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    2nd Iberian Campaign (Part II)
    Chapter XXXIV : Spanish rest...



    An de Grâce 1205 AC.
    Royaume de Castille et Leon.
    Toledo.



    Current world...



    Aide memoire:




    Philippe's trips






    Heroes...



    Hello mates.
    I’m Philippe.

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Philippe Capet, adoptive son of the French King. However, my real name is Muhammad Sahadeddine. I’ve been adopted because of an amazing coincidence. I hope to become soon a hero of Chivalry, and help the poor and the orphans.
    I know, I’ve read a lot of hero stories, but I’m a dreamer…
    I’m 25 years old and I am the Heir of the Kingdom, after the death of my father.
    I’ve killed the Pope myself, and destroyed the entire Papal States.
    I’m back in France at last, after nearly two years away, and I'm from now on no more than a fugitive... I've just crossed the border of the Spanish Kingdom.






    Louis the Merciless.
    KING of the Kingdom.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my elder “brother”, and the King of France.
    He is a very skilled and fearful warrior. He can be qualified as a “butcher”.
    He is my worst enemy since he raped and killed my first love Hélène.
    He is now back in Paris, but meet some difficulties with rebel nobles. His authority is extremely low.







    Michel.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my second “brother”. He is one year and a half more than me.
    We were very good friends during our childhood, but it seems that these happy times are over.
    Michel is the new unofficial leader of the Kingdom, because he had managed to use the lords as a tool to take the command of the Kingdom, against Louis. I’m the heir just because of his will.
    He is working in the shadows and is potentially more dangerous than Louis himself.






    Charles.
    "Nephew"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is the only child and son of the king Louis the Merciless.
    He was supposed to be the rightful heir but because of Michel plans, I’ve stolen him the title. He should be very angry…
    Maybe because of that, he decided to be a rebel in order to steal his father’s crown, and had been thrown by Louis in the Paris dungeon. He has been reconciled and is one more trap in my road.






    Clara.
    "Wife"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my official wife. She is the daughter of the Spanish King and thanks to that marriage, I’m now considered as a real noble and I’m a little more protected against the anger of Louis.
    She is definitely ugly and I absolutely don’t want to sleep with her.
    The problem is that she deeply love me.
    I’ve abandoned her in Zaragoza to meet my fate in Rome. She is said to live in Toledo now.






    Margit.
    "Secret love"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    She is my deep love. Nobody knows that, even my close friends.
    She is beautiful and clever. She is a Hungarian princess.
    The big problem is that she was supposed to be the wife of Olivier, my old best general and friend. There are so many difficult choices in life.







    Norbert.
    "Michel spy"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He is the messenger who just taught me the amazing news of the death of my father, and that I’m the new Heir of the Kingdom.
    He is the personal spy, and maybe assassin of Michel. He was sending me Michel orders.
    He killed my dear friend Charles de Bouillon and try to slay me.
    I hate him…






    Olivier de Beziers.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was one of my loyal generals. He is quite as young as me and a very good warrior.
    Moreover, he seems very clever and he helped me to convince the army that the Pope Alexander was an enemy.
    He was my “compagnon d’armes” but when he learned that I was the secret lover of his betroth Margit, he decided to leave me, just after saving my life.
    I am ashamed having lost his friendship.





    Philippe Auguste the Chivalrous.
    DEAD in battle.
    "Father"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was my adoptive father, but also the French King.
    He loved the Chivalric Code, and enjoyed good tournaments. He was a wise ruler and French people liked him a lot.
    He died in battle, against Flanders, trying to defend Paris.








    Charles de Bouillon.
    ASSASSINATED.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Charles was the governor of Toulouse citadel and then the governor of Zaragoza.
    Charles was my only real “friend”. He liked me and I could trust him.
    He was not a warrior, but he was a clever leader, knowing a lot in the domain of diplomacy, economy and management.
    He had saved me from Louis’s sword.
    He had finally been killed by that bastard Norbert when I was away in Italy...






    It took us four weeks of restless wandering to reach Toledo. We were exhausted and we were out of supplies. My wounds were still painful. The one on my back I received in Italy against the English Pope had been opened during the ambush and my friends were worried about a possible infection. I was in a really bad shape.
    I asked to be received by the King of Spain. I knew that Clara was there.
    My destiny was waiting for me in the Toledo Citadel. It could be a quick and painful fate, or maybe a new start if I was sufficiently lucky.

    When I entered the reception hall, I tried to walk with dignity. I had put my twinkling armor, despite my wounds, in order make me as impressive as I could.
    I saw the king Vermundo the Honorable on the throne. His crown was sparkling. Just beside him was Clara.
    When I saw her, I felt a little disgust in my throat. She was as ugly as before. And she was unfortunately my last hope. I should make the best impression.

    I went toward to meet the King and ask for his protection. He agreed with a crafty smile. He was apparently aware of the opposite powers which were fighting in the heart of the French Kingdom. And he surely saw in me a way to take advantage of the complex situation.
    I ask to meet my wife and to enjoy with her our reunion. To say that was most painful than a billion of wounds but it was the only way.
    I noticed that Clara smiled when I said that. Maybe she was not angry anymore against me. What a luck!!!

