Writen a Christmas poem, more a rhyme but anyways enjoy!

Written this yesterday: It has no deep meaning but I like to share this one.


A Christmas song,
has come along.
But not so long,
for me to write this rhyme,
for what I don't have any time.

But for you I do,
anything to stay true,
until Christmas eve,
had its debrief.

Its snowing outside with snowballs alright,
kids making fun, while there is no sun,
to melt the snow away,
no the snow likes to stay.

How did your day go,
mine did fine,
I had the time,
to visit some family again of mine.

Christmas tomorrow,
will be nice,
eating and presents,
by surprise.

Enjoyed the poem?
IY's founder Max,
wishes you a good midnights tune!

Buming this, would like some feedback.

Just because you would like some feedback doesn't mean that anyone wants to give some.

I know but there is a higher chance.

I quite liked it - if you enjoy writing poetry then keep doing it

Thanks for your comment, keeps me going!

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Compared to last year,
this ain't much better I fear.

Poems don't necessarily have to rhyme man. I even think rhyming poetry sucks, unless it's witty.