Page 1 of 6 123456 LastLast
Results 1 to 20 of 115

Thread: [RTW AAR] Rome - A Scipii AAR

Hybrid View

Previous Post Previous Post   Next Post Next Post
  1. #1
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default [RTW AAR] Rome - A Scipii AAR

    This is the original thread for my AAR, but it has since moved to the new AAR sub-forum. I recommend you read the AAR here instead.

    If a Mod would like to close this thread, they may go ahead and do so. I suppose a Mod could also delete this, but if it isn't too much of an inconvenience, I would prefer it not to be.


    ---

    Hello.

    Before I start this AAR, I would like to say that I have always enjoyed reading other people's AAR's and that their work has inspired me to make my own. This is dedicated to them, and to everyone who plays RTW and visits this site. I hope all of you enjoy reading my AAR.



    This is a pretty generic campaign, I am not using any big Mods, this is simply Vanilla RTW. The campaign has been set at VH/VH, on Huge unit size.

    There are a few "Rules" to this game:

    1 - The Scipii must do everything in their power to preserve the integrity of the Republic.
    2 - Final Victory must NEVER be achieved (ie, world domination).
    3 - People must die.

    I have made some small modifications to my game, which are as follows:

    - Removed all Faction borders.
    - "United" Roman factions (there are still the three families and the senate, but all have the same color now). I will change the colors of individual families as they rebel, thus symbolizing their split from the rest of the Republic.
    - Made changes to faction colors.

    This AAR does not start at 270 BC. Most of the choices you make early on are more-or-less "forced" (ie, Scipii attack Syracuse then destroy Carthage), and I didn't think making an AAR covering moves we have all made ourselves would be very interesting.

    This AAR starts at 227 BC. The Romans are just now emerging as the dominant power. Greece has been subdued and Carthage has been sacked. Gaul has all but been exterminated, and the Thracian empire is on the verge of collapse. War has begun with the great Eastern factions of Pontus and Egypt, while discontent threatens to splinter the Roman Republic and plunge itself into chaos.

    This is the story of the Scipii. This is the story of Rome.
    Last edited by Benz282; July 09, 2008 at 01:32 PM.

  2. #2
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    The year is 227 BC. There are three great powers in the world: the Egyptians, the Carthaginians, and the Romans. The Brutii have recently pushed into the heartland of the Thracian Empire, which had long since been the dominant power in Eastern Europe. At the same time, the Scipii pushed the hordes of Pontus out of Anatolia, though Pontus is far from defeated. The Julii have done little in the past decade, but their armies are strong and their aim is clear.

    This is the world of 227 BC:


    Note: Faction names have been written in because I have modded almost every faction's color. NOT LABELED: The Gauls, The Numidians, The Spanish/Iberians, Thrace, Dacia.

    Here is a picture of Italy (to demonstrate how the Roman factions are separate, despite sharing the same color):
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    [img][/img]


    Our current foreign policy:


    And the current standings in the Roman Republic:


    The Scipii have two major campaign under-way right now. The first is against the People of Pontus, which has recently succeeded in its first objective to take the Pontic homeland of Anatolia. Right now, the campaign is led by Servius Verius, the great hero of the East. He has killed more troops and conquered more territory than any other previous Roman general.

    Servius' Army:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The second campaign is against the Egyptians. The war with the Egyptians began only 2 short years ago, but the Romans have already sent an army to seize Alexandria. The army was hastily prepared and is relatively ill-equipped for the battles ahead, but once Alexandria is taken, they will be able to stock up on fresh troops with better equipment. A task easier said than done:

  3. #3
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    yea man nice thing u got goin on, thnx for taking my advice and postin it here

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

  4. #4
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Quote Originally Posted by wierdo5000 View Post
    yea man nice thing u got goin on, thnx for taking my advice and postin it here
    No no, thank you. I think you did me more of a service telling me to post it here than I did by doing so, lol.

    Anyway, here's some action.

    --

    Chapter 1 - The Beginning

    It is now 226 BC. Servius has led his army further into Cicilia, and has advanced on the Town of Tarsus. Finding it being held by a Pontic army, Servius initiates an assault, hoping to take it before word of his arrival reaches Syria. He is however, unable to prevent a small army from assisting the defenders. No matter, they will be no match for Servius' hardened legions:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The battle commences and Servius orders his Ballistae to fire on the gates. Meanwhile, his archers fire into the city, cutting down any defenders careless enough to turn their back and expose themselves to missile fire:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The defenders retreat further into the city, out of range of Servius' archers. Once the gate is down, Servius rushes inside. It is a matter of pride for him; to be the first inside an enemy town takes a brave man and sets an example for his men. He must appear to be the strongest, to be the bravest, to be the best, so that his men's faith never falters.

