don't worry I haven't forgotten everyone's suggestions on the last one.





Still got a bit way to go, but it's shaping up pretty nice as of right now.

[Lifthrasir]

Hands are slightly too long (unless done on purpose) but the overall model looks promising anyway

[paleologos]

For the most part I am inclined to second Lifthrasir's comments.

I must however remark on the parts that look unrealistic from the point of view of "physiological mechanics":
I fail to see how this creature would be able to walk without knees or feet.
Also, how would it be able to don that hood over the antlers is beyond me.
And if you can tolerate me being one bit more nitpicky, antlers are a feature of adult male deer, while the secondary gender features of this "boss" are clearly feminine.

[King Athelstan]

I fail to see how this creature would be able to walk without knees or feet.

Aren't those knees?

Alternatively

[ThatOtherGuy]

Hey guys thanks for the feedback! Yes some of the body proportions are supposed to be off if anyone is curious. Here's another update, almost done with this character!

I don't know if I want to keep the facial scarring or not. It's on a sculpt layer so removal would be simple to do.







Took some extra time on the face, finally getting those proportions to look what I want!

[Lifthrasir]

Good.
If I can, I'd suggest to make eyes in one colour tone, like totally black f.e. (but that's up to you). The idea behing this is that when you don't see 'normal' eyes (pupil, iris, white part), it adds more scary feelings to the character

Something like this:



But it can be done with any colour tone actually

[ThatOtherGuy]

Good.
If I can, I'd suggest to make eyes in one colour tone, like totally black f.e. (but that's up to you). The idea behing this is that when you don't see 'normal' eyes (pupil, iris, white part), it adds more scary feelings to the character

Something like this:



But it can be done with any colour tone actually

Good suggestion! The eyes were freebies that I downloaded because I needed some anatomical reference besides generic spheres. Color and stuff like that is going to be in the texturing phase.

[Lifthrasir]

Glad to help

[paleologos]

I approve of the changes that have been made so far.
I still think this character needs feet.
You can make them grotesque if you must but you need to make them.

[ThatOtherGuy]

Alright, this one took a bit longer because I had a big project I had to do for Victory Studio's Band in Seattle... which you can see right here on the link below!!!

https://vimeo.com/361325968

But here is what you guys were looking for! Model is done, but might re-render with some different lighting.

[cedric37]

Quite impressive work here. Kudos !

[Lifthrasir]

^^ Agree. Except for the eyes, too 'flashy' for my taste. I don't want to be harsh but can't help myself to think about jawas in Star War

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[paleologos]

Sometimes the devil is in the details but occasionally it is the details that are devilish, well done!
Which game is this for?