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    A game of shadows



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    REserved!

    btw, i changed my name from Clix to my current one, just so you dont get confused
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    A dream unattainable
    I sit here. In a moment of clarity, eyes to the night. A thousand stars bewitch my forlorn gaze, a flame of desire alights within me, oh, what I would give to be there. What I would give to be weightless, without thoughts, worries, weighing me down. Up above the atmosphere within the shadows of space, confined only by the furthest reaches of my imagination. I dream of the day when I can touch the very depths of the sky, and embrace the constellations as equals. For I will have done what they have done, I will have attained joy. They laugh at me, they mock me, cruel games played on an unsuspecting child. What do they know? Those cowards, they have never felt the mad rush of happiness, brought forth by the joy of love. Love of a longing. I love the stars, the facets of light set in a pitch black ceiling. How I desire to be there. Yet how can it be, I am no bird that flits so seemlessly through the sky. I am no cloud that scudds across a summers morn, I am a boy. I cannot even begin to believe I can achieve what my heart is set on. I have arms not wings. Skin not feathers. So here I must sit, my eyes reaching to where I can not, and, for the moment, I am content I suppose.
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    Better than nothing

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    The games of the Shogunate is over
    They are not allowing people to grow older

    The Shogunate dreams of bringing the people on its knees

    They wish nothing but to have our lands seized

    They say we are all living in peace and harmony

    but they are the ones who have committed a felony


    For years they have ruled our lands

    They have tied the people`s hands

    The blood will run in the rivers

    and the coward shogunate he shivers

    The people have a flame in their eyes

    They have had enough of the Shogunate`s lies

    We arm ourselves with bow and sword

    We can no longer the payments of peace afford

    From the North to the South of Japan the people are rebelling

    And they are all for justice yelling

    We shall make the Shogunate yield

    Or he will face his death at the battlefield

    The stars will shine in the shadow skies

    when the Shogunate dead in his bed lies

    The people`s will to fight is grand

    It is time for us to make a stand!

    Days from now the country will have a change of course

    They will learn that our people cannot be subdued by force

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    Fool



    Fool

    "Cry to your God!" He screamed.
    "Call upon them to smite me!" He mocked.
    Fool.
    "Where are they now!?" He taunted.
    Such a fool.
    A blinding pain seared through my right cheek and I felt the cold, damp earth to my left side.
    Humiliated, I rose once more. I refused to give up.
    The cowards blinded me with a cloth, shadowing my vision.
    The cowards bonded me with rope.
    Such fools.
    "Animal!" I heard him yell at me.
    I refused to relent. I was better than him. Such a coward.
    "Your days are numbered" I told him in his own vile tongue.
    I could feel the fool staring at me.
    "How dare you speak to me!?" He screamed, my vision became red as if a flame had lit in it and I was bashed in the back of the head.
    "Animal! No animal will speak to me!" He threw tantrum like a spoiled brat.
    Such a fool.
    "I am no animal. If you had any honor -"
    "Honor! The beast would teach me of honor!" He screamed into the air, to the joy of his soldiers.
    Fools.
    "I am a man of honor" I demanded defiantly.
    "You are no man! And you have no honor!" He yelled.
    "It is you who have no honor. Blinding me... Binding me... Torturing me... Untie me and see me end your miserable life, you honor-less husk of a man" I gave into his game. I fell victim to my own rage.
    "No, beast. I shall not grant you your dream of slaying me" The brat King said.
    "Then you are a coward"
    "I am the Star of the West." He said proudly. I could see him mentally puffing his chest.
    The ground rumbled.
    Such fools.
    "You are a dead Star." I mocked the fool.
    "Ha! And who would have my head? You?"
    Such a fool.
    "No. Him." I uttered.
    A thud was heard, and the head of the king fell to the ground as the horses rampaged around me, their riders blind with rage.
    "My lord..." I heard my trusted companion utter, and my blindfold was removed.
    I looked to the ground, the dead king lay on the ground, without his armor. Such arrogance...
    Such a fool.
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    Took a long time to put this to paper :p
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    The Game

    For long has the shadow been cast among thy blade
    We play thy game in the dark hollow of the night
    For tommorow, we may not return the same as we left
    But today we not weep like the widows at home
    For our hearts and minds keep us in piece

    I see thine enemy across the horizon
    I am ready to play thy game
    I play by my rules, my rules alone
    I play by no other for my heart is of stone
    They may wish to change my very rules
    But tonight they play my game
    I see them, marching about
    I wish to bring my blade to their throat