    I was swearing. But I was relieved. The Kingdom of Spain was my shield against Louis and France from now on…




    I won’t tell the awful nights I spent with Clara this winter. I managed to do that because Margit stayed with me. I was still her secret lover and we shared wonderful times together. Without her, I couldn’t have beard to stay a single minute in the bed of Clara. I spent the winter learning Spanish and recovering from my wounds. I restarted training and I increased my spies’ network.
    Thanks to that, I learned that Zaragoza, Narbonne and Pamplona were still loyal to Louis, despite the revolution in France. However, the loyal leaders were not many and I knew that the people of these towns reminded me and the good management of my dead friend Charles de Bouillon. It should not be too difficult to reverse the trend in my favor.
    I just needed some time and some troops.
    Could the Spanish provide me some help and it was clear that my success was at my hand range.

    I discussed about that with Vermundo and he seemed to like fueling the discord amongst French family trends because he allowed me to use a little Spanish troop.
    It was clear that the will of the Spanish King was to use me like a puppet to weaken the French strengths, and even to increase his authority to the South of France. I knew that and I would like to use his confidence for my own.
    I would just like him to let me reach my goals. Then, I could find the time to avoid and annihilate his secret plans.

    During this winter, I also noticed that the belly of my “beloved” Clara was growing. What a good new. With a son or daughter from Clara, I could now pretend to be a real figure in the Christendom alliance’s game.
    What a weapon! The kingdom of Spain was powerful and having a child who is linked by his blood with the royal Spanish line could be quite a wonderful shield.
    I secretly hoped that it could be a boy…




    Spring arrived slowly. Vermundo offered me the lead of some axemen, spearmen and also a unit of sergeant swordsmen. They were inexperienced troops but it was enough for me to reach Zaragoza and to claim for my rights over the French cities.



    I was determined to use the confidence of the people of Zaragoza to raise an important army and then to force Louis and Michel to accept my authority and to stop the hunt they had started against me.

    Sometimes, I tried to ask Vermundo what he knew about the French situation but he avoided to answer directly and changed the conversation.
    Clara was like glue stuck beside me. I hoped that I could go back fighting again. I was still spending a lot of time with Margit. We were Spanish fluent now.




    In August, it was the time to leave Toledo and try to reach and rule Zaragoza. I said my last “au revoir” to Clara. She was not angry anymore. She was totally fond of the baby in her belly and was even forgetting that I was her husband. I was quite pleased about that.
    Margit was going with me to Zaragoza. I knew that it was a risk but I preferred to see her beside me, under my protection, than in the Spanish court, in the middle of plots and spies.
    I thought it was better trusting just me.

    We reached the French area in the middle of the month. The heat was oppressive but my men were Spanish ones so they were used with that better than me and Margit.
    I enjoyed being back in the area I ruled some years ago. I recognized the landscape when we approached the town.

    We were 3 days of walking from Zaragoza when my scouts reported me that the French soldiers of the town were heading against us. They had noticed our approach and they seemed to be quite aggressive.
    Their lord was loyal to the king Louis and he would surely like to put my head on the top of a spear. He was named Arnolf de Montaigu. I had never heard about him. Maybe he was another upstart, I thought.
    My scouts described his troops. He was leading quite the same amount of warriors than me.
    The great problem was that Arnolf leaded a great strength of mounted knights. I had just my bodyguards to oppose to him. The rest of his troops were spearmen and crossbowmen, as usual in French armies.


    Time for battle had arrived. I remembered my last great battle in Italy. It was nearly two years ago. Two years without troops. Two years of flight.
    It was time to become again a great leader, famous and respected.


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    Default Re: [DLV AAR] An Eastern Jewel in a Western World!!! Chronicles of a French Miserable.

    Splendid, another battle! And your troops have pretty good arms too (upgrades). This looks like an ok match to beat, shouldn't break a sweat


    It's also good to have Spain in your back - while having Clara off it I'm still hoping you can wage a large campaign on those Anglo-Normen pigs still resting on your continent, tho. I would also like if you could show some piccies from your retinue/titles, weather you are a knight/squire or some followers (drill master, marshal, etc.) and create some history relating to those, and perhaps some piccies from the campaign map too.

    ~Wille
    Thorolf was thus armed. Then Thorolf became so furious that he cast his shield on his back, and, grasping his halberd with both hands, bounded forward dealing cut and thrust on either side. Men sprang away from him both ways, but he slew many. Thus he cleared the way forward to earl Hring's standard, and then nothing could stop him. He slew the man who bore the earl's standard, and cut down the standard-pole. After that he lunged with his halberd at the earl's breast, driving it right through mail and body, so that it came out at the shoulders; and he lifted him up on the halberd over his head, and planted the butt-end in the ground. There on the weapon the earl breathed out his life in sight of all, both friends and foes. [...] 53, Egil's Saga
    I must tell you here of some amusing tricks the Comte d'Eu played on us. I had made a sort of house for myself in which my knights and I used to eat, sitting so as to get the light from the door, which, as it happened, faced the Comte d'Eu's quarters. The count, who was a very ingenious fellow, had rigged up a miniature ballistic machine with which he could throw stones into my tent. He would watch us as we were having our meal, adjust his machine to suit the length of our table, and then let fly at us, breaking our pots and glasses.
    - The pranks played on the knight Jean de Joinville, 1249, 7th crusade.













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    First and foremost, hello again my friend, glad to see you kept your promise"you didnt die on me " You've done well for yourself in the past chapters, will keep watch on your AAR as always. Bonne Chances in your coming battles
    My work in progress AAR, come and have look.

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    Very nicely done, la coupe. I lost the thread reading, with all the blow-by-blow detail, but you've made the story very attractive and entertaining. Great photos and layout.

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    Sivilombudsmannen
    Splendid, another battle! And your troops have pretty good arms too (upgrades). This looks like an ok match to beat, shouldn't break a sweat


    It's also good to have Spain in your back - while having Clara off it I'm still hoping you can wage a large campaign on those Anglo-Normen pigs still resting on your continent, tho. I would also like if you could show some piccies from your retinue/titles, weather you are a knight/squire or some followers (drill master, marshal, etc.) and create some history relating to those, and perhaps some piccies from the campaign map too.

    ~Wille
    Yes, it shouldn't be that dificult. Philippe had seen more dificult against the swine Alexander.
    About the "english pigs" , as a french, it would be a great pleasure to show them who is the real leader (like in rugby six nations... ). The problem is that Philippe has to deal with Louis before anything. And he still think about the Crusader states, his mother land...

    About the retinues, you are right, I will show them as soon as possible (even if I don't think that Philippe has any banneret title (as he is the heir)). You will smile when you will see who are the followers.

    And I will soon make a map review, as it seems the story begin to be dificult to understand....


    Karnage
    I'm very pleased that you came back my friend, and I strongly hope to see the next updates.
    Let's write again like one month ago...


    Aristarchus
    I lost the thread reading, with all the blow-by-blow detail, but you've made the story very attractive and entertaining. Great photos and layout.
    Thanks a lot for following the story my friend.
    I'm pleased about your comment. I will try to help people not to be lost by posting some review maps as soon as possible and I hope it will help.
    However, just throw an eye to the résumé of the "heroes" at the beginning of each chapter. There is a review of the main characters, and I update it with any new chapter.
    Thanks for the pictures comment, I like to edit them a while to make them more real.
    I don't know if it is really well made but I enjoy it.



    Thanks for the comments, I will update tonight.
    Chapter XXXV : Zaragoza, in the steps of my youth

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    2nd Iberian Campaign (Part II)
    Chapter XXXV : Zaragoza, in the steps of my youth




    An de Grâce 1205 AC.
    Royaume de France.
    South of Zaragoza.



    Current world...



    Aide memoire:




    Philippe's trips







    Heroes...



    Hello mates.
    I’m Philippe.

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Philippe Capet, adoptive son of the French King. However, my real name is Muhammad Sahadeddine. I’ve been adopted because of an amazing coincidence. I hope to become soon a hero of Chivalry, and help the poor and the orphans.
    I know, I’ve read a lot of hero stories, but I’m a dreamer…
    I’m 25 years old and I am the Heir of the Kingdom, after the death of my father.
    I’ve killed the Pope myself, and destroyed the entire Papal States.
    I’m back in France after a while in Toledo, under the spanish protection.






    Louis the Merciless.
    KING of the Kingdom.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my elder “brother”, and the King of France.
    He is a very skilled and fearful warrior. He can be qualified as a “butcher”.
    He is my worst enemy since he raped and killed my first love Hélène.
    He is now back in Paris, but meet some difficulties with rebel nobles. His authority is extremely low.







    Michel.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my second “brother”. He is one year and a half more than me.
    We were very good friends during our childhood, but it seems that these happy times are over.
    Michel is the new unofficial leader of the Kingdom, because he had managed to use the lords as a tool to take the command of the Kingdom, against Louis. I’m the heir just because of his will.
    He is working in the shadows and is potentially more dangerous than Louis himself.






    Charles.
    "Nephew"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is the only child and son of the king Louis the Merciless.
    He was supposed to be the rightful heir but because of Michel plans, I’ve stolen him the title. He should be very angry…
    Maybe because of that, he decided to be a rebel in order to steal his father’s crown, and had been thrown by Louis in the Paris dungeon. He has been reconciled and is one more trap in my road.






    Clara.
    "Wife"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my official wife. She is the daughter of the Spanish King and thanks to that marriage, I’m now considered as a real noble and I’m a little more protected against the anger of Louis.
    She is definitely ugly and I absolutely don’t want to sleep with her.
    The problem is that she deeply loves me.
    Despite the nightmares, I made her pregnant and I let her in Toledo.






    Margit.
    "Secret love"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    She is my deep love. Nobody knows that, even my close friends.
    She is beautiful and clever. She is a Hungarian princess.
    The big problem is that she was supposed to be the wife of Olivier, my old best general and friend. There are so many difficult choices in life.







    Norbert.
    "Michel spy"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He is the messenger who just taught me the amazing news of the death of my father, and that I’m the new Heir of the Kingdom.
    He is the personal spy, and maybe assassin of Michel. He was sending me Michel orders.
    He killed my dear friend Charles de Bouillon and try to slay me.
    I hate him…






    Olivier de Beziers.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was one of my loyal generals. He is quite as young as me and a very good warrior.
    Moreover, he seems very clever and he helped me to convince the army that the Pope Alexander was an enemy.
    He was my “compagnon d’armes” but when he learned that I was the secret lover of his betroth Margit, he decided to leave me, just after saving my life.
    I am ashamed having lost his friendship.





    Philippe Auguste the Chivalrous.
    DEAD in battle.
    "Father"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was my adoptive father, but also the French King.
    He loved the Chivalric Code, and enjoyed good tournaments. He was a wise ruler and French people liked him a lot.
    He died in battle, against Flanders, trying to defend Paris.








    Charles de Bouillon.
    ASSASSINATED.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Charles was the governor of Toulouse citadel and then the governor of Zaragoza.
    Charles was my only real “friend”. He liked me and I could trust him.
    He was not a warrior, but he was a clever leader, knowing a lot in the domain of diplomacy, economy and management.
    He had saved me from Louis’s sword.
    He had finally been killed by that bastard Norbert when I was away in Italy...







    I decided to attack the following morning. All the night, I studied what could be the best strategy to minimize our losses. It was hard to find a good one because my army was compound of only foot soldiers. I finally decided that the best should be to launch a front attack, and try to break their lines like an unbreakable wave.


    The first ray of the sun appeared behind the hills. The day would be warm. It was better not to wait and take advantage of the morning coolness. I slipped on my armor and sat astride my steed.
    My soldiers were ready for the fight. I explained that the enemies were not tough soldiers. They were French traitors and it shouldn’t be difficult to rout them.


    Arnolf had taken advantage of the landscape and had positioned his troops on the top of a hill. I couldn’t use the same strategy that I did with André de Montfort near Zaragoza against the Moorish, because I had no cavalry this time.



    The battle should be more difficult…
    However, I didn’t hesitate and ordered my troops to run and submerge the bastards’ foes. Their crossbowmen started to fire. I saw my first soldiers lying on the Iberian ground. Despite his strategic position, Arnolf de Montaigu seemed a little disconcerted by our quick charge. He decided to use the charge of his chivalric knights to scatter and hammer my troops.

    I ordered my axemen to face them. The charge was dramatic. I lost a lot of skilled soldiers but the remaining axemen fought with their heart to avenge their friends and Arnolf was soon surrounded by my furious soldiers. The cavalry was defenseless against the great battle-axes.
    The butchery had started.



    I decided to use that time to charge the crossbowmen with my loyal bodyguards. Our victims saw us and aimed at us. We received a mortal volley of arrows. One of them suddenly stuck in my back. Just where was my old wound.
    I cried and missed to faint. I shouldn’t. I was now in the middle of furious crossbowmen and falling from my steed meant death.

    My throat was full of blood and I had difficulties to breath but I faced the foes and Durandal cut off heads and arms, making blood drills in the enemies’ melee.



    Some of my bodyguards tried to protect me. The foes started to rear back. My foot soldiers reached the melee and the fury gained in strength. I understood that Arnolf had been slaughtered and I smiled, despite my pain.

    It was a matter of time now.
    The enemies routed and we chased them. The victory was ours.


    The road of Zaragoza was clear now.
    Thanks to my battle skills, I earned the right to enter a new era of glory and conquests. I still remembered some old old enemies that I should punish one day:
    Guy de Lusignan and his Crusader friends…



    The following day, we entered Zaragoza, defenseless. People of the city knew me and had heard about my victory against Arnolf de Montaigu. It appeared that Arnolf was not a good ruler. The people were pleased to see me again.
    This day, celebrations spread all around the city. I and my soldiers were acclaimed as heroes. The council of the city met me and proclaimed me as the new count of Zaragoza. It was just one more medal to wear on my chest but it was the acknowledgement that I was the new leader of the south French area.

    I soon took control of the governor palace, and I nominated some loyal friends as responsible leaders of the town. I also sent a lot of spies to know what happened in the other cities of the south of the Kingdom. What about Pamplona and Narbonne?
    I would be sure to take control of them soon.
    The more the people I could gather, the best shield I could place between me and Louis the Merciless.




    After some days spent in the town, enjoying the life with Margit and my friends, I received an important letter from a Spanish messenger. It was Clara.

    “Philippe, my Love.
    I’m so pleased to write you this letter.
    You are a father now.

    I’ve given birth to a son, to the most wonderful son.
    I named him Philippe, like you and your father. I can see in his face the mix of your beauty and mine. I will take care of him until you can come back in Toledo.

    My father Vermundo had organized some celebrations. I’m already imagining me as your queen, waiting for our son to become the next King of France.

    Philippe, it’s an honor to be your wife. I’m sorry for all the quarrels we had together. It’s past now and I truly want you to come back soon. I want to be blessed by other children my love. Come back in my bed as soon as possible, I miss you so much.

    A bientôt mi amor.


    I was father!!!
    It took me some time to understand and accept the impact of that new. I was now linked by my blood with the royal Spanish family.
    And I was the father of a son. What could be better?

    This idiot wife sent my son the same name than me. It was not so bad finally. It was the third Philippe Capet. Maybe the beginning of a glorious line of heroes.

    The only problem was that Clara would like other children. It was more than my strengths could achieve. The last night I spent with her became a nightmare during weeks. I wouldn’t like to be haunted all my life.
    Anyway, it was such a little black point compared to the amazing new.

    I spent the rest of the week in a state of permanent happiness, nearly forgetting that I should build the foundations of my future glory.


    I soon went back to my concerns.
    My spies reported me that the Kingdom of France was the same that the one I had left when I sailed to Italy. However, as said Norbert, just the major cities remained under the power of Louis the Merciless. The countryside was in open rebellion and it was quite amazing that the King succeeded to keep his authority upon the outlying cities, and most particularly those in the South of France.
    It was clear that I could easily take control of Pamplona, Narbonne and even the citadel of Toulouse.