    Servius is immediately confronted by the General defending the town. The Pontic dog refuses to give the Roman a fair fight, so he brings a unit of spearmen along with him. Servius, undaunted, charges the approaching enemy. He seeks out the General, and slays him:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Servius then orders his legions inside the city. They quickly capture the gates and proceed to set up a defensive line to prevent any counterattacks by the defenders:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The Pontic spearmen throw themselves at the legions, but hard Roman discipline and training allow them to hold them off. The innumerable, but weaker spearmen flee at the sight of such hardened warriors! The dead fill the streets and the legions move forward:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Servius then finishes off the rest of the defenders and takes control of the town.



    --

    Chapter 2 - The Death of a Hero

    A year has passed and the army under Cnaeus Albinus has finally anchored off the coast of Egypt. Their prize, Alexandria, is within sight. However, it is guarded by the Pharaoh himself, along with 3 chariot units. This battle might be harder than expected:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Closer inspection reveals that Pharaoh has a very interesting retinue. Now wouldn't you like to have that honorable "position"??


    To the north, Servius' scouts have brough back reports on Antioch; the great general's next target. Apparently the heir to the Pontic throne is currently residing in the city. Royal blood will be spilled. Soon.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The next turn, Servius moves on the city and initiate a quick assault, not wanting to get caught up in a lengthy siege.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The battle begins and Servius orders his Ballistae to destroy the walls of the city. The process is long, but after hours of bombardment, the walls crumble. The Pontic heir is the only one guarding the void and Servius, seeing an opportunity to break the enemy's morale, charges into the gap. The Pontic heir is cut down almost immediately:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    ...but by some cruel twist of fate, Servius falls immediately afterward:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The legions don't believe it. How could a man who had gained so many victories for the Republic, a man who had killed so many with his own hands, be dead? Surely it was an illusion! The legions push further into the city, leaderless, killing all in their path as if driven by an insane blood lust. But the legions push too hard and are cut off by a unit of cavalry. The Roman cavalry quickly relieves them, but by then the damage is done. There is now no doubt as to the fate of their beloved leader, and many choose to flee. Those that stay bravely fight on, eventually capturing the city:



    The Pontic heir was dead, the city was taken. Pontus had been crippled by this battle, but a high price had been paid for victory this day. Servius' army now lacks the courage to fight, refusing to leave the safety of Antioch's walls. While Antioch was the last large Pontic settlement, there are many Egyptian towns that need to be taken to the south, including Alexandria....

    --

    Chapter 3 - Death of a God

    With the death of Servius, Cnaeus Albinus becomes the only Roman general in the East. Upon learning of Servius' death, Cnaeus is deeply shocked, but realizes that he needs to be strong and that he must set an example for his men. Cnaeus vows to take all the Egyptian territory from Alexandria to Antioch, so that he might pay his respects to Servius and his army.

    In order to fulfill such an oath, Cnaeus must first capture Alexandria. The city itself is relatively lightly defended, but with almost the entirety of Egypt's army located close-by, there will be a lot of hard fighting to keep the city. Cnaeus knows many good men will perish in the coming years.

    Cnaeus' presence in Egypt is now known to the Pharaoh. Cnaeus orders an assault on Alexandria before the Pharaoh can call his troops to aid him. Killing the Pharaoh would create chaos in the Egyptian government, much like cutting off the head of a snake will cause the body to writhe in agony and confusion. This strike must be quick and decisive. The Egyptians' god-on-earth must die.

    Cnaeus has his Ballistae disable the city's towers so his archers can move up and slaughter Pharaoh's troops from a distance:
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The archers spot the Pharaoh's bodyguard, immediately thanking the gods that it is not made up of Chariots. They fire on the heavily armored cavalry, killing many of them while they try to flee to safety.

    Pharaoh's Guard (Before):
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Pharaoh's Guard (After):
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The Archers then turn their attention to the Egyptian foot soldiers, satisfied with the damage they have done to Pharaoh's guard. Then, Pharaoh suddenly returns, rallying his troops against the Romans! What he lacks in protection, he makes up for in bravery. Or perhaps stupidity.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    ...However, bravery cannot stop arrows. And thus the Pharaoh was killed. The man who shot the final arrow is not known, but he one of the few men in the world who can claim to have killed a living God.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Cnaeus now orders his legions inside the walls. They quickly slaughter any defenders and make their way towards the center of the city.

