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    ITS FINALLY HERE! after the 2 week delay, another installment of the AAR is here! im going to see whether or not i can get a second part in the next week for 2 reasons. one, i want to make up for the delay, and 2, i want to enter this into the AAR competition again
    if anyone has any comments, suggestions, things they want improved, or things they want to see, PLEASE comment because thats the only way ill know

    without further ado, here is chapter 14!

    Chapter 14:
    Impetuous

    Summer, 1290


    The King and his companions were anxious. They had boarded a gun holk to take them to the island of Visby, where Halstan, Knud's grandson, had began preparing for the assault on the southern border of the Teutonic territory. Tensions ran high as they feared Halstan would begin the assault without them, as his loyalty was quite low. Bergthor was also on everyone's mind as he was roaming the German countryside, monitored by only an old,
    over-cautious general. The 2nd Bastard Prince's life would need to end quickly. The only thing that King Knud could do while en route to Visby was make sure that the Danish landing would not be interrupted by any neighbors, namely the Poles. Hardknud was instructed to forge an alliance between the Kalmar Union and the Kingdom of Poland, a task at which he was very adept at.



    When the alliance was made, Knud sent the ambassador as a pseudo-spy, and directed him to scout out their landing zone, Palanga castle.



    The castle walls were barely manned as the little amount of soldiers guarding them were spread out too thin. The king smiled as his assault on the Order would go smoothly.


    Meanwhile, near Uelzen...


    Berthgor the Usurper, or the 2nd Bastard Prince as those loyal to the Knud dynasty so graciously called him, felt endangered by the nobles current inclination to the ruling family. He feared attempts to take his life, and for that reason he brought a senior general by the name of Sten of Kollr to accompany and mentor him. Together, they made the decision to take the outpost town of Uelzen, as the council of nobles had wanted. They held numerical superiority over the 300-strong garrison, and started the attack right away.



    "Watch and learn, little prince. Today, you will see a master at work," Sten said as he ordered the bombards to pummel the gates into submission. The gunpowder made quick work of the wooden barrier, and soon the town was exposed to the 600 Danes waiting in the farmlands.



    Sten quickly moved the fresh sword staff militia into the town and set up a defensive perimeter, with the archers following suit and readying their bows for any counter-attack.



    Bergthor paced back and forth impatiently as the militia took a defensive position. When the 2nd Bastard Prince saw that the infantry were inert as crossbowmen were pummeling bolts down at the militia, he turned in anger and raged at Sten of Kollr.

    "What do you think you're doing?!" Bergthor roared. "Our men are dying out there! Why are they just standing there?"

    "You are a young general, and you do not know the ways of war," The old general said condescendingly. "You see, if the Germans counter-attack..."

    "There won't be a German counter-attack!" Bergthor yelled. "They'll hole up in their town center until all of my men are bristling with arrows and bolts!"

    "Your men? Why, these Danes are..."

    "Under my control," The Usurper said definitively. "I am relinquishing your powers as general and I expect you to follow my orders. Go to Hamburg Castle, train reinforcements, then meet me at Magdeburg in a few years."

    Sten of Kollr was shocked, but he retired willingly. "Your impatience will destroy you," Sten called back prophetically. Bergthor ignored him and ordered his infantry to rush through the defensive sword staff militia. The German forward defenders scattered back to the top of the hill as the axe-wielding huscarls came into view.



    The Danish soldiers finally reached the top of the, as did Bergthor's bodyguard. The soldiers of the Kalmar began to tear through the ditch defenses of the Imperial garrison. A sense of hopelessness filled the German hearts as one by one their best soldiers fell while the worst of the Danes died. The remaining town militia and crossbowmen retreated to a corner of the town center to make their final stand.



    Needless to say, it didn't last very long.



    The nobles of the Aarhus court were very pleased when the pesky outpost town was taken, and thus increased the size of the Union military.



    Despite this victory, Bergthor was still anxious for more glory and victory. Only the complaint of the troops was enough to restrain Bergthor from going farther south.

    Winter, 1291

    Finally, the troops were ready to move on after pillaging some of the local villages, as well as doing some more...unsavory things with the milkmaids. Bergthor's troops encountered a Imperial artillery train. Bergthor advanced quickly to take the siege equipment without incident, but didn't realize that a strong German force was waiting just beyond the next rise, ready to reinforce.