    I dream of glory, prestige as high as Mt. Fuji itself
    But as we march, I start to worry
    My rules are simple, theirs complex
    Will they learn my rules and force my respects?
    Or shall they fail to comprehend?
    And meet thine end
    I have no regrets as they come
    I only came to see a beautiful and bloody sunset

    They light their torches alight
    The flames I admit are quite the delight
    They sleep like children during this night
    That is good for their widows shall weep the night
    I look to my left, I look to my right
    The men were criminals of theft to have taken many lives in the past
    But such might was what made us fast
    We were feared not loved but it did no matter
    For being unloved was to be better than to have ever
    I feel this day shall affect me forever

    I look one last time, a star, a lone star I see in the sky
    Thy star alone an omen of sort
    But our bowmen just ignore and shot the arrows galore
    Those men down their panicked but it was of no use
    For our horde was ever so gigantic
    We quickly rode the hill ever so steep
    I wondered if I was to be put to sleep
    The men continued their panic and did not even notice
    The huge horde of enemies as unified as the lotus
    And with my Yari in hand, I hope to make thine players oh so sorry
    For this was my game, I play by my rules and my rules alone
    For my heart was nothing but stone.

    Hope you enjoyed.
    Last edited by Oxode; January 26, 2012 at 01:39 PM.

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    Shingen had his soldiers and ashigaru around him, the battle had lasted all day, none wielded a decisive blow to the enemy. Shingen sat thinking;
    “What will be his next move? Where will he strike next?” He thought about his enemy Kenshin, a man as cunning and wise as himself. The place was the triangular of Kawanakajima, their fourth battle at this land. Earlier the day Shingen had divided his army, sending the other part to outflank the enemy. Now the sun was low and the shadows where long. The Takeda generals Tenkyu and Harayuki had gone to dream for eternity. Such a bitter day. Shingen tilted his head to the side. He was thinking deeply, the eyes went farther than the backs of the hatamoto in front of him. The eyes went away from the battle and all its noise. Into a place of divine peace. A place where he can think.
    Suddenly, the ranks of men are swiped away; a sword slashes like a flame through the air. Shingen has only time to grab his tessen, and parries the blow. Like a storm the sword comes back again and again. All the times Shingen deflects the hits using his war fan. Then his brother Nobukado comes to his Lords aid, and makes Kenshin retreat.
    In the evening Shingen is watching the stars.
    “What is this life, this game we play. So easily lost and so hard gained.”
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    A small room, decorated in the sort of blank way that is often used in large offices. Everything in the room, from the generic oak effect desk to the faux leather chairs, felt muted and soulless. It was a room designed to numb the senses and dull emotions, if not done deliberately then as an ironic joke of fate.

    "So what do you want to talk about?" asked Rommie, a rather neurotic looking psychiatrist who had an awful tendency to chew on the tops of her pens. She didn't do this during any of her sessions, but the tops were chewed nonetheless.

    "I don't know... I had the dream again," there was a pause as I waited for a reaction, which didn't materialise," but sometimes I'm not sure if I remember having it again or if I'm just remembering having had it before... again."

    She made a quick notation on her pad and then she stared at me intently, almost invitingly.

    "How about we stop playing this game," she responded curtly after a few seconds, and with an edge of cynical frustration," because I know what you're trying to do, to manipulate me into being interested in your story, to get me to treat you like a star and shower you with attention."

    "Have you ever seen," but I was cut off as she spoke up again, with a self-righteous tone to her voice.

    "You spend your entire life trying to be something you're not by creating this dark fantasy, because your life is so dull," she was visibly amused at my frustration," so why don't we try truth for a bit."

    I gave my chains a brief tug, to see how much leverage I could get, but it wasn't going to be enough to reach her, for a moment I contemplated a deranged charge to try and tear everything loose, idly considering how much artistry I could preform with the pen and how much music she might make as I did it. But that passed.

    "Flame and shadow..." I repeated this for a few minutes before she became visibly bored and buzzed for my removal, as I was hauled off by three well armed orderlies I heard her mention something about the inane drivel I chose to recite, and how my total lack of imagination trapped me in a dull world that I needed to escape from.

    A fairly simple reason to murder for sport, but a reason that was fitting for her report.


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    Can I request that a Mod or impartial observer take a peak to see if I have adhered to all the rules appropriately? Just wanting to make sure as this is my first attempt in a long time now...

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    Stars prick another irrepressible night that envelopes the street below; only the flickering orange glow of a street lamp burns through the gloom. It is a light in the darkness, solace in the midst of confusion, Promethean victory in the depths of stark obscurity.

    I find it intrusive.