    Upon reaching the square, they are greeted by a contingent of chariots. It is hardly the welcome they expected. In response to such foul treatment, they throw their pila at their ungracious hosts, slaughtering them.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    With the charioteers dead, the only defenders yet alive were those of Pharaoh's Pikemen. The legions, vastly outnumbering them, swarm the square, capturing the city in the name of Rome.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 




    With Alexandria taken and the Pharaoh dead, Cnaeus prepares for the inevitable counter-assault by the Egyptian army's 4 1/2 stacks. Cnaeus leaves Alexandria in the hands of a cousin and a portion of his army. Cnaeus himself marches to the east and takes up defensive position on a bridge, knowing that the Egyptians will either throw themselves at his army or leave their rear flank exposed to him.

    He settles in for what is bound to be one hell of a year...

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    Last edited by Benz282; May 31, 2008 at 11:58 PM.

  5. #5
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    This isn't much of an update, but I just wanted to clearly define my holdings at this time (since they weren't in my previous posts).

    All Dark Blue is mine. My territory expands farther from west to east than any other faction, making it hard to keep all corners of my empire happy.

    Scipii at 225 BC

  6. #6
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    not bad at all i wanna see it till the end.

    tip: make ur capital in the middle of ur empire that way everyone will be equally "distressed"

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

  7. #7
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    I have. Right now Syracuse is my capital. I've been thinking about moving it east (since most of my cities are over there now), but I've got huge populations in Italy, Carthage, and I'm going to be conquering Iberia in a few turns (damn Senate Missions, lol).

  8. #8

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Good AAR you have a good eye for taking a picture, btw how did you change the colours did you do that yourself?

  9. #9
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Quote Originally Posted by Dom9127 View Post
    Good AAR you have a good eye for taking a picture, btw how did you change the colours did you do that yourself?
    Thanks.

    And yes, it's pretty easy. Just go to Data/desc_sm_factions and change the rgb values for each faction's primary and secondary colors (if both primary and secondary are the same, then there will be no borders).

    Right now I've got my Romans set at 100r,0g,0b. I tested out other values as well, but I found this to be the best.

    Quote Originally Posted by Xavier Dragnesi
    Very nicely going. The colour modding has enhanced it quite a bit I see. The battle result of your first battle was pretty marvelous.
    Again, thank you. All I'm doing is firing all my arrows into the city before sending troops in. The thing with Pontus is, their infantry routs like crazy, lol.

    I got the idea from another AAR, the guy making it managed to split his empire in half with a civil war. The way he did it was simply amazing. The AAR itself is very entertaining (and pretty long), so once I get a link to it, I recommend you all read it. (whenever you're not reading this, that is )

  10. #10
    Xavier Dragnesi's Avatar Esse quam videre
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Sydney, Australia
    Posts
    7,434

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Very nicely going. The colour modding has enhanced it quite a bit I see. The battle result of your first battle was pretty marvelous.

  11. #11
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    cmon next chapter!!!!

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

  12. #12

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Very enjoyable one of the best non modded aars ive seen
    Alistair Yronwood - Lord of Yronwood, Warden of the Stone Way, Blood Royal

    "Darkness? I was born in it...molded by it. I didn't see the light until I was already a man. By then it was nothing to me but blinding! The shadows betray you because they belong to me!
    "But there must always be a Darth Traya, one that holds the knowledge of betrayal. Who has been betrayed in their heart, and will betray in turn."

    "You clearly don't know who you're talking to, so let me clue you in. I am not in danger, I AM the danger! A guy opens his door and gets shot and you think that of me? No. I am the one who knocks! "


  13. #13
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Sorry I haven't uploaded another update yet today. There's been some unexpected "trouble" in Egypt and I have been playing in hopes of finding a good place to "end" that chapter.

    --

    Chapter 4 - The Pharaoh's Servants

    Cnaeus Albinus and his army of just over 1200 men march east, into the swamps of the Nile Delta. Cnaeus had just sacked the Egyptian capital and killed the Pharaoh; he knew the Egyptians would be looking for him.

    Cnaeus had split his force in two; one accompanying him to a ford on the Nile, while the smaller army stayed in Alexandria under the command of Nero Balbus. Cnaeus and Nero had grown up together and, while Cnaeus had always been the better leader, Nero had always been the better fighter. Cnaeus knew Nero would make good use of the troops he had been given, and was confident that the city would hold.

    Upon learning of the treacherous deeds the Romans had committed, the Egyptian army raced to Alexandria, hoping to ensure their leader's death had not been in vain.

