I just made a song, for those of you who have ears and can listen to hip hop

Of course I would like anyone to hear this song, but it can probably not be easy to appreciate if you don't like hip hop.

http://soundcloud.com/profet-1/baby-3

I would love to hear what you think, suggestions, etc.

The song, when properly finished with lyrical content, will be all about sex and ing beautiful young women

I need a female vocalist who knows how to sound sexy and seductive as hell, a few rappers, and in general people who can sing (I will attempt to sing myself eventually), either way, does anyone think this could be made to a nice song? I am thinking perhaps the singer should sing a melody so theres a decent melody on the chorus

And by the way, while you're at it please listen to the other songs I have there on my soundcloud profile, thanks!