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    Intermission: The Great Generals of the 1st Era

    It is almost impossible to bring up the subject of the 'First Golden Era' without first discussing the rise to power of the empire. Instrumental to these efforts were the great generals of the first era, who burned their names into the pages of history forever.

    Emperor Antiochus II 'Theos'
    The Emperor of the first era and the greatest general the world had seen since Alexandros Megas. He not only reunited Alexandro's empire, he also expanded it to twice the previous size, creating the largest empire the world had ever known. What is even more astonishing is the fact that he was not only a military genius, he was also a legendary administrator, reformer and a master of politics.

    By reforming the army, he created the finest command structure in the world and increased training requirements for all troops, forcing generals to drill their troops to absolute perfection. In the political arena, he was a formidable opponent, often outmanoeuvring lords who wished to place him in an ill or compromising position. Like Alexandros Megas he was adept at winning the friendships of conquered peoples. In fact most historians agreed that the only reason it took him 20 years to create his empire while Alexandros only took 8 was because of the advancements in warfare. Troops could now be raised faster and were equipped in better equipment than before. Instead of a few large armies in his path, Antiochus II had to fight through several hundred.

    He astonished the world by showing what a single man could accomplish. He was truly the most powerful man in the world and his achievements in all areas of rule would not be matched by any single person for nearly a thousand years.


    Alexandros the Black
    Alexandros the Black, cousin to King Antiochus was one of Antiochus' key generals. He was Lord commander of the Imperial armies, meaning he could overrule any general or High General on military matters except for the Emperor himself. Became Infamous for showing calculated brutality against particularly stubborn enemies and earned the Epithet of 'The Black'. He was very military minded and probably the second greatest general of the era, although some historians argue otherwise

    Sarpedon
    The Younger Brother of Antiochus, and Lord of the Sphere of Shadow. He was possibly the most feared man in all of the history of the Empire. Most people remember him as the dark spy master but it is known that he was also a great tactician and some say he was an even better general than Alexandros the Black due to his subtlety and extreme intelligence (matched only by Antiochus). He commanded his most famous battles in Asia Minor and Greece, laying low several armies despite a severe numerical disadvantage. Most famous of all was the Battle of Sinope, where his small army of 10 000 men was trapped between two huge Pontic forces. Sarpedon managed to outmanoeuvre and destroy both forces, killing 70 000 men and ending the Pontic Kingdom in a victory that was believed to have been "impossible".

    Although master of the most dangerous organisation in the Empire, he was utterly loyal to his brother the Emperor and never attempted to take the throne.

    High General Euphorion
    High General Euphorion would eventually become known as the Scourge of Arabia. He butchered millions of Arabians in his war against the Sabaen Federation and turned South Arabia from a thriving civilisation of 2 million people to an empty land of less than 100 000.

    High General Epikrates 'the Stubborn'
    Disliked by the nobility but well liked by the soldiers serving directly under his command. He was known for his legendary stubborness, his utter lack of mercy, his unwavering sense of justice and punishment and he was often at odds with other nobles because of this. A very competent general who was particularly skilled at catching and destroying nomad armies (an impressive feat). Fought his first wars in Armenia before fighting in the north. He then returned to Armenia and guarded it until the fall of the North, when he was forced to march north again.

    Although he was an unimaginative general, his victories were important and contributed greatly to the rise of the empire.

    High General Apolloniketes
    Perhaps the least well known of the great generals, Apolloniketes' rise to power are akin to legends of old. Abandoned in the Hykranian hills at the age of 8, he survived and eventually reached the minimal age for service into the army (12 at the time), his only chance of creating a better life. He quickly rose through the ranks and became a legion general at the age of 16 (the youngest in history), leading a legion of the 11th army through India. Despite successfully conquering the Indian cities, the 11th suffered horrendous casualties. The price of the conquest were the lives of 70 000 mercenaries. Only Apolloniketes legion survived intact and he was noticed by the King immediately, who promoted him to high general, sending him to Macedonia to stem the tide of the Romans in the first Roman-Seleucid War. In the war he led the rag tag forces of the Regional Macedonian army to no less than 6 great victories over the superior Roman forces. Eventually his rag tag army was recognised as an imperial army and named the 6th, the defenders of the west.

    "The Imperial Histories, Volume 4"
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    Very good idea for an update, now I have more respect for Sarpedon because he can take the throne pretty much whenever he sees fit but chooses to remain loyal. I love it.

    Btw im thinking of making my own Empire based story with the Romans in RS2.5,it wont be plagerized of course but i was wondering if I might use some of your ideas to write it.

