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    Default [SPQR AAR] Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs

    hi,
    this AAR has been going on a while, but now i'm posting here
    (original thread)

    Ave all,

    After long seeing no SPQR AAR, i have decided to make one myself.
    here you can find the first chapter.
    English is not my first language so i hope it's good, please react and give comment, i can only improve the AAR.

    Greetings Valerius Tiberius.



    This is an SPQR AAR, below you can see the first 2 chapters.

    This AAR is dedicated to, in the first place, Galerius Priscus, the most Nobel man and best friend one ever could imagine.
    In the second place to LT1956, creator of this mod and the man who made this all possible.
    Settings: - faction: Roma
    - difficulty: m/m
    - Unit settings: Large (due to possible lag)

    Postscriptum: In the AAR are not every u’s replaced by v’s because of irritation of the reader.

    Please do not change anything in the following AAR.
    Ave all,

    After long seeing no SPQR AAR, i have decided to make one myself.
    I'm writing for a while now and am up to 23 pages (= + screens)
    here you can find the first chapter.
    English is not my first language so i hope it's good, please react and give comment, i can only improve the AAR.

    Greetings Valerius Tiberius.



    This is an SPQR AAR, below you can see the first 2 chapters.

    This AAR is dedicated to, in the first place, Galerius Priscus, the most Nobel man and best friend one ever could imagine.
    In the second place to LT1956, creator of this mod and the man who made this all possible.
    Settings: - faction: Roma
    - difficulty: m/m
    - Unit settings: Large (due to possible lag)

    Postscriptum: In the AAR are not every u’s replaced by v’s because of irritation of the reader.

    Please do not change anything in the following AAR.



    My AAR logo

    A little review:

    Caput I

    Caput II

    Caput III

    Caput IV

    Caput V

    Caput VI-VII

    Caput VIII-IX

    Caput X

    Caput XI

    Caput XII

    second overview:

    Caput XIII

    Caput XIV-XV

    Caput XVI

    Caput XVII

    Caput XVIII

    Caput XIX

    Caput XX

    Caput XXI
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    I recommend this to all. It is almost up there with Juvenal's journal and all of Von Vryskiak's (sp?)

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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    post comments people!!
    who's all reading this?
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    i am :p

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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    except of you and all other people on the other forum...
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    i am not reading this. at least not here lol realy great story guys.
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    really good

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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    quite ggod
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    "But there must always be a Darth Traya, one that holds the knowledge of betrayal. Who has been betrayed in their heart, and will betray in turn."

    "You clearly don't know who you're talking to, so let me clue you in. I am not in danger, I AM the danger! A guy opens his door and gets shot and you think that of me? No. I am the one who knocks! "


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    tnx guys!!
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    I've been reading it to, seems quite professional, except when you ask for help! You should have left that out. Just my opinion.
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    except when you ask for help!
    what do you mean? in the AAR or what?
    sorry, can't follow

    plz explain!!!

    Regards

    Valerius Tiberius

    ps: tnx for reading
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    Quote:
    but what do you do then with screens??? i have to upload all of them now

    Quote:
    (ps: anyone can explain how do add this in a WORD-file??? the upload thing won't accept .doc

    I was reffering to this. Do you understand now?
    This took the professionalism away, like I said only my opinion.
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    Default Re: Senatvs Povlvsqve Romanvs (SPQR AAR)

    tnx tnx
    (plz see my post in the original topic )

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