    It has been a fortnight now since I first had the dream. It evokes a clarity I have yet to arouse in my waking hours; a sustenance I have yet to encounter in the pallid imposition of daylight. At first, in those bewildering erstwhile nights, I awoke in haste and paced about the floor of my chamber perturbed by the very shadows and notions contrived in the pit of my slumbering mind. Unable to sleep thereafter, I would indulge my frail soul with brandy and sit in my study, biding time until sunrise.

    Now I embrace my imaginings, my dark chimera.

    A fragmentary game of chess lies upon a mahogany table, gathering dust. A final, smouldering flame dies to ember in the great hearth ensconced at the far side of the drawing room and all is quiescent.

    There is but a moment in time.

    It is fleeting in actuality, nought but the breadth of a hair. But in that anticipation, in that yearning euphoria, it is an eternity. Within chaos there lies repose. And suddenly...

    Darkness floods into the room and I am immersed. I am enraptured. The waking world ebbs away taking with it deliberation, uncertainty and doubt and now there is only clarity.

    I see you, my friend, waiting there in the shadows for me.

    I see you.
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    Crap, I got carried away... I'll try to trim this down.

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    "The shadow slips the most accursed blade, general. How long do you intend to keep this siege up?" said Amibaal, with a dubious grin upon his veteran face.

    "As long as I have to. This is not a game Amibaal, I can't go around sending my detachments at a whim's notice on information that hasn't come directly to me." Hiram asked while turning his head slightly and lowering an eyebrow in a gesture of imputation.

    Hiram got up out of his seat, put on his splendid double bossed breastplate, etched with the scenes of his former battles, and that of the Carthaginians, with gold and silver inlay. He put on his purple plumed helmet and walked out of his tent. The sun, high in the sky, made him shield his eyes as though the burst of a flame had fell upon him. He looked to his right, where there was a group of men talking with a fervor so great he could not ignore it and approached the men.

    "I was just telling my friends here of a dream I had the other night. I was alone in the darkness, stripped naked with nothing but a spear and shield. I asked the goddess why she did this, and what I had done to anger the gods into doing such a thing, and her reply was that we were on an expedition doomed to failure. I refuted this, saying that the great Hiram has led men into battle on innumerable accounts, finding victory where the gods themselves would retreat! All of a sudden I started getting pummeled by something! I yelled out 'No! I have done nothing wrong!'. I was beaten to the ground, lying on my back in pain, when the darkness fell away from me. I had been transported into the celestial, surrounded by the brightest of stars.”

    Hiram called to his guards outside the tent to bring him one of his captains, Baal'hammon. Within a few moments, Baal'hammon entered and saluted the general. "Sir, you called for me?"

    "I want to go over a plan with you. A soldier outside gave me an idea for a way to make this village capitulate. On the night just before the next full moon, when it is raining heavily it will obscure their view, we will depart. We will withdraw along this route until we get to the forest. Once there, you will take your cavalry and head to the hill. I will leave with a detachment of my best men to be the rearguard early in the morning after the rest have withdrawn. At the forest we will make our battle during the late day so that when night falls, they will be forced to withdraw back to their city. Once it does, we will have the full moon aiding us enough to conduct a night attack, and your cavalry will be the vanguard of that assault. Quick strikes, captain, and whither away their forces."



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    "The shadow slips the most accursed blade, general." said Amibaal, with a rather dubious grin upon his grizzled veteran face. The light from inside Hiram's tent revealed a menacing man, as he turned to pace in front of the general.

    "You would have me risk my greatest detachment of cavalry to gain what Amibaal?" came the irritated response from Hiram. "I will not send my most trusted men into a situation that is destined for utter failure. Why are you so adamant about this?" Hiram said at his seat in front of the war table. He raised his elbow to the table and put his hand on his forehead. "No, it's too risky." he muttered under his breath.

    "Sir, with all due respect, we have been at this siege now for sixty three days, and still the enemy scoffs and laughs at us. Their village may be fortified, but it is small. And yet they do not feel the pressures of rationing their supplies. How long do you intend to keep this up?" Amibaal turned to the doorway and peaked outside to see if anyone was listening.

    "As long as I have to. This is not a game Amibaal, I can't go around sending my detachments at a whim's notice on information that hasn't come directly to me. Where did you receive this intelligence anyway?" Hiram asked while turning his head slightly and lowering an eyebrow in a gesture of imputation.
    "My scouts sir. Do you think me or they are unreliable? Must I once again reassure you of my loyalties? How long have I served under you? And yet you question the validity of what I say near constantly!" Amibaal stomped his foot on the ground and stormed out of the tent.