    Agian great update
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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post
    Very good idea for an update, now I have more respect for Sarpedon because he can take the throne pretty much whenever he sees fit but chooses to remain loyal. I love it.

    Btw im thinking of making my own Empire based story with the Romans in RS2.5,it wont be plagerized of course but i was wondering if I might use some of your ideas to write it.

    Agian great update
    Well mate, if you've never done an AAR...jump in and do one! It's a ton of fun, and you'll have two readers to get you started. If you need help, give me a shout, PM or on my wall.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post

    Btw im thinking of making my own Empire based story with the Romans in RS2.5,it wont be plagerized of course but i was wondering if I might use some of your ideas to write it.
    Which Ideas in particular??

    I wont stop you form using my ideas, but I am saying that Roman myths, army systems and politics are a lot more well known that the Seleukid ones. You will have a harder time trying to write about it if you change it in your story

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    Achimenes POV? Yes please!

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    I now present ACT II: River of Flames

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    ACT II: The River of Flames

    Prologue: Fall of Ancient Heroes
    Summer 1300 BC, the Entrance to Hades

    The bare earth around the river was scorched black by heat. Rocks cracked and released hot vapours into the air, covering the entire basin with sulphurous fog. Within the fog, a woman walked unseen, slowly making her way to the edge of the river. Her face was a vision of beauty and youth, with an inhuman perfection. She wove her way between the rocks barefooted, seemingly unaffected by the burning ground and in her hands was a bundle of cloth, wrapped around her most precious possession. She made her way to the edge of the river, a river whose surface was alive with flames. The Styx.

    She stopped, cocking her head, and listened for a moment. Then she cursed. The outlines of other shapes appeared in the fog making their way towards the woman.

    "Thetis!" the first horsemen called out. The fog parted before the riders, revealing a young man and his companions. "My Love! What are you doing here?"
    "Leave me be Peleus. I am doing what is best for our son." replied Thetis. At that moment, the bundle in her arms stirred, and the baby inside began to cry.
    "This is the Styx! What madness has befallen you? Are you planning to walk into the river of the dead with our child?!"
    "I am a water nymph. No waters of any rivers will harm me or my son, who is of my blood. Not even the Styx."
    "But why?"
    "Because I have had a vision...which told me that one day, Apollo's arrow will pierce the bloodline of Peleus.."

    She turned around before the shocked Peleus could reply and waded into the river. Two of Peleus' Myrmidons dismounted and made their way closer, stopping at the edge of the Styx. Thetis kept walking until the water reached her hips. Unwrapping the bundle, she stared at the face of her son. Her mortal son. She hesitated for a second longer, then she lowered the baby into the water, holding him by the heels...
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    Achilles!


    Btw im talking about just using your ideas where you gave a background of each character, and you showed us the armies of the Empire.

    And ive decided to do my new aar based off the Ptolemies scince my Roman campaign is hella buggy and keeps ctding at the Roman rebellions.
    "I am not afraid of an army of lions led by a sheep; I am afraid of an army of sheep led by a lion." - Alexander the Great

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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post
    Achilles!


    Btw im talking about just using your ideas where you gave a background of each character, and you showed us the armies of the Empire.

    And ive decided to do my new aar based off the Ptolemies scince my Roman campaign is hella buggy and keeps ctding at the Roman rebellions.
    What mod are you using for your campaign? If its the eb mod, I'd recommend using another. The eb ptolemies have extremely boring units imo

    Rs2 has a better Ptolemy roster but unfortunately, its units still have the vanilla balance meaning units get killed really quickly and massed cavalry can rip anything
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    Ill be using RS2.5, Ptolomies have a nice unit roster, plus the greek Romaikoi(the greek version of a Roman legionare)

    My Empire already stretches from persia in the east to Rome in the west as far south as elephantine and north im bording the sarmatians, im not gonna start the aar till i have combined Alexanders empire with the Roman empire.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post
    Ill be using RS2.5, Ptolomies have a nice unit roster, plus the greek Romaikoi(the greek version of a Roman legionare)

    My Empire already stretches from persia in the east to Rome in the west as far south as elephantine and north im bording the sarmatians, im not gonna start the aar till i have combined Alexanders empire with the Roman empire.
    Ahh I see

    However If you conquer the Roman Empire as well as the Empire of Alexander. What is there left to conquer? Unless your aar will be about large internal wars? If so, then I look forward to it!

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    Great read. A bit of "A song of Ice and Fire" and LOTR here and there.

