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    Ashur
    The Uprising of the Assyrian Empire

    The son reing down upon the small city of Ashur, the heat was any childs deat wish. But this was a ordinary moon for the people of the small city, they long suffered lack of food and water from the muderous heat. But this is as it should be, for the days of the uprise are soon to come!


    The Assyrians will rise to greatness............

    (Coming When I feel like it!)

    Note - This is not fully historical -


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    Chapter 1
    Ttwa eil

    Ttwa eil, the newest son of his noble father khannah. Khannah was the noble commander of the city Ashur.....But he was getting old and fragile. The Assyrian Army was not huge nor massive but they were highly trained forces read to die for there state.It was known all around the City the Ttwa eil would soon take the commanding posistion from his aging father. He was only 15. But this didn't matter, he had many followers and was already love by the crowds. But he had rivals too.

    bailshar. One of khannahs's scribes was eager for power, and like most he would do anything to get it. But bailshar was powerless, he no followers and he was usally treated with disdaine and disgust. If Ttwa eil can see the threat from him early enough he will be easy to overcome for the soon to be king of Ashur. On the day of full moon khannah was dead. And thus for celerbration for the new king, Ttwa eil! The crowd cheered and yelled and brought chickens out to slaughter for the feats. Ashur had been gaining more and more food and resources over the years as khannah waited for his death, Ashur was rising.

    Chapter 2
    Rise or Fail


    Ttwa eil, was in a hot spot. He soon found out he hardships of leading his city at such an early age. But he had trusty nobles that he could rely on when in times of need. This period for Ashur was stable and well. Except for two people. The king Ttwa eil could never rest more than three hours while teaching learning and commanding all at once. The secound person was none other than bailshar, he was non stop aginst the boy king trying to destory him and gain followers. Always disturbing rallies threatning to kill his "wife". Even though not under the king's descision bailshar was never seen agin. Most people thought he ran, knowing he couldn't win. But sardanapal knew more than the people, he knew more than the king too.

    Last night while the king was gaining his few hours of sleep sardanapal banaished bailishar to the cruel wilderness. Although Ttwa was confused he was also releived that he no longer had to deal with the burden. The next morning bailishar was back at the gates of Ashur with the army of many of the lands of Babylon...

    Ttwa eil spoke one word before the battle before it all started - "War"

    Chapter 4
    Expanding?




    Many weeks had past since that day. Ttwa eil, already a gret and noble general mutch like his father was planning. He was planning the attack of Bablyon. This would be the first step in the rise of greatness of the Assyrians. Soon the all the men would be packed and armoured up for revenge, moral was high to start expansion, and in all haste the Ashur army left the city for Babylon to seek war and power. But the nobles worried. Would this be the begining, or the end?
    Last edited by A.P; July 14, 2008 at 07:54 AM.

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    Put in Secound Post
    Last edited by A.P; July 13, 2008 at 02:41 PM.

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    Default Re: Ashur, The Uprising of the Assyrian Empire

    Good start. Keep it coming - maybe some screenshots?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caradog View Post
    Good start. Keep it coming - maybe some screenshots?
    I'm not at m orignal computer so I can't get much.
    But i'll look around to see what I can find that might help.

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    Put In Secound Post
    Last edited by A.P; July 13, 2008 at 02:42 PM.

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