    The Egyptians too split their forces, the smaller stack laying siege to Alexandria itself and the larger stack pursuing Cnaeus across the Nile.

    Of course, Cnaeus had prepared for such a situation. When the Egyptians attempted to cross the river, Cnaeus ordered his legions to turn around and march towards the enemy...
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The battle commenced and Cnaeus ordered his infantry to gather around the bridgehead. His archers lined up on the shore and prepared to fire on the approaching hoard.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    The Egyptians prepared to cross and fired on the tight, Roman formation. Casualties were limited, but those that died, did so in such a fashion that they absolutely must be laughed at.

    This one was struck by an arrow in the hand. He freaked out, swung his arm around, and managed to get his shield stuck in his right shoulder. He proceeded to fall to the ground and cry. The reason as to his crying, be it out of shame or agony, is not known


    The Chariots were the first to cross the bridge. They are formidable war machines and can, admittedly, make even the most grizzled veteran soil himself, but the Roman Legions held true, launching their pila at the charioteers, eventually causing them to rout.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Hardly a moment had passed before the bulk of the Egyptian army, that of the spearmen, reached the Roman side of the river.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    Try as they might, the Romans were unable to rout the spearmen, their immense numbers apparently giving them a god-like bravery. Cnaeus saw this and, fearing defeat, charged into the Egyptian spears. The gods must have favored Cnaeus, as the Egyptians fled where-as they could easily have slaughtered Cnaeus and his bodyguard. Cnaeus chased the cowards across the river and managed to kill all but 100 men.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 



    --

    As Cnaeus finished off the last of the Egyptian army, his men turn towards Alexandria and wonder what will be the fate of their comrades....

    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 
    Last edited by Benz282; June 01, 2008 at 05:25 PM.

  14. #14
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    nice i love ur battles so nicely descripted

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

  15. #15
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    From now on, I will try to do 1 update every day. I'm already 7 Chapters ahead of what is posted and I'll be adding them as fast as I can.

    Now, I present to you the Second Siege of Alexandria....

    --

    "Listen up men! Cnaeus has put all of you under my command. We are to defend this city from the Egyptians. This will, of course, not be an easy task. We have a only a few hundred men, where they have thousands."

    Nero pauses, looking at his men's faces. He studies them. He sees the fear in their eyes; they do not trust that this man. They do not believe that this man, many of whom are older than, can lead them to victory. Nero raises his voice a little louder.

    "Listen! This will be but your second battle, as will it be mine. I have not spent many years on campaign, but aye, neither have any of you!"

    Nero's anger is becoming obvious.

    "Cnaeus and I grew up together, he knows my talents. If he did not believe that I could lead you to victory, why did he put you under my command? I have every bit as much experience as Cnaeus does. I may not have been your leader when we first sailed here, but I am now."

    The troops reluctantly, and indeed; half-mockingly, raise their fists and chant "Nero Balbus! - Victory!".

    At this, Nero storms off, muttering to his aides "Fools! They will be the death of us all!"

    Chapter 5 - Treachery

    The year is now 224 BC. Content with his victory on the Nile Bridge, Cnaeus marches further east, planning to turn south and take the Egyptian city of Memphis by surprise. This leaves Nero Balbus to defend Alexandria, alone.



    Nero prepares his defense of the city with difficulty. Nero, never having proven himself in battle, lacks the respect of the men. Nevertheless, when the new Egyptian heir launches the assault, Nero's defending army go to their posts.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Nero's army is small; only two cohorts and two archers. The Egyptians bring two rams up to the walls. Nero orders his archers to try setting one of them alight, in hopes of evening the odds. The archers, in defiance, only begin firing after a long delay; too late for any chance of stopping one of the rams.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    The rams breach the gate and take down a portion of the walls unmolested.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    The Egyptian chariots then rush the gate. Nero's Legions, still defiant even while staring death in the face, refuse to attack. This throws Nero into a fit of anger and he charges into the mass of chariots himself, soon followed by his bodyguard.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    This bravery was not expected of him. The Legions immediately follow Nero and drive the chariots out of the city.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    The rest of the Egyptian army throw themselves into the city, only to be slaughtered by the Romans. Meanwhile, the Egyptian Heir, Ptolemy Helios watches from afar. As his army clashes with the defenders, only to be driven out with little effect, Ptolemy repeatedly forces them to turn around and fight again. All that matters to him is that his father gets his city back; the lives of such worthless peasants mean nothing.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 


    After the last Egyptian within the city walls is slain, the men suddenly drop their weapons and cheer whole-heartily, "Nero Balbus! - Victory!". Nero is stunned but for the first time in his life, he feels that he is important. After being orphaned at an early age and spending his entire life in the shadow of his cousin Cnaeus, he finally feels like he has a purpose. A slow smile stretches across the face of a man who has known little happiness or joy in his life.