    As Louis, Michel was still in Paris. It appeared that Michel had been trapped at his own game. He had fueled the rebellion to take the power, but now the rebellion was too strong to be controlled.

    What a destiny joke…



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    Great update, a father at last I wonder how did that happened since you were battling the pope . Interesting development my friend, keep up the good work and take control of Toulouse, good ground base in southern France to keep an eye on Louis
    My work in progress AAR, come and have look.

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    " I can see in his face the mix of your beauty and mine"

    OMG! It must be the most horrible boy EVER!

    Nothing wrong with Philippe...but Clara's...

    Great update, both blood and plot!
    Take a look at my French Revolution AAR: Le Jour de Gloire
    http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?t=490313


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    Hey Karnage,
    Thanks for your comment, and pleased to see you back there...
    Toulouse is a key citadel because it contrlos the south of France, and is like a rival for Paris and the nobles. Philippe keep it in mind, be assured of that.

    Draco
    Poor boy indeed to be the son of such a monster. Hopefully, he will follow the path of his father...
    The funny thing is that they have the same name.
    Philippe, son of Dauphin Philippe, adoptive son of the dead king Philippe Auguste the Chivalrous...Philippe, Philippe, Philippe... Sorry for that extremely confusing AAR...


    Just some general comments:

    * I added a review map in each of my chapters, from the beginning to the Chapter XXXV. I hope it could help to make the story clearer and more easy to understand for people discovering the AAR.
    I will start a new map for the next chapter, because it would be a new birth for Philippe, now that he had reach his first objective (kill Alexander), and is back in France... (Zaragoza )

    * The AAR competition has just started so, if you want to see good AAR there, you can be assured to find at least some very good ones.
    You have to follow the link, register, and then you can vote for the 3 stories you like the most.
    http://www.twcenter.net/forums/showthread.php?t=385789
    Don't hesitate to give it a try.

    * For Sivilombudsmannen, here is the descriptive of Philippe.







    Ok, so the first joke is that Philippe is just 3 years campaining. It is around 2 years more, but that is not a real problem.

    The top joke is that Philippe is a loyalist. Thanks to that, he didn't rebeled and I can still play with him, despite the total revolution. But in reality, he isn't really a big supporter of Louis...

    Cruel and Cunning is the sad consequence of the Rome slaughter.

    Now, the followers... And here is the best. Gerard de Ridefort is amongst them.
    One of the most cruel crusader, friend of Renaud de Chatillon and Guy de Lusignan. He was the grand master of the templar order, and was prisoned by Saladin, but his life was spared, at the opposite to Renaud de Chatillon.
    So... It is exactly the kind of man Philippe hates. When I saw that, I laughed, but couldn't include it in the story, unfortunately...

    Apart from that, let say that the templar knight was André de Montfort (first battle of Philippe, chapter IX), that Bersecker was Olivier, that the tutor was Charles de Bouillon...

    About the traits, you can notice that Philippe is smart, has a legacy of chivalry, is fertile (margit), has an unpleasant and without charm wife (Clara), who is the descendant of Alfonso VI...



    The major problem is that I can't get rid of Gerard de Ridefort. Maybe I could include him if Philippe suceed to reach to the Crusader States, one dark day...



    I hope the story is still understandable, even if there are large part of text, without pictures...
    Thanks again for your general support.

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    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    Draco
    Poor boy indeed to be the son of such a monster. Hopefully, he will follow the path of his father...
    The funny thing is that they have the same name.
    Philippe, son of Dauphin Philippe, adoptive son of the dead king Philippe Auguste the Chivalrous...Philippe, Philippe, Philippe... Sorry for that extremely confusing AAR...
    Well, actually in my family things were kinda like that.

    My grandfather was named Santiago, and so was my uncle, and so my cousin, so when you called Santiago, half the family turned around XD
    Take a look at my French Revolution AAR: Le Jour de Gloire
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    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    Just some general comments:

    * I added a review map in each of my chapters, from the beginning to the Chapter XXXV. I hope it could help to make the story clearer and more easy to understand for people discovering the AAR.
    I will start a new map for the next chapter, because it would be a new birth for Philippe, now that he had reach his first objective (kill Alexander), and is back in France... (Zaragoza )
    Excellent my friend! Much better then what I first had in mind!

    * For Sivilombudsmannen, here is the descriptive of Philippe.







    Ok, so the first joke is that Philippe is just 3 years campaining. It is around 2 years more, but that is not a real problem.

    The top joke is that Philippe is a loyalist. Thanks to that, he didn't rebeled and I can still play with him, despite the total revolution. But in reality, he isn't really a big supporter of Louis...

    Cruel and Cunning is the sad consequence of the Rome slaughter.

    Now, the followers... And here is the best. Gerard de Ridefort is amongst them.
    One of the most cruel crusader, friend of Renaud de Chatillon and Guy de Lusignan. He was the grand master of the templar order, and was prisoned by Saladin, but his life was spared, at the opposite to Renaud de Chatillon.
    So... It is exactly the kind of man Philippe hates. When I saw that, I laughed, but couldn't include it in the story, unfortunately...

