Just add to the poem as you see fit and we could get something going, just try it out, don't be afraid, i literally came up with this a minute ago.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
Just add to the poem as you see fit and we could get something going, just try it out, don't be afraid, i literally came up with this a minute ago.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
Edit: God that was pretty hard to think of, that was a good start.
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Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.
Last edited by EireEmerald; April 16, 2009 at 05:09 AM.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.
the smell of cinder and rain
ruby red in water.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.the smell of cinder and rain
ruby red in water.
Makes my mind small and falter,
As the burning continues
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Bomberboy's reviews
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Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.the smell of cinder and rain
ruby red in water.
Makes my mind small and falter,
As the burning continues
the new sun brings no good news.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.the smell of cinder and rain
ruby red in water.
Makes my mind small and falter,
As the burning continues.
the new sun brings no good news.
But a hint of your hidden beauty
your unshone pearl.
Blood and brimstone glimmer
my already faltered heart, darkened
by your alien light.
All the stars in this universe
Couldn't warn me about your curse
your insaciable passion, your lilac lemon.
Your soul burns the very embers of my heart
the charcoal of my soul.the smell of cinder and rain
ruby red in water.
Makes my mind small and falter,
As the burning continues.
the new sun brings no good news.
But a hint of your hidden beauty
your unshone pearl.
Each New Golden dawn
Brings you and I closer.