    It is now, of all moments, that Ptolemy rushes through the gates. The entire Roman army is caught by surprise and Nero charges the Egyptian heir's immense bodyguard. Before any of Nero's legions can respond, Nero is cut down.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    The Legions are enraged, and rush at Ptolemy, but the dog flees, having dealt the Romans a stinging blow. Nero's legions are unable to catch the swift cavalry, after having fought for hours on end. Nero's archers fire at Ptolemy as he flees, but are unable to kill the heir himself.
    Spoiler Alert, click show to read: 

    Even before Ptolemy is out of range, Nero's legions collapse to the ground, crying out in grief.



    --

    Cnaeus' Tent, 4 days later...

    Captain Titus - "Sir, an Egyptian army has been spotted to the North-East of our camp. They are within 2 days march of here."
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "What are their numbers?"
    Captain Titus - "We are not sure, but we are fairly certain they have over 1500 infantry, along with 250 chariots."
    Captain Vibius - "Sir, if I may..."
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "What do you have to say?"
    Captain Vibius - "Our scouts have located an undefended bridge on the Nile. It is to the south, within a few days march. If we make haste, I am confident we can reach it before the Egyptians catch up-"
    ***Messenger rushes into the tent, bows quickly to the guards and approaches Cnaeus***
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "What reason for such haste, man!? And why do you appear so nervous?"
    Messenger - "I...I br-bring word from Captain Lucius, s-sir."
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "Lucius...?"
    Messenger - "He is in charge of the garrison of Alexandria, sir. He asked me to tell you that the Egyptians have been pushed back. The city is saved."
    ***The room bursts into applause and cheer***
    Cnaeus Albinus - "Aye! This is joyous news! Why do you say it so solemnly?
    ***Cnaeus realizes something is wrong. The Messenger's eyes dart. "He is scared..." Cnaeus thinks to himelf.***
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - And what of Nero Balbus? I believe it was he who I left in charge of Alexandria"
    ***Cnaeus' question is only answered by silence. All is quiet in the tent. Though no answer is given, everyone in the tent knows the fate of Nero. Cnaeus' eyes begin to water***
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "He cannot be dead! He was the champion of our academy! He was a better swordsman than even I!"
    ***A long silence ensues, only to be broken by the ever-solemn voice of the messenger***
    Messenger - "After all the Egyptians were dead, the army began celebrating Nero's victory. While our backs were turned, Ptolemy rushed in behind us, catching us off guard. Nero charged into Ptolemy's guard in hopes of saving us, but he was outnumbered and was quickly cut down. Despite our best efforts, we were unable to kill the treacherous dog, and he has escaped."
    ***Upon hearing this, Cnaeus turns his back to the messenger and walks to the back of the tent; his private quarters, knocking down many-a expensive objects on the way.***
    ***Cnaeus turns back to the messenger, eyes red, and points at him, then shouts***

    Cnaeus Albinus - "There will be blood for this!"
    ***Cnaeus points at each of his captains***
    Cnaeus
    Albinus - "We will make sure of it! They will pay for this!"
    ***With that, Cnaeus exits the room, leaving the rest stunned.***

  16. #16
    D.B. Cooper's Avatar Tribunus
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    7,119

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Yeah you describe the battles really well. The pictures are well done too.


  17. #17
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    OMFG SUCH A NICE DIALOUGE, it makes me feel like im actually there.

    ur soo good, i want to put up my own AAR but i cant take the damn pics.

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

  18. #18
    Benz282's Avatar Vicarius
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East Coast, US
    Posts
    2,955

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Thanks. I tried to put as much emotion into it as possible. After all, what is more real than something all of us have experienced? That being, human sorrow.

    Btw, if you want to take screenshots, I suggest using FRAPS.

  19. #19
    Xavier Dragnesi's Avatar Esse quam videre
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Sydney, Australia
    Posts
    7,434

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    Very well done Benz! I'm currently sorting out his screenshot problem anyway, hopefully he'll be able to use it soon.

  20. #20
    wierdo5000's Avatar Civis
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    IN a house
    Posts
    175

    Default Re: Rome - A Scipii AAR

    i got it, im using fraps and converting thru irfan

    <a href="http://s93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l7...llowichigo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

Page 1 of 6 123456 LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •