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    Quote Originally Posted by Khales View Post
    A noob appears and is confused: Is this based on a novel or whatever? If not then i feel quite amazed! If yes then i“ll probaly still feel amazed but less confused...
    Well...the whole thing has come from the brain of a half-dead, deluded squirrel....it's not a book (that's published) and it's new, as such.

    SO, I am glad to let you be amazed; I'm very chuffed that you like it! It did take a while to do it all.

    Quote Originally Posted by Torvus View Post
    FIGHT ITEM or RUN?
    uhm. I'd choose run. Quickly.

    Having said that, I really don't have a clue of anything much, let alone the whole decision type thing...I'd run around in circels like a chicken, and do nothing at all.
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    On this hill, the snow drops grew in abandon, and would become mired, drowned in blood that day - ever after they grew red.
    Love it, poetry in motion. You are the mouse that roared. I like the rest as well, but this line was written art.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Borissomeone View Post
    Love it, poetry in motion. You are the mouse that roared. I like the rest as well, but this line was written art.

    Awww....thanks Mr SOmeone

    Me mouse, hear me Squeak!! Not quite a lion, but passably good at making noise...

    Well, the story needed a kind of sad and horrific mood to it...I got that across then?


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    Well, the story needed a kind of sad and horrific mood to it...I got that across then?
    You sure did, by the way I should have the Bloodless done today...hopefully. Do you what me to PM you with it once done or post it here and the other place?

    And a little off topic my tale was reviewed. Heres the link http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showt...2#post10033542 have a look if anyone is keen.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Borissomeone View Post
    You sure did, by the way I should have the Bloodless done today...hopefully. Do you what me to PM you with it once done or post it here and the other place?
    Thanks Boris

    I've seen the Bloodless piece...post in both places for sure. I can't see that posting lore stuff in small bites constantly is a bad thing...in fact it brings it all to life, and that's important.

    And a little off topic my tale was reviewed. Heres the link http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showt...2#post10033542 have a look if anyone is keen.
    Nice! Pleased for you!

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    Right. This is an off-the-wall unit. It's inspired by something Beregond found...he's doing the writing for the Iryn Thaan at this moment in time, so he's eager for a few units to be made...he found a great picture, which I've used as inspiration, but have Squeakified it...in other words, it'll probably look nothing like it, but I hope he'll be pleased anyway.

    As wintery people like to do, it has furs, which I will make better tomorrow, but then the horse will have a fur coat too...kinda light barding...there's a lot to do before I'm happy with it completely, and he will be mounted spear, but for now, whilst watching my country burning, I'll show it to you and then skip off to la-la-land, happily bouncing with all the pretty bunnies...







    Okay! I want to do more stuff, can quite happily make another unit, but it's snoo0zy time fairly soon. Morning to the upside-downlanders, and night to all of the others...I'm possibly lying, as I won't go to bed for at aleast another hour, but it's only polite to say goodnight, as I may not do it before I REALLY fall asleep.

    Mmm...I have asked-ed for a forumy-thing, so we'll keep our paws crossed and let peeps in the know decide what fate has in store. It's quite odd really; I've had a few VERY surprising pms the last day or two...very. It appears we have some support for dragonborn from places I didn't even know existed. Very nice it is too!

    Oooh...more news. We have another modeller now, who's someone I was pointed to ages ago, but we never really caught up, but have now, so this should be good. Our anims are going well...we appear to be getting towards the point where we can punch through the beasties at a good rate soon...SUn King's Hippogryph Riders look giood to go it would seem. I can assure you much goes on behind closed doors, AND can say that Turambar and Death will be making some form of preview of a good part of the Ghaurchlai faction, once the fearless little fella has allowed me to moan and reskin bits and pieces.......

    So soon, we'll see Ghaurchlai stuff, and I'll have a bit more of an idea about what we release and wehn, as it's planned in chunks, which is all very exiting. AT some point, there should be a playable custom battle, once we've decided which factions should be involved, and how many units. May be worth peeps saying the two they'd like to see, say an 8 unit vs 8 unit battle?

    What factuions would be the bestest??

    There, democracy at work! Tell us who you like and we'll get on and work towards them. It doesn't matter which, as they all have units, and putting the rest together wouldn't be that hard really. I was looking at the unit rosters, and was thinking that there will be about 350 ish units made. It's really not that bad. A whole whack have been done, and we're waiting on me to grab the right bits for the larger dudes (10ft ish), the winged ones and stuff, so I will be combing through my chum's stuff tomorrow. Once you put in that most factions have a flying cavalry, most have a few avatars/beasties and then a small staple of 'standard' troops, you find that it's all looking rather good.