    That siege of the Green Hall definitely reminded me of the battle of Helm's Deep.

    And Epikrates really sounds like Stannis

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grimbold View Post
    Great read. A bit of "A song of Ice and Fire" and LOTR here and there.

    That siege of the Green Hall definitely reminded me of the battle of Helm's Deep.

    And Epikrates really sounds like Stannis
    Its more influenced by 'Malazan book of the Fallen' than 'Song of Ice and Fire'. I think Malazan is a lot better on so many different levels so most of story is influenced by it. I do use some Song of Ice and fire, but only if I want to import an interesting character (ASOIAF has a lot less interesting characters compared to Malazan book of the fallen)

    spot on about the stannis bit.

    I wasnt thinking about the siege of helms deep when I was writing it. It just turned out that way. I dont intend for my aar to be like LOTR. To be honest I find LOTR fantasy to be too simple.
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    Quote Originally Posted by seleucid empire View Post
    Its more influenced by 'Malazan book of the Fallen' than 'Song of Ice and Fire'. I think Malazan is a lot better on so many different levels so most of story is influenced by it. I do use some Song of Ice and fire, but only if I want to import an interesting character (ASOIAF has a lot less interesting characters compared to Malazan book of the fallen)

    spot on about the stannis bit.

    I wasnt thinking about the siege of helms deep when I was writing it. It just turned out that way. I dont intend for my aar to be like LOTR. To be honest I find LOTR fantasy to be too simple.
    I don't know Malazan, so i can only say while i read your AAR, i kept thinking of how it reminded me of ASOIF. I don't mean it as a criticism, just that i was familiar.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Grimbold View Post
    I don't know Malazan, so i can only say while i read your AAR, i kept thinking of how it reminded me of ASOIF. I don't mean it as a criticism, just that i was familiar.
    yeh I know I didnt take it as criticism. I was merely saying, that ASOIAF wasn't what inspired this. The politics and characters are more like Malazan Book of the fallen. Especially with the plot lines and the influence of the Gods and legends which we are beginning to see.

    the only real inspiration from ice and fire was stannis lol. Hes a boss

    I know my aar name is similar to ice and fire but I forgot why I did that :L
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    Chapter 1: Nightmares
    Summer 248 BC Seleukeia

    His dreams brought him back to that fateful day, when everything changed. The day his life had plunged into darkness and everything he thought he knew had been proven to be a lie. Up until that moment he had been so sure of his path. To unite the world under the silver banner of the empire, an honourable path....or so he thought. That mirage had died along with the Baktrian girl, raped, tortured and murdered in front of his eyes. It had not been the first time he had seen slaughter of innocent women or children but this time it had been different. While his comrades had been raping her, she had descended into unconsciousness. But as Archimenes watched, she woke up and her eyes wandered, ignoring the jeering faces of Archimenes' companions until they settled on him.

    When her eyes met his, he recoiled. Those eyes were full of accusations and he was suddenly filled with shame. It was true he had refused to join in and it was true that he alone among his companions found no joy in the suffering of the girl, but those eyes filled him with guilt nonetheless and Archimenes had understood the word-less message the girl had given him.

    "Do you think you are so honourable warrior? Free of guilt just because you did not join them? By not helping me, by not standing up to these men, you are just as guilty as all of them.
    "This..this is the fate...of the conquered." he tried to tell her.
    "You know it is wrong. You can help me. They will listen to you, because they know you are the best of them. They know you can kill them all."
    "No...I can't they are my friends...This is the normal way. I cant deny them what they desire. I do not have that kind of influence.."
    "You are weak warrior, to not stand up to something you believe... something you know is wrong.."

    The girl's mocking laughter rang through his head...

    Archimenes woke up shivering, covered in sweat just as Mardonious rushed into the room.

    "Archimenes! Are you alright? We heard moaning and shouting."
    "Just a dream Mardonious, just a dream..."
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    Great update buddy, I like your style of writing. Its keeping me wanting to read more so keep the updates coming!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Evalation View Post
    Great update buddy, I like your style of writing. Its keeping me wanting to read more so keep the updates coming!
    thanks! more to come soon. I am on holidays now so I should be able to get another act or 2 done.

