All The Clocks

Right, so. A cluster of my friends and I have been working on a short, amateur film the past few weeks. We have decided to start a production "company" to organise the making of future films: All The Clocks Productions.
To understand why, you must understand our childhood. We used to make movies all the time when we were in Middle School, but they went nowhere mostly except for just some fun, badly-made scenes. Nonetheless, these experiences were the seeds of some of the most richly-developed original fiction we have written as a group. And it began a spark of creativity and interest in the process of film-making.

But onto our first completed feature. We filmed a couple weeks ago and have been toiling over a hot laptop to edit the bloody thing up until this morning. I would like some opinions on it, since I respect certain voices on this forum.
Some things to keep in mind- this was made on a one-thread-of-a-shoestring budget as it was would first attempt to finish a movie solidly. And it is, truly, the first movie we have finished since 7th grade.
Another thing to remember- our camera and editing equipment is very basic and we're using this movie as mostly a dry run so get some experience under our belts. We are currently investing in a new set of cameras, more complex and versatile editing equipment, and a boom mike. It will be a while before our next movie is up and done, but it's intended to be a serious drama film.
Unlike this one, which is a short (12-minute) dark comedy about nihilism and peanut butter. It isn't meant to be serious, so don't be too hard on it.

And so, without further ado, I present for your pleasure and critique, our first amateur short:
Peanut Butter and Jelly: Sandwich Time.