The second official TWC Dramatic Reading is finished!

[webMaster412160]

I have been waiting for this moment a long time and I hope my time spent in it was worth it.
If I may now direct your attention to this thread where you can download the audio video of the WWI story.

WWI story, a battle between two powerful alliances. Border tensions in France, a battle of sacrifice, honour and pride. A proud production of master412160

And if youl liked it or you didn't like it please tell me. You can support this by putting this pic in your sig for a week or so. Thanks to that many people will know its there so they can also see it and won't miss it.

Cheers for listening also read the warning for your ears.

[Mr Tuna]

You obviously put a lot of time in it.

[webMaster412160]

I have. Now enjoy it mate.

[Taxandrius]

note:

an old truck is a bit strange in 1915

tanks were first used on the battlefield in 1916
tank platoons are something of the Second World War

You forgot the most important part of WW I
It was boring, terrifying and harsh

[webMaster412160]

It was not my intention to be very historical accurate just to make it nice to hear.

[Taxandrius]

what was the point of giving it an historical context then ?
a specific context could have been a bit more accurate and have more tension about it
or you could have written a story à la "Die Leiden der Junge Werthers"

[Ascarona]

what was the point of giving it an historical context then ?
a specific context could have been a bit more accurate and have more tension about it
or you could have written a story à la "Die Leiden der Junge Werthers"

Oh my god, will you just lay off the man! He put a crap load of time into everything and you always nag him to death, its getting really annoying dude.

[Taxandrius]

the last part was supposed to help him

[EireEmerald]

what was the point of giving it an historical context then ?
a specific context could have been a bit more accurate and have more tension about it
or you could have written a story à la "Die Leiden der Junge Werthers"

Oh for christs sake give him a bloody break. Master, nice work. it was nice to read.

[Visna]

I know this is an off topic forum, but even off topic forums have limits. Do try to keep your eyes on the ball, gents. Thanks in advance.

<3
Visna

[Ratbag]

Maybe if everything where he "put a crap load of time" in would be no crap we would have a chance to say, Nice.
Until that time... Planes dropping paratroopers.. in WWI? C4 ... in WWI? Maybe you should pick up a book about WWI and try and read it.

Planes weren't able to hold the paratroopers, they were new inventions in full developing stage.(By the Wright Brothers in 1903). The first time paratroopers appeared in warfare was WWII.
And C4 didn't exist either. The first appearance of any kind of plastic explosive was in 1875 but C4 wasn't used until the 1960's.

Oh and by the way..

I am going to leave TWC once and for all! I mean that.

...

[Taxandrius]

the reading was okay, but pay a bit more attention to your intonation. The colour of your voice is good for these stories

[webMaster412160]

Maybe if everything where he "put a crap load of time" in would be no crap we would have a chance to say, Nice.
Until that time... Planes dropping paratroopers.. in WWI? C4 ... in WWI? Maybe you should pick up a book about WWI and try and read it.

Planes weren't able to hold the paratroopers, they were new inventions in full developing stage.(By the Wright Brothers in 1903). The first time paratroopers appeared in warfare was WWII.
And C4 didn't exist either. The first appearance of any kind of plastic explosive was in 1875 but C4 wasn't used until the 1960's.

It was never my intention to make it historical accurate, and if you are saying its crap thats just your opinion. Saying all the things I did are crap comes pretty fast out of your mouth maybe because you don't like me ? Indeed.

I am going to leave TWC once and for all! I mean that

I left, I only came back to share my trip to the caves of Hotton, write a story about the life of Clark, my cats who brought me a rat just to LOL hard and the WWI audio video. More I haven't done, I can stay away from TWC as long as I want, I just came back to share those things.

I have Pwned you on shamb, don't make me Pwn you here with your friends looking.


@ TAX

I am planning indeed to make a sequel, the next story that I am going to write will take place 2 months latter then this story. Also before I can begin I first need to learn more about WWI with high detail in order to make a good and interesting story.



I know some of you are dispepointed at the WWI story but I call it success because its my first time and I am a newbie to the program.

[Taxandrius]

1. if you came back to do everything you did the last few weeks, you just came back...basta
2. shamb is shamb, twc is twc, didn't you learn that since your latest infraction and non-case ?
3. the shamb pwn wasn't a pwnage....you pwn people when you make them feel ashameb about something...a death rat hasn't a thing to do with ratty (I know about it, strange huh ?)


advice: put some more attention to your intonation and invite some friends for other voices

[Ratbag]

I left, I only came back to share my trip to the caves of Hotton, write a story about the life of Clark, my cats who brought me a rat just to LOL hard and the WWI audio video. More I haven't done, I can stay away from TWC as long as I want, I just came back to share those things.

I have Pwned you on shamb, don't make me Pwn you here with your friends looking.

You understand the words "once and for all"? Actually why am I asking. It is clear that you don't otherwise you wouldn't have said one thing and done an other.

Also, you have big balls on Shamb because I can't see what you post there. Want to be a man and do it here on TWC were I can respond to it? Try and "Pwn" me..

[Mr Tuna]

I have Pwned you on shamb, don't make me Pwn you here with your friends looking.

1. Can you have friends on an internet forum ?
2. Do you think he cares if he's 'pwnd' on an internet forum (out of all things) ?
3. Do you really care about his opinion ?
4. Do you think he really cares about all of this ?

[MemnonOfRhodes]

Here it goes again

[Lysimachus]

master, you still haven't answered me on your profile about why you make a gazillion alts on TWC. What do you actually try to achieve by doing so? Do the names Delas and King A(l?)fonso ring any bells?

[EireEmerald]

master, you still haven't answered me on your profile about why you make a gazillion alts on TWC. What do you actually try to achieve by doing so? Do the names Delas and King A(l?)fonso ring any bells?

haha, how did you figure that out?

[Mr Tuna]

haha, how did you figure that out?

The spelling makes it kinda obvious.