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    Default [SS AAR] The Order Of The Knights Templar: My First AAR.

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    If you have no clue how i can be the knights Templar, i can. In The Stainless Steel Mod, They've made the order into a faction! :original: good for me. KK I'm kinda new, so don't expect this to be great. Also sorry that some parts are in German, i have no clue why.


    Chapter 1: The Family And The Agents

    Before i start the story, let's check the characters and main people in the order:

    First, The Family Tree:


    Small Huh? lets look at the members:


    Grandmaster Hugues De Payns is a weary man, having to manage all the orders donations, finances and other important needs. He often has to work late into the night, in the order's base of Tortosa. To get rid of the the misery of managing all this, he drink a lot and smokes a bit as well. He used to be a veteran of the first crusade, so he is a good fighter and commander, but his work refrains him from fighting and commanding the order military. He is married to Matilda, and has 2 sons and a daughter.


    Councillor Gottfried is Hugues' eldest son, and therefore heir to the order's throne. With Hugues caught up in his work, Gottfried commanding the order's tiny military force. Because of this, he is brilliant fighter and commander. How he is unhappy that is father is never able to come and visit him, and with like nothing more than to fight side by side with his father. However, he has a lot of excitement in his live, having to kill bandits and defend the order. How the lack of men to help him is starting to show, and he is getting heavily wounded and scarred in his battles.

    There is Theodericus and Isabella, who are young kids who run around in the order's base of Tortosa. Theo will be the heir to the throne when Hugues dies.

    Then there the agents, the helpers, the diplomats and other like them. the order doesn't have many, but they have a few:


    Andreas is from Spain, a lowly priest who lived in tiny derelict chapels. He was a friend of Hugues, and when the first crusade was called, he join Hugues in the holy land. When the order was formed, Andreas was made high priest. With his high postion and the order's friendship with the pope, he was made a cardinal, thrust into the college of cardinals, and became one of the three preferati. Now he converts the many heathens in the orders tiny borders.



    Athalwolf is from the bustling cities of Italy. His parents were killed in a sea storm, so he lived by pickpocketing the rich fat merchants of the cities. when he tried to steal a shipment of florins, he was trapped inside the transport ship. when he landed, he was in Tortosa. a friend of his was working as a order guard, and he was taking to Hugues. after hearing his tales of pickpocketing, Hugues decided to give him shelter, food, water and florins i he became a spy for him. and so Athalwolf now goes around spying on bandits camps and the bandits.



    Henry is a wealthy noble of the order, Educated at the finest papal schools and churches. His rich parents were highly cardinals, who sent him to the holy land to study the Islamic faith to help the Pope understand it. He became fluent in Arabic, and his parents became to believe his was being converted, so he was sent to the order's base to help. he was quickly put to go use as a diplomat, and sent back to Italy to ask the pope for more donations.

    And thats the brief overveiw. ill start chaper one hopefully tommorow. Criticism and advice welcome and NEEDED. IT FUELS ME!

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    Goodluck, I would suggest adding a bit more detail to characters, So i can picture the character a bit better.

    I also use stainless Steel, its a very good mod - I find Knights Templar very hard to play, due to a small army and only one Settlement.

    As I said before, goodluck! =D
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    Thanks, i will probz unleash more detail and bio about the characters as this drags on.

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    Default Re: The Order Of The Knights Templar: My First AAR.

    Good luck, I'm looking forward to it.

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    Excellent start i hope this continues




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    Meh you better hope alot i just lost all of my chapter 1 work. i got write it again don't work ill try get it out today.

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    Chapter 1: Tiring the Troops

    1080 A.D

    Greetings, I am Grandmaster Hugues, Grandmaster Of The Order of The Knights Templar. We have small holdings, with only one settlement under the control and protection of the order: Tortosa.


    My first goal is to take the local bandit settlements, but our army is tiny, led my son, which consists only of pilgrims.


    I have sent them to a cotton farm near Antioch, to get info on the garrison.


    i have also sent some spearmen to help, but they are too tired to be able to make it to the cotton farm.


    Meanwhile, i have sent my spy, Athalwolf, south to spy on Acre.


    He was thankfully successful, and he sent back the details of the settlement back to me.



    I knew we could'nt beat the garrison, so i sent him south, to jerusalem.



    In the distance, he finds a bandit army. i pray they do not travel north.



    Next, i sent my Cardinal, Andreas south to the fishing village to convert people, Only 30% of the local were catholic.



    Finally, i send my diplomat in Italy north, to get trade rights with the European powers.



    Ahh the order is starting great.

    1081 A.D

    Firstly, let's check the end of turn report.



    Hmm, the treasury is healthy and dontations pouring in. Next, me and the council of nobles had a meeting. one my junior advisors said that a group of nobles in france want to travel to Adana, but it held by bandits. if the order takes it, they will give some of there finest soliders to us.



    So i send a messanger to my son. he was head to adana will full haste, along with the spearmen.



    they will make it soon, but they still haven't merged. but luckily my son has hired some more men, they will be vital.



    Next, my spy manages to get info of the garrison in jerusalem.



    Then he move south, and find the bandit army has moved south aswell. however there is egyptian imam nearby, but he doesn't seen hostile. He also can see the egyptian town of Gaza.



    Back in italy, it seems my diplomat has reached bologna, and hs had talks with the holy roman empire.





    With 1081 over, new things are happening....

    Next chapter: the battle of Adana and the merging of the troops finally!

    cricistim and other stuff welcome! oh yeah and point ourt any spelling mistakes.

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    very nice AAR
    I never liked the strategic part of AARs, but this is pretty good!
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    Very nice and extremely thorough.

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    Not bad, I am not a maker of AAR (I will make one once MTW works again though) but, I have read alot of them. This one needs to be more in depth, don't use the line, end of turn report, try finances, or something. Also try more then one liners though.

    I will bookmark this and read it when it is done though

    For a first timer though, it's pretty good

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    Default Re: The Order Of The Knights Templar: My First AAR.

    Nice work! Just one question; Why 2 Chapter 1's?

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