    The 2nd Bastard Prince knew the the artillery would wreak havoc on the troops and their morale. He needed the cavalry to lead a quick assault and take out the artillery. The scouts lead the charge, followed by the norse clerics and the feudal knights. As the horses galloped towards the undefended siege equipment, Bergthor spotted something strange over the next hill. He ignored it however, and wanted to get the artillery destroyed as soon as possible.



    The cavalry charged into the frightened and undefended crewmen as their bodies were hewn across the artillery that they manned a few minutes
    earlier. Amidst the panic and terror of the Germans, and the war cries of the Danes, the footsteps were muffled by the snow. The last crewmen was slain as a sudden realization came upon the clerics, scouts, and knights. They were not alone on that hill anymore.



    The Imperial footmen began charging up the gentle slope to clash with the cavalry, while the Imperial cavalry circled around back to trap the clerics and knights. As confusion reigned on top of the Danish horses, the scouts became terrified and charged headlong back to the Danish ranks. Then every cleric and knight knew that they had one chance to escape, but it was too late. The German infantry had swarmed over isolated horsemen like water over rocks, and the cavalry eroded into the endless tide.



    The ordeal at the far hill was over, and Bergthor's cavalry arm was almost completely annihilated, save for a few norse clerics. His outflanking options were now severely limited and he would have to rely on the strength of his infantry, as well as the power of his bombards. The remaining enemy artillery, however, had gotten the same idea and began to launch explosive shells at the Danish ranks.



    The 2nd Bastard Prince sent the remaining clerics to deal with the pesky artillery as he ordered the troops to advance their position within the range of their own bombards. Bergthor planned to destroy the morale of the Germans with a few bombard attacks, and then follow it up with and attack by vikings and pikemen. However, The Imperial army had already established a strong defensive position on the hill where the Danish cavalry had died.



    The Danes set up beneath the hill and bombard crewmen began loading cannonballs into the metal tubes. As the armies exchanged gunpowder fire, the norse and peasant archers advanced and set their arrows alight. They hoped to quickly set the armor of the knights and sergeants alight with their fiery rain.



    Moments passed, but Bergthor saw his moment. It was just a flinch in a few of the crossbowmen, but the Usurper saw it. He roared out his order to charge and the Danish warriors eagerly replied. Their axes were whipping the air and their sword staffs pierced the snowy mist as they collided with the weakened German position. The embroilment lasted only a few minutes when Bergthor had outflanked the crossbows and artillery and rammed the enemy backs. Huscarls weaved their axes through the German armor, quickly cutting open the exposed flesh.



    More Danish infantry kept slamming into the German lines. Wavering and weakened, the cries of fellow Germans resounded through all of the Imperial and Danish hearts, weakening the former and strengthening the latter. The vikings soon realized that they did not need form or precision to win this
    fight, but a mere show of brutality would be enough to rout the Germans. Together, they let out a roar of blood lust and begun to swing their weapons wildly. The Germans were too scared to confront these insane warriors and began backing up towards the butchering machine that was the 2nd Bastard Prince. Winning was not possible for the Holy Roman Empire that day, so they ran.



    The soldiers quickly mopped out the battlefield and counted the dead. Bergthor beamed with joy at his victory, for surely there would not be another force near Magdeburg of that magnitude.



    A messenger was sent to the nearby city to try and ransom the soldier back for about 1700 florins. However, Bergthor received the corpse of a Danish soldier with arrows bristling. He had no choice but to kill every last German.



    Bergthor had now gained a more fearsome reputation as an agressive general, and every Imperial commander was a little more afraid of confronting him without the superiority of numbers. The Usurper was now more confident and aggressive than ever, which led him to lay siege to the city of Magdeburg without waiting for Sten's Hamburg reinforcements.



    Summer, 1292


    News had reached the farthest corners of the Danish kingdom that Poland had allied with the Grand Duchy of Lithuania. The Teutonic Order was losing friends fast, and the Danes were going to be the final blow.



    Near Reval...


    Niels Jarl had received the noble council request. They wanted the nearby city of Prenau taken quickly, but Niels only had limited forces. He left a few companies of men back in Arensburg, crossed the landbridge by boat, and took up positions around the city.





    Winter, 1293

    The summer months had gone by quickly in the frigid north, with the leaves having fallen off of almost all of the trees. It was night Niels Jarl looked upon the city and the weakened inhabitants. The nearby Teutonic reinforcements would not know who would assault the city when. It would not matter
    anyway, Niels Jarl chuckled to himself, for the Danish numerical superiority was too great to lose this battle.