    Writing's going to be a BIG thing. There's tons, and we could just do 'enough', but we won't. We'll carry on writing and publishing, try to rewrite my lost novel (notice I said 'we')...I'm hoping we get a lore thread and a novel thread, because we can then start belting stuff out sharpish.

    T&D is a wonder. You can give him a job that would make modellers groan majorly and lose the will to live, and he just goes away and produces miracles - I think he probably doesn't eat, sleep or leave the room for those days, but he comes back with amazing results.

    Hmm. Rambling again. I must stop this at some point, but then I did say that to lots of things, and it didn't work well there either.

    Yes, so, to recap, decide which factions (2 of) you'd like to play a battle with, and we'll get on and do it...can't say it won't be a while, but it gives a nice focus for us all, and we can preview those factions big-time at the same time.

    Believe me when I say that we all desperately want to show you what we're doing, but we can't, yet. It would ruin things. Just seen how much I've written, AND that I have rambled for ages. Will pretend to go to bed...see you later, unless I sneak back to see if anyone's here

    Night night all!
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    Hello Everyone,

    Here is some lore for the Bloodless, and a big thanks to Squeaks for letting me loose with all the notes and written work that has already been done.

    Enjoy and please comment.

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    The soft hiss of rain as it runs down the mottled glass of my room brings life back into sharp focus, a flicker of lightning cast the room and its contents in harsh cold light before the light of my one lamp resumes its mad dance as it nears the end of its life. I guess I should introduce myself; well I would if I had a name that could be remembered by me or anyone else. Call me slave and leave it at that, it will make things easier on all. I feel I will perish soon here deep within one of the great fortresses ruled by the Bloodless, but before I go I wish to tell you a tale or a history of the Haladin. This will be my last gift to anyone who will find it, by guttering lamp and poor penmanship I will scrawl all I have learned.

    They, the Bloodless have always dwelt here within the Earthspine, shadowed vales and twisted valleys a pale faced people with great manes of blood red hair. Some might call them beautiful; I would now call them terrible to behold having witnessed the dark rights performed. Once they were squat of build and broad of shoulder, but could never be misconceived as the Khezdruli, but with the first years of mans existence the Lindiri came upon the Bloodless. The Lindiri sought to better the Bloodless, as they do love to meddle, for they saw the Haladin did suffer from hemophilia. With some success they did help the Haladin, but as always the changes they wrought upon the Bloodless had unexpected results.

    A small number of the Bloodless grew in height and if possible they became even paler of skin, weak in the flesh, but strong in the mind they became the nobility of this race. From what I have read and found rotting in the deepest parts of this place as the wind moaned through long forgotten passages the first amongst the Bloodless were given visions in their rest, warned of the weakness of villages they built three monstrous fortresses. Perhaps I should point out to whoever chances upon this written word that chief among the Bloodless rule three clans, the Iudruul with the Sieldruul and Karathuul. With the strongholds built the visions proved to have whispered truth for the Empire began what was to be a prolonged and bloody war. As Spurhawks swarmed into the first valleys they swiftly took control of the shadow ridden vales, but with the speed of their conquests came high casualties.

    As the Empire pushed deeper into the lands of the Haladin or as some would call them the Cimrai three clans fought back, the Kanaan, Kharst and Kaden. As the three clans tried to hold the Empire back, many stayed within their great fortresses, the massed garrisons forbidden to leave despite clan affiliations. What followed the initial assault by the Empire was a truly grim and bloody time for my masters. The Kanaan Clan and the Siedruul planned for the coming battles lead by the nobles who had proven to be sharp of mind but weak of flesh and unable to fight, this could have been the end for the Bloodless for many lost faith in their feeble commanders, but in the end the Kanaan managed to rally eight clans to the defense of a crucial vale. As a slow cool wind played with the proud banners of the Empire, twenty five thousand men massed and ready to unleash hell upon the Clans who stood upon the opposite side of the vale. Sixteen thousand Bloodless lead by Valerian for half the forces were Kanaan, stood ready to die for their twisted valleys and mist shrouded mountains.

    From musty tome and by wane light of a single poorly made candle I was able to find reports of the following battle.

    Four days of death, the cries of the Empire and Bloodless rode the wind a song of pain and anguish as they slew each other. Line after line of fortified positions fell, but the Kanaan held, a bloodied rock among a sea of war. The Empire had tried to defeat them with all their cunning and might and as a blood red sun set the Kanaan had proven they could equal the best the Empire could throw at them for they were the Kanaan, fearless in the extreme.