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    Chapter 2: The Stone Tomb
    Summer 248 BC Armenia

    The trio had been on the run for weeks. Ever since their escape from the disaster at Green-Shade Hall, Ennychos, Abibaal and Lord Vanara had been hunted ceaselessly by the steppe horsemen of the Emperor. Hiding by day and moving by night, they had lived like animals among the foothills of the Caucasian Ranges. Abibaal signalled for them to stop and make camp. Ennychos bent over, slowly unhooking his master's arms from around his shoulders and lowered him to the ground. Vanara was a sickly pale colour and Ennychos feared that this night would be his master's last in this world. Vanara had been injured by an arrow during his escape, a wound which slowly began to fester. Hunted by the steppe warriors, they were not able to stop in towns to receive medicinal aid and were now making a desperate trek through the Caucasian ranges to the safety of the Queen's territory. It had been five days since Vanara became too weak to walk and Ennychos had dutifully carried him since then. It seemed now that it was all in vain.

    Vanara's eyes fluttered open.
    "Ennychos my faithful servant..."
    "Master?"
    "Where are we?"
    "We have made it my lord, we are in the Queen's land. We will find help soon.." Ennychos lied, tears streaming down his face.
    "You are terrible liar." said Vanara weakly, a soft smile on his lips.
    "No..my Lord..it...is the truth." blubbered Ennychos, unable to control his flood of tears.
    "Listen to me, my old friend. Whatever I may have called you, however badly I have treated you at times, know that you were the one man I could truly trust."

    Ennychos could not muster a response and continued to weep. Vanara spoke again.

    "Now is not the time for tears Ennychos. My death is only the beginning. Save my family Ennychos, my daughters, my nephews and nieces. Save them. Take them far away from this empire of ashes. Build them a life in a far away land; Iberia, the Tin Isles. Somewhere peaceful, somewhere that has not been destroyed by war. That is my last request."
    "I will do as you say."
    "Thank you..."

    With a satisfied smile on his face, Vanara, Lord of Phoenicia, drew his last breath... and died.

    Abibaal returned from scouting the area to find Ennychos weeping over the body of his master.
    "It is finished then." said Abibaal "We will travel a lot faster now without him slowing us down."
    At these words, a vast rage overcame Ennychos and he screamed, "SHOW SOME RESPECT YOU BASTARD!"

    Abibaals eyes flashed in anger and he grabbed Ennychos by the throat.
    "I'm going to teach you a lesson Eunuch. I have missed your flesh far too much in the last months."

    He slapped Ennychos across the face, knocking him over and pulled down his trousers. Ennychos fought against him to no avail. Abibaal was simply too strong for him. As he was flung to the ground, he reached out with his hand, and came across a rock. He turned, throwing the rock at Abibaal's head with all his strength. The captain screamed in rage and stumbled backwards giving Ennychos enough time to grope around and find another object: the sword of Vanara. He unsheathed it and charged at Abibaal. The blade slid quietly into the captain's ribs.

    Abibaal's screams of rage cut off into a terrible choking sound as blood filled his lungs. Ennychos kicked him in the leg and the captain fell over. Ennychos walked up slowly, the sword trembling in his hands. He stood over the dying captain and raised the sword above his head. The sword came down, stabbing the captain through the hand. Abibaal made gurgling noise.

    "Feel these hands Ennychos, they are my instruments of pain." said Ennychos tonelessly, repeating the words Abibaal had said to him the last time he was forced into humiliation.
    "Feel my **** Ennychos, it will be the only pleasure you will ever receive." chanted Ennychos, slicing off Abibaal's manhood.
    "FEEL MY LIPS ENNYCHOS, THE ONLY WARMTH YOU WILL EVER KNOW!" screamed Ennychos, stabbing at the captain's face.
    "DO YOU FEEL PLEASURE? ARE YOU NOT GRATEFUL FOR MY COMPANY ENNYCHOS?!" he continued to scream, stabbing at the captain until he resembled a hunk of butchered meat.

    Ennychos left Abibaal's corpse to the wild animals and returned to the body of his master. He picked at the dirt with the sword throughout the night, until he had made a ditch large enough for Vanara's body. He gently placed his master's body into the hole, cradling his head on a pillow of rock and then filled the grave with his bare hands. Finding a suitable stone, he began to slowly chip at it with the sword. By early afternoon, his handiwork was done. Roughly carved letters spelling the words: HERE LIES VANARA, LORD OF PHOENICA, A MAN WHO WAS BORN TO BE A KING BUT BORN IN AN AGE WITHOUT REASON. HE NOW LIES FOREVER UNTROUBLED IN THIS TOMB OF STONE.

    Picking up the remaining supplies, he took one last look at the grave. Then, he turned around and continued on his path, leaving his master behind him...
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    Powerful. Ennychos gets his revenge....brilliantly written.

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