Legendary Characters in Apocalypse (Datasheets)(Death Korps Captain Tyborc Done)(Anyone Have Feedback?)

[Silo]

What does everyone think of the Datasheets so far?

Really nice work

I like what you came up with thus far and the list of what us awaits us still seems promising.

[Outlawstar15a2]

I won't do that. They are not of the material universe and hence 40k stats can't represent them. The Emperor is about as powerful as anything's gonna get. And he will still be killable (At least by Chaos Horus) to an extent.

Oh and Sanguinius / Ollanius Pius/ Captain Cortez and the Platinum Necron Lord to come soon.

That's hypocrisy. C'Tans are not of the material universe, they come from the Starlight Plain, but your doing them...

[Ulysses S. Grant]

That's hypocrisy. C'Tans are not of the material universe, they come from the Starlight Plain, but your doing them...

Well for one the C'tab are already in the game and they are in the Material Realm. The Chaos Gods cannot enter the Material Realm. They can influence it but that takes effort and weakens them in the warp.

[Manco]

What bits of lore do you like? Most is official but i have embellished some of those characters with little actual fluff (Like Ollanius).

Both the summaries and the explanation of their abilities is interesting really.

Ooh, any Space pups that apply for one of these datasheets?

[Lord of the Drunk Penguin]

Well for one the C'tab are already in the game and they are in the Material Realm. The Chaos Gods cannot enter the Material Realm. They can influence it but that takes effort and weakens them in the warp.

Well,, all except Malal ofcourse who's in the Material Realm and wreaking havok since 89.

[Col. Tartleton]

I like Cortez. He's the classic Crimson Fist. Too bad they ditched him over his bad model. I loved his "You can't stop me even if you stop me schtick." The effectively immortal mostly metal at this point blood and guts marine who manages to get blown to pieces in every over the top engagement and then get stitched up in time for the next mission.

I think this quote from the comedy Club Dread summarizes him:

Dave: Pete, you are aware that I've personally served this guy twenty beers a day for the last ten years, right?

Hank: [shows a nasty scar on his side] Hey, I was in Nicaragua, junior! When you can stuff your intestines back in your pockets and walk twenty clicks to an aid station after a knife fight with guerilla drug lords, then you talk to me!

[Ulysses S. Grant]

Ooh, any Space pups that apply for one of these datasheets?

Leman Russ.

[Outlawstar15a2]

I like Cortez. He's the classic Crimson Fist. Too bad they ditched him over his bad model. I loved his "You can't stop me even if you stop me schtick." The effectively immortal mostly metal at this point blood and guts marine who manages to get blown to pieces in every over the top engagement and then get stitched up in time for the next mission.

I think this quote from the comedy Club Dread summarizes him:

Dave: Pete, you are aware that I've personally served this guy twenty beers a day for the last ten years, right?

Hank: [shows a nasty scar on his side] Hey, I was in Nicaragua, junior! When you can stuff your intestines back in your pockets and walk twenty clicks to an aid station after a knife fight with guerilla drug lords, then you talk to me!

I love Club Dread. I love that movie so much.

[Ulysses S. Grant]

Lion El'Jonson and Primarch Honour Guard Datasheets Done. See First Post.

[Sanguinary Guardian]

The Primarch's Retinues are very good, bravo! I have some suggestions, though, mainly for diversity.
The White Scars' HG to be given the Skilled Rider (They would not be the HG of the Khan if they were not skilled at riding ).
The Death Shroud to be given the FnP special rule. They are, after all, Mortarion's favoured and have drunk with him, quite a lot of times.
The SG to be given the Furious Charge, to better represent them charging into battle alongside Sanguinius himself.
Keep up the good work, m8...

[Ulysses S. Grant]

The White Scars' HG to be given the Skilled Rider (They would not be the HG of the Khan if they were not skilled at riding )

The Death Shroud to be given the FnP special rule. They are, after all, Mortarion's favoured and have drunk with him, quite a lot of times.

The specialised legions will have legion specific rules in the actual Primarchs datasheets. Just wait and see.

The SG to be given the Furious Charge, to better represent them charging into battle alongside Sanguinius himself.

They have the Blood Chalice so they already have it.

[Sanguinary Guardian]

The specialised legions will have legion specific rules in the actual Primarchs datasheets. Just wait and see.

They have the Blood Chalice so they already have it.

Whoops, my bad...

[Ulysses S. Grant]

Leman Russ, Rogal Dorn and Jaghatai Khan Datasheets are done. See the first post.

[Okuto]

yes! On behalf of the white scars I thank your great work, I'll try him and Dorm out this weekend after finals

[Ulysses S. Grant]

Konrad Curze, Ferrus Manus and Loyalist Perturabo done. See the first post.

[Outlawstar15a2]

Konrad Curze, Ferrus Manus and Loyalist Perturabo done. See the first post.

You rock, bro!

[Ulysses S. Grant]

Datasheet for loyalist Fulgrim done. See the first post.

And thats the first 9 Primarchs done. So what do people think so far? And which is your favourite datasheet?

[Outlawstar15a2]

Datasheet for loyalist Fulgrim done. See the first post.

And thats the first 9 Primarchs done. So what do people think so far? And which is your favourite datasheet?

To be honest? My favorite datasheet is Perturabo. Both Daemon and Loyalist. Perturabo friggin' rocks!

[|Sith| Max]

ooo mate i found a grammatical error. shouldn't the Platinum Lord's datasheet say "They have millions of years of combat experience" instead of "They have millions of years of combat experiences" ?

[Ulysses S. Grant]

And now its gone......


EDIT: Tyranid Hydraphant, Roboute Guilliman, Loyalist Angron and Revised Daemon Angron Done. See the first post.