    Apart from that, let say that the templar knight was André de Montfort (first battle of Philippe, chapter IX), that Bersecker was Olivier, that the tutor was Charles de Bouillon...

    About the traits, you can notice that Philippe is smart, has a legacy of chivalry, is fertile (margit), has an unpleasant and without charm wife (Clara), who is the descendant of Alfonso VI...



    The major problem is that I can't get rid of Gerard de Ridefort. Maybe I could include him if Philippe suceed to reach to the Crusader States, one dark day...



    I hope the story is still understandable, even if there are large part of text, without pictures...
    Thanks again for your general support.
    He he, alot of contradictions. I turn the problems on it's head and call it history and the dreams of such era. He still remember the crusaders in his dreams, and stick like a bad nightmare. He once felt appreciated by the King, but now - not so much anymore with the nobles in Paris teaming up. He was once known by the nobility as the legendary knight of chivalry, now he understand what cruelty will give in profit and that not every princess is as ideal as the good ol' days. He may also understand later that he was bent on his own lust for glory and fame all along. Who knows...

    One last note: I don't know if you have noticed, but 8 is the maximum number of retinues possible for one character. Just watch out when it's "coronation time"

    Great post, just great. Keep it up!

    ~Wille
    Thorolf was thus armed. Then Thorolf became so furious that he cast his shield on his back, and, grasping his halberd with both hands, bounded forward dealing cut and thrust on either side. Men sprang away from him both ways, but he slew many. Thus he cleared the way forward to earl Hring's standard, and then nothing could stop him. He slew the man who bore the earl's standard, and cut down the standard-pole. After that he lunged with his halberd at the earl's breast, driving it right through mail and body, so that it came out at the shoulders; and he lifted him up on the halberd over his head, and planted the butt-end in the ground. There on the weapon the earl breathed out his life in sight of all, both friends and foes. [...] 53, Egil's Saga
    I must tell you here of some amusing tricks the Comte d'Eu played on us. I had made a sort of house for myself in which my knights and I used to eat, sitting so as to get the light from the door, which, as it happened, faced the Comte d'Eu's quarters. The count, who was a very ingenious fellow, had rigged up a miniature ballistic machine with which he could throw stones into my tent. He would watch us as we were having our meal, adjust his machine to suit the length of our table, and then let fly at us, breaking our pots and glasses.
    - The pranks played on the knight Jean de Joinville, 1249, 7th crusade.













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    Of course Coupe, you completely lost me in your story
    My work in progress AAR, come and have look.

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    I started reading this yesterday and just finished a little while ago. Great story you have going here. Intrigue, secret romance, bloodshed.. it has all the makings of a soap opera.

    But I have to wonder, what happens now if Margit decides that she wants a kid too? That could present an interesting plot twist if a bastard son was to be born to Phillippe and Margit to offset the legitimate one of Phillippe and Clara. It could present some interesting dynastic scenarios for you in the future, though I'm not sure how that would work with the game.
    DLV rules!

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    To begin with, sorry for the delay. I was off in the Pyrénées for the week end. Great mountains...


    Draco / Karnage
    My grandfather was named Santiago, and so was my uncle, and so my cousin, so when you called Santiago, half the family turned around XD
    Ah ah . Very funny indeed. It is the same with my oncle and grandfather, but it is over now, for the new generations. It was a memory of the past...

    However, I know that you are clever guys to have read the story till that chapter, so I'm sure you're not that lost...

    BamaToon
    I'm pleased you liked the story. And thanks for the comment.
    I often wonder how much people enjoy so detailed stories. I understand that it is easier to read a story with more pictures and less description... However, I prefered to have deep plots. It involved I needed to have descriptions of feelings, battles...
    It is cool that people like you still have the courage to start from the beginning.

    About the Margit bastard, I think you deserve a big rep. I thought about that and I have already written some stuff about it. Indeed, such a love relation between Margit and Philippe can't remain sterile, can it?
    So you can expect some news about it ... (as soon as possible...)


    Sivilombudsmannen
    Thanks for your support and your accurate ideas.
    I liked the description of Philippe contradictions you did.

    About the 8 retinues, I know it indeed. I discovered it when one of my King (in a previous game) couldn't be crowned. I didn't understand why and found the answer in that forum.
    About Philippe, I would love to get rid of the privy seal and the lord high marshall (the others can't be removed, unfortunately). The only problem is that Philippe is the only character in the south of France.
    Louis, Michel and Charles are in Paris and Reims, so I can't make the transfer for the moment.

    But soon, it will happen.



    Next chapter, for tonight, will be:
    Chapter XXXVI : Parisian tales…

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    Quote Originally Posted by la coupe est pleine View Post
    To begin with, sorry for the delay. I was off in the Pyrénées for the week end. Great mountains...

    BamaToon
    I'm pleased you liked the story. And thanks for the comment.
    I often wonder how much people enjoy so detailed stories. I understand that it is easier to read a story with more pictures and less description... However, I prefered to have deep plots. It involved I needed to have descriptions of feelings, battles...
    It is cool that people like you still have the courage to start from the beginning.

    About the Margit bastard, I think you deserve a big rep. I thought about that and I have already written some stuff about it. Indeed, such a love relation between Margit and Philippe can't remain sterile, can it?
    So you can expect some news about it ... (as soon as possible...)
    Glad you enjoyed the mountains. I've been away from home for a few days and just got back home a little while ago.