    Hiram got up out of his seat, put on his splendid double bossed breastplate, etched with the scenes of his former battles, and that of the Carthaginians, with gold and silver inlay. He put on his purple plumed helmet, along with his long and elegant purple cloak with beautiful trim and walked out of his tent. The sun, high in the sky, made him shield his eyes and squint as though the burst of a flame had fell upon him. Once his eyes adjusted, he looked around his camp to see his men walking around, eating, wrestling, and playing games. His relaxed and modest approach to drill and discipline was well received with his men, and given Hiram's reputation for being a man who gets things done, there was not much concern for their ability in combat.

    He looked to his right, where there was a group of men talking with a fervor so great he could not ignore it and approached the men. "At ease, soldiers. Continue your story, It would please me greatly to hear it."

    "Very well, general." the man who was telling the story said. "I was just telling my friends here of a dream I had the other night. It was terrifying to say the least! I was alone in the darkness, stripped naked with nothing but a spear and shield. This woman appeared to me out of nowhere and said that my destiny was to betray my leader. I asked her why she would say that, and what I had done to anger the gods into telling me such a thing, and her reply was that we were on an expedition doomed to failure. I refuted this, saying that the great Hiram has led men into battle on innumerable accounts, finding victory where the gods themselves would retreat!"

    Hiram rather liked that, and raised his hand into a fist to cheer, "go on! Go on my boy."

    "Right. Well, she said that I would die in this land unless we used a different strategy. I told her I was no strategist, and just a simple soldier, so why bother me I asked. Again, she said that I would be the one to facilitate the capitulation of this village. I am but a modest and humble man, my general, I mean no offense when I say this."
    Hiram replied, "it's quite all right, you have done nothing to offend me. Continue your story boy."

    "Thank you general. So this lady disappeared, and I was surrounded in complete darkness. I couldn't even see my hands with my arms extended. All of a sudden I started getting pummeled by something! I yelled out 'No! I have done nothing wrong! Leave me be!' but to no avail. I was beaten to the ground, terrified and beleaguered, only able to open one eye. I was lying on my back, writhing in pain, when the darkness fell away from me. I had been transported into the celestial, surrounded by the brightest of stars. The woman appeared to me again and said that this is what I was supposed to see, and that I would know what to do with the information."

    "Very interesting indeed, my boy." Hiram said, with a peculiar expression on his face, like he had just had a revelation. "Come with me boy, tell me in private if there is more to this dream of yours."

    The soldier followed Hiram to his tent and stood at attention while Hiram sat down. "Now... Was this actually a dream of yours, or just a clever story to tell me something I don't know."

    "It was a dream sir, honest!" the soldier said, beginning to tremble for what he had said.

    "Fear not my boy, I will do you no harm even if what you say is false. There is merit in what you say. My captains and I cannot seem to break the will of these defiant rebels. Tell me, did this dream spark any ideas of yours?" Hiram said with genuine interest and sincerity.

    "Well sir, to be honest no. I am no strategist, sir. I just do as my officer says." came the response from the still trembling man.

    "It has given me one. That will be all soldier, go back to your friends." Hiram said, and the soldier left his tent.

    Hiram called to his guards outside the tent to bring him one of his captains, Baal'hammon. Within a few moments, Baal'hammon entered and saluted the general. "Sir, you called for me?"

    "Indeed I did captain. I want to go over a plan with you. Listen and give me your thoughts. A soldier outside gave me an idea for a way to make this village capitulate. On the night just before the next full moon, when it is raining heavily it will obscure their view, we will depart from our fortifications and this siege. We will withdraw along this route here (points to a passage that is part of the planned withdrawal) until we get to the forest. At the forest, you will take the cavalry of your pick and make your way to the hill just beyond the forest. I will take leave with a detachment of my best men to be the rearguard early in the morning after the rest of our forces have withdrawn, so that we can lure their forces out to think they will have an easy fight. It will take about half a days march to get to the forest here, where our army will be in hiding. Here we will make our battle during the late day so that when night falls, they will be forced to withdraw back to their city. Once it does, we will have the full moon aiding us enough to conduct a night attack, and your cavalry will be the vanguard of that assault. I want you and captain Amibaal to strike hard and fast throughout the night as they retreat to their fortifications. Do not stop to engage them for prolonged combat, their infantry is not to be underestimated, even in the chaos of night. Quick strikes, captain, and whither away their forces." Hiram finished there and looked to Baal'hammon for his response.

    "Sir, that is a very good plan. This siege has done nothing to facilitate taking the city, and if we feign retreat, I'm sure they will see that as an assured victory, lulling them into a false sense of pride and capability. I will inform Amibaal of this plan, and ready my men. When is the next full moon?"

