do you like my poetry?

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  1. adamove's Avatar

    adamove said:

    Icon10 do you like my poetry?

    eyes on fire glow in the dark
    sand me a black angel
    my fate is done
    I'M POLISH, I'M PROUD!
     
  2. EireEmerald's Avatar

    EireEmerald said:

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    very short
     
  3. dogukan's Avatar

    dogukan said:

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    so what sort of feeling were trying to give? Or what sort of message you are giving? Poetry is not a simple thing....unless you really meant something writing that.
    It's not about putting fancy words.
    "Therefore I am not in favour of raising any dogmatic banner. On the contrary, we must try to help the dogmatists to clarify their propositions for themselves. Thus, communism, in particular, is a dogmatic abstraction; in which connection, however, I am not thinking of some imaginary and possible communism, but actually existing communism as taught by Cabet, Dézamy, Weitling, etc. This communism is itself only a special expression of the humanistic principle, an expression which is still infected by its antithesis – the private system. Hence the abolition of private property and communism are by no means identical, and it is not accidental but inevitable that communism has seen other socialist doctrines – such as those of Fourier, Proudhon, etc. – arising to confront it because it is itself only a special, one-sided realisation of the socialist principle."
    Marx to A.Ruge
     
  4. Godfrey I of Leuven's Avatar

    Godfrey I of Leuven said:

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    Once upon a time there was
    a lovely little sausage called Baldrick
    ..And it lived happily aver after.
    Last edited by Godfrey I of Leuven; April 15, 2009 at 02:30 PM.