    The young northern general was surprised to see the meager defenders trying to man the walls. There were over a million ways Niels could think of outflanking them, but that would waste time, and with time, moonlight.



    It was an easy assault to plan, and most of the ladder landings went smoothly. While three of the ladder detachments set foot on the walls, the order militia became terrified. They had heard terrible stories to the south. The Danes were butchers, leaving no mercy for anyone. Their war cries were long and load, and shook the hearts of the bravest man. Their warped images of the viking invaders prevented them from actually holding their ground.



    As the militia fled, the Danes at the gates below the fighting had punctured the last solid defense of the Teutons. Cavalry was immediately sent through to deal with the Order general and the remains of the wall defenders.



    The clerics rushed towards the town center, seeking the enemy general. Their maces crushed the routing defenders as they turned the corner and unexpectedly ran into the Teutonic commander. The lances could not defend against the armor-crushing maces of the clerics, so swords were drawn and the fighting began.



    The Teutonic knights were too occupied to notice that Niels Jarl had circled around the town center and had taken out the catapults. He the began charging down the straight rode, right into the backs of the bodyguards. The charge distracted the general enough so that a cleric could plant a mace in his head. He looked around, dazed, and then slowly fell off of his horse. The cleric was kind enough to bring the mace down on the horses neck, killing it too. The Teutonic commander lay on the brick of the town center, blood seeping from his half-torn face.



    The battle was won, and the town of Prenau was theirs. The council of nobles awarded several florins to the treasury as a reward for advancing into enemy territory.



    Meanwhile, outside Magdeburg...


    The siege had progressed nicely, with Bergthor preferring to wait for siege equipment and reinforcements from Sten of Kollr. However, by this time the Germans had brought up an extra 600 men. The 2nd Bastard Prince thought he could quickly take the city square, then defend it until sundown, but he thought ti would be better to wait for Sten's reinforcements. Where is that old fool? Bergthor thought to himself. The scouts reported no one in sight
    for miles around.



    Waiting proved to be the biggest mistake that Bergthor had ever made, for the 600 gained reinforcements from the Prague Citadel, quickly becoming 800. The overpowered Germans set out to attack the relatively small Danish force, coupled with about 300 German reinforcements from Magdeburg. Although vastly outnumbered, Bergthor would not turn tail and run; he would stand and fight, and if necessary, die.







    Last edited by Theseus1234; August 19, 2008 at 11:24 AM.
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    Quite a good AAR youve got going here. Baltic wars truly are intense. Rep+

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    i apologize for not updating sooner, but i have been swamped by things that have just piled up, and i dont know when ill have time to update
    ill work harder to get the next segment online
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    very nice AAR

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theseus1234 View Post
    i apologize for not updating sooner, but i have been swamped by things that have just piled up, and i dont know when ill have time to update
    ill work harder to get the next segment online
    That's good I've missed reading this.
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    Into the mouth of Hell
    Rode the six hundred.
    " - Alfred, Lord Tennyson.

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    Hey, coool!
    I am liking this a lot too mate, i like the fact u have a lot of regions, not just vanila

    Sorry about Charles )))) I like the prince ))))
    The Help of God, The Love of the People, The Strength of Denmark - Proud To See The Red Knight make this AAR Truly Epic!
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    Greate update Theseus. Reminds me of the Poland one. Keep up the great work.
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    A great AAR



















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    Quote Originally Posted by Gerin View Post
    or is it
    hey!

    EDIT: also, i apologize for any text formatting issues that have come up. i dont know the cause of them but i am fixing it ASAP
    Last edited by Theseus1234; August 19, 2008 at 11:41 AM.
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    Yea reminds me of the Polish one. It is way better than the Polish one. You have improved.
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    Great Update.
    "...Boldly they rode and well,
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    Rode the six hundred.
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    Your Battle screens look soooo cool )))
    The Help of God, The Love of the People, The Strength of Denmark - Proud To See The Red Knight make this AAR Truly Epic!
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    huh! do you plan on continuing????i mean its so awesome

