A tune that I came up with.

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  1. rsslcs's Avatar

    rsslcs said: February 22, 2010 07:28 PM

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    I want real criticism here. (no, not 'it's crap lol) But constructive criticism. Still a WIP, might update if anyone likes it.



    known errors: Sync error at the beginning, a lack of a singer, I'm working on that. Drums might follow if I get the damn mics to work properly. A bit of an experiment so I thought I'd post it here. Still learning guitar as you might hear...

    EDIT: It's a bit quiet too. ALso made entirely with Audacity, 2 guitars and a 15w amp.
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    Arn said: February 23, 2010 02:30 AM

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    Too bad the recording quality isn't better, because that's a pretty nice tune you've there
    If you want to you could send me the samples and I'll add some drums the digital way if your mics refuse to work. I think that it would sound really, really nice with those added.
    I made a lot of music for RS II, and that is very awesome because RS II is a very awesome mod!
     

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    rsslcs said: February 23, 2010 07:45 AM

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    Wow, thanks Arn! Well, I'll give it one more try. I'll send you the .aup anyway if you want.

    Here's the file. edit: I have a newer version, will upload tomorrow.
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    Mr. Pink said: February 23, 2010 08:09 AM

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    That's very drummable. Get drums added in and you would have a pretty good wee tune.

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    Che said: February 23, 2010 08:30 AM

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    Dude, you got talent, it's really great stuff. But take it off from youtube, people will steal it.
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  6. iudas said: February 23, 2010 08:30 AM

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    Kind of boring and not catchy. Though that could be solved with good vocals and lyrics. A chorus or bridge or something would help. Good luck
     

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    rsslcs said: February 23, 2010 09:49 AM

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    lol I know. It's not done yet so it's normal if it sounds a bit slow, there's lots of stuff to add. On Filefront, link on previous reply.