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    Well seeing as i dont know where im supposed to post these and seeing one already an aar i saw in this area (i think) i will post my start here.
    Here goes it probably wont be that good but i enjoy writing it so meh



    Prologue
    Flavius Julius left the town of Capua in the middle of a storm. He glanced back over his shoulder to see his men huddling through the gates, shields held above their heads to protect themselves from the lashing rain. It would be a long march south.

    “Is the army ready Hadrian?” queried Quintus as he read through the message just bought to him.
    “I believe so sir”
    “Mobilise the army Hadrian.”
    “Sir?” came the startled response. It was 3 weeks since the army had made camp and Hadrian did not see any reason to leave now.
    “Hadrian this letter, do you see it? Good it is the order to move south from non other than my father Flavius Julius.”
    The drillmaster’s surprise grew at the news of moving south.
    South towards the Carthaginian army.

    Hannibal’s Carthaginian army is terrorising the southern tip of Italy from his base in Taras. This action in the south is spurring the Gauls to greater activity in the north. Huge numbers of barbarians gather near the city of Genua our armies are overstretched. We pray to Mars for the strength to defeat our enemies. Roma Permanio.
    –from the diaries of Quintus Julius 215BC

    Chapter 1 First Blood
    Quintus Julius marches south under orders from is father to join forces with him in the mountains east of Paestum as soon as the forces can be mustered. The dusty roads ring loud with the heavy tread of Romes armies and summer reaches its peak.
    Not long after the end of the summer solstice the outriders of Quintus’s armies catch site of an army on the move north from the coast of Italy.

    “Valerian!” called the general.
    “Here sir” came the lilting reply. Valerian was the youngest man on Quintus’ staff, little over 15 years old but looking as small as a child much younger. He did however have a sharp mind and good eyes.
    “Valerian, who comes over the horizon?” a pause then,
    “Men of Carthage”
    “How many” asked the general whilst glancing over the ground, clearly judging where he wanted to fight the battle that was sure to come.
    “No more than we can handle General”
    The general muttered, almost inaudibly
    “I hope for all our sakes that you are correct.”

    The ground was against us, gently sloping up from our positions towards with Carthaginians at the top of the hill. The Carthaginians were slowly spilling out of their camp sun glinting off of swords and spear heads.
    All of the Romans in our camp at once stopped and looked towards the Carthaginian camp. Even at this distance the trumpeting of the Carthaginian elephants was terrifying the men. Hadrian, being the armies drillmaster was first to snap back into action with a kick at the nearest soldier and a shout at the rest to get into formation.

    Hadrian rode up to Quintus’ bodyguard and slid easily into the second line. Quintus was cursing as Hadrian arrived.
    “What’s wrong sir?”
    “A message from Flavius just arrived, he has caught site of a second Carthaginian army threatening our flank and is moving to engage it.
    “Are the men ready Hadrian”
    “As ready as men who haven’t fought a battle in months sir”
    “That will have to do, tell them men to throw all their pila, and hope the ground before them fills with Carthaginian dead.”
    “Yes sir” Hadrian began to move away when Quintus spoke again
    “Oh and leave out the elephants tell only the velites to throw as many javelins as they can into the beasts.”

    In the minutes before the battle Quintus gave a speech, he’s good at them, rouses the troops every time. The end of it, ‘Roma Permanio!’ was met by a chorus of replies ‘Roma Permanio!’ ‘Roma Permanio!’ ‘Roma Permanio!’


    -Quintus delivers his speach


    The elephants were a terror. Our velites tried their best but lack of practice against moving targets, or perhaps fear caused at least half of the beasts to reach out line where they wreaked absolute havoc. Our left flank was hit hardest, and was held only by a grim Triarii regiment and a band of slingers. There had been hastate there but the elephants crashed into the densely packed troops and caused over half the unit to become casualties in the first strike. Seconds later the unit broke after many more casualties. Quintus issued another brilliant motivational speech to urge those hastate back into the fight, albeit reluctantly and as far from the elephants as possible.



    -The left flank



    The velites finally killed the remaining elephants, stabilising the left flank almost in sync with the routing of the Carthaginian right flank. The rest soon followed with the death of the Carthaginian general. And some well placed charges from the impetuous Equites.

    With the Carthaginians driven off the field roman bodies were collected and cremated.
    The general rode to where Hadrian was organising the proceedings
    “How many?”
    “Excuse me sir?” replied the drill master perplexed
    “How many dead?”
    “We count just over 1500 sir and 3500 Carthaginians”
    “Then this victory has been costly indeed”
    “Any word from Flavius, General?”
    “No Hadrian, we must pray that he is victorious too or all might be lost”
    Hadrian began to reply but Quintus had already ridden off. Hadrian shouted orders at the velites who were trying to take the horns from the elephants to sell them on. Hadrian set them to work building more funeral pyres for the higher ranking dead. The ferry man would be busy that night.

    We were victorious against a Carthaginian horde larger than our own army today but the price was high for our roman men. We pray to the gods that Flavius has better luck than us and victory comes to him expediently so that together we can march on towards Taras. Roma Permanio – Quintus Julius

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    A nice read.

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    Chapter 2 Retribution
    Flavius Julius confronts the army of Theopanes in the dusty plains of southern Italy and Quintus Marches to his aid. The army is much decreased in size and nobody in nearby towns can be found to replace the losses, the Carthaginians sold the fit and healthy men into slavery.