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    Quote Originally Posted by Masaky View Post
    huh! do you plan on continuing????i mean its so awesome
    haha thanks
    the next update is in the works, but im currently roradtripping (woooo!) and i cant do much writing right now. i get settled in on thursday, so ill see what i can do then
    sorry for the long wait...again
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    Quote Originally Posted by Theseus1234 View Post
    haha thanks
    the next update is in the works, but im currently roradtripping (woooo!) and i cant do much writing right now. i get settled in on thursday, so ill see what i can do then
    sorry for the long wait...again
    no need to say sorry

    i was just asking

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    i apologize again for the long wait, and i'll be sure to bring up another update this weekend. however, with such bad timing i have decided to make the AAR updates officially irregular! basically the update will be once a week, although at any time

    Chapter 15

    Hell


    Winter, 1293


    Forced with being branded a coward by his soldiers and the other generals, Prince Bergthor the Usurper chose to stand in fight. He was taking a gamble, and he new it. The troops were anxious, and the slightest mistake or one wrong order would send his troops running. It all depends on the enemy, Bergthor thought to himself. I am capable of killing these swines, but they have to present the opportunity. The first army advanced without waiting for the garrison reinforcements. The German commander captain Arnold sent out his crossbows to form a pavise wall, to protect the crossbowmen while they readied their unholy weapons.



    "An easy counter," Bergthor said to no one in particular. "Archers! Light arrows!"

    As he shouted his command to the immediate troops, he did a peculiar and unusual sword maneuver. The cavalry saw this, and took it as the "Go ahead" sign and they slowly advanced, going farther and farther behind German enemy lines. Finally, the horsemen were in position for Bergthor's brilliant outflanking. The scouts were the first to reach their destination, hitting home as men crumpled beneath the under armored horses.



    The knights followed suit as they collided with the feudal knights. The force was enough to send several men flying through the air and onto their German comrades. The knights were swallowing anyone who came in their path, but they were starting to struggle. Even in the cold of the German winter, their oven-like suits were starting to heat up. Sweat formed on their brows as they waited for Bergthor's next move that would, hopefully, relieve them of their current task.



    The clerics, en route to their victim infantry, were stopped by the mighty Imperial knights, the Empire's pride and joy. They were better armored and better equipped with similar maces, but the clerics were more knowledgeable and from experience, they knew that the horses were lightly armored on the frount and rear. Knights began tripping on their horses as they fought back equally, killing off several clerics. The one thing that captain Arnold did was superiority in numbers, so the norse clerics became entrapped in their own venture.



    All of the cavalry at the rear of the army was starting to struggle, as many of the spears were in the rear and in the flanks, killing off Bergthor's flanking force. He saw the plight of the cavalry, but was reluctant to relinquish his high-ground. Finally, he gave in and commanded the soldiers to charge, sacrificing order for the sake of the horsemen.



    The Imperial front line was more than ready for the attack against such small numbers of infantry as their lines extended out further than those of their Danish enemy. The vikings fought valiantly against the better equipped enemy, and heaved their axes relentlessly at the Germans. shields quickly crumbled, only to reveal more swords and spears. Several Danes fighting on the immediate front were impaled with spears as they attempted to breach the enemy lines. Bergthor, not one to miss an opportunity, realized this was his chance to be a real hero! Savior of the Kalmar union! He laughed and cheered wildly as his bodyguards galloped down the incline. His chanting inspired the troops to great deeds, and their hearts were no longer in doubt. Bergthor's victim of collision were overrun by the massive lances of Bergthor's guards and ran.



    The soldiers of Denmark were inspired by every Germans kill, every man fallen, and every step made. They were becoming beserk. The Germans lost a little ground, but that was enough the send Bergthor's men into a wild rage. As they advanced over the hillsides, one soldiers stopped fighting all together and gasped at the sight he saw. There were more coming!



    During this sudden realization of hopelessness, captain Arnold regained his lost ground and brought up reinforcements form the flanks. The Danish soon fell, unwilling to fight an impossible fight any longer. Many surrendered on the spot, but the brave few who remained fled for their lives through various openings in the German line.



    Bergthor panicked. He could not understand how his mighty charge had not sent the entire enemy running. He was speechless as he vainly searched for any remnants of his right cavalry arm, but all he could see were the swarms of the advancing enemy.



    It took a while for the 2nd Bastard Prince to realize that the battle was lost. His cavalry was all but saved, his infantry were routing and running for their lives back towards Uelzen. Finally, Bergthor slowly turned his horses around in the sea of Germans, and ordered the withdrawal. He would be labeled a coward by this act, but still he stood and fought, killing at least half of the enemy, while also trying to preserve his troops. Being the only cavalry on the field, Bergthor and his guards entered the forest away from the battlefield first, leading the path for his fellow cowards.