    As the battled raged the Iudruul Clan sought to expand upon their knowledge of their arcane powers. The Kanaan fought with blade and shield, feeding the land with their own blood as the Iudruul stole their own people, each soul given to the use of Blood Magic. From what I can gather what happened next changed the Bloodless, for better or worse I can not judge for I am a simple slave and not very wise. Demonic spirits were touched upon and from this foul caress the Iudruul made them selves preternaturally strong. Armed with blades of power and some now with the means to fly, metal wings that remind me of the bats that plague some parts of this Fortress, they fell upon the Empire. The Spurhawks were rolled back, most returned to their beloved Sea of Grass. Wheeling they then turned upon the Empires flanks. With a surge the Kanaan saw an opportunity and pressed forward. A moment or hours and the Empire were in full retreat. Thousands upon thousands died in the coming rout, the fallen left to rot in the vales and misted mountains. So many dead, the moaning wind echoing with the cries of the dying even to this day.

    Now the Clans play games with deadly powers, the Blood magic sings to them, whispers of more power to come, but I can see things my masters cannot. The shadows dance and darkness gathers, they dream of war and conquest, but risk utter dominance from the power they crave. A rift is soon to be opened; a gate way to the Cthonae, soon things will change, soon. The Iudruul play a dangerous game, they have tried to subject all, and failed for the Kanaan have resisted and now defend the Earthspine from any who threaten the Bloodless, but perhaps they should look within their boarders for dark powers gather and the Iudruul welcome it with open arms.

    A flash of bright lightning and my poor candle ends its life as the room fades to darkness, not that it matter for I’m naught but a lowly slave who likes to tell tales


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    Writing's going to be a BIG thing. There's tons, and we could just do 'enough', but we won't. We'll carry on writing and publishing, try to rewrite my lost novel (notice I said 'we')...I'm hoping we get a lore thread and a novel thread, because we can then start belting stuff out sharpish.

    Sorry for the double post, but you caught my attention with this line...oh and great work with the units.

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    Nice looking riders.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Borissomeone View Post
    Sorry for the double post, but you caught my attention with this line...oh and great work with the units.
    Thanks about the units, and, yes, I fully intedn to try to get all of us writing for the novel. Way too muchtalent to be wasted otherwise.

    Quote Originally Posted by Legio View Post
    Nice looking riders.
    Heh....you are continuing your 'man of few words' thing Legio! I still haven't worked if it means you approve yet...kind of...

    Good to see you though - far too long, no see. Hope we can cathc up proper-like!

    I'l reiterrate this point...

    Yes, so, to recap, decide which factions (2 of) you'd like to play a battle with, and we'll get on and do it...can't say it won't be a while, but it gives a nice focus for us all, and we can preview those factions big-time at the same time.
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    Iryn Thaan with furry horses...it's cold up there!





    Will deal with the weapon next....

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    we are all servants of the awesomesauce that is, dragonborn total war, all hail thy minions! for dragonborn total war thou shalt bow!

    and it would be pretty awesomesaucish to see ratmen versus lizardmen, just for the fun of it >:3

    All hail dragonborn total war!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowlair View Post
    we are all servants of the awesomesauce that is, dragonborn total war, all hail thy minions! for dragonborn total war thou shalt bow!

    and it would be pretty awesomesaucish to see ratmen versus lizardmen, just for the fun of it >:3
    Lizardmen have some unit's done but ratmen not...
    So as Squeks said ,,vote people!! or you be killed!!!!''...hehe

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    Truly amazing, there must be an Artifex title on the shelf just for you.
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    I love the horsies.

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    I'm most definiatly gonna try out the wolfborn first and wreck some mayhem

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    Hmm, 2 factions eh? I would say the Wolfborn vs. the Empire.

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    Vote Ilien, people!

    Here's some of my current writing, a campaign welcoming text for the great faction of Iryn Thaan. Not the final version perhaps, but I think it's good enough to show and bring some snow and cold into the heat of summer

    Iryn Thaan welcome


    A blast of cold wind gusted through the dimly lit shadowy chamber, flapping old palatial tapestries and filling the air with hundreds of glittering snowflakes that started dancing around a dark figure of a man, standing at the high arched window. He was tall and powerfully built, with long salt and pepper dark hair, clad only in a thin black shirt and leather trousers and jacket, despite the chilling frost in the room. In the depths of his icy blue eyes dark shadows lurked, as he gazed into the endless blankness of the valley several miles below. Kail Walsey, the Lord of Iythaan and all People of Iryn Thaan, was deep in his thoughts. For decades now he has led his nation in its struggle for survival, each day marked on his weathered face; he has kept and strengthened alliances, inspired faith even when little was left in him, fought in endless clashes on clean snow stained by bright crimson. All these years his designs and plans were dedicated to one goal only: to deliver justice to his sworn mortal enemies, the Naugiri.

