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    Default [Poem] A Mighty King's Roar

    All will adore, a mighty king's roar

    To the pitiful poor, I wholesomely abhor
    As is written in lore, long, long before
    What we have in store, will settle a score

    As our enemies snore, we turn each oar
    We land ashore, and begin to explore
    Up the hill we soar, not much of a chore

    As our enemies wore, we strike at the core
    Silent on the floor, we slip through the door
    Our enemy are four, there will be more

    As our blades tore, our momentum galore
    Their blood began to pour, unequivocal gore
    The insults long yore, our honour restored

    All will adore, a mighty king's roar
    Last edited by Dance; September 03, 2014 at 09:42 PM.

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    Default Re: [Poem] A Mighty King's Roar

    A nice bloodthirsty rhyme you have here!

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    I liked the strong rhythm.

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    For some reason I was in the mood to do some recordings today, and yours was the first ATP

    http://vocaroo.com/i/s14aBj9bDe6S
    Last edited by M D; February 04, 2013 at 05:33 AM.

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    Default Re: [Poem] A Mighty King's Roar

    Great work! I love the audio. Great job.

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    Default Re: [Poem] A Mighty King's Roar

    Very good MD.
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