Overture

To some it may seem childish, but a month ago I wrote an overture. I finished the initial piece. It runs around 1:00-2:00 in time. I want to show you all to see if it's actually worth continuing...

http://www.noteflight.com/scores/vie...a191146189ada5

That's pretty neat, reminds me of an old Final Fantasy.

wow. thats really good. A little repetitive on the drums, but that is a excellent piece of work in my opinion.

As Deku said, reminds of one of those 1996-2000 fantasy games.

I think you should finish it.

Sounds interesting.

Pretty simple, very old Zelda, Final Fantasy-ish.

Until you've arranged a piano LOTR piece for a full orchestra, there is no difficult. *snobface*

Good work on the overture! Now you've got me addicted to this and I'm writing my own stuff!

One comment I have is with the melody the clarinet plays. I think it would sound more fitting if the fourth note of it, I believe it is a G in a half-note, is changed to a D (down on the cleft).

Thanks for bringing this site to attention. I liked your tune, a lot of work put into that. I wrote some random piano piece, check it out: http://www.noteflight.com/scores/vie...86190affe294fa

Originally Posted by Nutsack

Thanks for bringing this site to attention. I liked your tune, a lot of work put into that. I wrote some random piano piece, check it out: http://www.noteflight.com/scores/vie...86190affe294fa

remember to got share and click to let people view your work or you link will be invalid like it is right now. click to let people comment and view and search for it in the browser part.

Originally Posted by Lord Rahl

Good work on the overture! Now you've got me addicted to this and I'm writing my own stuff!

One comment I have is with the melody the clarinet plays. I think it would sound more fitting if the fourth note of it, I believe it is a G in a half-note, is changed to a D (down on the cleft).

I just write the music but I am lost when you talk to me about Music vocabulary. XD

In the 6th bar. Meh, this'll be easier...

Change it from this:

to this:

Not that the note you chose doesn't fit but I think it'd be better to use the original note you chose later in the same melody to add variation. Since the note you chose is higher in pitch it creates a sort of uplifting feeling. If you change the note to what I've said, if I have it correct, then it will still sound good but will create a feeling of anticipation for the note you chose.

Make sense?

I did what you suggested and added some tweaks.

Moved to The Arts.

I've never heard of the website, but I have heard of the free program Musescore, it might interest you.

http://musescore.org/

Originally Posted by NikolaTesla

I've never heard of the website, but I have heard of the free program Musescore, it might interest you.

http://musescore.org/

many thanks. I pay for noteflights premium service.