    The battle was decisively lost with more than 300 Danish casualties, with similar losses to the main attacking force. The reinforcements, which would have destroyed the tired Danes if they had beaten Arnold, were barely scratched. The city of Magdeburg was safe.



    Summer, 1294

    "He was 62, it was his time to go," Haflidhi said solemnly as he and Halstan walked upon the swaying ship. "The doctors told me his heart was dying ever since his first battle. I am sorry for your loss, but believe me, your grandfather was my friend for nearly 30 years. I miss him just as much."

    Halstan was almost in tears, evidenced by the hot water beginning to well in his eyes. King Knud had died in the night after suffering a massive heart attack. Halstan had only known his grandfather for 2 years, but he was still aching on the inside.



    King Knud had felt his death coming the evening prior, speaking with Haflidhi about Halstan, the only hope for Denmark.

    "Watch him for me," the King said weakly at the dinner table. "He is the only way for Denmark to thrive. I, as king, order you to watch him until the day you die."

    "My lord,"Haflidhi said, shocked at this sudden loss of will. "Do not say that. You're going to live through tonight, I swear it!"

    "Our generation is dying," the Knud cried as he felt the life drain out of him. "Me, Stenkil, Charles, even you. My close friends are dying of age, and Bergthor's allies become more numerous every day. Get Halstan to the throne, as my last order."

    "Knud..."

    "You must act quickly, as the Teutonic order will capitalize on the power struggle within the Kalmar Union. They will most likely take the city most recently lost, Pernau."



    "Bergthor will unquestioningly become king, and he will gain a son, one more Henriksson to plague our fine kingdom. Get on the ships and sail for Palanga castle, Niels Jarl in the north will need your help."



    And with those final words, Knud, king of the Kalmar Union and the Danish Provinces, retired to his bedchamber for the last time.


    Meanwhile, near Pernau


    The Teutonic soldiers had quickly blocked off the 4 main roards leading out of the city, effectively limiting the city's food reserves. The tally was 500 mixed comapnies of soldiers against 700 full strength hardened Teutons. Niels would need help, and quickly too. The walls of the city could only hold for so long, and the multitude of siege equipment would breach the gates. Tying it to an arrow, Niels rolled up his message, painted with forest green to disguise it. A spy would find the message and deliver it to the nearby city of Reval, where hopefully a militia contingent could reinforce their position.

    2 weeks after the arrow was shot, Niels recieved a reply that struck two inches from his head. The message read:

    Dear Niels Jarl, General


    I have recieved your desperate need for reinforcements and I have complied. Several volunteer companies, 180 spear militia and 60 crossbows, have agreed to aid in your sally, while Narva has sent us 120 horses, a mixture of light and medium cavalry. I hope these troops help in your assault.

    Regards
    Grim Soerensen, Captain of the Reval Militia Guard.


    The message was music to the trapped general's ears, and they would have enough combined troops to deal with the armored foes.



    Grim, being a militia captain, and a novice at that, set up a defensive position and set cavalry to outflank on either side, focusing his more powerful cavalry to charge into a soldier's unshielded right. Suddenly, a horn sounded in the distance, behind the Danish lines, which frightened many of the green volunteers, but hopes were raised as soon as the Kalmar flag came into view, held by Niels Jarl and his reinforcements.



    "It's nice to finally meet the northern general," Grim said cheeringly. "And at just the right moment too! My militia would have crumbled before the hammer of the enemy had you not shown up!"

    "I'll have some troops take positions in your weak spots, and my cavalry will join yours." Niels replied stoicly.

    Although a little thrown off by Niels' lack of emotion, Grim nevertheless awaited the assault of the Order. From the way the Danes were arranged, the enemy's left would reach charging distance first, thus throwing the entire line off of balance.



    "Ready your spears!" Girm yelled as several light horsemen started pushing their horses faster. The order was not needed, as this was the most basic of the militia training: Hold up your shield, ready your spear, don't give any ground.The preliminary charge was a huge failure, for light Teutonic horses were no match for rudimentary Danish training.