    And now all the carefully arranged schemes were being put into motion.

    In his frozen capital of Iythaan lights are burning bright. Shadows are moving on the cyclopic walls of ice, spears and swords sparkling like the morning frost-dew, as the last sons of Iryn Thaan are going to battle.

    In the haze-covered heights of Rutharr the Snow Ferakine are afoot, passing with graceful eveness through the lowered bridges and heading down into the valleys in a torrent of fur and steel.

    Under the thick crust of frozen snow the Kithgaat Urune are tumbling in their lairs, waking from a long and deep sleep to bellow their bone-chilling war cries into the skies, and follow the call of their ally.

    The mysterious powers are also moving in the great game that will decide the fate of his kingdom. Ice splits and ruptures as the hulking Icewyrds rise from their cold cradles, Ley crystals pulsing and sparkling inside. The Silent Death drift into the night, wings of the North Wind carrying them hissing in empty sockets of ancient helmets. The vast hosts of the Yaga Dai are on the march, their columns stretching beyond the horizon, ready as ever before to assist and support their human friends.

    All this might at his fingertips, but the shadows in Lord Walsey’s eyes were anticipation and concern. He couldn’t allow himself the luxury of doubt, yet with so much to gain, there was equally much to lose. The Naugiri were a terrible foe, and the victory against them could come at too great a cost…

    Lord Walsey stood at the high arched window, gazing into the unknown, and cold wind played in his hair.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beregond View Post
    Vote Ilien, people!

    Here's some of my current writing, a campaign welcoming text for the great faction of Iryn Thaan. Not the final version perhaps, but I think it's good enough to show and bring some snow and cold into the heat of summer

    Iryn Thaan welcome


    A blast of cold wind gusted through the dimly lit shadowy chamber, flapping old palatial tapestries and filling the air with hundreds of glittering snowflakes that started dancing around a dark figure of a man, standing at the high arched window. He was tall and powerfully built, with long salt and pepper dark hair, clad only in a thin black shirt and leather trousers and jacket, despite the chilling frost in the room. In the depths of his icy blue eyes dark shadows lurked, as he gazed into the endless blankness of the valley several miles below. Kail Walsey, the Lord of Iythaan and all People of Iryn Thaan, was deep in his thoughts. For decades now he has led his nation in its struggle for survival, each day marked on his weathered face; he has kept and strengthened alliances, inspired faith even when little was left in him, fought in endless clashes on clean snow stained by bright crimson. All these years his designs and plans were dedicated to one goal only: to deliver justice to his sworn mortal enemies, the Naugiri.

    And now all the carefully arranged schemes were being put into motion.

    In his frozen capital of Iythaan lights are burning bright. Shadows are moving on the cyclopic walls of ice, spears and swords sparkling like the morning frost-dew, as the last sons of Iryn Thaan are going to battle.

    In the haze-covered heights of Rutharr the Snow Ferakine are afoot, passing with graceful eveness through the lowered bridges and heading down into the valleys in a torrent of fur and steel.

    Under the thick crust of frozen snow the Kithgaat Urune are tumbling in their lairs, waking from a long and deep sleep to bellow their bone-chilling war cries into the skies, and follow the call of their ally.

    The mysterious powers are also moving in the great game that will decide the fate of his kingdom. Ice splits and ruptures as the hulking Icewyrds rise from their cold cradles, Ley crystals pulsing and sparkling inside. The Silent Death drift into the night, wings of the North Wind carrying them hissing in empty sockets of ancient helmets. The vast hosts of the Yaga Dai are on the march, their columns stretching beyond the horizon, ready as ever before to assist and support their human friends.

    All this might at his fingertips, but the shadows in Lord Walsey’s eyes were anticipation and concern. He couldn’t allow himself the luxury of doubt, yet with so much to gain, there was equally much to lose. The Naugiri were a terrible foe, and the victory against them could come at too great a cost…

    Lord Walsey stood at the high arched window, gazing into the unknown, and cold wind played in his hair.
    Very nicely written friend, sets up the opening of the game in a atmospheric manner + rep.

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    Very cool writing. Will these texts be in the campaign via scripted messages (End of Days II has that - each turn you get a chapter of a history in an in-game message) aside from the main menu faction intros?

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