    2 days after the victory over Hannibal
    “Sir, a soldier to see you” came the cry from the head of the column.
    “He says he has news of your father”
    “I will speak with him”
    A tall centurion in battered armour on a clearly exhausted horse rode down the line towards the General.
    “Ave General I am Amadeus of Flavius’ entourage, I have ridden hard to get here so fast.”
    “Quickly then tell me the news” replied Quintus dispensing of the pleasantries.
    “Indeed sir, the Carthaginians fell upon us in great strength upon the flat plains to your east destroying all of our Equites with their horse. Our infantry quickly found themselves surrounded and fled, and I must confess I fled with them. We recon we took about 2500 casualties to 3000 Carthaginian dead and your father, well your father was amongst them.”
    “Dismissed” responded the General quietly.
    “Ready the men Hadrian, for we march to victory or death”
    “You would sacrifice your men for revenge?” inquired Hadrian
    “Yes” and with that Quintus withdrew to his tent.


    The army made ready and was in marching formation but the general was yet to leave his tent. Vicious arguing between Hadrian and Quintus could be heard emanating from within the cream canvas.
    Hadrian attempted to dissuade Quintus from marching towards Theopanes Carthaginian host complaining the army was too weak to take on another army so soon and the defeat of falvius has disheartened the men whilst Quintus put his faith on Roman courage being the key to victory. Soon after a disgruntled Hadrian left the tent and snapped orders at some troops to pack up the Generals tent as the General mounted his horse and rode towards the infantry column.

    Minutes later the whole army was marching along the dusty track towards the position of the Carthaginian troops to their east.
    The armies saw each other at dusk and Quintus decided it would be best to attack before nightfall and the battle lines were drawn between the two battered armies.
    Only 1600 Carthaginians were present to fight the 2200 Romans but the elephants caused terrible fear in the soldiers after the slaughter of the left flank only days before.
    The battle was fierce lasting a good amount of time. This battle however the elephants were killed extremely quickly however Carthaginian cavalry dominance proved too much crushing the entirety of the right flank wiping out the Equites and the slingers stationed there and doing terrible damage to the Principes there.
    The left flank fared far better losing only half of its cavalry strength before destroying the Poeni infantry and rolling up the flank.
    The battle continued to go well and after the battle casualties showed 1100 Carthaginian dead to 800 Romans.

    Battles were beginning to tell on the legion and reinforcements were not likely anytime soon so Quintus made the decision the hire 480 Sarmation mercenaries for the assault on Taras.

    Messengers were arriving by the dozen now, delivering reports of the roman loss of Sicilian territory and its northernmost territories to the Greeks and the Gauls respectively.

    Rumour has it that in the assault for Romes last Sicilian city Messana the Greek general Dionysius of Sparta was killed by a Roman slinger however the garrison was overwhelmed soon after and exterminated.

    After the destruction of the Carthaginian armies the men are elated. They feel invincible. However unknown to them our borders are shrinking, barbarians invade our lands from the north and Greeks crush our Sicilian defences. We must take Taras quickly and return to the north recruiting more men on the way. Roma Permanio – Quintus Julius.

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    Very nice AAR, xccam. Your fluent writing makes it easy to read
    + Rep

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    short update

    Chapter 3 The Siege
    Quintus besieges Taras and learns of his Families fortunes in Gaul.

    The camp outside the walls of Taras is filled with shrieks and cries but not from the injured men of the army. It is in fact quite the opposite of a man leaving the world, but of a boy entering it. Alypia is in the midst of labour.

    “A message from Lucius Julius for you sir.” Said a gruff messenger handing over a stained letter.

    ‘Ave Quintus, I have crushed 2 Gallic armies to the north and the west of Genua however I do not have the strength to retake the town as of the moment.
    I await reinforcements from you or your son, Amulius, to press home our new advantage.
    I have heard the news of father’s death and assume that you will support my claim to the head of our family. I wish you luck in the siege of Taras. Roma Permanio.’

    After reading the message Quintus closes it and smiles.
    Walking out of his tent he rouses the men
    “Men! Brave Romans one and all. I have received news of victories in the north by my own brother Lucius!” this was met by cheers which slowly died down

    “Men, we are the finest men in all of Rome! If the soft farmers from the north can gain fame then there is nothing within the walls of Taras that can withstand our might! Now men go forth and destroy the Carthaginian scum! ROMA PERMANIO! ROMA PERMANIO!” and with that a great cry went up and the men formed ranks behind the great rams.

    Quickly the men began to march forwards but the Carthaginians raced out of their wooden gates forming up in front of the roman army. the towns guards charged alongside the remaining Iberian infantry straight into the storm of Pila. Even Cartages elite troops could not stand under the hail of spears and both they and the Iberian infantry turned tail and ran back towards the town, chased all the way by the Roman Equites and Quintus himself. This vicious infantry and cavalry assault left much of the Carthaginian army dead outside the walls of Taras, the remaining soldiers were dealt with in the town centre offering little resistance.
    After the battle Casualty estimates were 120 Romans to 1770 Carthaginians. A famous victory heard of all over Rome resulting in the gifting of a minor triumph to Quintus by the senate.


    -The massacre by the gates


    It is amazing how in the midst of death and injury a life can be bought into the world quite unaffected. We have chosen to name the child Flavius after my late father. May he earn the name through courage and strength of character. Victories in Gaul bring hope to our men. The siege has been long but we have been victorious. Roma Permanio – Quintus Julius.


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    THat was a good read, but i do recommend you cut out any of messages and/or the your army's unit cards at the bottom.

    Keep the chapters rollin...

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    Wonderful! Your writing is easy to read, and the pictures add to the effect.

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    sorry guys went to america

    will attempt to find time to do this.

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