    As the enemy's left started to charge, Grim ordered a counter-attack with the left arm of his cavalry. The attack proved ot be a success, as the fragile swordsmen couldn't hold their position for too long. The horsemen became caught up in all the paraphernalia of routing an enemy, and proceeded to chase down the survivors. The enemy captain noticed this and diverted many of his infantry regiments to trap the Danish cavalry.



    Grim realized this recent action too late and so could not recall his left horses, but the novice captain had other things to worry about. His right flank was completely undefended and the Teutons could easily outflank the Danish linear position. Things to an even worse turn when the Order general decided to send his army in force, down the middle, where surely the holy swords and spears would cut through viking wood like knife through butter.



    The Teutonic captain led his personal bodyguard right past the Danish front and into the huscarl guided sides. The axes wielded by Niels' vikings could cut through armor easily, but were having a more difficult time bringing down horses.



    Grim smiled as the Teutonic troops hit his shiled wall like water hitting a cliff. The aqueous holy soldiers began to slowly erode the cliff of wood, but that's when the militia captin unleashed his boulders. The right cavalry flank had moved unnoticed past the enemy lines and were now in position to displace the assaulting Teutons. Their victims were completely unaware of the thundering hooves riding hard behind them until it was too late. The sound was terrible as horses neighed, armor crushed, and men screamed in agony.



    The enemy general was among one of those swallowed up by the Danes as men panicked in the confusion. The general tried to ride through the mass of Danish norse archers, armed to the teeth with swords. For every foot he rode through the Danish lines, a sword punctured either his horse or his armor. Girsly sounds of swords scraping flesh resounded through the forest clearing, until finally the horse fell. The opposing general was launched 5 feet into the air and landed on top of waiting sword points, but still he got up and ketp fighting. It finally took the point blank shooting by a norse bow to take the resilient enemy down, but his death was not savored as his corpse was ripped apart by vengeful vikings.





    With the general dead, It did not take long for the rest of the soldiers to rout. The flanks were safely secured and the braver soldiers were caught in an encirclement of spear militia and cavalry.



    Routing soldiers were captured and tortured mercilessly by their captors, and horsemen began herding their prey towards the edge of the battlefield, trampling as many as they could. The infantry would pick up the survivors, but the cavalry were all whipped up in the thrill of the chase. Slow moving infantry were crushed by lustful scouts and huscarls.



    The battle was quickly won, and Grim Soerensen scored a victory over the Teutonic Order with the aid of Niels Jarl, although the northern general still remained stoic. Prenau's blockades were lifted and trade resumed. Captain Grim, still put off by Niels Jarl's apathy, returned his veteran troops to Reval and the cavalry to Narva castle.



    Grim, being a merciful general, allowed the Order to pay the ransom for the 500 captured troops, earning himself a considerable sum for retraining. However, any smart and experienced general would know that 500 troops would allow the order to rebuild an army more quickly and put the Danish territories into danger.



    Winter, 1295

    It was King Bergthor's first year as king of the Kalmar Union and the Danish Provinces, and no one could deny that his newly enacted policies weren't effective







    Although his true purist nature was hidden by a few decrees and tax cuts, the people quickly warmed up to him and readily accepted the 2nd Bastard Prince as their new king, and only the loyalists began to mourn their previous leader.

    Meanwhile, near Palanga Castle.

    Villagers ran in fright as fire began to spread from their thatched-roof cottages. People screamed as their bodies were mutilated by axe-wielding fiends and their prized possessions were carried out onto giant carts. Mothers begged and pleaded with the relentless warriors as their daughters were carried away to back-alleys and their sons were chained and put on longboats. The morning sky was tainted by the fire and smoke while the air was pieced by the constant but differing shrieks and yelps of pain. Almost every one on the Baltic coast had sworn that they would never come back, but now they realized all too late that the vikings had returned!



    EDIT: i'm going to add a poll to this thread to see what needs to be improved upon the most (writing, spelling, style, pictures, picture:text ratio (please elaborate), immersion, detail, plot, more battles, more campaign) when you vote, please leave a comment and explain your choice and any specifics you want
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    Nice AAR i think i just might make one
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    Awesome!
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    Default Re: From A Viking Heritage: A Danish AAR (Updated August 29th)

    hokay everyone
    i apologize for not updating for a while, but school has just started and i'm already swamped. i have found time to do little things here and there and small things amongst these forums, but an update in the next 5 days seems unlikely (again, i'm sorry in this in spite of the fact that update regularity is the most wanted thing)
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