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    To my Uncle Sam, an essay by an American student.

    I write this for no class, under no pressure. I write this because I feel I should put some of my thoughts down in writing in a place where it is public in case someday I may not be able to.

    Uncle Sam, America there is many thing I must say to my beloved country: some advice and some warnings, some reminders and some praise.

    America you have recently took your place among the great powers of history. Taken your place along side Athens and Rome, the Ottomans and Victorian Britain. It gives you new found power along side new found responsibility. Today you have the power to control the world economy, to challenge any nation to war and to enforce your will anywhere in the world. Power that can be used many ways, for good and for ill. It is up to you to decide how to use the power.

    You may use your power to better yourself and increase the glory of the nation like all the other powers before it. You may make it so the Red, White and Blue is feared and respected throughout the world as the Union Jack before it. You may make America an imperial power over which the sun never sets. A nation the envy of the entire world. But, that is not the way our power should be used. All glory is fleeting and every nation falls, making all our gains temporary and fleeting.

    Or you may use your power to better the world, to bring peace and hope where there is none. You may be a great power unlike all before it. You may bring a Pax Americana not achieved by fear of a nation or a government, but one where every man and woman lives free and sees no need for war. You must do this by bringing freedom and hope to every corner of the world. Though we may be attacked by others doing this, it will be the way we can make our influence on the world permanent. Our nation is fleeting, but if we bring hope and peace to a world that needs it we will have a lasting effect.

    Or you may give up our power and only mind our own business. This is what many in the world wants you to do. It would make many politicians happy, and lead to the singing of praise by them to whatever president chooses this option. But though the praise may drown out the cries for hope and freedom that people wish for, it will not end them. Those cries will always be there until their desire is achieved. Remember America what happened last time you chose not to intefere, and millions paid for it. This is not the route America must take.

    May God bless the world, and guide America to decide the course it must take with its new found power as the world's superpower.

    (I know the grammar is pretty bad, but that never was my strongpoint )
    “The nation that will insist upon drawing a broad line of demarcation between the fighting man and the thinking man is liable to find its fighting done by fools and its thinking by cowards.”

    —Sir William Francis Butler

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    Don't say God bless at the end...makes you seem like a religious bible thumper

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    Quote Originally Posted by Templedog
    Don't say God bless at the end...makes you seem like a religious bible thumper
    He is religious.

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    Yep, I am religious, I don't have anything against non-Christian, but I am Christian.
    “The nation that will insist upon drawing a broad line of demarcation between the fighting man and the thinking man is liable to find its fighting done by fools and its thinking by cowards.”

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    oh brother.....god help us

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    Quote Originally Posted by Templedog
    oh brother.....god help us
    I find it ironic that you told him not to say "god bless," yet you say "god help us".

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    Quote Originally Posted by Templedog
    oh brother.....god help us
    I love the "I hate those horrible awful bigoted horrible religious people who are just so intolerant I want to just kill them all!!!!"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justinian
    I love the "I hate those horrible awful bigoted horrible religious people who are just so intolerant I want to just kill them all!!!!"
    Although not really the point of your post, intolerance toward the intolerant is not a negative thing. (no, im not saying all christians are..)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justinian
    I love the "I hate those horrible awful bigoted horrible religious people who are just so intolerant I want to just kill them all!!!!"

    hehe..its sooo true....not a bad paper though

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    If I knew it would be that line that caused all the controversy....I would have still put it in
    “The nation that will insist upon drawing a broad line of demarcation between the fighting man and the thinking man is liable to find its fighting done by fools and its thinking by cowards.”

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    what pisses me off about freedom, is that people say freedom..but still draw limits for others....kind of a bunch of poo

    I want...weed....hookers.....shrooms.....no FCC on TV....just to name a few

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    Quote Originally Posted by Templedog
    what pisses me off about freedom, is that people say freedom..but still draw limits for others....kind of a bunch of poo

    I want...weed....hookers.....shrooms.....no FCC on TV....just to name a few
    Templedog,

    It's the classic paradox of freedom. Freedom is only to be found within the confines of the law. Law entails responsibility. What you are talking about is not freedom, but anarchy. You wish to indulge your whims, at the moment they occur, no matter what the consequences are.

    But now, the classic paradox of anarchy. But freeing yourself entirely from the strictures of the law, you enslave yourself to your passions, and make yourself the potential victim of everyone else's passion.

    Law = Freedom

    Anarchy = Slavery

    However, God bless you, anyway ...


    Pac,

    Thank you for your optimistic assessment of America. I'm sure is wasn't based upon any sort of bias ... regional, ethnic, or ideological. You're just a concerned citizen of Planet Earth, who wants to live in peace and solidarity with all of the people thereof.

    God bless you, too ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Oldgamer

    Pac,

    Thank you for your optimistic assessment of America. I'm sure is wasn't based upon any sort of bias ... regional, ethnic, or ideological. You're just a concerned citizen of Planet Earth, who wants to live in peace and solidarity with all of the people thereof.

    God bless you, too ...
    Go away rogue militarist!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by PacSubCom
    Go away rogue militarist!!!

    :original:

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    I know, like those people that say you shouldn't say God Bless..
    “The nation that will insist upon drawing a broad line of demarcation between the fighting man and the thinking man is liable to find its fighting done by fools and its thinking by cowards.”

    —Sir William Francis Butler

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    i just get sick of seeing god bless this....god bless that.....god god god...and its all fake...makes me want to shoot myself in the head

    christians don't see a prob with it....but when you don't believe in that crap...gets old fast... got sick of religion when i was about 9 years old...

    my mom brought me to a preist to rid me of demons....because I was hyper...he didn't have much luck.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Templedog
    my mom brought me to a preist to rid me of demons....because I was hyper...he didn't have much luck.
    That's because you need a pastor... :wink:
    (in case you don't know, this is a joke)
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    thump thump



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    Well written Farnan, but it seems more like a letter/Journal than a essay. Don't worry about grammer, no-one really cares about it. I got a distinction back in Uni for writing a very dodgy (grammer wise) essay on the Gracchi brothers.

    The question on my mind is:

    Do you think America is going on the wrong path with it's policies lately? or do you agree with them to a certain extent?
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    I agree with the current Bush Rhetoric of spreading freedom, I do believe we should start provide more support to pro-democracy groups and help to the people of Darfur. By supporting the pro-democracy groups we can try to peacefully, the best way, spread freedom and democracy. By helping the people of Darfur and other groups that are being prosecuted we can bring them hope, and show that our goal is spreading freedom and hope, not American power.
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