I challenge Empi Rapper to a one verse battle. I'll go first.
As always, rap battles are based on insults, and both participants understand this, so the rules are relaxed.
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You should have turned down this challenge and simply did a poem
because I'm about to start a crisis and do to you what Hitler did to Poland.
You're ill equipped for the realest of the really sick, and nobody can save you
This medieval hero slain in page two 'cause no one told him that his metal plate wasn't mace proof.
You aren't a failure, you're just going through a recession like the US economy.
But if you want to blend literature and hip hop you should just write a Tupac biography.
I admit, you won a lot of scraps and were about to finish the next off
still the only real battle's you've fought were in ROME, and I'm a crash to desktop.
So you can stop writing songs for history and write about yourself
Cause the only way you'd make history look hot is if you went to the library and set fire to the shelf.
'You write rhymes by combining as many words in a line as possible.'
'You like to try and refine your verse until it turns convoluted and improbable'
I'm probably the first person to come asking for better
than a rapper who's lyrical message is "look how many words have the same last three letters!"
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Alright. Your turn. (Not personal, by the way.)
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