    I think your story is just fine. You have all the right elements, so do not worry about it.

    Glad you liked the idea about the Margit bastard too, and I look forward to reading about that in the story.
    DLV rules!

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    2nd Iberian Campaign (Part III)
    Chapter XXXVI : Parisian tales...



    An de Grâce 1205 AC.
    Royaume de France.
    Zaragoza.



    Current world...



    Aide memoire:




    Philippe's trips








    Heroes...



    Hello mates.
    I’m Philippe.

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Philippe Capet, adoptive son of the French King. However, my real name is Muhammad Sahadeddine. I’ve been adopted because of an amazing coincidence. I hope to become soon a hero of Chivalry, and help the poor and the orphans.
    I know, I’ve read a lot of hero stories, but I’m a dreamer…
    I’m 25 years old and I am the Heir of the Kingdom, after the death of my father.
    I’ve killed the Pope myself, and destroyed the entire Papal States.
    I’m back in France after a while in Toledo, under the spanish protection, and I suceeded to be the new leader of Zaragoza, despite my state of outlaw...






    Louis the Merciless.
    KING of the Kingdom.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my elder “brother”, and the King of France.
    He is a very skilled and fearful warrior. He can be qualified as a “butcher”.
    He is my worst enemy since he raped and killed my first love Hélène.
    He is now back in Paris, but meet some difficulties with rebel nobles. His authority is extremely low.







    Michel.
    "Brother"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is my second “brother”. He is one year and a half more than me.
    We were very good friends during our childhood, but it seems that these happy times are over.
    Michel is the new unofficial leader of the Kingdom, because he had managed to use the lords as a tool to take the command of the Kingdom, against Louis. I’m the heir just because of his will.
    He is working in the shadows and is potentially more dangerous than Louis himself.






    Charles.
    "Nephew"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    It is the only child and son of the king Louis the Merciless.
    He was supposed to be the rightful heir but because of Michel plans, I’ve stolen him the title. He should be very angry…
    Maybe because of that, he decided to be a rebel in order to steal his father’s crown, and had been thrown by Louis in the Paris dungeon. He has been reconciled and is one more trap in my road.






    Clara.
    "Wife"

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    It is my official wife. She is the daughter of the Spanish King and thanks to that marriage, I’m now considered as a real noble and I’m a little more protected against the anger of Louis.
    She is definitely ugly and I absolutely don’t want to sleep with her.
    The problem is that she deeply loves me.
    Despite the nightmares, I made her pregnant and I let her in Toledo.






    Margit.
    "Secret love"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    She is my deep love. Nobody knows that, even my close friends.
    She is beautiful and clever. She is a Hungarian princess.
    The big problem is that she was supposed to be the wife of Olivier, my old best general and friend. There are so many difficult choices in life.







    Norbert.
    "Michel spy"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He is the messenger who just taught me the amazing news of the death of my father, and that I’m the new Heir of the Kingdom.
    He is the personal spy, and maybe assassin of Michel. He was sending me Michel orders.
    He killed my dear friend Charles de Bouillon and try to slay me.
    I hate him…






    Olivier de Beziers.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was one of my loyal generals. He is quite as young as me and a very good warrior.
    Moreover, he seems very clever and he helped me to convince the army that the Pope Alexander was an enemy.
    He was my “compagnon d’armes” but when he learned that I was the secret lover of his betroth Margit, he decided to leave me, just after saving my life.
    I am ashamed having lost his friendship.





    Philippe Auguste the Chivalrous.
    DEAD in battle.
    "Father"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    He was my adoptive father, but also the French King.
    He loved the Chivalric Code, and enjoyed good tournaments. He was a wise ruler and French people liked him a lot.
    He died in battle, against Flanders, trying to defend Paris.








    Charles de Bouillon.
    ASSASSINATED.
    "Friend"

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Charles was the governor of Toulouse citadel and then the governor of Zaragoza.
    Charles was my only real “friend”. He liked me and I could trust him.
    He was not a warrior, but he was a clever leader, knowing a lot in the domain of diplomacy, economy and management.
    He had saved me from Louis’s sword.
    He had finally been killed by that bastard Norbert when I was away in Italy...






    Michel was obliged to stay in Paris, like Louis and Charles.
    However, I shouldn’t underestimate him and Louis the Merciless. My spies reported me that Michel had 2 sons and 2 daughters. It was a lot and could be dangerous for my future, if that offspring was as perfidious as their father.

    On the other hand, the son of Louis, the disinherited Charles, who had been reconciled, was a growing threat. He was aged of 20 and spent 2 years in a dungeon. He was totally uneducated and seemed to feed on some feeling of revenge, especially against me that he could consider as the bastard who stole his heir title.



    Parisian people were already naming him Charles the Brute.




    The most important news my spies told me were that Paris had been again the target of the swine Flanders. They were trying to take advantage of the excommunication. They were raising huge armies of experienced soldiers. The fame of their pikemen was well known.


    One of my best spies had succeeded to learn the whole story, during a night in some disreputable Paris’s inns.
    The Dutch troops besieged Paris in the beginning of the last spring. I was still in Toledo these times. It was quite a professional army. The tough pikemen were mixed with spearmen, beefeaters, and some heavy infantry. It was clearly an army to take the city walls. Their leader was Clement van Hainaut. He was the husband of the Flanders’s king’s daughter.