    "Should be in just under a week from today. Plenty of time to prepare. Keep this between you and the other captains for now, do not inform your men. We don't know who might be listening for them, as I've had some suspicions of late that smuggled supplies have been entering the village."

    "Yes, sir." Baal'hammon replied, saluted the general, and exited the tent.

    Five days had passed and the planned withdraw was scheduled for that night. Hiram saw that the onset of a storm looked imminent, and the timing was perfect. Once the rain started, Hiram gave the order to quietly break camp and follow captain Amibaal. He himself waited with two hundred of his most trusted, and most fierce warriors, the Band of Baal. When light crept the following morning, Hiram and his band withdrew in plain sight, the last to leave the fortifications as intended. The occupants of the village jeered and taunted them. When Hiram was almost out of sight, he looked back to see the rebels pursuing him. For half the day, Hiram and his Band of Baal fought off several skirmishing attempts thrown at them, losing a few, but inflicting more casualties on the infantry that engaged them. By the time they reached the forest, it was already close to sunset. Hiram ordered his slingers and javelin-men to emerge from the forest and descend upon the rebels with a hailstorm of ranged assaults. The lines met and Hiram and his army had the better of the rebels, he himself on the right flank with his Band of Baal cutting swathes through the enemy. As night approached, the rebels fell back and started withdrawing to their village. Amibaal, Baal'hammon, and the Band of Astarte shouted and charged down the hill at full speed and crashed into the enemy rearguard, causing havoc and chaos amongst the rebel ranks.

    By the time the few remaining rebels made it to the village, their forces had been almost completely annihilated. Hiram sent a herald to negotiate the surrender of the village, and the rebels agreed.

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    A Beautiful Dream

    On a night like any other, I have yet another dream. The night is beautiful, with the sky like velvet, and embedded with countless stars. Night is a good time to introspect myself. And dreams, a good way to know the deepest of heart's desires.

    But there is one dream that I get often. It spreads warmth within me, like an imperishable flame concealed within us. I smile in the darkness, pleased at the thought that this dream is something which the world cannot spoil, with their constant annoyance.

    The dream is beautiful, but inexplicable. How can one explain beauty, elegance, and charm? How do we quantify them without spoiling the essence? No, it is far more pleasurable to enjoy them.

    But wait. Is my mind playing games?Will this happiness come to me, or will I be disappointed? My heart reassures me, to keep faith in the way of nature that anything you desire truly, the universe brings you closer to it.

    But I try not to worry much. What would that fetch me? That is something that takes away the joy from life. It is good to worry, for that makes one think. But why worry too much?

    For in the shadow of the night, I see her in my dreams, and I smile.
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    Default Re: TotW 124: A game of shadows

    Phew, I thought I wasn´t going to make it. Submitted, let the games begin.
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    Vagrant The two men stood at a table, the young one looking at his cup of wine, as if some answer was to be found in the foamy red liquid. The older one looked straight at him with what seemed to be tears in his eyes.

    You say it was your fault that we lost the battle but let me tell you how kings are made and cast down.

    The young man looked up and met his father’s gaze, though he lowered his eyes once more, lest the shame he felt would be seen by his old father.

    I once had a dream to restore the ancient power of our kingdom and bring peace and prosperity to our people. For me, for us, it was a matter of honour, of justice and truth, but I soon understood there were other powers that worked in the shadows against me.

    The young man stood up and went to the balcony, where the night breeze cooled him down. His father joined him soon after, stopping by his side, putting an arm on his son’s shoulder.

    Look up my boy, look up and tell me what you see.

    The night sky was beautiful, almost too beautiful to be real. The full moon had emerged from behind one of the few clouds and its light was spreading everywhere. The stars sparkled against the black canvass that was the sky, as if an unseen painter had sprinkled them. The balcony overlooked the harbour of the small town, with the few merchant ships that traded in these waters and the lone long ship that had brought the survivors here.

    I don’t know if I want to see something. All I can think of is how I failed you that day, how I failed the kingdom and how I failed the men.

    That was not your doing, the old king said. It was Vaander’s doing, him and his banker friends. They plotted against us with the enemy and they paid the officers and commanders of the troops that rebelled mid-battle. To them it was nothing but a game and they are excellent players.

    Somehow I will manage to get back home and I will fall upon them like fire falls from the sky, I will burn everything in my path and the flames of my vengeance shall consume them and those that stand with them.

    Wars are not won with soldiers, kings can be made and unmade with the stroke of a quill upon a parchment.

    Then what is the way father?


    We must fight them with their own weapons, we must lurk in the shadows and cut their ties all the while strengthening ours.
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