Do you want to give a poem to your girlfriend,family,friends ? Ask here! For occasions and birthdays to!

[webMaster412160]

hello members of TWC, I have asked LoZz if I could make a thread in PH&A. He told me I first need to give him some results of how it goes. So I am going to put it here. I enjoy making poems and want to learn and be better.

The purpose of this thread.

Making poems for the people of TWC so they can give it to friends,family,girlfriend/boyfriend,birthdays of people,occasions,etc
All I want to do is making better poems and make people happy, it maybe can help people relations or so. You can of course just keep it for yourself. If it makes you happy or something else in a positive way.


1)You need to give me some info about the person, like:

A)Describe the person in question:

Example: Brown eye's, long person,brown hair,etc... (This is how they look.)

B)What kind of character does she/he is:

Example: He/she likes jokes,is funny, likes cooking,talks about her/his life,etc... (This is how they feel,behave to wards you.)


C)First name ?

Example: David,Charles,Sarah,Alice,etc...

D)Anything else you want to tell about the person that I could include in the poem:

2)Poem Theme's:

-death
-love
-history
-doubt
-dreams
-change
-life
-journey
-youth
-...

Don't know yet how I am going to do it with the theme's. You don't have to put one in your post it could be without. But if you do select a theme I will put a little bit of it or mostly in the poem.


Regards the poem team Nikos & Master.

If you have time, can make poems, and you would like to help out people, pm me!

[Ratbag]

So your going to make poems that people should give to their girlfriend? Oh God.. The marriage rate is going to be at an all-time low.

[cupoftea]

Omgosh... This has to be the best proof ever that there's an evil masochistic god...

Edit: but here's something, make me a poem in dutch (yes i'll make it easy for you) about a beautifull youngh girl called Sara, she has brown eyes, blond hair.

[Lance-Corporal Jones]

Omgosh... This has to be the best proof ever that there's an evil masochistic god...

Edit: but here's something, make me a poem in dutch (yes i'll make it easy for you) about a beautifull youngh girl called Sara, she has brown eyes, blond hair.

OK, here's one for you in Swedish, written by everybody's favourite chef. Gentlemen, I give you... TO SARA!

Oh Sera, yuoo ere-a su beooteeffool,
Yuoor broon iyes feell me-a veet glee-a.
Yuoor blunde-a heur is su vunderffool,
Ooh Sera, merry me-a!

I cere-nut iff thees puems soocks
Es I du thees fur yuoo
Und Sera, veet a leetle-a loock,
Mester veel du su tuu!

Su feer nut, Sera, ungel sveet,
Iff I irreetete-a yuoo,
Thes puem's bed es smelly feet,
Boot eel my oozeers tuu!

[Pallantides]

write a poem about Theoo!

[Antwerpen]

OK, here's one for you in Swedish, written by everybody's favourite chef. Gentlemen, I give you... TO SARA!

Oh Sera, yuoo ere-a su beooteeffool,
Yuoor broon iyes feell me-a veet glee-a.
Yuoor blunde-a heur is su vunderffool,
Ooh Sera, merry me-a!

I cere-nut iff thees puems soocks
Es I du thees fur yuoo
Und Sera, veet a leetle-a loock,
Mester veel du su tuu!

Su feer nut, Sera, ungel sveet,
Iff I irreetete-a yuoo,
Thes puem's bed es smelly feet,
Boot eel my oozeers tuu!

Hahaha, I'd give you some rep, but, sadly, I'm infracted.

Also, this is not Swedish. I'll fix it and translate the poem into Swedish for you.


øh Sera, yuøø ere-a su beøøteefføøl,
Yuøør brøøn iyes feell me-a veet glee-a.
Yuøør blunde-a heur is su vunderfføøl,
øøh Sera, merry me-a!

I cere-nut iff thees puems søøcks
Es I du thees fur yuøø
Und Sera, veet a leetle-a løøck,
Mester veel du su tuu!

Su feer nut, Sera, ungel sveet,
Iff I irreetete-a yuøø,
Thes puem's bed es smelly feet,
Bøøt eel my øøzeers tuu!

Here you go, lad.

write a poem about Theoo!

I'm not that good at poems, so my rhymes suck, but I hope Her Highness will forgive me for such insolence.

Oh Theoo, thou shine like the moon in the night,
Oh Theoo, thou are even prettier and purer than sunlight,
Oh Theoo, your eyes inspire me and Pally to live,
Oh Theoo, and this is the prayer we give.

That's only the beginning of the epic "Ode to Theoo"

[webMaster412160]

Please only post here if you want a poem. Thanks.

[Ratbag]

Ok, I want a poem for a green-eyed girl called Sophie.

[webMaster412160]

Can you give a little bit more info ?

[Ratbag]

A girl called Sophie, green eyes, brown hair. Loves to go clubbing and going to the movies, always cheery and romantic.

[Lance-Corporal Jones]

I'd like a poem for a girl named Chani. Blue-on-blue eyes, good with a knife, looks hot in a stillsuit.

[EireEmerald]

i'd like a poem written about how silly this topic is.

[Ascarona]

Nah leave him alone guys, its a great idea, I just don't have any requests right now thou...

[webMaster412160]

Sophie a lovely girl, with the eye's of fresh long grass.
The dew passes by, again the blue sky.
It remembers me of her, green eye's when I look.
She looks back, smiling like always to me.
When I look at you I see light green grass and sky going together.
We always go to the movies on Sunday night, when the sky is clear.
And her eye's are so bright. If I hear here voice, and look at her.
The brown long hair swings to left and right, when her mouth moves up and down.
She is like a girl I never have seen before, she has something special that makes me feel.
The kind of thing, that I won't share with anyone I know.
But still speak with friends about a girl I once knew.



Who is next ? Please stay serious.

[Justinian]

Stop heckling master. If you don't have anything positive to say, don't say anything.

Comments on moderation should go in the appropriate threads in the Q&S and questions should go to me via PM, if you're not satisfied with those go to a senior moderator.

[Theoo]

hi master412160 a imprasive thred!!! i cant make you not my faverite poster anymore you are just fantastic threads. here a poem i want you to write it is for homework tat im suposed to do for english clas want you to write poem about a goblin dragon he has green eys an he is with no haire becauise he had accident with the lava wen he was flying and he has wings becauise he is a goblin dragon. what kind character wel he is verry sad an depresed becauise he is ugly an he liks to write sitcoms but theyre very bad because he is not a very good writer i want it to be about journey throug hard times i hope you can write my poem

[molls]

hi master412160 a imprasive thred!!! i cant make you not my faverite poster anymore you are just fantastic threads. here a poem i want you to write it is for homework tat im suposed to do for english clas want you to write poem about a goblin dragon he has green eys an he is with no haire becauise he had accident with the lava wen he was flying and he has wings becauise he is a goblin dragon. what kind character wel he is verry sad an depresed becauise he is ugly an he liks to write sitcoms but theyre very bad because he is not a very good writer i want it to be about journey throug hard times i hope you can write my poem

Hail Theoo.

master you might want to get the help of Nikos for that one, it seems like a major challenge..

[Antwerpen]

Another poem thread? That's not a rant or an insult, just to make sure: what's the point of recreating the thread that was closed by your own request a few days ago?

[Lysimachus]

You know, cut him some slack seriously. Yes he's had his (un)fair share of fail on this forum but you should at least give him a chance.

[cupoftea]

You know, cut him some slack seriously. Yes he's had his (un)fair share of fail on this forum but you should at least give him a chance.

I did, he may make a poem for me.