[Amendment] - Section I - Article II Modifications
I like "General Staff". "Branch Staff" makes it sound like Hex can't be part of branches (I'm not tech staff?), and "Operational Staff" doesn't seem to make much sense. "General Staff" is suitably vague-sounding that we can make up a meaning for it. So, also taking the opportunity to make it more succinct:
The entire Section I should be deleted and replaced as follows:
The Executive consists of the site staff members, who are divided into the Hexagon Council and general staff. Staff has its own procedures independent of the Curia, which are documented on a wiki page.
The Hexagon Council is a self-appointed body of administrators with final control over all aspects of the site. The Hexagon Council may veto any bill passed by the Curia, and is in charge of general staff. It is the only part of staff responsible for dealing with the Curia.
General staff (staff members outside the Hexagon Council) are given certain rights and duties on TWC beyond normal members. They currently fall into three categories: moderation, content, and technical. Only Citizens may become moderators. General staff have no rights in the Curia beyond other members of the site.
Support? Oppose? Anyone want to help flesh out the wiki page?
Last edited by Simetrical; June 28, 2010 at 02:54 PM.
I like "General Staff". "Branch Staff" makes it sound like Hex can't be part of branches (I'm not tech staff?), and "Operational Staff" doesn't seem to make much sense. "General Staff" is suitably vague-sounding that we can make up a meaning for it. So, also taking the opportunity to make it more succinct:
The Executive consists of the site staff members, who are divided into the Hexagon Council and general staff. Staff has its own procedures independent of the Curia, which are documented on a wiki page.
The Hexagon Council is a self-appointed body of administrators with final control over all aspects of the site. The Hexagon Council may veto any bill passed by the Curia, and is in charge of general staff. It is the only part of staff responsible for dealing with the Curia.
General staff (staff members outside the Hexagon Council) are given certain rights and duties on TWC beyond normal members. They currently fall into three categories: moderation, content, and technical. Only Citizens may become moderators. General staff have no rights in the Curia beyond other members of the site.
I like this its concise.
While reviewing the section of the constitution dealing with Executive branch members I started wondering if it woudnt be better to frame this part of the constitution that is more a explanation for staff structures, with the proviso that these elements are beyond legislative reach.
So, that would be all of the preamble and Section I, except move the staff medals material out into the general awards area.
Neither is this the dawn from the east, nor is a dragon flying above, nor are the gables of this hall aflame. Nay, mortal enemies approach in ready armour. Ravens are calling, wolves are howling, spear clashes and shield answers
Well, if I, Belisarius, the Black Prince, and you all agree on something, I really don't think there can be any further discussion.
- Simetrical 2009 in reply to Ferrets54
"For what it’s worth: it’s never too late to be whoever you want to be. I hope you live a life you’re proud of, and if you find that you’re not, I hope you have the strength to start all over again."
Re: {ABANDONED}Amendment - Section I - Article II Modifications
Well no matter what I do it'll still be wrong so I'll put your bill up shortly Sim since your argument is rational.
Devoirs The Empress
Okay, this has been moved to it's own thread. Please add what is to be removed from the TWCC for the sake of continuity and tradition and name your three supporters.
Last edited by Empress Meg; June 26, 2010 at 03:26 PM.
Re: {ABANDONED}Amendment - Removal of Section I - Article II
I also support Simetrical's version. What I suggest you do, Nicholas, is replace the OP with Sim's version adding him in along with you as the proposers and then whoever has expressed their support
"For what it’s worth: it’s never too late to be whoever you want to be. I hope you live a life you’re proud of, and if you find that you’re not, I hope you have the strength to start all over again."
Re: {ABANDONED}Amendment - Section I - Article II Modifications
I don't see anything there that says you can't have two proposals in the same thread. Nicholas is the sole proposer of his bill, and I'm the sole proposer of mine. Everything seems legit. You could split all the posts related to my proposal into a separate thread if you want them separate.
Re: [Amendment] - Section I - Article II Modifications
Originally Posted by Simetrical
Thank you. Søren, Major Darling, and Jom were the first three to support, so I guess they're the supporters. What's the "TWCC"?
Sorry about that. I abbreviate it because Total War Centre Constitution is such a long-winded phrase to have to type out as often as I have to refer to it. Each bill requires its own thread as documented in the TWCC in addition to the three supporters, and the changes to the TWCC (the amendments in other words) need to be documented in the OP I believe. I'm really not sure if I have the granted powers to split threads in order to make two separate proposals, but since it does specify that there must be one proposer per thread ( not proposal) then I guess this, but default gives me that privilege.