    It was clear that the Dutch would like to break the heart of the Kingdom. The king Louis, Michel and Charles the Brute were trapped in Paris.
    They decided to gather their strengths and to attack, instead of waiting behind the walls. It was a wit strategy. Indeed, the French loyal nobles could then use the strength of their cavalry to break the infantry lines. The rest of the French army was built up with spear militia and crossbow militia. These soldiers had been raised during the siege and were not experimented nor well equipped. They were definitely the future victims to be brought to the butchery.


    Louis planned the battle. He decided to attack during the evening, just at the time of the dinner, to surprise the Dutch.
    The fate of the Kingdom was in hand of soldiers, once again…


    Thanks to the surprise effect, Clement van Hainaut decided to move back his troops out of range of the French crossbowmen and took some time to rearrange his army.
    Louis didn’t lose this crucial time. He placed his crossbowmen in a little hill, hidden behind some bushes, waiting for the enemy.

    After half an hour of waiting, Clement decided to launch his elite pikemen against the defenseless spear militia.


    They advanced toward the bulk of the French troops when they were surprised by volleys of arrows from the left of Louis’s troops. The crossbowmen had started their killing work, and they were pretty efficient.



    Despite their dazzling and heavy armors, the Dutchmen took heavy losses, trying to reach the French troops.
    Arrows were blind and killed young recruits as veterans.



    They finally reached the main French line and the massacre started. The pikemen were slaughtering the poor French militia.
    Louis decided to launch the signal for the knight’s nobles to go round when every Flanders’s unit was in close fight.



    It didn’t take a lot of time before the frightening charge. The French lines were starting to rout but were still standing the position when Louis, Michel and Charles the Brute charged together in the back of the Dutch’s soldiers.



    It was a massacre. The Flanders’s general tried to oppose his own bodyguards to the French cavalry but it was quits a suicide. Some French baron didn’t waste long time before decapitating Clement.

    However, the pikemen stood proudly in the middle of the battle, decimating more French militia, and waiting for the cavalry charge. They were strong warriors, not used to rout.



    The French nobles were still blood thirsty and they charged again and again, with bravery and for honor. But this time, lots of French knights found their death against the experienced pikes.
    Despite that desperate burst, the pikemen were soon surrounded and finally surrender. They shouldn’t because Louis rushed and ordered to slay all these bastards.

    Louis was not the last of the murderers and paid his tribute to that work.


    Once again, the Kingdom was saved. But for how long?
    How long could Paris resist against the hordes of Dutchmen, who could rely on a thriving economy and on strong allies, like England and the Holy Empire?

    I would have loved to see the death of Louis the Merciless, or even the one of Michel, but I didn’t want at all to see the Kingdom collapse. I needed this Kingdom for my future plans.
    I decided to let some spies in Paris, in order to make me aware of the most little new that could happen there.

    What a strange feeling to be the spectator of your Kingdom fate, when two years before, you were imposing to the Pope himself your own law and rules…

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    Wow! For a second I thought that Louis Sans Merci was about to die.

    I would be so funny to see Philippe a king!


    by the way..Where's Olivier? I liked him a lot.
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    Holy cow dude awsome!
    Quote Originally Posted by Draco092 View Post
    Wow! For a second I thought that Louis Sans Merci was about to die.
    And I thought exactly this too.

    I also noticed our rival Charles have become known as the Brute. God damn, you really know how to untilize the tools of DLV in your trade, my friend. I'm looking forward to all kinds of events (investing, loaning, inflation, mercinary building, seeing Phillip retier into governorship at the age of 60, scrapping up for a War Draft, gambling, unique Ecclesiastical buildings and priests with levels, random natural- & man-made events). I know, but I get this warm fuzzy feeling everytime I see something DLV'ish

    ~Wille
    Thorolf was thus armed. Then Thorolf became so furious that he cast his shield on his back, and, grasping his halberd with both hands, bounded forward dealing cut and thrust on either side. Men sprang away from him both ways, but he slew many. Thus he cleared the way forward to earl Hring's standard, and then nothing could stop him. He slew the man who bore the earl's standard, and cut down the standard-pole. After that he lunged with his halberd at the earl's breast, driving it right through mail and body, so that it came out at the shoulders; and he lifted him up on the halberd over his head, and planted the butt-end in the ground. There on the weapon the earl breathed out his life in sight of all, both friends and foes. [...] 53, Egil's Saga
    I must tell you here of some amusing tricks the Comte d'Eu played on us. I had made a sort of house for myself in which my knights and I used to eat, sitting so as to get the light from the door, which, as it happened, faced the Comte d'Eu's quarters. The count, who was a very ingenious fellow, had rigged up a miniature ballistic machine with which he could throw stones into my tent. He would watch us as we were having our meal, adjust his machine to suit the length of our table, and then let fly at us, breaking our pots and glasses.
    - The pranks played on the knight Jean de Joinville, 1249, 7th crusade.













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    Great update my friend, France is now facing the judgement you casted for it. It is a great way to get your personal enemy taken care of but at what cost. I cant wait to see how this unfold. Best of luck my friend.
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    Brutes are a lot of fun to roleplay whenever I get a chance to, though I'm not sure what it says about me that I enjoy slaughtering entire towns with my brute generals.
    DLV rules!

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