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  1. December 26, 2007, 04:29 PM #1
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    Sorry man, I read about 15 lines. Really sorry.
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    I know a lot of people here don't appreciate the subtle art of poetry, but I do!

    This is really something, at least not the good ol' AAR style, "we start as a small faction, attack rebels, clear victory, clear victory, clear victory, whoaa we won" style!

    Well done, Chaplain, +rep.
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    awesome poem! +rep
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    Nice poem, and a good way of making an aar. Though poem's also sometimes have paragraphs. It would make things a bit easier to read, you know
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    Default Re: The Second Punic War (moved from the RS main boards)

    Outstanding m8 well done.
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    Default Re: The Second Punic War (moved from the RS main boards)

    updated.

    p.s. Argent Usher helped with the photoshop in the Alps crossing pic, drop him a line and give him some rep
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    [I]poem deleted
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    Crusades
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